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"unpromising" poems
My spine is broken from the burden of your ungrateful heart, I have shrugged shoulders to the girls who can walk into the kitchen, just to nod my head to the girl who waits to be served on the dining table, I have swam beyond seas just to drown in your heart, I have betrayed my credibility towards the streets I was raised just to follow the path that leads to your happiness, I have chased all of my dogs at the gate so you can visit anytime, you remember when I found you drunk in careless hands at the club? Then I embraced all the shame and welcomed you in my hands, I no longer see the essence of visiting mama every weekend, cause I've always dedicated my time to you, I have lapsed the doctrines of upholding holiness just to sin for you, now all these broken promises, overflowing tears and unpromising future, you have caused all this because you are ungrateful, and before this coffee hits the surface of my cup, ill make sure this love chokes you and see if you are worth it.
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Nov 4, 2013
Nov 4, 2013 at 1:00 AM UTC
Ungrateful Girl
You are the light in my darkest hour You made me see the beauty Within the shadows Everytime I see your face, I gain strength You are the sunshine in my rainy days Whenever you stand here and show your light This complicated world  just seems so easy That everything which seems slight would turn significant For you open my eyes to see the beauty In each awful detail You are the promise, The hope of an unpromising tomorrow That whenever you speak you would touch The mind, the soul The world You are the history within the insensibility You bring the memory of a lost dream Creating a new child of  courage Yes, you are a blessing A gift of splendor An angel The hope The light The promise But even the sun needs to set To give way to the reassuring night... And I am but a wandering soul Every gift I have at hand Is not for keeps I am the mist Which anytime would go with the wind To fade And somehow delight in My transience And dream To see you smile In my repose...
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Feb 27, 2015
Feb 27, 2015 at 5:05 AM UTC
IN MY REPOSE
We would dance until the ground was no longer at our soles, when we would float in a trance of sheer naive in the palms of death’s hand. slightly teasing. Grasping vestal youth in our hands with cigarettes in our fingertips. Empty glistening bottles, left smashed on begging turf whilst the substances slur inside minds. Fallen drunken on the night’s moonlit whispers, delusional romances, and unpromising fantasies. The gasoline drooled out his hand needlessly. It glazed the grass guilty when we kissed it’s tips with a lighter. its then those fantasies engulfed the air in illuminations of blaze then creeping thick grey and ceased to ash. Death gently blew the ashes to the river and kissed us goodnight. - though now we are still dancing in our circle. we light  it all on fire again to disintegrate new dreams quivering romances
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Aug 16, 2018
Aug 16, 2018 at 5:50 PM UTC
youth burns youth fades
Faith is an ***** in bodies unseen Filled to the brim to be daily redeemed Guard as you might it will never decay But hardens and softens like delicate clay And it will be molded then put through the fire Hotly transformed from unpromising mire What's carnal will fall to the side and be burned But what is eternal will rise from the urn
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Jan 2, 2013
Jan 2, 2013 at 12:52 PM UTC
Survived by my heart
What is this that fills my head? This drone and ominous hiss Of static and angst In rhythmic time to an orchestra Of self pity and machine pistons As my brain ***** and absorbs But remembers little Scared for an unpromising future Angry at the past Complacency sets in Around the force that absorbs me And always will What is this space that contains me? Not a physical draw Involuntary Pulling my every cell that portrays my being Ripping, One by one I am contained between these spaces Trapped This blank, faceless silence So little shown So much said With each pause
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Mar 19, 2011
Mar 19, 2011 at 11:24 AM UTC
Absorb
I will myself to hate you, And to find something that I can use as ammo against your love. But I give up. I can listen to the brave words that my friends help me use as my shield. But I don't believe them. It's different this time. It's all there, yet there's nothing. Just a tiny lighthouse seen through a deep dark sea. I will my boat away towards the islands. But it's no use. I am too in love with the light to not follow its unpromising affliction. Watch me as I drown.
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Aug 17, 2015
Aug 17, 2015 at 11:29 PM UTC
Lighthouse
unpromising, this ****** clay scooped from the thames. old, used scoured ****** of old father thames, river of home, of shame and escape. mould me, make this wet lump pliant, knead it into man-shape paint it green, blue or gold, red white and blue, not with harsh horse- hair brush, but soft with tender finger-tips. fashion mouth ears eyes and that piece some women prize. breathe life into this teeming, fleshing thing mouth to mouth, eve, make me man with kind words and passion. take a rib and press it to your *****
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Apr 30, 2016
Apr 30, 2016 at 3:09 AM UTC
Mould me
The truth is what once was yellow brick road is now red from blood blotched by dirt and partly covered in moss I see no purpose nor hope in following this particular road that leads me back to a place so called 'home' It's rather unpromising and untempting unwelcoming even And it makes me think; At the end of the road, will I be left to rot by the people who once swore that I will be loved but would leave me standing forsaken and starving like they used to do And so I'd rather stay in Oz Then to follow the 'yellow brick road' To get to a place where I were to be ignored
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Sep 19, 2019
Sep 19, 2019 at 11:18 AM UTC
Yellow Brick Road
It’s sweet like whiskey, the aftertaste of your divorce, and you force yourself to keep wearing lipstick like the magazines tell you to. Someday (you hope) soon, you’ll feel brand new. It’s all just a second act, really, and that jam-packed, steely feeling at the bottom of your sentences is meant to be discarded, dug apart, and left unmentioned. The phonebooths all hug in on themselves, shrugging against the rain when you pass by, and the sky is always a schizophrenic grey these days, clouds marching away to an unpromising horizon. You phone once, after the papers have been signed, to hear the sound of a newly parallel life on a recorded track to hear that voice one last time telling you they’ll call you back.
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Mar 25, 2020
Mar 25, 2020 at 1:15 PM UTC
Voicemail
Her parentage was a thing of considerable comment Though a good deal less circumspection, Mama's identity relatively sure, as everyone knew her mama, Her father one of a laundry list of unpromising gardeners, Yet she was a child of grace--no, more than that An outlier in every sense of the word, The dazzling unintended consequence Resulting from a series of unwise and unhappy choices. She sauntered (though there are those romantically inclined sorts Who would insist she outright floated, Her feet rarely if ever touching ground) By the courthouse in Okolona most afternoons, And though her dress was from the house of Ralston and Purina And her jewelry courtesy of Sailor Jack and Bingo, She neither shrunk nor slunk self-consciously Nor walked with eyes ablaze and fists clenched, In a manner asking Mebbe you wanna make sumpin' of it? Simply walked her own walk, Such things as poverty and pedigree Trvial matters beneath her concern, Though she was always provided for, as a seemingly chosen child, Judge Hibbard giving her a store-bought doll from Jackson When she turned seven, others providing her pop and bubble gum, And later Miss Lucille Brisker sewed her a bright-blue silk dress Plus gave her forty-two dollars for a Greyhound ticket To Los Angeles via New Orleans (When she hopped the bus in front of the K &B, She gave her a peck on the cheek, and said *Miss Lucille, you take care, but I doubt I'm much likely to pass this way again.*) Her whys and wherefores after that were lost to time and tide: Perhaps she made it in L-A, perhaps she thought else-wise And hopped off the bus in Hattiesburg or Bogalusa Though most were of the opinion that it mattered little if at all, As she allowed them, leastways for a little while, To be in her orbit while she shone in such a manner as pleased her.
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Mar 26, 2018
Mar 26, 2018 at 4:27 PM UTC
A Variation Upon Bobbie Gentry's "Chickasaw County Child"
Her parentage was a thing of considerable comment Though a good deal less circumspection, Mama's identity relatively sure, as everyone knew her mama, Her father one of a laundry list of unpromising gardeners, Yet she was a child of grace--no, more than that An outlier in every sense of the word, The dazzling unintended consequence Resulting from a series of unwise and unhappy choices. She sauntered (though there are those romantically inclined sorts Who would insist she outright floated, Her feet rarely if ever touching ground) By the courthouse in Okolona most afternoons, And though her dress was from the house of Ralston and Purina And her jewelry courtesy of Sailor Jack and Bingo, She neither shrunk nor slunk self-consciously Nor walked with eyes ablaze and fists clenched, In a manner asking Mebbe you wanna make sumpin' of it? Simply walked her own walk, Such things as poverty and pedigree Trvial matters beneath her concern, Though she was always provided for, as a seemingly chosen child, Judge Hibbard giving her a store-bought doll from Jackson When she turned seven, others providing her pop and bubble gum, And later Miss Lucille Brisker sewed her a bright-blue silk dress Plus gave her forty-two dollars for a Greyhound ticket To Los Angeles via New Orleans (When she hopped the bus in front of the K &B, She gave her a peck on the cheek, and said *Miss Lucille, you take care, but I doubt I'm much likely to pass this way again.*) Her whys and wherefores after that were lost to time and tide: Perhaps she made it in L-A, perhaps she thought else-wise And hopped off the bus in Hattiesburg or Bogalusa Though most were of the opinion that it mattered little if at all, As she allowed them, leastways for a little while, To be in her orbit while she shone in such a manner as pleased her.
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Appearances deceive She starts to believe She is as hollow as the glass is empty                                                                     so parched she becomes Quenching her thirst in unpromising promises We accept the love we think we deserve Or sometimes the love that presents itself at 2 am The kind that warms the vacant spots Until there are no more vacancies in her ravaged heart Fools and lovers are all the same
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Feb 3, 2015
Feb 3, 2015 at 2:21 AM UTC
Vessel
Stuck. Once again stuck between four walls. Darkness. It rolls in slowly and uninvited. Anger. Not yet hatred but consuming. Air. Trying to breath and although alive, unsuccesseding. Peace. Searching searching deep within my soul. Devil. Playing games calling out to play. God; Trying to fortify strength and wisdom in the mind. Sanity. Slowly going out the more that I want to be in. Death.                 Life.                       Hope. Relaxation       unpromising       torture
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Sep 26, 2017
Sep 26, 2017 at 10:47 PM UTC
Hurricane Irma.
We wandered through the woods and found a wallowing bridge, creaking softly in the symphony of the spineless sighs of wind. Gushing through its planks I could feel the water seeping at the weak cavity’s of the wood. I was there and she was there and we were on that bridge together, struggling on its loose and yielding bones. As we stepped on its ribs, the wood sighed beneath our feet and the water swelled and the wind sang and we held on. And the wind slipped through my clothes and hugged at my skin. And we walked in silence. I didn’t have to fill the atmosphere with empty words with no meaning. In the silence we Struggled across the softened wood. So soft that our feet were but muffled padding underfoot. We were careless of the bridges unpromising purpose, that its defeat and surrender could leave us swept away in the cold stream below. We were just moving away from the forest. Moving together.
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Apr 27, 2014
Apr 27, 2014 at 11:10 PM UTC
A monologue
I do not understand what "in the moment" is I've always drowned myself in the past, focused wholly on the unpromising future What is happening right now, does not matter to me What will happen in the future, scares me Everyday I wake up surrounded by the same concretes The same ones that echo my silence when the moon greets I am tired, I am exhausted I am tired of this momentary bliss *I despise living this life of pretend, forever wishing to start again.*
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May 11, 2015
May 11, 2015 at 9:35 AM UTC
Momentary Bliss
Monday is a struggle in itself, how treacherous she is, so unpromising.. Tuesday is just another day.. i try to get through but when you're losing hope its hard to even.. exist.. Wednesday is my least favorite day, im just waiting for Friday to get here. Thursday, by the time he's here my existence is about ready to just fade away into the darkness that is similar to my spirit. Friday is here, this is what ive been waiting for.. glasses full of whiskey as i try to numb the pain and as im half way through the only thing im able to do is remember you.. the very thing i am trying to forget. & then Saturday comes, and i try again.. you know, it never works out but im not giving up! til the day i can drink glasses of whiskey and get inebriated without pouring out my heart halfway in because i miss you! i live for that beautiful day. Sunday... oh isnt this great? one day before Monday and i start all over again.. the process.. its eating away at my soul & i dont know how much longer i can do this
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Feb 13, 2015
Feb 13, 2015 at 5:11 AM UTC
the days of the weak..
When the painter first entered the room He’d noted the walls drab and bare. It appeared an unpromising canvas and he had little time left to spare. So forgive if he audibly sighed as he spread out his drop cloths and paint. His knees ache when he climbs on his ladder; His swearing would trouble a Saint. Still he made the best use of the light. Sure his efforts would please and surprise; The ceiling made a virginal white And the walls the same green as her eyes. It was dusk as he finished his task and gathered his brushes and cans. He’d have loved to see her reaction when she’d witness the work of his hands.
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Mar 28, 2015
Mar 28, 2015 at 9:14 PM UTC
The Painter
I want to be just like you living in the moment breathing the heavenly blue skipping the light fantastic weaving wonders from words kissing understanding and just like that it's untrue I can't be like you because I dwell in the fear of being unknown but, I live here in the unpromising zone hack is stitched as a single word into every seam of all the coats I've ever worn but I have sworn that I'd be forever the firefly that lights the sky from the warmth of my tiny backside? Just know.... I tried!
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Jun 9, 2014
Jun 9, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC
I'll try harder (I cried)
" Haunted by ghosts of times supposedly forgotten. The damages done have left the inside broken. The will to go on is too strong for the fuel is rage and hate..I would change but the pain is far too great. It comes back in waves..that means it's too late. Father of Hell Mother of Heaven When will it come? My time to be forgiven I am your loves resulting abomination A demon seeking angelic redemption Surrounded by people but always alone the time to me in solitude is my only favorite road. I fight the enemy within, the Beast looking back in the mirror. He is my ending..the answers have never been more clearer. Words of people being present are unpromising fables but if someone showed action..inside my walls accessible?..they might, possibly, be really able.. Father of Hell Mother of Heaven When will it come? My time to be forgiven I am your loves resulting abomination A demon seeking angelic redemption Though I know there is evil and hate unstable inside, I stay and fight while I run for somewhere to hide. These inner demons prove that I am meant for Hell..but I wish to do good for this world..and my best I shall give..I shall prevail! Father of Hell Mother of Heaven When will it come? My time to be forgiven I am your loves resulting abomination A demon seeking angelic redemption “
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Mar 30, 2018
Mar 30, 2018 at 4:11 PM UTC
Angelic Demon
I imagine Hunter would have spread his arms wide. Take me further and nowhere outward and vanished. For I have seen the most golden a person can be. Road passing ocean. I live, I live. In the vestige of wind that carries me. Tell me again, why trees grow towards light. Why we trace each others skin, as if heaven sent. And however dreadful; unpromising tell me why poetry is still seeking. (  C . C )
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Oct 2, 2018
Oct 2, 2018 at 10:28 PM UTC
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