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"spillover" poems
This is for the dear teacher Who was once training me For a programme where I was Going to recite some beautiful poetry To a girl all of fourteen, Fresh, energetic, and naive She gave a piece of advice and inadvertently, Changed the course of her life Yes, life!   Here's roughly what she said- *Ghazal, you do NOT have to Pause at the end of each line! Because sometimes in poems The sentence may continue Beyond, so let the words flow Like a Conversation, And you'll notice how much better Will sound your recitation* Something absolutely plain, yet So meaningful, that today I wonder, If she hadn't told me this simple secret When would I, by myself, discover That my words were allowed to spillover Into the next line! I can only look back in amazement To thank her, and thank her some more For saving all of that precious, poetic time
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Mar 22, 2014
Mar 22, 2014 at 9:21 PM UTC
Thank You, Ma'am!
oh no cut me here and here and here i’m less than what? spokes in the rain a spillover on highway nowhere i lapped your scent til my heart burst mangled and helpless
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Sep 16, 2017
Sep 16, 2017 at 9:00 PM UTC
with-/oui-
Nothing but a thought ful misinterpreted metal man carved of an art ist's chisel block, tarn ished by history and hate red roses always bloom be hind The light that illuminates the beach watchers. my beach watchers. I will alter for you.
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May 9, 2021
May 9, 2021 at 1:53 AM UTC
Spillover II
i feel as if everything is on it's brink things keep turning, a preventative measure it's not enough to lessen the pressure and honestly if it were to tip and fall perhaps i just wouldn't care at all
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May 26, 2021
May 26, 2021 at 9:03 PM UTC
spillover