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"moshpits" poems
Where did we fall in love? Was it my awkward distance behind you, up the stairs, to avoid conversation? Or in our fleeting eye contact, passing each other, going in different directions? Was it in the car, when you wouldn't let me sit out in the rain? The backseat where you didn't want to see me cry? Or in the pool or the ocean water, where you had helped me stay afloat? In the field by the tennis court, looking for constellations, after wrestling each other to the ground? Was it in Cape Cod, in the tent with all our friends? Or in the White Mountain National Forest, in the tent with only each other, on our own camping trip? Past the smaller site, down the muddy, slippery, steep hill, in the clearing next to the raging river? Between two mountains; the place where we couldn't start a fire? Was it in the trunk of my best friend's car? Or in her living room? On the platform at the train station, where I watched you leave town for college? On all of the bus and taxi and train rides we took to be certain we would see each other again? On the beach where the seagull stole my onion rings? Or the parking spot where you parallel parked for the first time, right before you bought me the onion rings? In my backyard, playing badminton? In the parking lot, playing lotball? In all of the parking lots that fogged up your windows? In your dorm room when I was sick and you had to take care of me? Or when you were sick, and I walked across campus to buy chicken noodle soup and had to take care of you? In the moshpits at live shows? Or in the fantasy world of an mmorpg? I don't even know where this began.
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Feb 9, 2013
Feb 9, 2013 at 4:28 PM UTC
Love's Beginnings
Where did we fall in love? Was it my awkward distance behind you, up the stairs, to avoid conversation? Or in our fleeting eye contact, passing each other, going in different directions? Was it in the car, when you wouldn't let me sit out in the rain? The backseat where you didn't want to see me cry? Or in the pool or the ocean water, where you had helped me stay afloat? In the field by the tennis court, looking for constellations, after wrestling each other to the ground? Was it in Cape Cod, in the tent with all our friends? Or in the White Mountain National Forest, in the tent with only each other, on our own camping trip? Past the smaller site, down the muddy, slippery, steep hill, in the clearing next to the raging river? Between two mountains; the place where we couldn't start a fire? Was it in the trunk of my best friend's car? Or in her living room? On the platform at the train station, where I watched you leave town for college? On all of the bus and taxi and train rides we took to be certain we would see each other again? On the beach where the seagull stole my onion rings? Or the parking spot where you parallel parked for the first time, right before you bought me the onion rings? In my backyard, playing badminton? In the parking lot, playing lotball? In all of the parking lots that fogged up your windows? In your dorm room when I was sick and you had to take care of me? Or when you were sick, and I walked across campus to buy chicken noodle soup and had to take care of you? In the moshpits at live shows? Or in the fantasy world of an mmorpg? I don't even know where this began.
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Do you ever miss me I wonder strung out on whatever it is I've done; Do you see me in crowds, in the moshpits at shows only for her to turn around and let you down just a little bit.
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May 1, 2017
May 1, 2017 at 11:50 PM UTC
Heart in a Cage
We know just how this song goes; It's been playing on loop since 2008 But we're ******* sick to our stomachs of singing along We strive for insanity just to forget the lyrics & get lost on the chords We know just how this looks to them; A bunch of ******* misfits throwing punches in moshpits But they don't see the salt water we are drowning in when the shows over Oh **** here we are smoking in your sunroom again And if one of us hasn't started crying yet, we'll say we're makin progress Haaaaaa we all look a little cleaner after a couple handles of *** You look flawless through the smoke that's blowing over your face When my head is spinning & the walls are melting down all over you, I can finally see that this is not what we were made to be But it's too late, we're too lost And we know that we can't find our place with liters of liquor flooding through our veins So we sit naked in circles and talk about how comfortable we all are together But I know that none of us feel safe in our skin And I know we're all just dying to shed this layer & see what's beneath it We're hoping to find a reason to scream Because we're so **** willing to lose our voices But we've just ran out of things to say
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May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 2:28 PM UTC
Don't Call Us Hipsters