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"tragicomic" poems
Funny how I swore; not to lose my mind, if you ever leave; Funnier how I didn't know; that it is the heart; that'll go missing.
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Nov 24, 2017
Nov 24, 2017 at 12:20 PM UTC
tragicomic
I *In the course of time Defects commence to notice: "Once, it was a hero" Begins to melt "Once, it was worshiped" Starts to fade The desire to be at least half Becomes a mere illusion The grief of starting from zero Not be just a fusion, (I laugh), for I am my own hero* II *An eternal dilemma: head or heart? Life experiences repeat themselves over time Look back, not with nostalgia, but with lucidity Not to retell the same mistakes, that's stupidity Rectify the defects, but don't be a mime Head or heart? These desires of a distorted mind are such strife Those promises for life are barely a rind It's as soon as you get to the point of no return That you realize the fantasy must burn Head or heart? Use the head is an art Using the heart in the right stead But use them both is my oath* III *I come from a quiet little town But I was never the type of let me drown Lose and gain accents has always been my thing So bring me the king of seek that we may sing together That the best man win. See, without knowing whether all or nothing Write, until I have abraded skin, so when the time comes The tought living at my fingers will shut Sing, bright or heavyhearted Feel the beat of unchearted drums Yell by choice until lose my voice Murmur lower than a subatomic bell Until gain a tragicomic muse.* ***The elocution of my brain has no dues For art is a perpetual evolution.***
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Mar 22, 2012
Mar 22, 2012 at 9:50 PM UTC
α/Ω
Whatever other costumes might have been hers for the choosing, She wore the robe of disenchantment. She should have been taught, Truth skates a razor thin line that will slice the flesh from your bones When you try to deny it. The mask she placed upon her face, a tragicomic mockery of belief, Its blue-black marks tattooing her cheeks, Were a constant reminder of her mistaken identity of herself, Mistake. (And in that moment of stark realization, Didst thou not ponder the sickening irony of a life gone awry?)
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Jun 3, 2013
Jun 3, 2013 at 2:53 PM UTC
Confusion is my name sake
i'll concede to this fact, sometimes Hollywood does a decent film, i'm starting to see a tract of: as far as black comedies go... no one does black comedies as good as the H'americans... maybe i was born too late to laugh at the British stuff from... whenever it was in the past century... and whatever the new quirk is about... i don't get it... but H'american black comedy? pitched genius... sure... about schmidt was labelled a black comedy... but in comparison to what i've just watched? i.e. *three billboards outside ebbing, missouri*? out-stand-ing... i'm not saying i'm much of a film critic... but given the story resembles the "archetype" of retribution... revenge, or there-lack-of, akin to the movie secret in their eyes... retribution isn't concentrated on the focus of the murderer, ****** it spreads... everyone is somehow affected by each others' blame-game-shaming-fest... everyone can have their soppy story, their two cents thrown into the lucky fountain... and that's the brilliance of the movie: the victim-hood tactics diffuse - because everyone has a sad story, the sad story isn't the story at all: it's how people still manage to congregate around a shining bright light and pull along... but that's still not the ultimate genius of *three billboards outside ebbing, missouri*... a well deserved supporting actor Oscar for sam rockwell playing jason dixon... why? he's the subtle sub-story of the antihero archetype... the sub-story just sits there, subtle... but eventually more gripping... it's not you want justice to be served... or you're guessing who did it... unlike in the instance of secret in their eyes... where the grief overburdens the lead role... there's a variant of being enraged in a tragicomic way of the lead in *three billboards outside ebbing, missouri*... perhaps because the lead role has interactions with her remaining offspring, and there's an abusive husband hanging around... but for me... transfiguration... like that Jesus bit... the film is really all about the antihero... and thank god... another superhero movie and i'm going to puke... what with deadpool being the other antihero... but unlike that sort of antihero story... this is so genius in how subtle it is... a well deserved supporting actor Oscar... well done.
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Nov 2, 2018
Nov 2, 2018 at 10:53 AM UTC
a tale of two films
i'll concede to this fact, sometimes Hollywood does a decent film, i'm starting to see a tract of: as far as black comedies go... no one does black comedies as good as the H'americans... maybe i was born too late to laugh at the British stuff from... whenever it was in the past century... and whatever the new quirk is about... i don't get it... but H'american black comedy? pitched genius... sure... about schmidt was labelled a black comedy... but in comparison to what i've just watched? i.e. *three billboards outside ebbing, missouri*? out-stand-ing... i'm not saying i'm much of a film critic... but given the story resembles the "archetype" of retribution... revenge, or there-lack-of, akin to the movie secret in their eyes... retribution isn't concentrated on the focus of the murderer, ****** it spreads... everyone is somehow affected by each others' blame-game-shaming-fest... everyone can have their soppy story, their two cents thrown into the lucky fountain... and that's the brilliance of the movie: the victim-hood tactics diffuse - because everyone has a sad story, the sad story isn't the story at all: it's how people still manage to congregate around a shining bright light and pull along... but that's still not the ultimate genius of *three billboards outside ebbing, missouri*... a well deserved supporting actor Oscar for sam rockwell playing jason dixon... why? he's the subtle sub-story of the antihero archetype... the sub-story just sits there, subtle... but eventually more gripping... it's not you want justice to be served... or you're guessing who did it... unlike in the instance of secret in their eyes... where the grief overburdens the lead role... there's a variant of being enraged in a tragicomic way of the lead in *three billboards outside ebbing, missouri*... perhaps because the lead role has interactions with her remaining offspring, and there's an abusive husband hanging around... but for me... transfiguration... like that Jesus bit... the film is really all about the antihero... and thank god... another superhero movie and i'm going to puke... what with deadpool being the other antihero... but unlike that sort of antihero story... this is so genius in how subtle it is... a well deserved supporting actor Oscar... well done.
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early this year gentle as calm ocean waters lapping along a weir thumb and fore finger of right hand would peal back, (via diagonally flippant motion asper calendar representing progression of time) gets flipped over to veer in one direction (linear) revealing the next month at lightspeed vis a vis tempus fugit galloping tear thy head immediately lost hirsute thickness, i starkly share male or female pattern baldness extant along Harris genealogical trunk line rare yet divulging distress about limp decreasing strands sends shivers along spine, gloomy feeling linkedin with old fashioned meaning of queer and perchance tis foolhardy reeding this Samson night issue must ap pear tis unstoppable inching closer toward as mortality gets near youthful robustness fades replaced by senescence mere really ambling along tragicomic stream, one evinces gargoyles mockingly leer loosing sleep and kept raggedly awake in conjunction dreams fraught with frightful haunting monsters jeer ring sound reverberating hair splitting decibel jamming primary cranial gear aye tell mice elf nothing to fear... yet maximizing this plight with poem 'ere Yukon also temporarily part blond, brown, gold, et cetera locks mud dear.
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Feb 28, 2018
Feb 28, 2018 at 11:48 PM UTC
thinning hair - slight tweak from this twit
early this year gentle as calm ocean waters gently lapping along a weir thumb and fore finger of right hand would peal back, (via diagonally flippant motion asper calendar representing progression of time) gets flipped over to veer in one direction (linear) revealing the next month at lightspeed vis a vis tempus fugit galloping tear thy head immediately lost hirsute thickness, i starkly share male or female pattern baldness extant along Harris genealogical trunk line rare yet divulging distress about limp decreasing strands sends shivers along spine, gloomy feeling linkedin with old fashioned meaning of queer and perchance tis foolhardy as reeding this Samson night issue must ap pear tis unstoppable inching closer toward as mortality gets near youthful robustness fades replaced by senescence mere really ambling along tragicomic stream, one evinces gargoyles mockingly leer loosing sleep and kept raggedly awake in conjunction dreams fraught with frightful haunting monsters jeer ring sound reverberating hair splitting decibel jamming cranial gear aye tell mice elf nothing to fear... yet maximizing this plight with poem 'ere Yukon also temporarily part blond, brown, gold, et cetera locks mud dear.
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Feb 28, 2018
Feb 28, 2018 at 11:36 PM UTC
thinning hair
***lost the last promise I gripped, slipping, the losses now fixed homeless, nameless, tragicomic living past the place where scavenging doesn’t last. ready supply of wretchedness unlimited, shopping cart full of your discards skimmed. no more we say that evil Oh God, words over exercised, gone, excised, fk-you-exorcised. lost the remaining of the last promise gripped, the losses are ice in July, fixed. my suburban brain, burned, the volunteer firemen failed to care, appear. put my past you, you, exhibited the lesser lesson, the faun ceased dancing. my cunning can’t be higher’d, hired, arm won’t raise/rise over the wind head. where the bloodlines went, just veins who purposely are no deafened,  dumb, silenced. no depth, no plumb line necessary, for measuring the deep, the last pairing. ditched the muse, the witch ***** who offers tantalizing sweets, poison too, nicely spoiled.***
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May 13, 2020
May 13, 2020 at 11:25 AM UTC
the lost grip: the defeat (the last promise gripped)
*homeless, nameless, tragicomic living past the place where scavenging doesn’t last. ready supply of wretchedness unlimited, shopping cart full of your discards skimmed. no more we say evil Oh God, words over exercised, gone, excised, fk-you-exorcised. lost the remaining of the last promise gripped, the losses are ice in July, fixed. my suburban brain, burned, the volunteer firemen failed to care, appear. put my past you, you, exhibited the lesser lesson, the faun ceased dancing. my cunning can’t be higher’d nor hired, arm won’t raise/rise over the head. where the bloodlines went, just veins who purposely are now deafened, dumb, silenced. no depth, no plumb line necessary, for measuring the zero deep, the last imperfect pairing. ditched the muse, the witch ***** who offers tantalizing sweets, poison spoiled. the next SUV I see, won’t see me*
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Jun 7, 2020
Jun 7, 2020 at 1:44 PM UTC
the last promise grip