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i’d rather write about the freckles on your back than think about all of the ways in which you quite possibly don’t love me. i feel sick at the very thought of you picking me apart the way you did; fingers grabbing and stroking in a catastrophic symphony of skin and vulnerability. let’s read between each other’s lines; share my sentences and punctuate my paragraphs with your mouth; because i can breathe easier on the mornings where i wake up wrapped around you. because my moods change like the ******* seasons and the spinning in my head doesn’t want to stop.                                          you tell me that i should probably get a therapist because no one that thinks about all the ways in which they could **** themselves has an ounce of mental stability.                                           i tell you that i have been to four.                                           names faded into a blur with hazy snippets of conversation remaining. 20mg.                     30mg. you tell me that trust issues and scars aren’t endearing and i tell you that neither is counting up the potential number of pills needed to dissolve your body into the living room carpet. let me sink inside your skin and make a home in your flesh; i tell you about the nights where i lay awake in the bath turning the water red.                        tragic, isn’t it. you tell me that this isn’t how my head should work and i tell you that i already know. everything you could possibly tell me i already know. i know that 400 calories a day isn’t normal, and my hands shouldn’t shake all the time.                                              i know. please let me stitch myself into you, even just for a while; until i no longer feel dizzy and my world stops spinning. i don’t need you to tell me that it will be okay, because honestly i don’t think it will be and, that in itself, is okay.                                                                                  let me stitch myself into you, because my own skin can’t take it anymore. let me call you back when my voice stops wobbling and my vision straightens out, but honestly, i’m terrified that it never will. what if this is it. headaches and tears and shaking and blood.                                              and the debilitating, gut-wrenching feeling of pure and euphoric emptiness.                                               tragic, isn’t it.
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Apr 4, 2018
Apr 4, 2018 at 2:41 PM UTC
stitches.
i’d rather write about the freckles on your back than think about all of the ways in which you quite possibly don’t love me. i feel sick at the very thought of you picking me apart the way you did; fingers grabbing and stroking in a catastrophic symphony of skin and vulnerability. let’s read between each other’s lines; share my sentences and punctuate my paragraphs with your mouth; because i can breathe easier on the mornings where i wake up wrapped around you. because my moods change like the ******* seasons and the spinning in my head doesn’t want to stop.                                          you tell me that i should probably get a therapist because no one that thinks about all the ways in which they could **** themselves has an ounce of mental stability.                                           i tell you that i have been to four.                                           names faded into a blur with hazy snippets of conversation remaining. 20mg.                     30mg. you tell me that trust issues and scars aren’t endearing and i tell you that neither is counting up the potential number of pills needed to dissolve your body into the living room carpet. let me sink inside your skin and make a home in your flesh; i tell you about the nights where i lay awake in the bath turning the water red.                        tragic, isn’t it. you tell me that this isn’t how my head should work and i tell you that i already know. everything you could possibly tell me i already know. i know that 400 calories a day isn’t normal, and my hands shouldn’t shake all the time.                                              i know. please let me stitch myself into you, even just for a while; until i no longer feel dizzy and my world stops spinning. i don’t need you to tell me that it will be okay, because honestly i don’t think it will be and, that in itself, is okay.                                                                                  let me stitch myself into you, because my own skin can’t take it anymore. let me call you back when my voice stops wobbling and my vision straightens out, but honestly, i’m terrified that it never will. what if this is it. headaches and tears and shaking and blood.                                              and the debilitating, gut-wrenching feeling of pure and euphoric emptiness.                                               tragic, isn’t it.
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1026 The Dying need but little, Dear, A Glass of Water’s all, A Flower’s unobtrusive Face To punctuate the Wall, A Fan, perhaps, a Friend’s Regret And Certainty that one No color in the Rainbow Perceive, when you are gone.
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The Dying need but little, Dear
From the green hill, blows downwards a wind, gently titillating the languid trees of this dense forest,the rustling of the leaves create, an impromptu tune, proving they are taut strings, yielding willingly to the sensual fingers of the wind. Super moon,while raising, listens keenly awhile as if she had never heard one like this before. The wise silver owl, sitting on the high branch keeping account  of every stroke of night,with an imaginary wand, as the conductor, catches the emerging mood that seethes within the million pieces of orchestra that gently merge, get exhilarated, finds a pause to punctuate it with a timely hoot, the moment freezes, falls in to the repository of time for keeps.
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Jan 3, 2016
Jan 3, 2016 at 12:39 PM UTC
A slice of forest night for keeps
ah, enslave without compassion bound ancestors you must impale go seek and show no mercy let those who escape carry the tale all the sufferers bearing witness to their ministers spilling their blood staggered screeches from bleak recesses regicide plotters bend to the dust with unmitigated conquest and ********** trample them under your tyranny slimy enshrinement brings into question what's divinely lamented for scatter populations with ruthlessness let them choose sycophancy or sword reappoint difficult commanders for instigation unbroken awaits kept in frenzy, they whisper confusion never quite sure of their fate with unmitigated conquest and ********** trample them under your tyranny let the cowardly unlock the gates for you to heroically claim what's inside crowds you abhor kneeling in wonder all the world is your ****** bride punctuate the roads with tollgates ***** monuments to broadcast your name all your banquet's guests are your enemies entertain them with one another's shame with unmitigated conquest and ********** trample them under your tyranny with unmitigated conquest and ********** trample them under your tyranny under your tyranny
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Jun 11, 2015
Jun 11, 2015 at 2:32 AM UTC
Unmitigated Conquest and **********
(trying to write away this heat) squirrel solstice squirrels curled in maple nests are promises built of acorns and seeds. bunched in sleep, they await the snow that comes after night fall. whisker twitching twenty feet up, squirrel dreams occupy trees. in monochrome season those gray and black bundles brush snow from limbs and punctuate the sky.
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Aug 16, 2010
Aug 16, 2010 at 3:20 PM UTC
squirrel solstice
I’ll split the hairs, I’ll split an atom And never leave the bedroom. I most identify with December, Not because of the crushing temperature But the lack of cosmic dawdling Is no more mesmerizing than a frozen phoenix. And as she arrives by train from Phoenix, I study who she appears to be, the atoms Composing her auburn hair with dawdling Authenticity shout “Take me to the bedroom!” While the wedge of geese in this temperature Head to the Southern Hemisphere’s December. The common chill of this morning in December Prevents us from rising from out the covers like a phoenix, And our blankets like ash defend us from the temperature That stills the vibrations of the atmosphere’s atoms. I curse the insulated walls of the bedroom, Trapping in heat and discouraging our dawdling. A rafter of turkeys outside my window are dawdling, Printing their runes on the documents of December Between the thickets surrounding the bedroom While the sun, golden like the plumage of a phoenix, Awakens in my bones every dormant atom, Instilling in me courage to brave the temperature. I follow her, dressed, from the bedroom And her footsteps serve to punctuate the temperature Like the smoldering beak of a phoenix Too busy being risen for dawdling. She leaves, by train through the chill of December, Me daydreaming of fission. The splitting of an atom. I’ll split an atom daily, safely within the bedroom And sleep through December’s pitiless, hollow temperature, Waking only for dawdling until Spring is a phoenix.
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Mar 24, 2010
Mar 24, 2010 at 10:16 PM UTC
Fission
I’ll split the hairs, I’ll split an atom And never leave the bedroom. I most identify with December, Not because of the crushing temperature But the lack of cosmic dawdling Is no more mesmerizing than a frozen phoenix. And as she arrives by train from Phoenix, I study who she appears to be, the atoms Composing her auburn hair with dawdling Authenticity shout “Take me to the bedroom!” While the wedge of geese in this temperature Head to the Southern Hemisphere’s December. The common chill of this morning in December Prevents us from rising from out the covers like a phoenix, And our blankets like ash defend us from the temperature That stills the vibrations of the atmosphere’s atoms. I curse the insulated walls of the bedroom, Trapping in heat and discouraging our dawdling. A rafter of turkeys outside my window are dawdling, Printing their runes on the documents of December Between the thickets surrounding the bedroom While the sun, golden like the plumage of a phoenix, Awakens in my bones every dormant atom, Instilling in me courage to brave the temperature. I follow her, dressed, from the bedroom And her footsteps serve to punctuate the temperature Like the smoldering beak of a phoenix Too busy being risen for dawdling. She leaves, by train through the chill of December, Me daydreaming of fission. The splitting of an atom. I’ll split an atom daily, safely within the bedroom And sleep through December’s pitiless, hollow temperature, Waking only for dawdling until Spring is a phoenix.
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Do I have any talent in poetry? Can I write a good series of monometers? Let’s See They’re **** Are those even monometers? How the hell should I know? Maybe I can write a decent enjambment Let it flow with no punctuation Let it soar with no interruption whatsoever Let it flow let it flow let it flow Ah **** it! Flowing is for sissies! Let’s punctuate this bastard! Let’s add lots of **** to this! Maybe, perhaps, supposedly! All these worthless pathetic lines! These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap Let’s add more **** to this! Let’s add themes! Love, darkness, hatred, abuse! I’m sorry I left you baby, please come back! It feels so black in this cruel horrid world! **** you! Cocksucker! Bitch! **** I hate you! Hit me again! Hit me again you ****** These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap If that isn’t talent then what is You may ask I answer this with a laugh Poetry takes no talent You silly fool It is a simple sharing of heart and soul Why lower it to a talent It’s demeaning It’s sickening It makes me want to ***** Close your eyes Let it take you in Love it Hate it Praise it **** it Cleanse it Vulgarize it Whatever you like If you ever want to be A talented poet Then don’t take my advice Use structure Use themes Make your voice easily heard But at the same time silent These words That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap And really doesn't need talent.
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Jul 18, 2013
Jul 18, 2013 at 12:33 AM UTC
Talent
Do I have any talent in poetry? Can I write a good series of monometers? Let’s See They’re **** Are those even monometers? How the hell should I know? Maybe I can write a decent enjambment Let it flow with no punctuation Let it soar with no interruption whatsoever Let it flow let it flow let it flow Ah **** it! Flowing is for sissies! Let’s punctuate this bastard! Let’s add lots of **** to this! Maybe, perhaps, supposedly! All these worthless pathetic lines! These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap Let’s add more **** to this! Let’s add themes! Love, darkness, hatred, abuse! I’m sorry I left you baby, please come back! It feels so black in this cruel horrid world! **** you! Cocksucker! Bitch! **** I hate you! Hit me again! Hit me again you ****** These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap If that isn’t talent then what is You may ask I answer this with a laugh Poetry takes no talent You silly fool It is a simple sharing of heart and soul Why lower it to a talent It’s demeaning It’s sickening It makes me want to ***** Close your eyes Let it take you in Love it Hate it Praise it **** it Cleanse it Vulgarize it Whatever you like If you ever want to be A talented poet Then don’t take my advice Use structure Use themes Make your voice easily heard But at the same time silent These words That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap And really doesn't need talent.
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I In the cold silence of the area Rose a lonesome cafeteria, Outside of it hooded forms - Scaly horns - Perched on white, plastic chairs Like fifteen owls on a wire. II A grey-green bird in the distance Sang a three-note song with insistence. He sang on not to the white folks But to the cold he tried to coax. He sang to a spot desolate - Sure thing, he sang to punctuate it. ©LazharBouazzi, July, 2017
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Jul 13, 2017
Jul 13, 2017 at 2:00 PM UTC
Cafeteria by the Road
i have 5 - two by my mouth two on my cheeks and one in my chin (plus others in places you can't see - elbows and knees and secret spots) and they burst when i smile and when i cry and when i speak, the two by my mouth punctuate what i say, with little pocks and creases - puckish and emphatic. i have 5 two by my mouth two on my cheeks and one in my chin (plus others in places you can't see)
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Nov 4, 2012
Nov 4, 2012 at 12:35 PM UTC
a word on dimples
dear, you cut me off mid-sentence. for all my skills, techniques and terms here's a thing i can't find a way to convey. a narrative even beyond comprehension to it's protagonist a girl without a simile or metaphor applicable? somebody to leave me laconic, short in syntax, unstructured. will we discuss possessive pronouns now? for in subtext, i am the possessive one. i'm so lacking verbally but i'm sure you'd understand it contextually to punctuate: i can be the ellipsis, the implication of my omissions but you're in my text as the most eager mark of exclamation
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Mar 17, 2014
Mar 17, 2014 at 3:41 PM UTC
wordsmith
white clouds swell up anvil bloom a lowering gloom scuds by stacatto drops on the windshield punctuate   powerline sway radio crackle sparks sheets of tenor sax and blunt gusts of cool I lower the window and steer into the storm Tom Spencer © 2018
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Jul 8, 2018
Jul 8, 2018 at 8:33 PM UTC
storm
Would a blue ballpen without ink just lie To die, like the children of our past needs, The mouths of their thinning souls leeching Our piety, our profanity, our tendency to build society Off faces and masks,                               Individual fragments of ourselves. Would one give a thousand pesos to he who smears Windshields with soap to take a few coins hostage Or to she who exhibits a gaunt infant, an offspring Of want, not wanted, the wear and tear of a rough World manifest on emaciating juvenile skin. Would one Give a thousand?                               Would one commit a kiss? When mere change can buy a pen with its full blood, What then is the worth of the bleeding, the bearded Blind on the somber sidewalks of forgetfulness where Without ink, it ceases to be blue, and unable to write,             He has no need for a pen. The world is writing his story,             He is only there to punctuate with his blood.
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Jul 12, 2012
Jul 12, 2012 at 11:56 PM UTC
Utility and Humanity
1. There was the tremor of leaves, a rustle of bayonet grass parried the multihued calm of dawn's smeared light. "This is what we trained for," the captain said. We hunkered behind stacked bags of sand. 2. Filigreed shafts of light pierce the bullet perforated leaf canopy, bellowed yells punctuate the swirl and buffet of turbulent air: “Contact”,  “2 O’Clock”, “Incoming”, “ "Moving”, “Reloading”, “Ammo”. 3. Fingers twitch, the grit of soil twisted through their grip; moon slashed carcasses glint, spent shells, Earth exhales a vermillion mist, rising, echoless, in this cathedral of leaves.
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Sep 28, 2018
Sep 28, 2018 at 1:19 AM UTC
REQUIEM
Challenges punctuate our lives with question marks. We ask ourselves, “How long?” So we dream. We wonder about each other. So we believe. We concern ourselves with each other’s welfare. So we pray. We doubt our wisdom. So we trust our hearts. We second guess ourselves. So we act in faith. We question our tomorrow. So we cherish the present. We fear the question marks that have punctuated our lives. So we build walls; Walls to hide from our fear, walls to hide from our frustration, And walls to hide from our feelings. Let us never build walls that would cut us off from the world, Or from each other. Within the circle of our fellow strugglers, Our thoughts are punctuated with fewer question marks, And from time to time - a simple period. Here with each other, it's not as difficult to wait for the answer. And the walls don't seem as challenging to climb. Whatever our question, We can dare each other to dream. And in this time of testing, we can hope for the answer, An answer that will be different for every one of us. An answer that punctuates each of our lives With an exclamation point! ©2014 Michael S. Davis
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Jun 12, 2014
Jun 12, 2014 at 11:12 PM UTC
A Punctuated Life (Voc Rehab)
Rake-thin Humble hoes subsistence soil Planting green-topped onion bulbs, Camino divides the field forcing Humble's Husband To till distantly, he works slower, and is of bulbous girth, A red Reebok shirt adorns his back whilst she Wears the hand-me-downs her grandmother had worn. Their house is built of stone like bone, Ground-sewn and dug fresh centuries before, No siestas punctuate their endeavors. Passing pilgrims groan under weight of sack - Whilst Humble counts the years before her bones Are interned in preparation to shelter future generations.
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Jul 6, 2014
Jul 6, 2014 at 9:08 AM UTC
Onion Sopa
In England brown birds make dusty circles on overcast days, The ground blankets itself in moss and cappuccino leaves. So when the sharp lemony sun fills the breeze with warmth, And white cotton clouds punctuate the sky and my eyelids, It feels like home
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Apr 8, 2016
Apr 8, 2016 at 6:13 AM UTC
Sussex
Frayed and grayed Oversized and overused Why you still hold onto it, has everyone bemused. Freckled and speckled Like a cinnamon stick warm winter stories Keeping it thick Pale fingernails, peak through the sleeves, Tears and holes decorate the wrists. From between cupped hands Rise cinnamon flavored mists Warm memories ride down your throat Thawed hearts melt with every sip Cinnamon specked bubbling froth Settles above your lip Cinnamon flavored laughs Punctuate the conversations Spicy aroma tickles the nose Sniffing for winter’s indications Warm memories on cold nights Fill up the empty holes in your sleeves Packed with stories soaked in cinnamon And the sweater becomes fuller with the memories it weaves
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Dec 23, 2012
Dec 23, 2012 at 2:23 PM UTC
Wearing Cinnamon
Every vein and exhausted cell in my brain, ankles and lower back- my body bleeds out I hate you. Like broken record players. I scream: "I hate you" for making me look like the kind of monsters I would run away from. I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I scream louder to punctuate a full stop. Then my voice finally cracks, perhaps making empty escapes for oxygen to come into my burning lungs. Broken everywhere and everything. And behind me, the sunrise was the colour of bad blood.
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 8:24 AM UTC
Veins
Revel in space, yet not darkled, still the **** and span of things that breeds airlessness; The trees are evenly cut, and their overgrowth seems like a forethought. Where I am from, we eat fish with our bare hands and our furniture, from bodies of sandalwood, crushed with the scent of peregrines. The morning makes you conscious of space, and altogether the height of trees syncopates to a nauseating stillness. In the awning hours, leaves punctuate the ground – the cicada with its machinistic song prowls, spills like water from a broken vase toppled by me years younger, raw, agile, deftly windless,   wounded in love, lovingly wounded, perhaps if there is a word for it, then let me have my way, easily fraught with its meaning:    a casualty. Sometimes the timeworn folks would light cigarettes underneath the canopy of a mango tree to banish ants and send them back   to their queens – roosters in their wrinkled stations croon in stasis, a song for the somnolent. I become what the seasons evict. Constancy. Rearing weight and gravity from nocturne. Tears are communal. They make us aware of the weight of the Earth. Somewhere, a funebre stilts through the silence, and the jangle of little pieces spells out fortuity, men in huddles mending pain by the sleight of hand, a toss of a card, spinning in its imaginary axis: fate,    feigned and fine-tuned to belief that it is controllable, a variable, or a tabulation marred by frailty. From where I am from, people stride through the streets naked, soldering baskets filled with fruits gossamer from the harvest, children suckling their mothers, the music of sweeping metastasizes throughout the afternoon, and the same clouds contort themselves to afford wry proposition: it is a day tender with wonder, its allure overwrought, its sheen unremarkable.   The funebre leaves with a necessary abundance of absence. All the leaves depart from their mothering boughs,   collapsing on the dreary back of the loam like penitence. Like how once when you were young, you tinkered with the fresh scab of your wound and felt the pain confine   itself there, a part of you, that has now healed, but is still       available for the world to break once again.
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Jan 30, 2016
Jan 30, 2016 at 4:47 PM UTC
A Funebre In Plaridel, Bulacan
Revel in space, yet not darkled, still the **** and span of things that breeds airlessness; The trees are evenly cut, and their overgrowth seems like a forethought. Where I am from, we eat fish with our bare hands and our furniture, from bodies of sandalwood, crushed with the scent of peregrines. The morning makes you conscious of space, and altogether the height of trees syncopates to a nauseating stillness. In the awning hours, leaves punctuate the ground – the cicada with its machinistic song prowls, spills like water from a broken vase toppled by me years younger, raw, agile, deftly windless,   wounded in love, lovingly wounded, perhaps if there is a word for it, then let me have my way, easily fraught with its meaning:    a casualty. Sometimes the timeworn folks would light cigarettes underneath the canopy of a mango tree to banish ants and send them back   to their queens – roosters in their wrinkled stations croon in stasis, a song for the somnolent. I become what the seasons evict. Constancy. Rearing weight and gravity from nocturne. Tears are communal. They make us aware of the weight of the Earth. Somewhere, a funebre stilts through the silence, and the jangle of little pieces spells out fortuity, men in huddles mending pain by the sleight of hand, a toss of a card, spinning in its imaginary axis: fate,    feigned and fine-tuned to belief that it is controllable, a variable, or a tabulation marred by frailty. From where I am from, people stride through the streets naked, soldering baskets filled with fruits gossamer from the harvest, children suckling their mothers, the music of sweeping metastasizes throughout the afternoon, and the same clouds contort themselves to afford wry proposition: it is a day tender with wonder, its allure overwrought, its sheen unremarkable.   The funebre leaves with a necessary abundance of absence. All the leaves depart from their mothering boughs,   collapsing on the dreary back of the loam like penitence. Like how once when you were young, you tinkered with the fresh scab of your wound and felt the pain confine   itself there, a part of you, that has now healed, but is still       available for the world to break once again.
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~ *prelude. did you know that English stands alone as a written language requiring the capitalization of the word "I"... yet makes no similar provision for “we” or “us; a sad statement of self inflation.  it was after learning this that i abandoned the rule in my own poetry.* ~ my i’s averted, lowered, diverted, reduced in size, an exercise of large proportions; breaking down the me-isms, finding room for we-isms, to take the larger place; create an i for seeing, the case for simple, smaller being; no need to punctuate, instead eliminate this compulsion to inflate; ’tis my i-drop moment, my i-reducing ointment, these pupils are dilated, deflating i and me, enlarging we and thee; finding that in i-reduction, the eyes are widely opened, thus to better see, what i really need to be.
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Oct 10, 2016
Oct 10, 2016 at 12:49 PM UTC
a case for i drops
I punctuate with close precision, aware of where I'm placing my semi-colons and dashes, using Oxford commas like a grammar geek. Your punctuation always bothers me but you, with your misplaced apostrophes and oddly abbreviated words that you cradle in speech marks, never care. You were constantly callous in your conduct, your handling of punctuation marks. I assumed you never understood the significance I attached to your words. I could feel the excitement and anxiety and apprehension build in my belly every time with your exclamation points! I could feel my brows furrow together deep in confusion, every time you sent me just one little question mark? I suppose I never did tell you this but when last month you ended your sentence (accidentally, of course) with a dash, well, I knew then that we’d be for ever. and when last week you sent me a comma to end your speech I knew for certain that more was to come. but I see now it was silly to attach such hope to a hyphen because yesterday you concluded with the biggest full stop I've ever seen and let me know that that was all. I felt that period’s punch deep inside my gut like you were trying to make me throw up my jam and toast. I had never before known one small, simple dot to be so powerful and hurt so much. It did though, and you couldn't even tell-
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Jul 13, 2014
Jul 13, 2014 at 3:56 AM UTC
Punch
I spot my reflection in the silhouette of your eyes. Like a mirror, you are me and I am you. In this lonely hour, and in this hollow room, my eardrums fill with piano notes and rhymes, as everything around me suddenly goes quite and silence blooms. I come to realize our love is nothing but meaningful lyrics hung upon abandoned piano keys, and unuttered syllables written amongst a music sheet. Yet, the symphony plays perpetually, loud and clear, demanding to be heard, to be felt. It lifts me up, swirling me in your galaxy, and every so often, I approach to tear off the mask you've been hiding behind, till there's nothing left but musical debris. I strip you of salvation. I unleash your wholeness. Rondes and blanches and noires punctuate and embellish your figure. They are a halo. They are mine.
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Jun 27, 2014
Jun 27, 2014 at 3:56 PM UTC
Gnossienne
Oh, I see—you liked it when I used that big word, huh? You want me to use some more? Mm, let me just grab my pocket Thesaurus. Yeah, that's right baby, I take it everywhere with me— I find it quite useful in these… situations. Right now, I could give you seven variations of the word **** Seductive          Arousing                 Provocative                           Sensuous                  Mmhm, you liked that one, didn't you?                     Libidinous            Suggestive Titillating… You'd like more, I can tell, but I need you to want it. Let's go somewhere quiet and thumb through my college style manuals for a few hours. We could talk about sentence variety, the Oxford comma, some syntax, and mm, if you're feeling real good, maybe even discuss the proper usage of a semi-colon. Just know, I've been saving semi-colons for, you know, that special someone. If things get a little steamy, we can go down to the basement and I'll show you my Scrabble board. I'll set you up for a triple-word score, and you can put together some of those high-scoring, two-letter words that really get me going. Oh yeah, I think I'd be into your strategy. When the game is over, I'll lean you back, come in real close, and whisper some Neruda, some Cummings, some Dickinson softly into your ear. Afterward, I’ll trace lines of Hughes and Whitman down your naked spine with my fingers. I'm sure you know it's only polite to return the favor. It's just an idea. I know it sounds good. Trust me, I'll be gentle— But baby, believe me— I could punctuate you in all the right places.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 12:58 PM UTC
brain cleavage
Oh, I see—you liked it when I used that big word, huh? You want me to use some more? Mm, let me just grab my pocket Thesaurus. Yeah, that's right baby, I take it everywhere with me— I find it quite useful in these… situations. Right now, I could give you seven variations of the word **** Seductive          Arousing                 Provocative                           Sensuous                  Mmhm, you liked that one, didn't you?                     Libidinous            Suggestive Titillating… You'd like more, I can tell, but I need you to want it. Let's go somewhere quiet and thumb through my college style manuals for a few hours. We could talk about sentence variety, the Oxford comma, some syntax, and mm, if you're feeling real good, maybe even discuss the proper usage of a semi-colon. Just know, I've been saving semi-colons for, you know, that special someone. If things get a little steamy, we can go down to the basement and I'll show you my Scrabble board. I'll set you up for a triple-word score, and you can put together some of those high-scoring, two-letter words that really get me going. Oh yeah, I think I'd be into your strategy. When the game is over, I'll lean you back, come in real close, and whisper some Neruda, some Cummings, some Dickinson softly into your ear. Afterward, I’ll trace lines of Hughes and Whitman down your naked spine with my fingers. I'm sure you know it's only polite to return the favor. It's just an idea. I know it sounds good. Trust me, I'll be gentle— But baby, believe me— I could punctuate you in all the right places.
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the wrong atmospherics of transmission move in uninvestigated chaotic archives red and pink turbulent storms swarm across deep space frequencies in imaginative currents of pulsars that are translated into phases each represented in diverse conflicting modes of expression in obsessive grooves of consciousness cut up components of recycled narratives audibly fixating on vibrations that sound across the universe in diffused spirals of manic fluctuations converting archaic symbols into equivalents of dust surfaces that oxidise in intermittent epochs and deposit a rediscovered earth an expansive transferable construction of accidental providence that allows for expression in artificially generated realities hallucinated images that float across the consciousness of the cosmos producing visions that punctuate rational thought become preoccupied with the conception of interplanetary transpeciation counting the chronological diversity of those that occupy the black, blank vacuum of space
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Aug 4, 2013
Aug 4, 2013 at 7:54 PM UTC
We are not alone...there is somebody out there...in space everyone can hear you scream...