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"tractatus" poems
Father James took you and Gareth and George postulant monks to a convent in Newport he had mass to serve and confessions to hear so you were all shown into a parlour with the smell of home bake bread and starched sheets and a young nun came in carrying a tray with teapot and cups and sugar bowl and jug of milk all in a dull white and as she set the tray down on the table her eyes moved from each one of you taking in no doubt young novices in the training the plain clothes the black and white the neat cut hairs the shaven chins and then she smiled and went her way no wiggling of hips or female sway carrying the tray and Gareth spoke of Wittgenstein and the Tractatus Logico Philosophicus while George took in the tidiness of the room the ****** smell the taste of aging flesh while you half listened on Wittgenstein and the scent of passing youth remembering the young nun’s smile awaiting truth.
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Dec 7, 2012
Dec 7, 2012 at 7:29 AM UTC
ON VISITING A CONVENT.
I despair as a writer when I think that conversation, the spark of humanity, our golden embroidery on life, is unremarkable. these days, voices are shallow melodies with accents on repeat: I want you to listen and believe, but who really knows? or is distinguishing the repackaged plagues of similar beliefs. The differences are basically the same and it's time consuming to critically think. So exhausting to feel like I must hurry to get a point across before the nodding glance to the black screen, relieved of wondering: Have you been listening at ALL to my word drawings and logic trees derived from headlines, videos, and abstract malcontent? I'm learning to be quiet, or dramatic. Nothing in between but revising a philosopher's tractatus: Whereof one cannot speak, One should remain silen..salient.
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Jul 28, 2017
Jul 28, 2017 at 9:50 PM UTC
I'm learning to be quiet