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To my dear son, Boaz in distant Idaho, Saturday nite, the whole of New Zealand waited in apprehension for the All Blacks rugy team to play the resurgent Wallabys @ Fortress Eden Park. The previous week at Suncorp Stadium in Sydney, in driving rain, the All Blacks muddled through a painfull draw with the Wallabys, 12 points each with no tries. The Wallabys had fancied their chances and had wanted an emphatic win on home soil. Both teams took that score as a loss and the gauntlet was thrown for the second match….. A brilliant evening, clear and fine , 50,000 people crushed in to Eden Park and you could feel the apprehension, the rest of the country sat in front of their TV willing the team on. The Haka was given a brutal rendition, you could feel the determination, the passion emanating….the Ozzies glared their defiance back…it was all on! 10 minutes into a titanic struggle with the score three all Captain Ritchie McCaw had a brain fade and was yellow carded off for ten minutes by the French referee. The crowd roared…then murmured their worry  like you’ve never heard before. The Ozzies mustered a huge scrum which the All Blacks countered with one man down…. The counter ****** pushed the Australian scrum back 15 ft. Every man in New Zealand was on his feet roaring, you could feel the spirit of nationalism soaring….the moment was a watershed. The All Blacks counterattacked showing a brilliance in attack and defence we have not seen for years… and from that moment on the game was won. Final score 51:20 The Bledisloe Cup was ours. As the match finished the TV camera panned across the solidly black clad crowd…. I have never, ever in my life, seen so many, simultaneous, sets of white teeth grinning! The trip home to Australia would have been… a very subdued affair. Thought I should share this marvellous moment with you Boaz. Luv Dad.
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 4:28 PM UTC
To my dear son, Boaz in distant Idaho,
To my dear son, Boaz in distant Idaho, Saturday nite, the whole of New Zealand waited in apprehension for the All Blacks rugy team to play the resurgent Wallabys @ Fortress Eden Park. The previous week at Suncorp Stadium in Sydney, in driving rain, the All Blacks muddled through a painfull draw with the Wallabys, 12 points each with no tries. The Wallabys had fancied their chances and had wanted an emphatic win on home soil. Both teams took that score as a loss and the gauntlet was thrown for the second match….. A brilliant evening, clear and fine , 50,000 people crushed in to Eden Park and you could feel the apprehension, the rest of the country sat in front of their TV willing the team on. The Haka was given a brutal rendition, you could feel the determination, the passion emanating….the Ozzies glared their defiance back…it was all on! 10 minutes into a titanic struggle with the score three all Captain Ritchie McCaw had a brain fade and was yellow carded off for ten minutes by the French referee. The crowd roared…then murmured their worry  like you’ve never heard before. The Ozzies mustered a huge scrum which the All Blacks countered with one man down…. The counter ****** pushed the Australian scrum back 15 ft. Every man in New Zealand was on his feet roaring, you could feel the spirit of nationalism soaring….the moment was a watershed. The All Blacks counterattacked showing a brilliance in attack and defence we have not seen for years… and from that moment on the game was won. Final score 51:20 The Bledisloe Cup was ours. As the match finished the TV camera panned across the solidly black clad crowd…. I have never, ever in my life, seen so many, simultaneous, sets of white teeth grinning! The trip home to Australia would have been… a very subdued affair. Thought I should share this marvellous moment with you Boaz. Luv Dad.
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Slashers Defined In response to my piece, Slashers, it was requested that maybe I could reveal at least which band or other info these great guitar players performed for to gain their claim to fame. I don't want to spend too much time on this defintion, but will give what info I think is pertinent. If you do not know some of the names I have presented to you, and you are a blues, rock, jazz, fusion guitar fan, I suggest you take the time to listen to some of their work. I have included some of my favorite incredible fusion players that do not have a super star following, but are renowned in their group of fans, probably mostly musicians to some degree. If you are a frustrated guitar player like I am, do not listen to the likes of Holdsworth, Johnson, Gambale, or Morse unless you love being tortured. Anyway on with the show. Eric Clapton – Yardbirds, Cream, Blind Faith, Derek and the Dominos. Jimmy Page – Yardbirds, Led Zeppe, The Honeydrippers, The Firm Jimi Hendrix – not only what is, but, what could have been Alan Holdsworth – Solo jazz fusion player – hot Steve Howe – Yes, Asia - Progressive rock, jazz – Bill Nelson – BeBop Deluxe, Solo Terry Kath – Chicago (25 or 6 to 4) – another sad early departure Ted Nugent – Amboy Dukes, **** Yankees – The madman Jim Krueger – Dave Mason Band – solo progressive rock Eddy Van Halen – Van Halen Ritchie Blackmore – Deep Purple, Rainbow Jerry Doucette – Doucette (Mama let him play) Eric Johnson – Solo – New Age, jazz Frank Gambale – Australian- Jazz, fusion, rock Goerge Benson – Jazz Larry Carlton – Jazz, new age rock Marc Farner - Grand Funk Railroad Peter Frampton – Humble Pie, solo Joe Satriani - New age – solo Johnny A. - jazz, new age – solo Danny Gatton – jazz, rockabilly – solo Chet Atkins – jazz, country John Mayer – Pop, blues – solo Neal Schon – Journey Steve Lukather – Toto Masyoshi Takanaka – New age, jazz – Japanese solo Lee Ritnour – Jazz, new age – solo Leslie West - Mountain, West Bruce & Laing Monty Montgomery – jazz, blues (accoustic you have never heard) Wes Montgomery – jazz 40's – 50's Phil Keaggy – New age Christian Robin Trower – Procul Harem Brian May – Queen Rick Derringer – Montrose, Edgar Winter Group, Steely Dan Robin Ford – John Mayall, Chick Corea, solo jazz, fusion, blues Carlos Santana – Santana Ronnie Montrose – Montrose Steve Morse – Dixie Dregs, Kansas, solo jazz, fusion Trevor Rabin – Yes, solo new age Gomer LePoet...
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Jun 10, 2010
Jun 10, 2010 at 1:19 PM UTC
Slashers Defined
Slashers Defined In response to my piece, Slashers, it was requested that maybe I could reveal at least which band or other info these great guitar players performed for to gain their claim to fame. I don't want to spend too much time on this defintion, but will give what info I think is pertinent. If you do not know some of the names I have presented to you, and you are a blues, rock, jazz, fusion guitar fan, I suggest you take the time to listen to some of their work. I have included some of my favorite incredible fusion players that do not have a super star following, but are renowned in their group of fans, probably mostly musicians to some degree. If you are a frustrated guitar player like I am, do not listen to the likes of Holdsworth, Johnson, Gambale, or Morse unless you love being tortured. Anyway on with the show. Eric Clapton – Yardbirds, Cream, Blind Faith, Derek and the Dominos. Jimmy Page – Yardbirds, Led Zeppe, The Honeydrippers, The Firm Jimi Hendrix – not only what is, but, what could have been Alan Holdsworth – Solo jazz fusion player – hot Steve Howe – Yes, Asia - Progressive rock, jazz – Bill Nelson – BeBop Deluxe, Solo Terry Kath – Chicago (25 or 6 to 4) – another sad early departure Ted Nugent – Amboy Dukes, **** Yankees – The madman Jim Krueger – Dave Mason Band – solo progressive rock Eddy Van Halen – Van Halen Ritchie Blackmore – Deep Purple, Rainbow Jerry Doucette – Doucette (Mama let him play) Eric Johnson – Solo – New Age, jazz Frank Gambale – Australian- Jazz, fusion, rock Goerge Benson – Jazz Larry Carlton – Jazz, new age rock Marc Farner - Grand Funk Railroad Peter Frampton – Humble Pie, solo Joe Satriani - New age – solo Johnny A. - jazz, new age – solo Danny Gatton – jazz, rockabilly – solo Chet Atkins – jazz, country John Mayer – Pop, blues – solo Neal Schon – Journey Steve Lukather – Toto Masyoshi Takanaka – New age, jazz – Japanese solo Lee Ritnour – Jazz, new age – solo Leslie West - Mountain, West Bruce & Laing Monty Montgomery – jazz, blues (accoustic you have never heard) Wes Montgomery – jazz 40's – 50's Phil Keaggy – New age Christian Robin Trower – Procul Harem Brian May – Queen Rick Derringer – Montrose, Edgar Winter Group, Steely Dan Robin Ford – John Mayall, Chick Corea, solo jazz, fusion, blues Carlos Santana – Santana Ronnie Montrose – Montrose Steve Morse – Dixie Dregs, Kansas, solo jazz, fusion Trevor Rabin – Yes, solo new age Gomer LePoet...
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After cocktails at Luigi's Bar, and then The Golden Bowl, I proposed we play a gig of jazz-inspired rock and roll. We all thought we'd make the fans cry out for encores every night. But our schemes were dreams that faded in the morning's ruthless light. My blue guitar should captivate the people every night. But the dream crumbled, the dream tumbled. My dream faded out of sight. Playing keyboards was Patricia. (Never 'Trisha', never 'Pat'.) She'd a taste for gracious living in her small art deco flat. She would practice chord progressions, sipping lapsang souchong tea. Then she played away at weekends with her special friend, Marie. She trained her dainty fingers to explore new grooves each night. But the dream crumbled, the dream tumbled. Her dream faded out of sight. We had Ritchie on electric bass, with tap-and-pull technique. Such a clever devil — Ritchie almost taught the bass to speak. Ralph the drummer's backbeat cymbal crashes measured out the bars. We agreed the speed — then found we could not play like superstars. Would the crowd be wowed by passion from my lovely blue guitar? No, the dream crumbled, as the band stumbled. Our dream faded overnight. The Blue Guitar Quartet was as close as we could get to our vision for the music of today. But we bumbled and we fumbled, our aspirations humbled. So we slowly put our instruments away. "The Blue Guitar Quartet is down, but not out yet. With practice you will crack it," said Marie. "Let Patricia be your singer; she's a musical humdinger, and as soulful as a solo girl can be". "She can improvise a blues based on any riff you choose. Let's have handshakes and embraces — this quartet is going places! Here's to jazz-rock, and The Blue Guitar Quartet!"
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Dec 9, 2013
Dec 9, 2013 at 2:19 PM UTC
The Blue Guitar Quartet (song lyrics)
After cocktails at Luigi's Bar, and then The Golden Bowl, I proposed we play a gig of jazz-inspired rock and roll. We all thought we'd make the fans cry out for encores every night. But our schemes were dreams that faded in the morning's ruthless light. My blue guitar should captivate the people every night. But the dream crumbled, the dream tumbled. My dream faded out of sight. Playing keyboards was Patricia. (Never 'Trisha', never 'Pat'.) She'd a taste for gracious living in her small art deco flat. She would practice chord progressions, sipping lapsang souchong tea. Then she played away at weekends with her special friend, Marie. She trained her dainty fingers to explore new grooves each night. But the dream crumbled, the dream tumbled. Her dream faded out of sight. We had Ritchie on electric bass, with tap-and-pull technique. Such a clever devil — Ritchie almost taught the bass to speak. Ralph the drummer's backbeat cymbal crashes measured out the bars. We agreed the speed — then found we could not play like superstars. Would the crowd be wowed by passion from my lovely blue guitar? No, the dream crumbled, as the band stumbled. Our dream faded overnight. The Blue Guitar Quartet was as close as we could get to our vision for the music of today. But we bumbled and we fumbled, our aspirations humbled. So we slowly put our instruments away. "The Blue Guitar Quartet is down, but not out yet. With practice you will crack it," said Marie. "Let Patricia be your singer; she's a musical humdinger, and as soulful as a solo girl can be". "She can improvise a blues based on any riff you choose. Let's have handshakes and embraces — this quartet is going places! Here's to jazz-rock, and The Blue Guitar Quartet!"
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This actually happened pretty much as I have told it. It happened on a weekday afternoon in summer on 60th Avenue in the Queensboro Hill section of Flushing, NY. The Mister softeee trucks still roam the streets to this day playing the same jingle as in my youth. For some reason they have adopted a sensible pay first policy. The Pioneer was the name of the local tavern at the foot of the street. it now serves bubble tea to the asian elite. Our ice cream man on Queensboro hill was a curmudgeon, to put it kind. I'm pretty sure he hated those who paid in quarters, nickels and dimes. Ritchie was a "special " kid He was a big kid for his age. To put things gently he was slow, Half a wit and not a sage. We heard the Mister Softee Jingle from a good half mile away It must haven driven the bald guy mad to have to listen to that all day. Ritchie went up to the window He got a cone then refused to pay. Mister Softee left his station. Ritchie made to run away. It was like a Chinese Fire Drill Ritchie jumped into the truck The keys were there, the engine on. He displayed considerable verve and pluck. The softee truck rolled down the block with Mister Softee in hot pursuit. His bald head gleaming in the sun wishing for his long lost youth. The truck crashed into the Pioneer. Ritchie was cuffed and led away. Mr. softee nursed his vanquished pride. His truck sold no more cones that day.
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Dec 10, 2011
Dec 10, 2011 at 8:35 PM UTC
The Mister Softee Heist
Tumbleweed Ted Old John Merchant, Joan Harling Edith Smith David Wilkinson, Mike Waldron Marie Ainsworth Ruth Bell, Lucy Ritchie A list undignified by death In an instant deflated, unwound Vibrant yet now not a breath Missing, lost, not found I mourn every one of their names And all that each one implied Merely a lifetime ago They came, they lived, they died. The bluntness has ruined my mood With the arrogant stealing of life It demanded all my attention Then cynically wielded the knife I'm trying but their voices are fading As my brain's recordings wear out And the clarity of all their faces Is blurred with the pallor of doubt So all I have now are some photos Flat caricatures of their lives Each one replacing my memory With a past that cannot be revived Relentless my list will grow longer Crushing for each name a line And my heart will grow ever more heavy Till the last name that's added, is mine.
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Nov 22, 2010
Nov 22, 2010 at 2:53 AM UTC
Missing in action
of hymn sings melodies harmonics to me here of all of us into the dreaming visions of peace i see, i sing, out of tune with reality, whatever, stealing the words, of perhaps, Ritchie Valens, or the Doors or Who sings urgency of now like smashing things , pumpkins guitars , drum solos sets Martin Luther King, Gandhi, The pope or the Catholic reigns or Jewish straining the Muslim urgency the forever strains in nature the beat of streams or trees growing or earthquakes volcanoes, JFK the sad sight of his death, or MLK on a balcony, or a stray forgotten lad shot down at 16. I sing with them , have much hope when I hear, the females high and males baritone create beauty, so love.
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May 17, 2015
May 17, 2015 at 7:47 AM UTC
a choir
If I had to say something now, in this moment of a great nonsensical sense of loss it would be that I too, can’t stop falling in love but am stuck in the 1950s, I can’t carry a tune or stand in line so there is very little hope, they said hope was the last thing in the jar, and when the lid slammed shut, we were saved from it all. That earth angel knew what she was doing, wholly like a lock of blonde hair from Doris Day, when she set the paper moon on fire, and I guess Bobby knew it too, when he dunked it underwater, hoping to send it somewhere flameless and soggy, beyond the sea. I cried into the moon, tripping over my slippers and I put my head on the bookcases’ shoulder, Paul Anka and Chubby Checker themselves couldn’t quench the tears, I was twisted you see, and I didn’t think it could be the same again. Time to put the cardboard cut-out down, the picket signs chopped to fences and I dragged my toes, I fell in love with the plastic walls, the table I built and a thick, encompassing sense of home, like a teenager in love, I don’t know why they did it but the high crooning voice of Lymon helped me unstick from the walls. Some spirit of left creativity, me and my bereftment belong together, tied when Ritchie Valens dropped us down behind the chest of drawers, I yelled to grab a hand, but it fell quietly onto the curtain pole, impaling itself. Nathaniel entered the room, came looking but answered the ringing with a “Hey, Mama” and left. I couldn’t save my own last dance, I didn’t know that I was it, it drifted and said it would meet me someplace. It said it would meet me when the air clears, it’s getting late and tonight I look something dear and washed up. I miss you so dearly, send me. I hadn’t known that that would be it, this impressive but horrific amalgamation, and I’ve been here for too long. The screen is dark and blank, I can’t see anything past it here. Here in this empty space where it all was.
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Jun 11, 2020
Jun 11, 2020 at 2:03 PM UTC
JOSEPHINE II
If I had to say something now, in this moment of a great nonsensical sense of loss it would be that I too, can’t stop falling in love but am stuck in the 1950s, I can’t carry a tune or stand in line so there is very little hope, they said hope was the last thing in the jar, and when the lid slammed shut, we were saved from it all. That earth angel knew what she was doing, wholly like a lock of blonde hair from Doris Day, when she set the paper moon on fire, and I guess Bobby knew it too, when he dunked it underwater, hoping to send it somewhere flameless and soggy, beyond the sea. I cried into the moon, tripping over my slippers and I put my head on the bookcases’ shoulder, Paul Anka and Chubby Checker themselves couldn’t quench the tears, I was twisted you see, and I didn’t think it could be the same again. Time to put the cardboard cut-out down, the picket signs chopped to fences and I dragged my toes, I fell in love with the plastic walls, the table I built and a thick, encompassing sense of home, like a teenager in love, I don’t know why they did it but the high crooning voice of Lymon helped me unstick from the walls. Some spirit of left creativity, me and my bereftment belong together, tied when Ritchie Valens dropped us down behind the chest of drawers, I yelled to grab a hand, but it fell quietly onto the curtain pole, impaling itself. Nathaniel entered the room, came looking but answered the ringing with a “Hey, Mama” and left. I couldn’t save my own last dance, I didn’t know that I was it, it drifted and said it would meet me someplace. It said it would meet me when the air clears, it’s getting late and tonight I look something dear and washed up. I miss you so dearly, send me. I hadn’t known that that would be it, this impressive but horrific amalgamation, and I’ve been here for too long. The screen is dark and blank, I can’t see anything past it here. Here in this empty space where it all was.
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*talking to ritchie (a scaffolder on the Whitechapel project of the cross-rail) and his girlfriend nicholle, the smurf who i told about gargamel... while almost begged the sri lankans to buy a bottle of whiskey and a bottle of diet pepsi, past the allowance for the shop's opening hours and catching the last bus from chasing the cross... me and ritchie got talking randomly... hugged and shook hands by the end of the encounter, i don't know why; ritchie was a scaffolder... i told him i was once a roofer... i don't know why i have a healthy affiliation with scaffolders; nicholle the chihuahua walking in front of us reminded us of drug testing on the building site, i said a day off, she said a day without pay and randomised crap like curtains... now i remember why i didn't join the crew with girlfriends, i'd be in a mental asylum by now, should they exist, otherwise with the failure of community care projects... maybe that's why women look amazing in ***** but cats look better in real life; i'm not even trying to be sexist, it's just too much reality.* i have only a few words for her: why won't she touch me? why am i to resolve my objections like this, ah, i see, because they are objections to that subjections that are of man succumbing to woman and the ordeal of chore; that are, man objectifies woman with all that *********** while woman makes countless subjects from him to appease her, while the world around sees no appeasement... indeed in the crusader's song to later show, as a psychosis (elevation of soul via the body's non-existence, a funny atheism) i'll show you a levitated stone, that doesn't require stones or loafs of bread for proof of alchemy; cup my hands in tears to capture tears like rainwater... make my eyes a convent.... i say a convent not a covenant! da pacem domine - and i see the mother nuns ushering the flock into carcass of obedience, a volume of body as tall as the pyramids; why are we the defending? what pleading would craft an altar if not to compare idle prayer crafted as a larger spectacle to allow marriage in its eyes permitted...    when i'm the sparrow of sorrow i sound like my mother, because of you, it's what i see that's to come that makes me disbelieve the magic of the advert, and embrace the advent of the saints in petulant prayer.
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Mar 28, 2016
Mar 28, 2016 at 7:16 PM UTC
the hooded knight
*talking to ritchie (a scaffolder on the Whitechapel project of the cross-rail) and his girlfriend nicholle, the smurf who i told about gargamel... while almost begged the sri lankans to buy a bottle of whiskey and a bottle of diet pepsi, past the allowance for the shop's opening hours and catching the last bus from chasing the cross... me and ritchie got talking randomly... hugged and shook hands by the end of the encounter, i don't know why; ritchie was a scaffolder... i told him i was once a roofer... i don't know why i have a healthy affiliation with scaffolders; nicholle the chihuahua walking in front of us reminded us of drug testing on the building site, i said a day off, she said a day without pay and randomised crap like curtains... now i remember why i didn't join the crew with girlfriends, i'd be in a mental asylum by now, should they exist, otherwise with the failure of community care projects... maybe that's why women look amazing in ***** but cats look better in real life; i'm not even trying to be sexist, it's just too much reality.* i have only a few words for her: why won't she touch me? why am i to resolve my objections like this, ah, i see, because they are objections to that subjections that are of man succumbing to woman and the ordeal of chore; that are, man objectifies woman with all that *********** while woman makes countless subjects from him to appease her, while the world around sees no appeasement... indeed in the crusader's song to later show, as a psychosis (elevation of soul via the body's non-existence, a funny atheism) i'll show you a levitated stone, that doesn't require stones or loafs of bread for proof of alchemy; cup my hands in tears to capture tears like rainwater... make my eyes a convent.... i say a convent not a covenant! da pacem domine - and i see the mother nuns ushering the flock into carcass of obedience, a volume of body as tall as the pyramids; why are we the defending? what pleading would craft an altar if not to compare idle prayer crafted as a larger spectacle to allow marriage in its eyes permitted...    when i'm the sparrow of sorrow i sound like my mother, because of you, it's what i see that's to come that makes me disbelieve the magic of the advert, and embrace the advent of the saints in petulant prayer.
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Mid rise bodies On horizon We live well Here, Do we? Above, away, around Remanents Ramsey-Ritchie Drive by Guess why Ghosts
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Dec 31, 2016
Dec 31, 2016 at 3:01 PM UTC
Elway's