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"revaluate" poems
*Under a willow tree, alone there I lay. Beneath the setting sun, across the shallow bay. My routine is profound, repeated the next day; it's how I escape, makes troubles go away. As my thoughts unwind, nothing meant to say, I revaluate my life, upon sunset of May. Forever resting my head, watching Sun's blinking rays, nothing shall wake me, falling into a daze. Dreams of faded peace, begin to make way. Pearching upon a rock, rests a beautiful jay. Then the white bird, lovely as it may, turns a frightening color, one of dark-gray. Once shallow water ahead, starts crashing green waves. Sunset turns to night, grass turns to clay. Abruptly, I finally wake, confusion starts to play. Under a willow tree, alone there I lay.*
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Feb 21, 2012
Feb 21, 2012 at 2:59 PM UTC
Under a Willow Tree
Nothing. Simply the faintest whisper of electricity buzzing throughout the walls. Nothing. Merely the wooden floors cracking, acting out timidly and discreetly, with no effort needed, causing the complication to disperse up and away. Nothing. Purely the pitter-patter of rain outside my window, gliding across the gutters, dripping softly one by one onto the scattered pebbles. Nothing. Just the sound of crickets singing delightfully, lighting up the thick, dark, opaque night that melts itself across the village. Nothing. Only the rhythm of my breath, inhaling and exhaling at a steady and profound pace. Nothing. Only the few combinations of sounds that make up the definition of silence. Silence that spreads throughout the room like warm honey, dripping from a tipped jar. Silence that brings peace within. Silence that allows you to think and revaluate. The silence that cures all problems.
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May 3, 2010
May 3, 2010 at 4:22 PM UTC
Silence
What do you think I'm going to do, How do you think i'm going to feel, I feel like I can't live without you, I think about you most days, And care one others shouldn't But I think we need space, To think and revaluate, Before the friendship gets torn in two.
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Oct 13, 2016
Oct 13, 2016 at 3:18 PM UTC
Ugh
A moment awake I move in consciously processing the surroundings. Emotions expand to capture my true feelings. Footsteps move to carry me to many of doorway. A moment asleep I drift in subconsciously traveling to places unknown. Emotions still expand to fill a dreamscape reality. Footsteps guided by beating heart move me in realm timeless. Moments build until my sand hourglass must be turned to revaluate and begin again in the game of Earth bound life. StarBG © 2017
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Jun 17, 2017
Jun 17, 2017 at 5:35 PM UTC
A Moment
That moment when a gesture heralds the thought of contemplation and you revaluate your attention. no longer do you feel sullen within, knocking on the doors buried thoughts. for one single action can create ripples upon the deliberation of what we, l have to be thankful for with a single action .
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Oct 10, 2017
Oct 10, 2017 at 4:45 PM UTC
Grateful Moments
I’m still running on Yesterday’s priorities; Seeking prizes that, If I only I took the time To think things through, Revaluate my situation Properly, Don’t really matter to me anymore. I’m still caught up in the Want of yesterday, Driven by desires Well past their sell by Date. The insignificance of Bygone yearnings Haunt my todays Until I exorcize them Screaming Into faded memory, File them away Marked ‘Insignificant’, ‘No longer useful’.
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Jun 12, 2020
Jun 12, 2020 at 9:18 AM UTC
RUNNING ON EMPTY.