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"redeyed" poems
I issued a challenge to my newly formed group, It went basically as follow. Choose a poem that you read but did not write and use the words from the word list at the bottom to make a new poem the words can be changed for instance winter can become wintery and swim can become swam You can make one up to and submit it if you want my group is for every poet and every kind of poetry. Here is mine. Why, Thank you by Elise Cluster Words Used in this poem stone instead free left grey wisdom redeyed tears filled forgotten tongued thank heart blue old Getting ****** and redeyed Feeling the wisdom of the old days And of old people Laughter comes freely I have forgotten so many things I filled up another one hitter And lit it up Filling the air with blue grey smoke I tongued the hitter to feel the heat I don’t have the energy for tears My heart thanks the grower For peace and quiet And the ease of reflection I breathe in inspiration This is great
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Jan 9, 2012
Jan 9, 2012 at 10:53 PM UTC
My words poem
On the off chance this Once discarded lothario Older than a mud pie In Borneo Longing like rain in a desert On the corner of sixth Avenue and emerald street Nearer the brothels than any temple long time met a cake Of soap just clinging To a sliver of one might call hope Blathering wistfully Though Redeyed lack of sleep not crying Clothes ***** as Moses In Jerusalem on the sabbath when it was Jewish And Islam wasn't a religion Before the slayings at Jericho Almost old enough to remember But has been told  about Jezebels wicked witches and fallen angels All of that **** Stood under a pine near a stop sign with faith hoping he'd see you again. Reading the bible.
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Mar 14, 2018
Mar 14, 2018 at 1:29 AM UTC
See you again