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"totemic" poems
chin resting on two palms, sprouting totemic archetypes of good-evil. watching this passing away... this double take on: creation/ preservation/destruction. how moved, how unmoved-- can one become? one becomes. scratch to scar the surface, and existence won't wear signs of struggle. though wisdom kills indiscriminately. your thunk betrayed you with a breeze. the latest, of a series of offensive odors.
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Sep 12, 2018
Sep 12, 2018 at 12:30 PM UTC
Offensive Odors
I'll trawl the squalor, if you like, stick blinkers on to hide the fact that my life has so far been a charmed one. I can conjure a face, small, forgotten black against a duststorm sky - There's your poverty for you, And yes, I was there And sure, I smelt the days old sweat and can remember hunger as a curiosity The boy's name is known to me but I won't share it Because he was real but I missed his reality and I have no right to it. ***** hands notwithstanding I was just a tourist, a passing mote of dust in his drought-stricken life. I was there for me collecting picturesque snapshots which would inform my return to an undeserved comfort (but only slightly). To say he was important, totemic, symbolic, is false. I remember him, that's all - My boys, my clean, happy, here-now boys eclipse that shadow in every respect. An honourable assertion only in that it is true; and a brief regret that I made no contact flickers out before a blaze of contentment, a bedrock of good fortune with little to offer the vicarious seeker of hard-won wisdom.
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Dec 27, 2011
Dec 27, 2011 at 4:31 PM UTC
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When you walked out the pub doors On a sea of tears and last embraces, The town stood still. You broke my heart, Set it back into place So that I could feel again. I was amongst the grown men Turning backs on each other, Wrangling our hair, Pacing the floor, Until we could not hold back The occasion any longer. I know when my plane comes There will be brief handshakes, Warm, worn smiles Fastened from the heat You gave so generously To a town that grew cold In your departure. You taught us that kindness is enough. Now rejoicing in private sobs, Return of feeling for someone else. This town we complained about, Until you moved each man to song. French lessons over the ashtray, Anecdotes and private jokes As far as the ear could hear. I remember when the chemicals took over And you danced in the sunglass shade Of a darkened room. Your energy bounced off the walls, A pink-noise that echoed as I came down, Nestled on my shoulder, totemic, As I fought the speed, tried to sleep. Beer bottles remained, the splintered ends That serve as proof for last night’s fireworks. You always made sure we were safe. Our chance encounter, Brief moments which collide, Leaving marks, Etching names Onto stone that cannot wear away. You taught me that sea of strangers Is not a place to drown, Just an avenue towards new land. You could drink all the time And it would not consume you. Get stuck on a blue mood And still leave your slumber, Wide-eyed and hopeful for balance. You left us standing in the rain Our minds a roulette wheel, Scattering between goodbye and farewell. I guess I did not understand the stakes Until you walked out of those pub doors. I guess I had forgotten what loss meant, Those years running from the blade of love That cuts so finely the line Of grief and glory. I am bleeding here. I am not sure when it will stop. I am feeling again. Thank you, friend. Thank you.
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Jun 19, 2016
Jun 19, 2016 at 4:37 PM UTC
Maud
When you walked out the pub doors On a sea of tears and last embraces, The town stood still. You broke my heart, Set it back into place So that I could feel again. I was amongst the grown men Turning backs on each other, Wrangling our hair, Pacing the floor, Until we could not hold back The occasion any longer. I know when my plane comes There will be brief handshakes, Warm, worn smiles Fastened from the heat You gave so generously To a town that grew cold In your departure. You taught us that kindness is enough. Now rejoicing in private sobs, Return of feeling for someone else. This town we complained about, Until you moved each man to song. French lessons over the ashtray, Anecdotes and private jokes As far as the ear could hear. I remember when the chemicals took over And you danced in the sunglass shade Of a darkened room. Your energy bounced off the walls, A pink-noise that echoed as I came down, Nestled on my shoulder, totemic, As I fought the speed, tried to sleep. Beer bottles remained, the splintered ends That serve as proof for last night’s fireworks. You always made sure we were safe. Our chance encounter, Brief moments which collide, Leaving marks, Etching names Onto stone that cannot wear away. You taught me that sea of strangers Is not a place to drown, Just an avenue towards new land. You could drink all the time And it would not consume you. Get stuck on a blue mood And still leave your slumber, Wide-eyed and hopeful for balance. You left us standing in the rain Our minds a roulette wheel, Scattering between goodbye and farewell. I guess I did not understand the stakes Until you walked out of those pub doors. I guess I had forgotten what loss meant, Those years running from the blade of love That cuts so finely the line Of grief and glory. I am bleeding here. I am not sure when it will stop. I am feeling again. Thank you, friend. Thank you.
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systematized philistinism aesthetic appeal to reason; ingenuity iniquity within crusadery, crusadery within violence right versus wrong versus up versus down versus christ versus jam versus peanut butter- ceaseless competition of egoism within protectorate instincts totemic defense of ideals burn the effigy of the opposing party via verbose roastery point at fingers pointed at moon hapless the artist, and hapless the pragmatist and hapless the sodden fool ye who wish to knows better haplessly holier than thou
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Jan 30, 2016
Jan 30, 2016 at 1:28 AM UTC
VII
I could not see the next summit, the gashed gnarl of its face. I guessed only that its steepening inclines had been set against me. I could hear all the echoings of the dead in their ice-tombs where their aims had led them and buried them, then, deeper, the incredible footfall of sherpas, spirited, light and deft, unbetraying. A silence stretched on toward a night long with unhuman testimony. Then it came: the world-clearing hammer-blows of distant avalanches, the palpitations of chaos, one whiteout of potentiality. My tent fluttered and gripped at the snow that stored for spring all paths to the peak, leading through veils of embraces, inconsolable losses, charms, fantastic indictments. Swelling its stormfront, then collapsing into a voice like winter, the wind took up a human song and broke across the horizons. It sang, 'You are an unborn fjord, a chasm yet to be. Only water sculpts its beauty: let it pass. Throw no harness over the clouds, they hold no secrets, but are. Here, while you plan your ascent each night, exalting the fey, the indolent, the totemic, you are like a thief on a watchtower. Until every such night has passed you will light, tend, and watch die a small, tense fire, but awake surrounded by footprints.'
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Dec 2, 2016
Dec 2, 2016 at 2:15 AM UTC
Base Camp
Forbidden to speak out their minds, people walk around with muzzles. They don't want to get no fines. so they got solved like puzzles. The government doesn't care for their children. They only wish to make money from the pandemic. at the cost of ruining the life of their grandchildren. Apocalypse is honored like a something totemic. When will this madness end and we begin to live normal lives? Calm lives where all of us get the truth without lies.
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Mar 29, 2021
Mar 29, 2021 at 4:11 PM UTC
When will this madness end? Part I
Totemic— the drowned **** rises from the blasted shore, linking the severed heads, the spinal cord and collections of scorn.
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May 16, 2025
May 16, 2025 at 6:48 PM UTC
Totem Pole