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.     It's here again...    Heavy downpour...    I inhaled the rain,     cloying with petrichor.       Standing at my window,      looking out...     Street lamps struggled aglow.    People with brollies walking about.    My eyes reached out to the heavens,     tracing these glassy beads       as they'd free fall...         Falling by the sheets,        the pattering hastens,       periodically punctuated      by the thunder's call.      Mind is drifting and floating,        intently listening to a           million love wishes...              Liquid beauty...melding, sketching...            In light entrapped splashes.          Raindrops descend and come,          into my still life tonight...           Won't you will me numb,              with your chilly bite...              Wide-eyed enamour...             Catching a stray droplet or two.              Riding the tail of a zephyr,               finding a place where                 no trouble could ensue.             An errant gust blew            to meet with me.           The refreshing moist          meets my parted lips...         Inhaling deep in this reverie...        Into a sea of tranquillity,         my mind slowly dips...       Sigh... If the droplets were kisses...       I would savour each and every one.       If the moist wind came and caresses      I would meet it in a tight embrace    till the break of sun.   What a sight...    Almost surreal it seems...       As the light from the surrounding          lamps dances playfully...         Dispersing and exploding into a      barrage of shattered beams.     Before it gets subdued in the drops    caught by the leaves on a nearby tree...    The drops would trickle      and fall before merging,       forming stranded puddles        unable to flow...         Rippling... Splashing... Reflecting...       An image...      Borne out of a fantastic show.     An image of beating hearts,      overlapping one another...        Speaking of consequential love           and feelings so true         Intertwined...      in the promise of forever...   Slowly retrieving itself into an...   image of you...
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Feb 19, 2015
Feb 19, 2015 at 7:18 AM UTC
Image
.     It's here again...    Heavy downpour...    I inhaled the rain,     cloying with petrichor.       Standing at my window,      looking out...     Street lamps struggled aglow.    People with brollies walking about.    My eyes reached out to the heavens,     tracing these glassy beads       as they'd free fall...         Falling by the sheets,        the pattering hastens,       periodically punctuated      by the thunder's call.      Mind is drifting and floating,        intently listening to a           million love wishes...              Liquid beauty...melding, sketching...            In light entrapped splashes.          Raindrops descend and come,          into my still life tonight...           Won't you will me numb,              with your chilly bite...              Wide-eyed enamour...             Catching a stray droplet or two.              Riding the tail of a zephyr,               finding a place where                 no trouble could ensue.             An errant gust blew            to meet with me.           The refreshing moist          meets my parted lips...         Inhaling deep in this reverie...        Into a sea of tranquillity,         my mind slowly dips...       Sigh... If the droplets were kisses...       I would savour each and every one.       If the moist wind came and caresses      I would meet it in a tight embrace    till the break of sun.   What a sight...    Almost surreal it seems...       As the light from the surrounding          lamps dances playfully...         Dispersing and exploding into a      barrage of shattered beams.     Before it gets subdued in the drops    caught by the leaves on a nearby tree...    The drops would trickle      and fall before merging,       forming stranded puddles        unable to flow...         Rippling... Splashing... Reflecting...       An image...      Borne out of a fantastic show.     An image of beating hearts,      overlapping one another...        Speaking of consequential love           and feelings so true         Intertwined...      in the promise of forever...   Slowly retrieving itself into an...   image of you...
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Friendship Friendship is not a jewel or a coin or a gift Jewels and coins and gifts don’t die Friendship is not a flower or blown glass; Friendship is not fragile Friendship is not a poem or a melody Because friendship cannot be forgotten Friendship is a symphony With grand overtures Melodic harmonies and unforgettable phrases punctuated by Attacking staccatos Vibrant arpeggios then peaceful interludes And sometimes rests Followed by thoughtful segues All held together by a coherent structure called Respect
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Apr 11, 2021
Apr 11, 2021 at 8:55 PM UTC
Friendship
Cold, blue, wet, fragile, brittle, hard, steam solidified, water hardened, anger, fear, white, tensile, steam solidified, water hardened; you lie in her wintered veins. why? "If she's awake, I'll **** you." staccato words spoken like a knife blade thrown... ...with malice and intent. Her father's voice from the bedroom next door no sound of her mother. The female child cowered under her candy-striped sheets their usual soft comfort unnoticed footsteps door handle moving light seeping into her sanctuary her heart thudded trying to escape her chest as she held her breath. "Please, please don't hear me." a silent plea as fear snatched her in its icy grip. She could smell him smell the cigarettes smell his power. She waited. He backed out returned to her mother between her heartbeats she heard the slap "You are lucky this time, ***** She sleeps." Heavy footsteps down the stairs punctuated by her mother's tears.                             ~~~~~~~~~~~ The girl child had only ever blamed her mother decades of anger and bitterness the memory of this night buried deep. Crazed hard ice beneath the tundra of her life. In the third decade of the girl child's life her mother died alone never forgiven for what she hadn't done nor for what she had. The ice remained in the girl child's veins If anything, thicker...harder. Then in her fifth decade this ice became water as with the passage of life the tundra thawed and rising with it to the surface the truth. Then what? The girl child worked hard at staying warm at keeping the ice at bay. Not easy. Nothing was ever said to her father. In her sixth decade the girl child's father died embraced in his daughter's arms forgiven for what he had done and for what he hadn't. The woman had finally thawed she was properly warm her own love finally able to flow
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Feb 29, 2016
Feb 29, 2016 at 1:39 PM UTC
ice
Cold, blue, wet, fragile, brittle, hard, steam solidified, water hardened, anger, fear, white, tensile, steam solidified, water hardened; you lie in her wintered veins. why? "If she's awake, I'll **** you." staccato words spoken like a knife blade thrown... ...with malice and intent. Her father's voice from the bedroom next door no sound of her mother. The female child cowered under her candy-striped sheets their usual soft comfort unnoticed footsteps door handle moving light seeping into her sanctuary her heart thudded trying to escape her chest as she held her breath. "Please, please don't hear me." a silent plea as fear snatched her in its icy grip. She could smell him smell the cigarettes smell his power. She waited. He backed out returned to her mother between her heartbeats she heard the slap "You are lucky this time, ***** She sleeps." Heavy footsteps down the stairs punctuated by her mother's tears.                             ~~~~~~~~~~~ The girl child had only ever blamed her mother decades of anger and bitterness the memory of this night buried deep. Crazed hard ice beneath the tundra of her life. In the third decade of the girl child's life her mother died alone never forgiven for what she hadn't done nor for what she had. The ice remained in the girl child's veins If anything, thicker...harder. Then in her fifth decade this ice became water as with the passage of life the tundra thawed and rising with it to the surface the truth. Then what? The girl child worked hard at staying warm at keeping the ice at bay. Not easy. Nothing was ever said to her father. In her sixth decade the girl child's father died embraced in his daughter's arms forgiven for what he had done and for what he hadn't. The woman had finally thawed she was properly warm her own love finally able to flow
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. Snow drifts down      laying a lawn cold sheet across the frozen ground,           creating art reliefs like acid etching glass, open space rolling and undulating, in small hills and depressions,      bedecked in a veil of white. The silence is deafening, quiet having been enjoyed      and surpassed, briefly punctuated by the call of a bird,      A sharp whistle that shrieks and attacks the silence. The fresh smell of snowfall wafts up      as it settles and glistens in the light of silver moonbeams, randomly peeping through clouds. The taste of peace,                      tranquility, in the frigid air, sends imagination soaring from the desolation of isolation to another time and place.           The snow falls,      falls, in a relentless race for the ground,                all is still, nothing stirs, as the moor welcomes its quilt and sleeps with a cold heart,      dreaming,                        of being kissed by the Sun. © Pagan Paul (28/05/18)
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May 28, 2018
May 28, 2018 at 7:38 AM UTC
Comfort Blanket
In an instance, I felt a calmness sweep across my body. My body free of any restriction. Her being my release. Sweet liberties Utilized by the touch of lips. A period punctuated by perched lips. Released in ounces of color. The way she loved. My tongue swirled around hers. Fingers wrapped around her waist. Brown peach flavored skin. My addiction a place for her to stay, Her bag broken down; piece by piece. A home away from home. Until the day she left. I consulted family, I reached out to friends. They say that she's no good They say leave her be. Truth be told My vacancy left colorless. Bland. My tree grown fruitless Revealed to me in bitter hunger. The realization of perception. Nothing left to fill my hands. This vacancy punishable by death. A ****** filled by her alone. My fingers around her waist. Her love sticky, sweet. Swirling around my tongue. My eyes left low Anticipating her return. They say that she's no good They say leave her be. Truth be told I haven't spoken to them since
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Dec 5, 2018
Dec 5, 2018 at 6:40 PM UTC
Brown Peach Flavor Skin Blues For Slow-Hand Willi Washington
Laid here counting roof tiles... two at a time my eyes heavy but my lids in denial of sleep she whispers in my ear are you awake then adds good with a grin WHY NOT abandon one basic need for another why not rest upon anothers flesh soft and warm scented with the promise of dreams insomnia so cruely denies Pillow pressed beneath her back giving support so sorely needed amid the punctuated night time prayers God called upon in blasphemous tongues praised and cussed in unison of mouths wet and open Sheets that offer no warmth soon cast off replaced by heat of breath and perspiration sweet and salty to the lips kissing nibbling biting nails find no fault inscribing thank yous in reddened ink Falling back exhausted yet wide awake as by my side cuddled in she sleeps smiling and I close my eyes and think myself blessed for every night the first for we two have yet to sleep together.
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Nov 23, 2012
Nov 23, 2012 at 10:12 PM UTC
Sleeps Over ******
Copulation of the minds... as word play leads innuendos to fornicate upon the poets tongue... unrestrained his fingers give voice to wanton carnal desires laying the reader bare to writhe helplessly beneath his hands with ink stained kisses he forces words into their mouths a breathless sigh resonating his ache to be heard as he stands naked before them offering himself to their voyeuristic gaze before taking them upon the sheets in punctuated passionate embraces leading them toward the ****** they so cried out for... Jesus I'm Good. ~<3~
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Feb 28, 2013
Feb 28, 2013 at 10:41 PM UTC
Pronoun(ced) ***********
In childhood, your father’s name is DAD Now grown, maybe with children of your own But his name is still DAD DAD, the teacher, the consoler, the advisor Admonishes: “Drive safe” and “Save your Money” Today he’s the bard “This is like prison,” DAD laments while rolling his eyes Tubes like thin plastic chains tether his deflated body to blinking panels; paintings (factory printed ones) pretend the hospital room is more than just a sterile space Today, DAD’s eyes cast a faraway gaze, projecting And I see the characters in his story I see the 10 year old boy he describes, who snuck to stash a set Of English Composition Texts in the boy’s bathroom To escape Mrs. McElroy’s Fourth Grade course in Morose Poetry I see the thin, sandy blond, 6 foot 2 high school rabblerouser Who broke into the Vice Principal’s old Fiat And buried Stilton cheese in the dashboard All done on a sweltering May school day The anecdote is punctuated with a smirk and a: “Who would do a thing like that?” Stories of when he spotted a shy brunette at the dance and knew Knew he was to marry her; Stories of when his own DAD grasped his infant grandson’s dimpled hand Before giving in to complications of a heart attack The bard stops and exhales a sigh He cringes in his crinkled skin Sunken eyes squeeze close “I’m sorry” the nausea interrupts his tale “These drugs are…” “It’s okay. Take your time” I console, trying to comfort the pain in the room Now I’m the consoler, taking on the job to ameliorate Now this man, vulnerable in his suffering, is no longer DAD Now mortal, a child, a brother, a lover, a patient A man chained by the body’s sickness He is distilled by chemo reduced to a soul, who, through affliction, Forgets As his children remember He is as helpless in this life as we are.
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Jun 17, 2016
Jun 17, 2016 at 12:38 AM UTC
My Father-In-Law in Chemo
In childhood, your father’s name is DAD Now grown, maybe with children of your own But his name is still DAD DAD, the teacher, the consoler, the advisor Admonishes: “Drive safe” and “Save your Money” Today he’s the bard “This is like prison,” DAD laments while rolling his eyes Tubes like thin plastic chains tether his deflated body to blinking panels; paintings (factory printed ones) pretend the hospital room is more than just a sterile space Today, DAD’s eyes cast a faraway gaze, projecting And I see the characters in his story I see the 10 year old boy he describes, who snuck to stash a set Of English Composition Texts in the boy’s bathroom To escape Mrs. McElroy’s Fourth Grade course in Morose Poetry I see the thin, sandy blond, 6 foot 2 high school rabblerouser Who broke into the Vice Principal’s old Fiat And buried Stilton cheese in the dashboard All done on a sweltering May school day The anecdote is punctuated with a smirk and a: “Who would do a thing like that?” Stories of when he spotted a shy brunette at the dance and knew Knew he was to marry her; Stories of when his own DAD grasped his infant grandson’s dimpled hand Before giving in to complications of a heart attack The bard stops and exhales a sigh He cringes in his crinkled skin Sunken eyes squeeze close “I’m sorry” the nausea interrupts his tale “These drugs are…” “It’s okay. Take your time” I console, trying to comfort the pain in the room Now I’m the consoler, taking on the job to ameliorate Now this man, vulnerable in his suffering, is no longer DAD Now mortal, a child, a brother, a lover, a patient A man chained by the body’s sickness He is distilled by chemo reduced to a soul, who, through affliction, Forgets As his children remember He is as helpless in this life as we are.
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Forests of coral adorn the rocky ocean floor, Sheltered here in this sky-blue lagoon. See the golden sand, shining through the still waters, Fringed by plumes of palm. The warming sun is smiling, Flanked by fluffy white clouds. Gulls are calling Over the whispering sea. A tropical paradise Punctuated only By impromptu showers. Those colourful corals Swarmed with teeming fish Of every hue. This is the place To be. Paul Butters
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Jul 13, 2015
Jul 13, 2015 at 5:49 AM UTC
Coral Cove
On the East Coast of England there’s a small resort Called Cleethorpes, where I happen to reside. And out towards the Pleasure Park A short way from the shore There is The Boating Lake. I love to go there on a still, sundowning evening When the parking is free. To walk those walkways around the lake, Dreaming I’m on Starfleet Academy Campus. Walkways flanked by lawned hillocks and shrubs. The lake is fringed by red-flowered reeds And punctuated by ducks and geese. Families and couples roam about As I sit in meditation Watching and listening To the central fountain play. Such a tranquil scene, Far from the madding crowd. Go over the bridge and cross the mini-railway line: Before you reach the saltmarsh and the sea You’ll find a stretch of shrubbery and trees A haven for the birds And for me, As I walk my favourite path. The lake is thus a prelude To some splendid growth As nature does its thing. Serene and tranquil everything A spiritual feeling As I meditate Beneath multi-layered clouds Under endless sky. Paul Butters
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Aug 27, 2016
Aug 27, 2016 at 6:21 AM UTC
Cleethorpes Boating Lake
Tell me a time U needed me A time u grabbed ur phone 2 text me. Have u ever rung me In the depths of the night Just to hear my voice In the darkness? U could say u had U could tell me u need me But I’d see our messages Or rather, my messages: The lines and lines Of my words, Calling ur name, That go on for miles. Punctuated by one of urs A smile :) Or a word And nothing more. How can ily When u never respond? How can I be obsessed When there’s nothing: No message For me to obsess over. Ily But u never, ever reply :(
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Apr 12, 2021
Apr 12, 2021 at 2:18 PM UTC
u never reply
All along that grey draped zig-zagging shoreline The men sat or stood in resolute silence Each trying to reach back into minds Scrambled like eggs by the fear of impending violence Soon the hard faced men will open the gates As the race will start as hearts will change pace Then by push and twist they load like cattle Into great grey hulking hearse's barely floating Plunging through grey roiling seas toward thunder Echoing across the channel quotation marks of the battle That rages ,engages not turning ÷ripping out pages of history When the water turns red punctuated by the floating dead.... ........The question marks and periods Exclamation marks in the book thats still being written ...         ......to what end? That is what makes any plot a vagrant thought With a premise being an unresolved mystery Such are ..... The vagaries of the ever repeating chapters of human history!
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Apr 22, 2018
Apr 22, 2018 at 12:40 PM UTC
Resolute silence
Her eyes are so deep set now that in a certain light they are just holes in her face She is so thin now from the chemotherapy her skin seems little more than an empty balloon stretched over her skeleton and tied off at the scalp, to keep what’s left of her from falling out She shakes so bad now that she needs assistance to cease the drought on the jagged landscape of her lips Now, her days are spent in an endless sleep punctuated by a waking sleep in which she does a lot of staring at walls and vomiting That waking sleep, or living nightmare, is itself punctuated by the occasional friend come to mourn at the gravemarker that is her hospital bed She now has sympathy for the zombie knowing what it’s like to be dead and alive at the same time She thinks, if she had the energy, she might bite people too just to remind them that she’s still here
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 12:25 PM UTC
Hospice
The pierced ego sees through an opaque lens; a vestige of hope, humor and   intellectual solidarity. Effigies of forgotten ethos, the culmination of a fated dream; unrequited ardor, abandons identity to an irreducible fervor,                       subtext of tension,                     enduring ****** privation; etude of a paramour ending torture, tasting mystical polarity. The wounded heart once intruded, bleeds effusive; the ornament of humility. Flattened collateral damage, primal search, proves illusive; portals of hurt, slivers of pride, assembled fragments of thereness absorb the loss of my English muse. Poetry and devotion punctuated murmurs of piety,   depth perception virtue unfound; expectation - access to suffering;   disinterested love present,   desultory carnage of rescission,    absurdity personified; euphemism of adieu, the sound of no sound. The discarded image finds no favor, the salt lost it's savor unquenched thirst; desire of diminished purview, the saporus stream deferred; vision eclipsed; saturated self hidden in the text. Poverty asks the question, absence summons ethereal substance merged into the immanent frame; integrating, in solitude signifying, mediating - logos contested the humiliation of the word. Lyrical enigma, where did I go? provisional personality scorned, renouncing nostrums of the prosaic, surrenders to the the realm interior sovereignty assumed in provenience, native horizon of the next. ©2008 & 2011 W.S. Warner
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Sep 3, 2011
Sep 3, 2011 at 6:11 PM UTC
The Humiliation of the Word
The pierced ego sees through an opaque lens; a vestige of hope, humor and   intellectual solidarity. Effigies of forgotten ethos, the culmination of a fated dream; unrequited ardor, abandons identity to an irreducible fervor,                       subtext of tension,                     enduring ****** privation; etude of a paramour ending torture, tasting mystical polarity. The wounded heart once intruded, bleeds effusive; the ornament of humility. Flattened collateral damage, primal search, proves illusive; portals of hurt, slivers of pride, assembled fragments of thereness absorb the loss of my English muse. Poetry and devotion punctuated murmurs of piety,   depth perception virtue unfound; expectation - access to suffering;   disinterested love present,   desultory carnage of rescission,    absurdity personified; euphemism of adieu, the sound of no sound. The discarded image finds no favor, the salt lost it's savor unquenched thirst; desire of diminished purview, the saporus stream deferred; vision eclipsed; saturated self hidden in the text. Poverty asks the question, absence summons ethereal substance merged into the immanent frame; integrating, in solitude signifying, mediating - logos contested the humiliation of the word. Lyrical enigma, where did I go? provisional personality scorned, renouncing nostrums of the prosaic, surrenders to the the realm interior sovereignty assumed in provenience, native horizon of the next. ©2008 & 2011 W.S. Warner
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*When ink kisses paper Leaving his marks on her Staining her Immaculate white Corrupting her innocent purity With unspoken words and lines, Punctuated with figurative styles, Embedded with phonetic rhymes Of divine charismatic beauty; Sweet poetic lyrics are born...* © Raphael Uzor
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Apr 19, 2014
Apr 19, 2014 at 6:35 PM UTC
Graphic Romance
*stellar direction in undulating terrain punctuated by meteoric columns of infinite light imparting a clutching embrace to the face of now lunar reflections form a fluid nocturnal path to an osculated gateway of fertile encompassment culminating in breathless pillows of untabled silence stars without fault grace the expressive heavens while muted words gaze out through rooftop eyes cascading over living stone in waterfalls of emotional geodes*
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Aug 15, 2014
Aug 15, 2014 at 2:42 PM UTC
Constellation
It’s possible to speak too much to remember what your words mean. And so is the two-fold danger faced by writers. Danger is to pace a hole in the floor. Danger is to stand until you can’t move anymore like when shallow waves **** your feet into the sand. 
So I try not to stand when I write. 
I keep a narrow tack without too many big words which pedants use to dig great holes in the ground –moats to keep others out– or make you think they think big. But anyone who reads knows about Icarus and anyone with aims must beware: to shoot directly upwards is to strike your own head when like fate the arrow returns to source. You’re only as good as your mind, your characters only as strong as you are. —at least, this is true in so far as you know. True in so far as they speak. For to test them you must torque them and twist at their cores, and make opposing forces meet– but only as hard as you can. This makes writing a hill slick with oil. Insecure. Potential energy. Potential failure seated in all of that grime that cakes your toes like grease that coats the teeth of great industrial gears. So I try not to stand when I write. But whether the better take comes when you plunge and you slide and dissolve like so much ice, I must say I don’t know, the thought seems nice. But the same It seems like those who let go Are the ones with the least to say. I can't decide either which way. All I know about writing is most sentences are punctuated wrongly. The period is certain, but writing is undecided. It is the figuring-out, a quest-bound troop that moves with all its own fanfare. Question marks curl up— invisible smoke on a summer coal fire: heat twisting the air like irons in stoke giving sign of the transformations there withheld. For fire mediates matter, so writing stands ever-between. But I’ve spoken too much and I don’t know what these words mean. And so I fold like there’s danger in writing, while danger is imagined like borders on a continent. Danger is thinking I'm dangerous enough to keep silent. Like shallow waves, given way to sand. So avoid letting voids form where the mind dismisses confrontation to more capable smiths. Writing is –at best– an attempt. Even with shallow structures in rhythmic din, the silent breaks by force of pen, and all because of the simple fact that quiet refuses to bend. All I can hope is my writing upholds these unknowns while I try not to stand. But you ask about writing?
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Apr 29, 2018
Apr 29, 2018 at 4:28 PM UTC
About Writing
It’s possible to speak too much to remember what your words mean. And so is the two-fold danger faced by writers. Danger is to pace a hole in the floor. Danger is to stand until you can’t move anymore like when shallow waves **** your feet into the sand. 
So I try not to stand when I write. 
I keep a narrow tack without too many big words which pedants use to dig great holes in the ground –moats to keep others out– or make you think they think big. But anyone who reads knows about Icarus and anyone with aims must beware: to shoot directly upwards is to strike your own head when like fate the arrow returns to source. You’re only as good as your mind, your characters only as strong as you are. —at least, this is true in so far as you know. True in so far as they speak. For to test them you must torque them and twist at their cores, and make opposing forces meet– but only as hard as you can. This makes writing a hill slick with oil. Insecure. Potential energy. Potential failure seated in all of that grime that cakes your toes like grease that coats the teeth of great industrial gears. So I try not to stand when I write. But whether the better take comes when you plunge and you slide and dissolve like so much ice, I must say I don’t know, the thought seems nice. But the same It seems like those who let go Are the ones with the least to say. I can't decide either which way. All I know about writing is most sentences are punctuated wrongly. The period is certain, but writing is undecided. It is the figuring-out, a quest-bound troop that moves with all its own fanfare. Question marks curl up— invisible smoke on a summer coal fire: heat twisting the air like irons in stoke giving sign of the transformations there withheld. For fire mediates matter, so writing stands ever-between. But I’ve spoken too much and I don’t know what these words mean. And so I fold like there’s danger in writing, while danger is imagined like borders on a continent. Danger is thinking I'm dangerous enough to keep silent. Like shallow waves, given way to sand. So avoid letting voids form where the mind dismisses confrontation to more capable smiths. Writing is –at best– an attempt. Even with shallow structures in rhythmic din, the silent breaks by force of pen, and all because of the simple fact that quiet refuses to bend. All I can hope is my writing upholds these unknowns while I try not to stand. But you ask about writing?
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Flying The world looked like a Sic and strange set of circuit boards Green and brown patch work fields Black sands punctuated by golden roads Buildings built up like little transistors No sign of humanity Other than a cold construct of state wide Electronic life
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 5:05 PM UTC
Flying
This is not my poem Sure I sat here and wrote it down, but its not my poem. Yes, yes I took the time to memorise it so I could see my words reflected in the expressions on your face as I read aloud... but its not my poem. This is your poem You wrote this You wrote this with your smile the curve of your lips wrote this the sparkle in your eyes punctuated every line and measured every pause, perfectly. Your lips formed every word, sounded every syllable, created the melody that echos in my head as I write YOUR poem. The rise and fall of your chest first catches my breath, then takes it away completely. Sensibilities and caution tumble down your back like rain in a warm summer shower that falls from a star filled sky, the heavens have opened. My heavens have opened. Caution is now a distant memory, like something once heard but long forgotten, something you knew you once knew but know you no longer have to remember so while there is at least an awareness of it, its passing will not be mourned. And there, pooled in the small of your back, nestled just above the curve of your buttocks, lies hope. The hope that the beauty I see in you, in us, in everything since we met isn't a mirage, isnt a projection of some one sided fantasy but that its real. That its as real for you as it for me and that I'm not alone. That I'm not alone in the way I feel and the way I think and the way........ the way.....the way I love. Its hope that knowing how I feel, how much I'm in love, in love with you, the hope that hearing me say out loud the very thing that I've had to fight telling you on a daily basis hasn't scared the **** out of you the way finally admitting it to you has me. But this isn't my poem. This is your poem. You wrote it and its my gift to you.
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Apr 13, 2016
Apr 13, 2016 at 9:17 AM UTC
This is not my poem
This is not my poem Sure I sat here and wrote it down, but its not my poem. Yes, yes I took the time to memorise it so I could see my words reflected in the expressions on your face as I read aloud... but its not my poem. This is your poem You wrote this You wrote this with your smile the curve of your lips wrote this the sparkle in your eyes punctuated every line and measured every pause, perfectly. Your lips formed every word, sounded every syllable, created the melody that echos in my head as I write YOUR poem. The rise and fall of your chest first catches my breath, then takes it away completely. Sensibilities and caution tumble down your back like rain in a warm summer shower that falls from a star filled sky, the heavens have opened. My heavens have opened. Caution is now a distant memory, like something once heard but long forgotten, something you knew you once knew but know you no longer have to remember so while there is at least an awareness of it, its passing will not be mourned. And there, pooled in the small of your back, nestled just above the curve of your buttocks, lies hope. The hope that the beauty I see in you, in us, in everything since we met isn't a mirage, isnt a projection of some one sided fantasy but that its real. That its as real for you as it for me and that I'm not alone. That I'm not alone in the way I feel and the way I think and the way........ the way.....the way I love. Its hope that knowing how I feel, how much I'm in love, in love with you, the hope that hearing me say out loud the very thing that I've had to fight telling you on a daily basis hasn't scared the **** out of you the way finally admitting it to you has me. But this isn't my poem. This is your poem. You wrote it and its my gift to you.
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Blue eyes watching. Blushing at the sight at the very thought.  Flushed with emotion. Hearts beating so fast and hard.  Deafening rhythmic beating.  Quivering at the thought of what may be next.  Hoping it will be so, yet afraid of what is to come.  Self-conscious and embarrassed, time stretches on.  Not wanting the moment to pass.  Holding on hard to the idea.  A soft, almost accidental, brush of the lips.  A light, absentminded gliding of the finger on the skin.  Systems heightened, mind swimming, emotions running rampant, temperature rising.  Taken by surprise the lips plant firmly yet gently.  A breathy moan leaves no doubt.   Sighs tell a story Opening the door to play And so it begins Tentatively, lips touch.  So sweet and delicate the dance.  Welcoming, beckoning to be entered.  Warm and wet they go exploring, tasting, breathing in the essence of desire.  Doubt gives way to fire, and passion wins out.  Piece by piece the offering is made and accepted.  The game continues.  Silently daring to be outdone.  First one button, then another.  Heat rises.  Smooth skin under rough hands. Electricity.  Fingers trace a line that the tongue follows.  Closer, closer, closer.  Involuntary movement brings skin against skin, breath against breath, body against body. Minds lost to passion Floods come to drown the desert Drink til thirst is quenched The hand once afraid to touch, briefly runs the length of its desire.  Like a volcano letting off steam.  Embers turn into an inferno consuming all it comes near.  Floodgates opened, beckoning.  Waters tested.  There is no denial, no second thoughts, no rewind.  Short gasps of need, punctuated by the sounds of the flesh.  Glistening in the moonlight, two outlines become one.   No more wondering The question has been answered Hearts have been traded There are no thoughts left to ponder.  In this moment there is only those eyes.  Those blue eyes that pierce the soul, that see right through the words.  Lips removed from lips.  Watching the moment.  Waiting for its impending arrival.  Fingers grasp tightly as they pull against the skin.  Trying to melt into each other.  They dig in a little too hard, the sounds are a little too loud. Inhibitions lost on the wind.  No longer able to hold back. And in that moment There is only perfection Nothing else matters
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Dec 23, 2010
Dec 23, 2010 at 11:51 PM UTC
passion a haibun
Blue eyes watching. Blushing at the sight at the very thought.  Flushed with emotion. Hearts beating so fast and hard.  Deafening rhythmic beating.  Quivering at the thought of what may be next.  Hoping it will be so, yet afraid of what is to come.  Self-conscious and embarrassed, time stretches on.  Not wanting the moment to pass.  Holding on hard to the idea.  A soft, almost accidental, brush of the lips.  A light, absentminded gliding of the finger on the skin.  Systems heightened, mind swimming, emotions running rampant, temperature rising.  Taken by surprise the lips plant firmly yet gently.  A breathy moan leaves no doubt.   Sighs tell a story Opening the door to play And so it begins Tentatively, lips touch.  So sweet and delicate the dance.  Welcoming, beckoning to be entered.  Warm and wet they go exploring, tasting, breathing in the essence of desire.  Doubt gives way to fire, and passion wins out.  Piece by piece the offering is made and accepted.  The game continues.  Silently daring to be outdone.  First one button, then another.  Heat rises.  Smooth skin under rough hands. Electricity.  Fingers trace a line that the tongue follows.  Closer, closer, closer.  Involuntary movement brings skin against skin, breath against breath, body against body. Minds lost to passion Floods come to drown the desert Drink til thirst is quenched The hand once afraid to touch, briefly runs the length of its desire.  Like a volcano letting off steam.  Embers turn into an inferno consuming all it comes near.  Floodgates opened, beckoning.  Waters tested.  There is no denial, no second thoughts, no rewind.  Short gasps of need, punctuated by the sounds of the flesh.  Glistening in the moonlight, two outlines become one.   No more wondering The question has been answered Hearts have been traded There are no thoughts left to ponder.  In this moment there is only those eyes.  Those blue eyes that pierce the soul, that see right through the words.  Lips removed from lips.  Watching the moment.  Waiting for its impending arrival.  Fingers grasp tightly as they pull against the skin.  Trying to melt into each other.  They dig in a little too hard, the sounds are a little too loud. Inhibitions lost on the wind.  No longer able to hold back. And in that moment There is only perfection Nothing else matters
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The dermatologist demands a pre-summer scan of my visual delights fully magnified. Peering into places where no one else has ever peered, even me, reminds me that this is a potentially "disruptive" process. Eye don't know what his eyes have seen.   He works in silence pin punctuated by the occasional mmmm or throat clearing rumble. Snappy removal of neutrally colored gloves signify conclusion, he opines as follows: "Were you aware," he inquires, "that the lines, the furrows on a your forehead correspond to the life your have lead?" "You have three, deep deep tracks, and that's a fact." Yes, eye know, and each one is a tree ring notation of my existence. Each a different year, each a different moment fearful, a death and a birth, a passing, a regaining. No, not children or parents, illusions. Markers of our lives are the birth and death of our illusionary, our revelation minutes, that measure and scribe what dug those furrows is now officially, no more. Until we start anew, a different Pretense, a channel commenced to commemorate. Living the dream, they say, aren't we all, eye think, and so inform him. The doctor did not bill for this visitation.
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May 23, 2015
May 23, 2015 at 5:23 PM UTC
A Full Body Examination: Tree Rings
Challenges punctuate our lives with question marks. We ask ourselves, “How long?” So we dream. We wonder about each other. So we believe. We concern ourselves with each other’s welfare. So we pray. We doubt our wisdom. So we trust our hearts. We second guess ourselves. So we act in faith. We question our tomorrow. So we cherish the present. We fear the question marks that have punctuated our lives. So we build walls; Walls to hide from our fear, walls to hide from our frustration, And walls to hide from our feelings. Let us never build walls that would cut us off from the world, Or from each other. Within the circle of our fellow strugglers, Our thoughts are punctuated with fewer question marks, And from time to time - a simple period. Here with each other, it's not as difficult to wait for the answer. And the walls don't seem as challenging to climb. Whatever our question, We can dare each other to dream. And in this time of testing, we can hope for the answer, An answer that will be different for every one of us. An answer that punctuates each of our lives With an exclamation point! ©2014 Michael S. Davis
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Jun 12, 2014
Jun 12, 2014 at 11:12 PM UTC
A Punctuated Life (Voc Rehab)
the narrative does not cling to classicalism of stating whether the pronoun usage is either singular or plural or both to allow an armchair of expression; after all... there's enough for us to bypass the classical philosophical debate about subject and object, simply investigating pronoun usage in relation to singularity or pluralism. there’s a theory where poetry came from, one read: cleopatra wanted to hear sweet-nothings calibrating a razor with a viper’s kiss... another read: she báthory? she báthory? she the one that turned milk into blood? she can burn in hell. i thought we were un-dialectical in the realms of concern? no... you see... poetry came from punctuated-impressionism... or a fear of it... punctuation of course, not from the impressionism... poets fear punctuation... give them a semi-colon and they treat it like a sidelined line of verse. this is poetry in mathematical equations: i had a pear(,) it was a spare(.) i had a care for traffic(-) so i missed( ) the expressions and started using an obelisk to quarter up the mammoth into chop suey... poets simple say: next line! when prose says next paragraph and the prized execution of the 100m sprint . . . (.) that’s universal alpha romeo with alfa bravo charlie delta (echo)... come on in the u-turn... give us a smile......... :), poets says... i need breathing space without sentenced timing of silence, for the toad to feed inspiration and envy! no wonder you came with the alpha - zulu alphabet given that you used ɪɡ and zoʊ... so tell me... where’s this copernican west upside down (this heliocentric west with east being the big bang)?! i'd swear the thing stopped orbiting in circles and a thing that's on it's thought started to become orbital... a fashion sense of the 60s 70s 80s 90s repeated - that's right, the whole thing became heliocentric and we became narcissists instead of solipsists in the geocentric system of worked-up plagiarism with adequate excuses.) it's here it the poets apprehensive of punctuation symbology and instead writing "sparingly," to write, e.g.: i hate         this love                 affair claimed                      to be           the world...                  i rather                          chisel chequers                          into geometry                      of x4               90º. makes sense poets begot fear of punctuation and not grammar, they serviced to explore nothing else, leaving grammar open long enough to ***** mathematics in... remember... poets are firstly concerned with punctuation... secondly with grammar... philosophy for poets is grammar; **** i'm um um so drunk i'll need to revise.
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Oct 30, 2015
Oct 30, 2015 at 9:27 PM UTC
what poets fear
the narrative does not cling to classicalism of stating whether the pronoun usage is either singular or plural or both to allow an armchair of expression; after all... there's enough for us to bypass the classical philosophical debate about subject and object, simply investigating pronoun usage in relation to singularity or pluralism. there’s a theory where poetry came from, one read: cleopatra wanted to hear sweet-nothings calibrating a razor with a viper’s kiss... another read: she báthory? she báthory? she the one that turned milk into blood? she can burn in hell. i thought we were un-dialectical in the realms of concern? no... you see... poetry came from punctuated-impressionism... or a fear of it... punctuation of course, not from the impressionism... poets fear punctuation... give them a semi-colon and they treat it like a sidelined line of verse. this is poetry in mathematical equations: i had a pear(,) it was a spare(.) i had a care for traffic(-) so i missed( ) the expressions and started using an obelisk to quarter up the mammoth into chop suey... poets simple say: next line! when prose says next paragraph and the prized execution of the 100m sprint . . . (.) that’s universal alpha romeo with alfa bravo charlie delta (echo)... come on in the u-turn... give us a smile......... :), poets says... i need breathing space without sentenced timing of silence, for the toad to feed inspiration and envy! no wonder you came with the alpha - zulu alphabet given that you used ɪɡ and zoʊ... so tell me... where’s this copernican west upside down (this heliocentric west with east being the big bang)?! i'd swear the thing stopped orbiting in circles and a thing that's on it's thought started to become orbital... a fashion sense of the 60s 70s 80s 90s repeated - that's right, the whole thing became heliocentric and we became narcissists instead of solipsists in the geocentric system of worked-up plagiarism with adequate excuses.) it's here it the poets apprehensive of punctuation symbology and instead writing "sparingly," to write, e.g.: i hate         this love                 affair claimed                      to be           the world...                  i rather                          chisel chequers                          into geometry                      of x4               90º. makes sense poets begot fear of punctuation and not grammar, they serviced to explore nothing else, leaving grammar open long enough to ***** mathematics in... remember... poets are firstly concerned with punctuation... secondly with grammar... philosophy for poets is grammar; **** i'm um um so drunk i'll need to revise.
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The casket was coming up, swaying and wobbling Like a novice skater’s layover spin, The workings proceeding apace, The stillness of the August heat Punctuated by disinterested growl of the backhoe, The occasional out-of-place jocularity by the excavators The creaky jingle of the chains holding the muddied box As it proceeded skyward in its clumsy poor-man’s Resurrection. The affair was being observed by an elderly couple, Old enough to be of no particular age.   Their car had Carolina plates, But their inflections, their casually-tossed idioms They noted that ruefully The grass needs mowed) Marked them as natives. They’d returned (Last time, most likely, The wife uttered mournfully) To take their son with them; he’d drowned when was five? six? (The years will do that to a body, apparently) In Kinzua Creek some half-century ago, Back when little boys weren’t under a mandate To be safe from themselves, as it were.   He was our boy! We’ve never forgotten him! The old man said, the words snapping off In a manner that spoke of something else altogether, How the whistle at the Montmorenci Went off at three and eleven for second shift, And your *** had better be there, As those were good jobs that didn’t wait for bereavement leave, Because there was always someone Just itching to take your spot on the line, And anyway life went on, At least in the sense that television screens went all to snow And tires went flat and fuses blew And eventually a dead child Is not always in the forefront of your thoughts, Only tiptoeing in when the Press ran a picture Of the Montmorenci Area Class of whenever, Or there was an item about some other family Who opened their front door To a grim sheriff’s deputy with his hat in his hand.   Eventually, after some time And in defiance of both the odds and gravity, The casket was settled into the back Of the undertaker’s huge old black Caddy, And the couple cane-toddled back to their car, Following out the through the old spider-like gates And onto the main road. The brief procession fading from sight, Until there was nothing left to see Save the hillsides covered in old growth pine.
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Sep 21, 2018
Sep 21, 2018 at 11:00 AM UTC
the disinterment
The casket was coming up, swaying and wobbling Like a novice skater’s layover spin, The workings proceeding apace, The stillness of the August heat Punctuated by disinterested growl of the backhoe, The occasional out-of-place jocularity by the excavators The creaky jingle of the chains holding the muddied box As it proceeded skyward in its clumsy poor-man’s Resurrection. The affair was being observed by an elderly couple, Old enough to be of no particular age.   Their car had Carolina plates, But their inflections, their casually-tossed idioms They noted that ruefully The grass needs mowed) Marked them as natives. They’d returned (Last time, most likely, The wife uttered mournfully) To take their son with them; he’d drowned when was five? six? (The years will do that to a body, apparently) In Kinzua Creek some half-century ago, Back when little boys weren’t under a mandate To be safe from themselves, as it were.   He was our boy! We’ve never forgotten him! The old man said, the words snapping off In a manner that spoke of something else altogether, How the whistle at the Montmorenci Went off at three and eleven for second shift, And your *** had better be there, As those were good jobs that didn’t wait for bereavement leave, Because there was always someone Just itching to take your spot on the line, And anyway life went on, At least in the sense that television screens went all to snow And tires went flat and fuses blew And eventually a dead child Is not always in the forefront of your thoughts, Only tiptoeing in when the Press ran a picture Of the Montmorenci Area Class of whenever, Or there was an item about some other family Who opened their front door To a grim sheriff’s deputy with his hat in his hand.   Eventually, after some time And in defiance of both the odds and gravity, The casket was settled into the back Of the undertaker’s huge old black Caddy, And the couple cane-toddled back to their car, Following out the through the old spider-like gates And onto the main road. The brief procession fading from sight, Until there was nothing left to see Save the hillsides covered in old growth pine.
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so much depends upon a green pencil fitted snugly between the blue and the yellow upon a line drawn across a page where the sky and sunburst clay meet — as neighbours who smile and wave without names or words exchanged — upon a silence punctuated by shafts of pine shaved close by winding laneways into storyteller points
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Feb 23, 2022
Feb 23, 2022 at 3:37 AM UTC
Between Blue & Yellow