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"parting" poems
i like my body when it is with your body. It is so quite new a thing. Muscles better and nerves more. i like your body. i like what it does, i like its hows. i like to feel the spine of your body and its bones,and the trembling -firm-smooth ness and which i will again and again and again kiss, i like kissing this and that of you, i like, slowly stroking the,shocking fuzz of your electric furr,and what-is-it comes over parting flesh….And eyes big love-crumbs, and possibly i like the thrill of under me you so quite new
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I Like My Body When It Is With Your
Lovers entered a forbidden forest bower, And as they stalked that range, with eyes glazed, She offered up her hind. Now, with doe eyes, Deep as his, deep in arousal's sleep, heels fell,  As he knocked and pulled her dark honey hair  And whispered, surrender, into wanting ears,  Softly he drove his hunting command, homing  To his huntress. Her body braced, yet bade, with heat and vibrance. Ruthlessly, he ****** his arrow deeper and then  Once more and then again.  She bucked fiercely  And defiant, goading his prodding lance ever more Ever longer, and parting the pink lines of her white Rose, he was, and once again, Prince to the dark Dominion of her quarters. In the middle of this carnal match they paused. And looking into the forest beyond they saw A yearling fawn, a feral Goddess, grazing still,  Bathing in a vale, virginal, wholly unmoved  By their act of venery, lustfully playing, in the innocent  Leaves.  It was as if they were among her kin, a gentle  Doe and a noble stag. From that moment on  The human hunters did not speak. Falling, again, rolling eyes were deep in arousal's sleep. Her back was a crescent moon pocked and wet with dew. He could feel her heart beating in time with his piercing  Prong, her arching back glistened in the suns spittle As it broke through the dark and vernal ceiling wood. In the final shot her quivering buck lowered and broke And a sound not heard, made a scene, a sweet murmuring Shuddered and sank onto the floor of the forest leaves  With her tale, taken and told, her breathless breath,  Her nostrils cold and her heated and lanced openings  Dripping, draining; here was a New World’s beginning. Sated, solemn and softly quaking, his woman sweetly laid, And now, doomed with her doe eyes, two lovers, fated, made; She glowed, divine, like the rolling brook that mellowed Slow, in the vine-dark and golden forest stable, In Artemis’s wood.
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Jun 15, 2012
Jun 15, 2012 at 1:33 PM UTC
In Artemis’s Wood
Lovers entered a forbidden forest bower, And as they stalked that range, with eyes glazed, She offered up her hind. Now, with doe eyes, Deep as his, deep in arousal's sleep, heels fell,  As he knocked and pulled her dark honey hair  And whispered, surrender, into wanting ears,  Softly he drove his hunting command, homing  To his huntress. Her body braced, yet bade, with heat and vibrance. Ruthlessly, he ****** his arrow deeper and then  Once more and then again.  She bucked fiercely  And defiant, goading his prodding lance ever more Ever longer, and parting the pink lines of her white Rose, he was, and once again, Prince to the dark Dominion of her quarters. In the middle of this carnal match they paused. And looking into the forest beyond they saw A yearling fawn, a feral Goddess, grazing still,  Bathing in a vale, virginal, wholly unmoved  By their act of venery, lustfully playing, in the innocent  Leaves.  It was as if they were among her kin, a gentle  Doe and a noble stag. From that moment on  The human hunters did not speak. Falling, again, rolling eyes were deep in arousal's sleep. Her back was a crescent moon pocked and wet with dew. He could feel her heart beating in time with his piercing  Prong, her arching back glistened in the suns spittle As it broke through the dark and vernal ceiling wood. In the final shot her quivering buck lowered and broke And a sound not heard, made a scene, a sweet murmuring Shuddered and sank onto the floor of the forest leaves  With her tale, taken and told, her breathless breath,  Her nostrils cold and her heated and lanced openings  Dripping, draining; here was a New World’s beginning. Sated, solemn and softly quaking, his woman sweetly laid, And now, doomed with her doe eyes, two lovers, fated, made; She glowed, divine, like the rolling brook that mellowed Slow, in the vine-dark and golden forest stable, In Artemis’s wood.
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So many of us sit, think and still wonder, But have we ever gave ourselves the chance to ask? Well no! We just rejoice and find oursleves floating on cloud nine because "it is just another public holiday" So many of us have cherished this day, as a day of drinking, parting and being in the family way. Which "Us" am i refering to? Well it is the youth of South Africa, That can only sing "Freedom is coming tomorrow" very well without knowing the significance of that freedom and what it took for this freedom to come well let me take you back to the hands of time. In June 16, 1976 the mongoloid youth of South Africa marched down the streets of Soweto for this freedom we have today. BLOOD SHADE, SCREAMS, EXPLOIDING SOUNDS and the cries of faces without races filled the streets of Soweto. Parents feared for the lives of their children, but who knew that adolescents could be so brave? They stood together in unity, the same unity we lack today. Fought for what was right and that came with their African roots, which we nolonger honour today, they fought against the usage af Afrikaans as the main language of communication at schools. And look where it left us today. We have the Right to choice and the Freedom of association. And not forgeting that, they left us with the courage to say "WE ARE PROUDLY SOUTH AFRICANS"
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Jun 11, 2015
Jun 11, 2015 at 11:19 AM UTC
Youth day (June 16, 1976)
I hung myself today. Hanged? Whatever, point is I hanged myself today and I'm still hanging. I feel fine. Just bored. I keep hoping that someone will come home and cut me down but then I keep remembering that if i knew someone like that I wouldn't be up here. Bit ironic, right? Or is that not ironic? I read somewhere that, like, anything funny is, in some way, ironic. But I don't know if it's funny or not. I don't think my brain owns "funny," you know? I feel taller. I like that. I've never been away from my shadow for this long. It had always clung to my feet, parting momentarily for a quick dive into the swimming pool. But never for five hours. I like it. There's three feet of space between my two and the floor. I wanted something this morning. I may be stuck. But at least I'm three feet closer to it.
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Dec 13, 2015
Dec 13, 2015 at 2:37 PM UTC
Hanged
54 If I should die, And you should live— And time should gurgle on— And morn should beam— And noon should burn— As it has usual done— If Birds should build as early And Bees as bustling go— One might depart at option From enterprise below! ’Tis sweet to know that stocks will stand When we with Daisies lie— That Commerce will continue— And Trades as briskly fly— It makes the parting tranquil And keeps the soul serene— That gentlemen so sprightly Conduct the pleasing scene!
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If I should die
cedar planks line the dim lit hall morning snow begins to fall sepia print in a chipped wood frame embers spark from the franklin flame rustling sounds from bunks below records play in a tight alcove bacon grills on an iron sheet gloves are warmed by baseboard heat bean bags tossed on colored **** papka placed as a punching bag red brick wall with mounted poles windows filled with glacier bowls whiskey jack on the southern rail a frozen patch of wine and ale pine cones fall in gathering white brothers bathed in firelight sleighs are on the table top canyon road is at a stop northern winds that bite the face lines are up the gondola base cornice clipped by gully goats the rubber man appears to float alpine depths are on the rise peaking sun through parting skies triple ropes and nordic luge honored guests from baton rouge gelande jumps on rainbow drive nostalgia’s light and warm reply
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Jan 2, 2017
Jan 2, 2017 at 5:50 PM UTC
yellow ducks of buckhorn
He wants to lather his tongue in her saltiness his lips caressing her silky smooth crevice tip of his tongue piercing her surface parting her lips of tenderness the haze turns to a mist her fate sealed with a kiss picture the moment picture perfect destination pleasure reaching a ****** given like a gift and served with a twist of satisfaction your imagination you must enlist
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May 9, 2018
May 9, 2018 at 12:33 AM UTC
Enlist
Sometimes beneath close eyelids I quest to bring you back As if you were driftwood floating Downstream on your back. I dip my hands beneath the veil And dry away the death And from my parting, weeping lips I give you back your breath- Just like the rising sunset burning In the summer sky Paints and saints the mountaintops And casts their colors bright. *Unrhymed Notes: Sometimes I dream I can bring you back Just as simply as dipping my hands into the water To retrieve a floating piece of driftwood; Dry the death from your skin And breath life back into you The way the sunrise reanimates The Dark Mountains Each and every day. I see your Ocean eyes open Embrace you like I'm trying to Fold you into my skin Where I can keep you always And feel your summer peach warm flesh Tangible against my permafrost fingers. If the dead could talk Nothing profound would leave your lips They'd only quirk into a Cheshire smile And you'd tell me to let go Relinquish Move along and stop standing still Life is for the Living Death is for the dead And dreams are for the foolish.* "You *******
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Aug 27, 2015
Aug 27, 2015 at 3:08 PM UTC
Sometimes I Bring you Back.
How do I miss thee? Let me count the ways: I miss your loving heart that beats with a deep caring for others to the limits of its strength and perhaps beyond. I miss the warm communication of your arms when, from time to time, they say the things that words fail with a touch, a hug, a gentle pat. I miss the wit and wisdom that is you that warms my soul and helps my heart to beat when life has dragged it down. I step outside to clear my head, for the heat of the day lingers in my room heavy, as if to echo my heart, and find that the sky cries down with gentle tears as though it too feels the longing of my heart at this parting. For though I have not yet left, the knowledge that I shall makes me feel as though the leaving was too long ago and though I know in my head that it will be only a short time in hours that I am gone my soul feels the weight of it as if those hours might be years. I miss thee with all my being for you complete me in ways that words can not express. And so I wait the appointed hour with the desire that I might already be returning, Your side is where I am meant to be You are my strength, more so than you might know. When I do things alone, they have no meaning when I do things with you, they give me purpose. You are the moon that lights my path and keeps me safe in the darkness.
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Jan 3, 2012
Jan 3, 2012 at 4:48 PM UTC
How Do I Miss Thee?
"O ye, all ye that walk in Willowwood." D.G. Rossetti Two gazed into a pool, he gazed and she, Not hand in hand, yet heart in heart, I think, Pale and reluctant on the water's brink, As on the brink of parting which must be. Each eyed the other's aspect, she and he, Each felt one hungering heart leap up and sink, Each tasted bitterness which both must drink, There on the brink of life's dividing sea. Lilies upon the surface, deep below Two wistful faces craving each for each, Resolute and reluctant without speech:-- A sudden ripple made the faces flow One moment joined, to vanish out of reach: So those hearts joined, and ah! were parted so.
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An Echo From Willowwood
This Advent moon shines cold and clear, These Advent nights are long; Our lamps have burned year after year, And still their flame is strong. "Watchman, what of the night?" we cry, Heart-sick with hope deferred: "No speaking signs are in the sky," Is still the watchman's word. The Porter watches at the gate, The servants watch within; The watch is long betimes and late, The prize is slow to win. "Watchman, what of the night?" but still His answer sounds the same: "No daybreak tops the utmost hill, Nor pale our lamps of flame." One to another hear them speak, The patient virgins wise: "Surely He is not far to seek,"-- "All night we watch and rise." "The days are evil looking back, The coming days are dim; Yet count we not His promise slack, But watch and wait for Him." One with another, soul with soul, They kindle fire from fire: "Friends watch us who have touched the goal." "They urge us, come up higher." "With them shall rest our waysore feet, With them is built our home, With Christ." "They sweet, but He most sweet, Sweeter than honeycomb." There no more parting, no more pain, The distant ones brought near, The lost so long are found again, Long lost but longer dear: Eye hath not seen, ear hath not heard, Nor heart conceived that rest, With them our good things long deferred, With Jesus Christ our Best. We weep because the night is long, We laugh, for day shall rise, We sing a slow contented song And knock at Paradise. Weeping we hold Him fast Who wept For us,--we hold Him fast; And will not let Him go except He bless us first or last. Weeping we hold Him fast to-night; We will not let Him go Till daybreak smite our wearied sight, And summer smite the snow: Then figs shall bud, and dove with dove Shall coo the livelong day; Then He shall say, "Arise, My love, My fair one, come away."
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Advent
This Advent moon shines cold and clear, These Advent nights are long; Our lamps have burned year after year, And still their flame is strong. "Watchman, what of the night?" we cry, Heart-sick with hope deferred: "No speaking signs are in the sky," Is still the watchman's word. The Porter watches at the gate, The servants watch within; The watch is long betimes and late, The prize is slow to win. "Watchman, what of the night?" but still His answer sounds the same: "No daybreak tops the utmost hill, Nor pale our lamps of flame." One to another hear them speak, The patient virgins wise: "Surely He is not far to seek,"-- "All night we watch and rise." "The days are evil looking back, The coming days are dim; Yet count we not His promise slack, But watch and wait for Him." One with another, soul with soul, They kindle fire from fire: "Friends watch us who have touched the goal." "They urge us, come up higher." "With them shall rest our waysore feet, With them is built our home, With Christ." "They sweet, but He most sweet, Sweeter than honeycomb." There no more parting, no more pain, The distant ones brought near, The lost so long are found again, Long lost but longer dear: Eye hath not seen, ear hath not heard, Nor heart conceived that rest, With them our good things long deferred, With Jesus Christ our Best. We weep because the night is long, We laugh, for day shall rise, We sing a slow contented song And knock at Paradise. Weeping we hold Him fast Who wept For us,--we hold Him fast; And will not let Him go except He bless us first or last. Weeping we hold Him fast to-night; We will not let Him go Till daybreak smite our wearied sight, And summer smite the snow: Then figs shall bud, and dove with dove Shall coo the livelong day; Then He shall say, "Arise, My love, My fair one, come away."
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Take this kiss upon the brow! And, in parting from you now, Thus much let me avow— You are not wrong, who deem That my days have been a dream: Yet if hope has flown away In a night, or in a day, In a vision or in none, Is it therefore the less gone? All that we see or seem Is but a dream within a dream. I stand amid the roar Of a surf-tormented shore, And I hold within my hand Grains of the golden sand— How few! yet how they creep Through my fingers to the deep While I weep—while I weep! O God! can I not grasp Them with a tighter clasp? O God! can I not save One from the pitiless wave? Is all that we see or seem But a dream within a dream?
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A Dream Within A Dream
One early morning along the quiet forest floor, a little mushroom popped it's head out of the ground. Looking in wonder, he pushed passed the dead leaves and dirt to reach for sunlight below the canopy. "STOP!" said the forest. "You have been unruly. We have seen you try to grow with discord and disregard, denying the order. And what are you, alien? Identify as plant or animal!" The little mushroom responded, "But I only did as you did; made a home. Like the rooted trees pillar in our leafy halls, as the moss nestles among the rocks, or how the birds nest in their hollows, why am I so different? I am both you and me." The forest inhabitants pondered. In this time the mushroom grew and died. It took too long for the trees and the birds and the moss to agree by the time their fellow forest friend had passed. The trees, too slow to interrupt, cried out to all, "What have we done?!  we may not have thought him as beautiful as the rest of us, but the mushroom was a part of this forest!" As a parting token, the little fungi grew a network of strands below the trees roots to support them all, feeding and protecting them even in death. With it's dying breath, it dropped it's spores, to which would grow bountiful among the forest floor, among the trees and the rocks and moss. They had not known it, but the little mushroom was a part of a greater fungi, miles across. It had been there as long as the forest, keeping the trees company since time began, before humans, before us. Only the trees had the knowledge to understand the little mushroom, but their voices were too quiet, too slow. So the trees let the mushrooms grow in their branches and on their logs to give them a home.
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Jan 21, 2016
Jan 21, 2016 at 1:35 PM UTC
A Fungi In The Forest Of Normal (Short Story)
One early morning along the quiet forest floor, a little mushroom popped it's head out of the ground. Looking in wonder, he pushed passed the dead leaves and dirt to reach for sunlight below the canopy. "STOP!" said the forest. "You have been unruly. We have seen you try to grow with discord and disregard, denying the order. And what are you, alien? Identify as plant or animal!" The little mushroom responded, "But I only did as you did; made a home. Like the rooted trees pillar in our leafy halls, as the moss nestles among the rocks, or how the birds nest in their hollows, why am I so different? I am both you and me." The forest inhabitants pondered. In this time the mushroom grew and died. It took too long for the trees and the birds and the moss to agree by the time their fellow forest friend had passed. The trees, too slow to interrupt, cried out to all, "What have we done?!  we may not have thought him as beautiful as the rest of us, but the mushroom was a part of this forest!" As a parting token, the little fungi grew a network of strands below the trees roots to support them all, feeding and protecting them even in death. With it's dying breath, it dropped it's spores, to which would grow bountiful among the forest floor, among the trees and the rocks and moss. They had not known it, but the little mushroom was a part of a greater fungi, miles across. It had been there as long as the forest, keeping the trees company since time began, before humans, before us. Only the trees had the knowledge to understand the little mushroom, but their voices were too quiet, too slow. So the trees let the mushrooms grow in their branches and on their logs to give them a home.
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If you're ever on the riverside where the sun beats your head you would see the old man selling hats of palm leaf but you care not to notice him having already smelled the sea and too keen to cross the river travel southward on the island till the saline wind scalds your eyes your skins itch to jump into the waves yet the man with the palm leaf hats would not cease to tell you how burning would be the sun on the sands and so badly you need to protect the head by parting bucks that mean nothing to you but a world to the mouths he feeds and before you stamp on him a final no she has one atop her hair beneath which her eyes flutter like butterflies her sun rouged cheeks untimely blush and two born anew lovers merrily head for the sea having bought romance for forty bucks.
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Apr 29, 2016
Apr 29, 2016 at 4:56 AM UTC
Palm Leaf Hat
Up, O ye lovers, and away! 'Tis time to leave the world for aye. Hark, loud and clear from heaven the from of parting calls-let none delay! The cameleer hat risen amain, made ready all the camel-train, And quittance now desires to gain: why sleep ye, travellers, I pray? Behind us and before there swells the din of parting and of bells; To shoreless space each moment sails a disembodied spirit away. From yonder starry lights, and through those curtain-awnings darkly blue, Mysterious figures float in view, all strange and secret things display. From this orb, wheeling round its pole, a wondrous slumber o'er thee stole: O weary life that weighest naught, O sleep that on my soul dost weigh! O heart, toward they heart's love wend, and O friend, fly toward the Friend, Be wakeful, watchman, to the end: drowse seemingly no watchman may.
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Departure
I am alive by luck at this point. I wonder if the gun that will eventually take me has been made. Whose trigger will bury me. How many bullets, like a flock of sparrows, will come carry my life to its final bed. Today, I am alive but there is no law to thank. If not me, then someone else. Born into a game of chance we never asked for. Traded diplomas for obituaries. Traded graduation speeches for eulogies. Traded futures for an early grave. Forced to cash in their chips. We don’t want to play anymore. And this too is eulogy. And this too is prayer. And this too can resurrect the coffin wood back to a tree. Can sing back alive whatever parts of you died with them. Whatever leapt in your throat at yet another headline. Mourning until you, too, are a thing to mourn. But we will no longer be martyrs. We are the rude awakening to politicians who pawned out our safety, who bartered our lives for bribes. You say “gun reform is not the answer” but all I can see is a bullet rattling like a pinball in an innocent student’s jaw. You smell like gun smoke and I can see the AR15 you're holding behind your back and I guess it's easy to crack jokes about dodging bullets when you're the one firing them. Give teachers books not bullets: Kafka isn’t kevlar. Bronte isn’t bulletproof. And how sick is it that we must add school shootings to your list of proud american traditions. Throwing opinions like punches. How many more have to die before you decide your ego isn’t as important as you think it is? And I, too, am buried alive My soggy grave parting its greedy lips. To you, my bones, when ground into gunpowder and mixed into water, taste like champagne. My pulse, as thin as an obituary panting beneath sweaty palms, and sure We are “just kids,” But you are forgetting we are the next generation And you autopsy your fists. Call it reclamatory. Lately, when asked “how are you?” I respond with a name no longer living. And who knows if mine will be next
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Apr 14, 2018
Apr 14, 2018 at 10:32 PM UTC
Ammunition: a eulogy for parkland
I am alive by luck at this point. I wonder if the gun that will eventually take me has been made. Whose trigger will bury me. How many bullets, like a flock of sparrows, will come carry my life to its final bed. Today, I am alive but there is no law to thank. If not me, then someone else. Born into a game of chance we never asked for. Traded diplomas for obituaries. Traded graduation speeches for eulogies. Traded futures for an early grave. Forced to cash in their chips. We don’t want to play anymore. And this too is eulogy. And this too is prayer. And this too can resurrect the coffin wood back to a tree. Can sing back alive whatever parts of you died with them. Whatever leapt in your throat at yet another headline. Mourning until you, too, are a thing to mourn. But we will no longer be martyrs. We are the rude awakening to politicians who pawned out our safety, who bartered our lives for bribes. You say “gun reform is not the answer” but all I can see is a bullet rattling like a pinball in an innocent student’s jaw. You smell like gun smoke and I can see the AR15 you're holding behind your back and I guess it's easy to crack jokes about dodging bullets when you're the one firing them. Give teachers books not bullets: Kafka isn’t kevlar. Bronte isn’t bulletproof. And how sick is it that we must add school shootings to your list of proud american traditions. Throwing opinions like punches. How many more have to die before you decide your ego isn’t as important as you think it is? And I, too, am buried alive My soggy grave parting its greedy lips. To you, my bones, when ground into gunpowder and mixed into water, taste like champagne. My pulse, as thin as an obituary panting beneath sweaty palms, and sure We are “just kids,” But you are forgetting we are the next generation And you autopsy your fists. Call it reclamatory. Lately, when asked “how are you?” I respond with a name no longer living. And who knows if mine will be next
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”good night, good travels, pitch black” depending on how one counts, cause size matters, do have I one small blessing though little do I get, more-less, in each twenty four measuring cup, when the sleep gas has come-for-inhaling, lidded heavy with greatful/tearful anticipation, it’s less than sixty seconds till dispatched to where all poems plead like unborn angels for good parentage the spoken good night ritual signaled and completed with a perfect half turn skating axel onto ones side, preceded by, a single solid smacking of an innocent but flaccid, equally tired pillow, then lost in pitch black galaxy travels with other sleep-drunk little princes instead of the wavering, singular word, a traditional goodnight, a parting and a haling simultaneous mumbling issuing, undebated and a wish shot to all within dream-shot, a title, “good travels” to places where ferment the aging words under the winemakers watchful caring eyes opening, names or titles, same difference, for the newborn babes
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Apr 29, 2018
Apr 29, 2018 at 11:31 AM UTC
good night, good travels, pitch black
Your smile. . endlessly, my heart  searched for a vibe on another heart with which to resonate and found none. finding none, it  wandered endlessly like Infra-red rays seeking a suitable tempo upon which to strike an interference. i  wandered in search of a fertile land in a heart upon which to grow seeds of love, my head burrowed deep in a shell of restlessness... . but on that fateful day, too-good-to-be-true was your smile--- it caused my eyes to twitch, borrowed a beat from my heart, transforming my thoughts to an ode-- a prelude to better days . i still see that smile, lucid--- your lips opening like windows of love, revealing shiny white louvres of beauty (teeth) which opened to your tongue-- a valley flowing with sweetness as it goes down your palate like a parting curtain welcoming love... then you said "hi". . this friendship began with a smile, it deepened with the " hi" . i have tapped from the happiness let out from the windows of your heart-- your smile.. my heart no longer wanders, in your smile, it found rest . my greatest wish is to make this smile mine someday, plant a kiss on your lips, the happiness that dwells in there becoming a remedy to my malady. . . Chukwudera Michael
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May 24, 2016
May 24, 2016 at 8:14 AM UTC
Untitled
My back is laced with scars Given to me as a parting gift, As a symbol of the love-that-never-was Some have already been fully absorbed Just their tips sticking out, Forming a grotesque picture Others, still fresh, still being taken in Just their tips are slightly embedded Another one would hardly make a difference Might wring a cry of pain but nothing much afterwards - The glint of the tear as it slides down, silently, heedlessly, into the black abyss, threatening, wanting, desperation lacing it's movements, - There's a silent 'plop!' sound as it touches The floor so far below. So far, so far that no one can see it. So deep, so deep that no one can hear it She hardly notices the spare, the extra There have been too many for her to care For one more. A dozen more land in her back, Angered by her impassiveness She swivels around because she's still savouring The ones that are there For a minute, time stops, the blades stop The girl's heart, or where it should've been... That empty little space, occupied by three long Swords stuck in it's place They pierce right through her body, So different from those knives that decorate her back. Their tips face your eyes The sword entered her through her back It would've been a tragedy if only her eyes... Oh, if only her eyes were something more Than just endless holes ( - deeper, darker, blacker more despairing than the black abyss under her very feet -    )
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Aug 6, 2012
Aug 6, 2012 at 8:00 AM UTC
Blackblackblack
Shabash Shābāsh (Hindi: शाबाश, Urdu: شاباش, Punjabi: ਸ਼ਾਬਾਸ਼, Bengali: শাবাশ, Telugu: శబాష్) is a term used in the Indian subcontinent to signal commendation for an achievement, similar in meaning to bravo and kudos. …………………………………………… a poem writ sometimes, oft, snaps back, I was surprising recipient of a commendation in language I knew not the poem spoke well of broken boundaries, between in this instance, Jew and Muslim, capturing a momentary parting of the seaways and walls of misbelief and mischief, normally employed to keep our divisions, parted perpetually I’ve decided to begin to use shabash now, my ‘go to’ word from now on, a small quiet way to say well done it starts with one word, a stretching hand across the face fence, imagining John Lennon’s imagine-world, who lay dying when I was a young father of thirty, me residing less than a mile away from each other little could I imagine then that poetry would pick me at all, especially to write of words in dialects I don’t speak, but imaging their pastel colorations flying by in gentle breezes, eager to be grabbed, plucked from the air, tongued and loved so! when I say to you, in the softest spoke, shabash! to all of us, for choosing this path, using your words in every dialect, to spread the imagination of good will 8-4-2019 10:10 am S.I.
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Aug 4, 2019
Aug 4, 2019 at 10:28 AM UTC
Shabash! (Hindi: शाबाश, Urdu: شاباش, Punjabi: ਸ਼ਾਬਾਸ਼, Bengali: শাবাশ, Telugu: శబాష్)
1739 Some say goodnight—at night— I say goodnight by day— Good-bye—the Going utter me— Goodnight, I still reply— For parting, that is night, And presence, simply dawn— Itself, the purple on the height Denominated morn.
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Some say goodnight—at night—
Through the country paths, I lazily loitered, watching Nature in its changing hue straying farther into the interiors, sundry and sublime vistas came into view. in response to zephyr’s warm embrace, the silvery leaves joyously fluttered. the bees busied themselves collecting pollen and birds on tree tops merrily chattered it was the *** end of verdant spring. summer’s sun stood behind my head. bleat of sheep was heard from far. ‘Good day to you’….. Someone said. There stood on the hill, a boy around fifteen obviously he was of tribal breed. with a beaming smile, he greeted me but on walking to him, he ran like a steed I saw him disappear behind the trees and enter into a hut tiny as a nest he lived in the lap of Mother Nature, far from the city and its sooty dust being coaxed, he hesitantly came out. my tone of assurance and pleasing smile, seemed to have won his confidence as to a friend, he shared his eventful tale. pointing to the sheep grazing in the slope, he said, he earned a living caring the flock. he stayed in the woods all day long, feeding and tending his master’s sheep. from dawn to dusk, through woods and meads, he leads his sheep, calling them by their name. un vexed, with simple pleasures he is content and with a nomad’s life, he seems to be tame he said, at home he has his invalid mother. bringing her back to health is his mission in life on referring to his mother, I watched his eyes glitter nothing other than her illness posed to him a strife from every utterance, I could sense his filial love. even in abundance, while shadows line many faces, on his visage, hope lingered as a dancing flame to me he seemed above many, rich in other graces! While parting, I handed him a little money pausing unbelievably, with moist eyes he accepted it, when a breeze passed caressing us as if over a kind gesture, Nature seemed to rejoice!
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May 29, 2018
May 29, 2018 at 9:23 AM UTC
A Rare Beauty Beheld
Through the country paths, I lazily loitered, watching Nature in its changing hue straying farther into the interiors, sundry and sublime vistas came into view. in response to zephyr’s warm embrace, the silvery leaves joyously fluttered. the bees busied themselves collecting pollen and birds on tree tops merrily chattered it was the *** end of verdant spring. summer’s sun stood behind my head. bleat of sheep was heard from far. ‘Good day to you’….. Someone said. There stood on the hill, a boy around fifteen obviously he was of tribal breed. with a beaming smile, he greeted me but on walking to him, he ran like a steed I saw him disappear behind the trees and enter into a hut tiny as a nest he lived in the lap of Mother Nature, far from the city and its sooty dust being coaxed, he hesitantly came out. my tone of assurance and pleasing smile, seemed to have won his confidence as to a friend, he shared his eventful tale. pointing to the sheep grazing in the slope, he said, he earned a living caring the flock. he stayed in the woods all day long, feeding and tending his master’s sheep. from dawn to dusk, through woods and meads, he leads his sheep, calling them by their name. un vexed, with simple pleasures he is content and with a nomad’s life, he seems to be tame he said, at home he has his invalid mother. bringing her back to health is his mission in life on referring to his mother, I watched his eyes glitter nothing other than her illness posed to him a strife from every utterance, I could sense his filial love. even in abundance, while shadows line many faces, on his visage, hope lingered as a dancing flame to me he seemed above many, rich in other graces! While parting, I handed him a little money pausing unbelievably, with moist eyes he accepted it, when a breeze passed caressing us as if over a kind gesture, Nature seemed to rejoice!
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Toting the mysterious bundle and sporting a sore back I drag my feet up the last few steps, expended of vigour I almost couldn't resist prematurely looking through the sack Remembering the words from the wise old seer Grimacing I walk a slow gait to get to the table Set the bundle down and relieve my weight onto a chair Parched throat but wait longer I am unable Curiosity takes charge and into the gift I will tear Blood is pumping along with an increasing heart rate Fingers scrambling clumsily over the strings that bind Nails digging frantically into this package bearing my fate Gnawing thoughts of uncertainty flooding my mind At last my fingers win the battle that lasted The final string has fallen... Obstinate knots all undone I pick the cloth by the edges to have it unfolded The contents inside reach out like rays of the sun Corners of the cloth open up like a fully bloomed blossom Exposing the treasure that lay solemn and quiet inside Common objects we'd normally perceive as random Petty things now important as they attempt to guide I pick up the first and notice an engraving on it's stem Between my fingers - an unassuming feathered quill Barely legible, such little space the words do cram "Here is your sword... Draw blood and let spill" More riddles, I sought to examine the next A flat bottomed vial filled with jet black ink On it is a label with scrawling of time worn text "Here is your blood; let flow what you think" Lastly, lay bound up sheets of yellow stained parchment They reek of age-old herbs; intoxicating slightly At the top of the first, a note scribbled not so recent "Within these pages, you must bleed to find Sanctuary" Staring down at the objects laid in front of me In hopes of discovering something I should miss Then finally it struck me, so plain to see I'm using the instruments now, writing to find release...
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 10:58 PM UTC
The Parting Gift (III)
Toting the mysterious bundle and sporting a sore back I drag my feet up the last few steps, expended of vigour I almost couldn't resist prematurely looking through the sack Remembering the words from the wise old seer Grimacing I walk a slow gait to get to the table Set the bundle down and relieve my weight onto a chair Parched throat but wait longer I am unable Curiosity takes charge and into the gift I will tear Blood is pumping along with an increasing heart rate Fingers scrambling clumsily over the strings that bind Nails digging frantically into this package bearing my fate Gnawing thoughts of uncertainty flooding my mind At last my fingers win the battle that lasted The final string has fallen... Obstinate knots all undone I pick the cloth by the edges to have it unfolded The contents inside reach out like rays of the sun Corners of the cloth open up like a fully bloomed blossom Exposing the treasure that lay solemn and quiet inside Common objects we'd normally perceive as random Petty things now important as they attempt to guide I pick up the first and notice an engraving on it's stem Between my fingers - an unassuming feathered quill Barely legible, such little space the words do cram "Here is your sword... Draw blood and let spill" More riddles, I sought to examine the next A flat bottomed vial filled with jet black ink On it is a label with scrawling of time worn text "Here is your blood; let flow what you think" Lastly, lay bound up sheets of yellow stained parchment They reek of age-old herbs; intoxicating slightly At the top of the first, a note scribbled not so recent "Within these pages, you must bleed to find Sanctuary" Staring down at the objects laid in front of me In hopes of discovering something I should miss Then finally it struck me, so plain to see I'm using the instruments now, writing to find release...
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Be my muse tonight, my love.   Inspire me in my dreams. In poetry, I'll think of you where starlight always gleams. As Morning Glories catch the sun, I'll capture you in rhyme. My heart will sing your praises while you make my spirit climb. The raindrops are a mockery that try to match my tears, which fall like diamonds on my cheeks each time our parting nears. Your eyes like pools of amber often take my breath away. Your lips demand attention and my ardor doth obey. Be my muse tonight, my love.   Ensnare me with a kiss. Enslaved my heart shall ever be a prisoner of your bliss.
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Jun 11, 2017
Jun 11, 2017 at 10:48 PM UTC
Be My Muse
My Arwen lies over Belegaer Beyond the Straight Road, lies my Evenstar Across the Endless Sea, in Aman she lies She wouldn't stay here just to love, but to die I remember her here, here in Endor When the beacons of Gondor burned bright. I remember her here, once beside me In the days before the long night In Imladris fair, as Estel I was raised In ignorance there, I spent by blissful days I lived, and I learned, and yet never yearned For she from whom I now feel so spurned I've had my Éowyns, but none quite compare To She, my lady, so radiant, so fair At Cerin Amroth we pledged our love To all, ourselves, and the Ainur above But the Darkness again spread Morgoth's mission again led The Fellowship was wrought The battles all fought The Age of the Firstborn was ended The Age of the Hildor ascended Our world together was split And really, that was just it She could stay here, forever, be mortal But ever so closely lay Mithlond ,the portal To a life without end, I can blame her hardly I guess Barahir's tale was never to be What’s this? You say she’s not yet set sail? But how can I stop her? Our parting was so stale! Sure Elrond's presence and Galadriel's glare May have done oh so much to damper our parting But as she goes afar I know I can't go there And her expressed frigidity, that wound is still smarting What should I do for her I adore? Run to the Grey Havens and stop the White Ship? But so much I must do, right here in Gondor, A King I can become, as my Queen give me the slip And the spirits are howling, The white tree is burning?! My power, my people BUT I CAN'T STOP THIS YEARNING Oh what shall I do? TO ERU ABOVE I have so much work, but I so miss my Love The tears, they are welling, the Ship has set sail In all my adventures, in truth I have failed! For what am I worth? No King has Returned And without Hope is Gondor, and the Stewards have burned Denthar departed, the mighty horn split The mighty White City left here to sit I could let it fall into disarray, Again a Ranger, I could slip away To die like the Ents, forever, no Wife Is there nothing to save me from this strife? A new dawn is rising, a new age begun My hopes might still clear with the new rising Sun I see its my duty, as Arathorn's son… what Isildur started, I must see done but still I mourn my loss… that beautiful star, which now like all others, I must admire from afar. ~D. B. Guy 09/02/2007
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Nov 3, 2012
Nov 3, 2012 at 2:21 AM UTC
Elessar's Lament
My Arwen lies over Belegaer Beyond the Straight Road, lies my Evenstar Across the Endless Sea, in Aman she lies She wouldn't stay here just to love, but to die I remember her here, here in Endor When the beacons of Gondor burned bright. I remember her here, once beside me In the days before the long night In Imladris fair, as Estel I was raised In ignorance there, I spent by blissful days I lived, and I learned, and yet never yearned For she from whom I now feel so spurned I've had my Éowyns, but none quite compare To She, my lady, so radiant, so fair At Cerin Amroth we pledged our love To all, ourselves, and the Ainur above But the Darkness again spread Morgoth's mission again led The Fellowship was wrought The battles all fought The Age of the Firstborn was ended The Age of the Hildor ascended Our world together was split And really, that was just it She could stay here, forever, be mortal But ever so closely lay Mithlond ,the portal To a life without end, I can blame her hardly I guess Barahir's tale was never to be What’s this? You say she’s not yet set sail? But how can I stop her? Our parting was so stale! Sure Elrond's presence and Galadriel's glare May have done oh so much to damper our parting But as she goes afar I know I can't go there And her expressed frigidity, that wound is still smarting What should I do for her I adore? Run to the Grey Havens and stop the White Ship? But so much I must do, right here in Gondor, A King I can become, as my Queen give me the slip And the spirits are howling, The white tree is burning?! My power, my people BUT I CAN'T STOP THIS YEARNING Oh what shall I do? TO ERU ABOVE I have so much work, but I so miss my Love The tears, they are welling, the Ship has set sail In all my adventures, in truth I have failed! For what am I worth? No King has Returned And without Hope is Gondor, and the Stewards have burned Denthar departed, the mighty horn split The mighty White City left here to sit I could let it fall into disarray, Again a Ranger, I could slip away To die like the Ents, forever, no Wife Is there nothing to save me from this strife? A new dawn is rising, a new age begun My hopes might still clear with the new rising Sun I see its my duty, as Arathorn's son… what Isildur started, I must see done but still I mourn my loss… that beautiful star, which now like all others, I must admire from afar. ~D. B. Guy 09/02/2007
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