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Loghain, having reread most of your beautiful works on numerous occasions I have come to realise that you truly are one of the worlds greatest: . . . . . . . . . . ARSEHOLES
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Jun 21, 2014
Jun 21, 2014 at 12:59 PM UTC
A Deep And Heartfelt Apology
Ashlei Cottom Sweetheart, fine art is not about pride. It's about FINDING pride. It's about creating something and taking pride in the fact that you did. When I read your poetry, all I hear is "Me, me, me, I'm the best." That's not what poetry is... Poetry is not self praise. Poetry is taking the most hurtful, joyful, mixed, complicated emotions that you have and putting them into words that make everyone understand. You may tell write back and tell me everything that is wrong with my poetry, but I will not care. Why? Because I know that I have successfully been able to express myself in ways that other people can relate to and enjoy. Ways that they may not have been able to express the same feelings. I have confidence in your ability to realize your mistakes and fix them. I look forward to seeing these changes. So please, take this to heart and write. :) Loghain Carvó How laughable that one of my lessors attempts to give I art recommendations. Ashlei Cottom It's not so much your art I'm trying to change, but your character. It's your character that is reflected in your art. Ashlei Cottom And if I could ask, why do you assume I am your lessor? Loghain Carvó I am not assuming, you already have shown that you are a lessor human through your words. Ashlei Cottom By encouraging you to keep doing what you love and bettering your character? Sir, I'm sorry, but if that is your opinion, I don't think it is I who is the lessor human... Loghain Carvó That is not what makes you my lessor, You are my lessor simply because you lack the artistic vision to fully appreciate the magnitude of my grand works. Please refrain from responding to this message as I wish to waste no more of my precious breath on peasants. Ashlei Cottom And how is it that I am a lessor human if all I do is try and help? Some people cut down and criticize and make others feel like mere mud on other's shoes. I am not one of those. I try to see the good in everyone. I think you have great talent, but I wish you would use that and dig deeper. I can tell you right now, with an unbiased opinion, that you unfortunately come across as narcissistic, selfish and and as you so eloquently put it, a "lessor human."
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Jun 6, 2014
Jun 6, 2014 at 12:54 AM UTC
Loghain Carvó
Ashlei Cottom Sweetheart, fine art is not about pride. It's about FINDING pride. It's about creating something and taking pride in the fact that you did. When I read your poetry, all I hear is "Me, me, me, I'm the best." That's not what poetry is... Poetry is not self praise. Poetry is taking the most hurtful, joyful, mixed, complicated emotions that you have and putting them into words that make everyone understand. You may tell write back and tell me everything that is wrong with my poetry, but I will not care. Why? Because I know that I have successfully been able to express myself in ways that other people can relate to and enjoy. Ways that they may not have been able to express the same feelings. I have confidence in your ability to realize your mistakes and fix them. I look forward to seeing these changes. So please, take this to heart and write. :) Loghain Carvó How laughable that one of my lessors attempts to give I art recommendations. Ashlei Cottom It's not so much your art I'm trying to change, but your character. It's your character that is reflected in your art. Ashlei Cottom And if I could ask, why do you assume I am your lessor? Loghain Carvó I am not assuming, you already have shown that you are a lessor human through your words. Ashlei Cottom By encouraging you to keep doing what you love and bettering your character? Sir, I'm sorry, but if that is your opinion, I don't think it is I who is the lessor human... Loghain Carvó That is not what makes you my lessor, You are my lessor simply because you lack the artistic vision to fully appreciate the magnitude of my grand works. Please refrain from responding to this message as I wish to waste no more of my precious breath on peasants. Ashlei Cottom And how is it that I am a lessor human if all I do is try and help? Some people cut down and criticize and make others feel like mere mud on other's shoes. I am not one of those. I try to see the good in everyone. I think you have great talent, but I wish you would use that and dig deeper. I can tell you right now, with an unbiased opinion, that you unfortunately come across as narcissistic, selfish and and as you so eloquently put it, a "lessor human."
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Last night I came onto the hellopoetry site to try to drown out my mom's death rattle in some good poetry. Quite a few people, good decent people who have gathered around me and supported me during this agonizing time and one of those sweet Poets was being verbally and mentally attacked by                                    LOGHAIN CARV'O His criticisms were malicious and very hurtful and his taunting her was more than I could bare for a friend. She related the conversation to me and she was really upset. She told me what he said verbatim' It was way uncalled for. And she is not the only one he is doing this to. He's being offensive to the extreme.Calling her a peasant and telling her she couldn't write. And I'll probably catch all kinds of hell for doing it but I paid a "VISIT" to his site and left this comment and I Quote "Stop picking on ---------You call this a poem. You have some nerve telling her she can't write and you write crap like this. Well 1 out of 82 reads isn't so hot is it. Come on and kick me a few times. I should be easy pickings for you. I dare you ****** Well he responded with and I quote "It is obvious you do not have artistic vision like I, that or you did not read my poems and just came here in a petty attempt to demoralize I in retaliation to the criticisms I have revealed to most peoples "poetry" I wish to waste no more breath on my lessers. Just remember I when you see my talent spread out across the world. Remember how you showed the Greatest, most renowned and revered artist no support" End Quote. Loghain carv'o also stated  that "The community on this site is rather poor" He also stated "This site isn't exactly known for it's Grand Community" So now I know he doesn't even mind kicking some one who is already down. and i for one would like to know since he doesn't like this site or the Real Poets why stay? If he doesn't like the"GRAND COMMUNITY" why the hell he's still here. If he doesn't like us "lessers' why be among us. And I didn't even tell you the most malicious comments. When some one attacks a friend I will respond. That's what friends do. And Loghain carv'o is proving to be no ones friend. And his                           GOD COMPLEX is offensive! I SERVE ONE GOD ONLY AND IT IS NOT Loghain carv'o!!! I only have one thing to say to Loghain carv'o and that is and I quote again My visit to hellopoetry last night to get away for a moment from listening to my mothers death rattle, to read a few poems and find a little Peace for a few moments was ruined by you and your offensive attitude and comments and since i'm already in a living hell right  nowI can find you some room here so come enjoy hell with me. Oh but I almost forgot you don't want to consort with us "lessers" THE MIGHTY SURE DO HAVE A LONG WAY TO FALL LOGHAIN                    YOURS SINCERELY                                    Paula This is for you friend love Paula You can dish it out but you sure can't take it!
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May 1, 2014
May 1, 2014 at 9:25 AM UTC
To All Concerned
Last night I came onto the hellopoetry site to try to drown out my mom's death rattle in some good poetry. Quite a few people, good decent people who have gathered around me and supported me during this agonizing time and one of those sweet Poets was being verbally and mentally attacked by                                    LOGHAIN CARV'O His criticisms were malicious and very hurtful and his taunting her was more than I could bare for a friend. She related the conversation to me and she was really upset. She told me what he said verbatim' It was way uncalled for. And she is not the only one he is doing this to. He's being offensive to the extreme.Calling her a peasant and telling her she couldn't write. And I'll probably catch all kinds of hell for doing it but I paid a "VISIT" to his site and left this comment and I Quote "Stop picking on ---------You call this a poem. You have some nerve telling her she can't write and you write crap like this. Well 1 out of 82 reads isn't so hot is it. Come on and kick me a few times. I should be easy pickings for you. I dare you ****** Well he responded with and I quote "It is obvious you do not have artistic vision like I, that or you did not read my poems and just came here in a petty attempt to demoralize I in retaliation to the criticisms I have revealed to most peoples "poetry" I wish to waste no more breath on my lessers. Just remember I when you see my talent spread out across the world. Remember how you showed the Greatest, most renowned and revered artist no support" End Quote. Loghain carv'o also stated  that "The community on this site is rather poor" He also stated "This site isn't exactly known for it's Grand Community" So now I know he doesn't even mind kicking some one who is already down. and i for one would like to know since he doesn't like this site or the Real Poets why stay? If he doesn't like the"GRAND COMMUNITY" why the hell he's still here. If he doesn't like us "lessers' why be among us. And I didn't even tell you the most malicious comments. When some one attacks a friend I will respond. That's what friends do. And Loghain carv'o is proving to be no ones friend. And his                           GOD COMPLEX is offensive! I SERVE ONE GOD ONLY AND IT IS NOT Loghain carv'o!!! I only have one thing to say to Loghain carv'o and that is and I quote again My visit to hellopoetry last night to get away for a moment from listening to my mothers death rattle, to read a few poems and find a little Peace for a few moments was ruined by you and your offensive attitude and comments and since i'm already in a living hell right  nowI can find you some room here so come enjoy hell with me. Oh but I almost forgot you don't want to consort with us "lessers" THE MIGHTY SURE DO HAVE A LONG WAY TO FALL LOGHAIN                    YOURS SINCERELY                                    Paula This is for you friend love Paula You can dish it out but you sure can't take it!
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I do enjoy your poems but his I cannot stand and now I find, to my surprise you might be the same man Although the names are different, the scathing natures strong and now I read that others here have thought it all along! Though yours have some intelligence and his are total ***** There's something so familiar In the way both of you write So I'll sit back and ponder this a while a mystery its true then maybe get the nerve to ask is Loghain Carvo you?
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 12:54 PM UTC
Sleuth.
Thee Artiste Carvó's "Maggot O' Pus" I open my fly I beat I close my eyes And seep Watch me now To see the art Thee art of a master-bater I read your eyes they show horror They reflect Thee MasterPiece-of-Shit Thee art of a master-bater Thee art of Loghain Carvó I open my lips and **** For all these works are Thee Maggot O' Pus *Original ('Magnum Opus') by:      Thee Artist aka Logbrain Crappó Reworked by:    CrE aka Trollminator*
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Dec 30, 2014
Dec 30, 2014 at 8:24 AM UTC
Thee Reconstruction of Logbrain #1
I pen these words for my dearest friend Loghain Carvò whos brilliance and humility deters him from penning brilliance in words You cannot, no you cannot compete with the brilliance that is I for when you're long forgotten my words will be emblazoned 'cross the sky Inferior beings all who bandy words with me for I do pen the perfect verse to set the whole world free Artistic talent!!! Yes I was blessed to enter this earth as the best the world has ever seen I take up the pen, take yet the brush create that of which you peasants to create can only dream Perfection born into my soul Oh, perfection that is I Lesser mortals gaze upon my great work Theres none more great than I
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Jun 24, 2014
Jun 24, 2014 at 9:29 AM UTC
You Cannot. For there is no art in your soul
I thought the full English breakfast was wonderful But oh dear, oh dear Sub Parr The Xmas lunch, truly spectacular, turkey golden, crisp skinned. Vegetables cooked to perfection Xmas pudding flaming blue Fresh cream and brandy butter Log fire warm and bright But oh dear, oh dear Mediocre The best of wines money could buy Port, cheese platter 10 year old brandy following But oh dear, oh dear Sub par Mediocre Dreck Oh oh oh
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Dec 22, 2014
Dec 22, 2014 at 11:14 AM UTC
Christmas Day With Loghain Artiste
Loghain is the lyrical artists voice He has to be the artists choice His words are read throughout the world Though they do make the fresh milk curdle He only has *** with the lights turned off And never will he his pyjamas doff Never to his socks remove As his lover is subjected to poetic abuse The time then comes in his ecstasy When Loghain shouts with vervant glee Enough woman enough of this It was fine for the thirty seconds that it was stiff I now must pen about this act My worldwide following expects more crap
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Jun 11, 2014
Jun 11, 2014 at 3:28 PM UTC
Loghain
Thee Artiste Carvó's "The Odor of Logbrain Crappó" Lógbrain yóur **** is oh so ASSinine... It is of course malign... Yóu are the cón artist of the moronic chimERA... Yóu are of course a resigned, all inferiór, cón artist that becraps the mind, body and soul, as well as the very nether realms... óh óh óh.... Lógbrain yóu are lonely while taking care of yóur flock in the fields... óh óh óh... Yóu ascend the flock... ascending and mounting the sheep, one by one Yóu are on top... on top from behind... yes, óh Yes, Óh YEs, ÓH YES, YES, YESSS... Óh soiinf osiujh8adabyghueyhiu rnolkm Touching the heart... Touching the soul... Touching the woolly pudenda… and thus issueth the "I"s, the "óh"s and the ewes from the egómaniacal shepherd , Crappó, the manna of the banana I-gód <> the delusion of illusions and confusions of a sick putrid sub-mind... **** that only yóu and the sheep yóu have so deeply touched can feel it in the end... óh óh óh Óh Lógbrain Crappó, óh please óh please óh please crap some more fine **** for yóur lessers, if any there be... with yet another one of yóur masterPIECES in the fields of ewe. Yes, Crappó, BÓTTÓM feeder, yóu and yóur fine **** are a pain in the *** to all... This fine piece goes out to the greatest cón artist alive. *Original ('An Ode To Loghain Carvó') by:      Thee Artist aka Logbrain Crappó Reworked by:    CrE aka Trollminator*
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Jan 27, 2015
Jan 27, 2015 at 4:03 AM UTC
Thee Reconstruction of Logbrain #9
behold the art of Loghain a poet possessed with fine refrain one is in awe of his exemplary creations they're deserving of deafening ovations
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Jun 24, 2014
Jun 24, 2014 at 9:53 PM UTC
Behold The Art Of Loghain
Thee Artiste Carvó's "LogbraIn Crappó"            (Another Crummy Acrostic) LudIcróus ómnI-Ignórant grótesqueness ball-less róckbóttóm addled IdIótIc nóbódy CólItIc repulsIve asshóle pIsspót puerIle óh-ffensIve *Original ('Loghain Carvó') by:      Thee Artist aka Logbrain Crappó Reworked by:    CrE aka Trollminator*
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Jan 8, 2015
Jan 8, 2015 at 1:40 AM UTC
Thee Reconstruction of Logbrain #3
Vitriol and filth spill forth from Its mouth in uncontrollable torrents Akin to sewage but not sewage For sewage is a by product of humanity And can be recycled No the filth spewing from this creatures mouth Has been dredged up from the very depth of Depravity It poses as the feminine form of humanity But I refuse to address it as such It, the thing, the creature Are the adjectives that best describe it Ebola like it is spreading its filth across Pages of this fine site And Ebola like it is already infecting The less strong for they are now retaliating in kind Some here might call me hypocrite Because of my constant duel with Loghain But I say no because Loghain and I duel like gentlemen But there is nothing that even fringes on decency From the fetid gaping chasm that is the mouth Of it aka The Gutterslut
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Jan 7, 2015
Jan 7, 2015 at 11:10 AM UTC
aka The Gutterslut
Loghain, I am confused You have proclaimed yourself to be The worlds greatest living artist With both pen and brush! Nay, nay in your own words The greatest artist who has ever lived Who then am I to disagree For I am but a simple mediocre man With humility in my soul And therefore must bow before your wisdom And yet Hours spent scouring the internet Studying the great artists and poets And I can find no reference to your name Among the artistic greats Of this modern world Perhaps you are the artistic angel of god And he in his infinite wisdom has decided Not to release your great artistic prowess Upon we the subservient illiterate masses As a sub par human I bow Yes I bow before the greatness that is you You who deserve the accolades poured upon you Loghain oh superior being Long may you rain
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Jan 5, 2015
Jan 5, 2015 at 8:30 AM UTC
Loghain (The Artists Choice)
Thee Artiste aka Loghain Carvo
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Jan 3, 2015
Jan 3, 2015 at 5:47 PM UTC
You Know Who's Awsome