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"laurence" poems
My Country Tis of Thee, Sweet land of liberty- Or so we sing. Land where my fathers died- But my forefathers died in a battle Trying to keep their slaves; My fathers killed your fathers For trying to run away; My fathers **** your fathers Cause it's late at  night, and He's reaching for his gun-no, wait, His ID? Land of the pilgrim's pride- But so often we leave out of history How if it weren't for a Native American, The pilgrims would've died. From every mountainside- Like Stone Mountain in Georgia, Where Rebel Generals are memorialized, Where the **** was revived- God, help me, I can't hear freedom's ring; I can only hear white-washed history. From every mountainside- But these days, the mountain is in my chest, And liberty's ring sounds a lot different, And a lot of folks don't like it. Let freedom ring- And I want to fight for freedom for all- #BlackLivesMatter- I want to help- HANDS UP, DON'T SHOOT! But- I Can't Breathe. Let freedom ring!- But peaceful protests turn into Bloodbaths as those who have sworn To serve and protect are sniped down. Let freedom ring!- I try to educate myself On the side of history not taught- I've always felt that Nat Turner was the bad guy, But these days I'm questioning it. I read "The Meaning of Fourth of July for the ***** by Frederick Douglass And I read "Bury Me in a Free Land" by Frances Ellen Watkins Harper and I read "Sympathy" by Paul Laurence Dunbar and I read "Letters from Birmingham Jail", "The Mountaintop Speech", and "I Have a Dream"   by Dr. King. When I was younger, I'd research Dr. King & his colleagues For fun. I'd  wonder, "If I lived in the Civil Rights era, What would I have done?" But when I turned seventeen, I realized, "I live in a Civil Rights era; What am I going to do?
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Jul 11, 2016
Jul 11, 2016 at 5:28 PM UTC
My Country Tis of Thee (America, 2016 Edition)
My Country Tis of Thee, Sweet land of liberty- Or so we sing. Land where my fathers died- But my forefathers died in a battle Trying to keep their slaves; My fathers killed your fathers For trying to run away; My fathers **** your fathers Cause it's late at  night, and He's reaching for his gun-no, wait, His ID? Land of the pilgrim's pride- But so often we leave out of history How if it weren't for a Native American, The pilgrims would've died. From every mountainside- Like Stone Mountain in Georgia, Where Rebel Generals are memorialized, Where the **** was revived- God, help me, I can't hear freedom's ring; I can only hear white-washed history. From every mountainside- But these days, the mountain is in my chest, And liberty's ring sounds a lot different, And a lot of folks don't like it. Let freedom ring- And I want to fight for freedom for all- #BlackLivesMatter- I want to help- HANDS UP, DON'T SHOOT! But- I Can't Breathe. Let freedom ring!- But peaceful protests turn into Bloodbaths as those who have sworn To serve and protect are sniped down. Let freedom ring!- I try to educate myself On the side of history not taught- I've always felt that Nat Turner was the bad guy, But these days I'm questioning it. I read "The Meaning of Fourth of July for the ***** by Frederick Douglass And I read "Bury Me in a Free Land" by Frances Ellen Watkins Harper and I read "Sympathy" by Paul Laurence Dunbar and I read "Letters from Birmingham Jail", "The Mountaintop Speech", and "I Have a Dream"   by Dr. King. When I was younger, I'd research Dr. King & his colleagues For fun. I'd  wonder, "If I lived in the Civil Rights era, What would I have done?" But when I turned seventeen, I realized, "I live in a Civil Rights era; What am I going to do?
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Diaspora From the Greek When I heard the word I felt it And I looked it up In my old red dictionary I could have used the Internet, I suppose But I like to run my forefinger down pages Of words I read the definition And I felt it Oh Oh We are diaspora. Am I using it correctly? We are a diaspora. Diaspora From the Greek From the green valley of Ottawa From Scotland From Ireland on wooden boats From the French village thirteen children From the mines in the North From Poland and from Germany From the churches and From the Blueberry patches From the Island Manitoulin From the dark lake Kagawong From Kinburn and Arnprior From Markstay and from Sudbury From Waterloo From Kitchener, Michener From the Suburbs Oh From the Suburbs From the red bricks, red currants And geraniums From green island cabins From the desert Oh From the desert From the potholes and pipes From the salty wind Cracked Caspian Sea From the middle of the east of nowhere. From the mountains Oh From the mountains From the crystal water fountains From the tram bells On the cobblestone streets From the torrents of the Rhein From the white cross Oh From the white cross On the green hill From the river Laurence From the French and from the English Plains of Abraham We are diaspora We are a diaspora Diaspora From the Greek How did it end up here on my tongue? It is diaspora. It is a diaspora Diaspora is a diaspora And I wonder if it misses its other pieces The way that I miss mine Ours There is no Roping us back together now There is no Home to go back to There is no Point of meeting Of reunion No White steeple in our old town No Yellow slide in our backyard No Old folks on an old farm No Walled house on a hill No Luzernerring 93 No Familiar riverwater There is no Ancient Greek anymore Diaspora Only fragments of fragments Of roots of stems of words In different dialects There is no Place for you to belong, Diaspora You’ve been sliced to pieces And scattered Into the wind But When people ask you Where you are from You say simply From the Greek Oh From the Greek And When people ask me Where I am from I say simply From the diaspora.
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Oct 19, 2015
Oct 19, 2015 at 10:50 AM UTC
From the Greek
Diaspora From the Greek When I heard the word I felt it And I looked it up In my old red dictionary I could have used the Internet, I suppose But I like to run my forefinger down pages Of words I read the definition And I felt it Oh Oh We are diaspora. Am I using it correctly? We are a diaspora. Diaspora From the Greek From the green valley of Ottawa From Scotland From Ireland on wooden boats From the French village thirteen children From the mines in the North From Poland and from Germany From the churches and From the Blueberry patches From the Island Manitoulin From the dark lake Kagawong From Kinburn and Arnprior From Markstay and from Sudbury From Waterloo From Kitchener, Michener From the Suburbs Oh From the Suburbs From the red bricks, red currants And geraniums From green island cabins From the desert Oh From the desert From the potholes and pipes From the salty wind Cracked Caspian Sea From the middle of the east of nowhere. From the mountains Oh From the mountains From the crystal water fountains From the tram bells On the cobblestone streets From the torrents of the Rhein From the white cross Oh From the white cross On the green hill From the river Laurence From the French and from the English Plains of Abraham We are diaspora We are a diaspora Diaspora From the Greek How did it end up here on my tongue? It is diaspora. It is a diaspora Diaspora is a diaspora And I wonder if it misses its other pieces The way that I miss mine Ours There is no Roping us back together now There is no Home to go back to There is no Point of meeting Of reunion No White steeple in our old town No Yellow slide in our backyard No Old folks on an old farm No Walled house on a hill No Luzernerring 93 No Familiar riverwater There is no Ancient Greek anymore Diaspora Only fragments of fragments Of roots of stems of words In different dialects There is no Place for you to belong, Diaspora You’ve been sliced to pieces And scattered Into the wind But When people ask you Where you are from You say simply From the Greek Oh From the Greek And When people ask me Where I am from I say simply From the diaspora.
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When Hamlet was young, All was good, Elsinore was proud, Hamlet was young, Ophelia too.   Now he is older, Not everything is good, Some things still are, His uncle is his father in law, This is not so good.   Now he is dead, Ophelia is dead, Laertes is dead, Gertrude is dead, Cladius is dead, Yorick... is dead, but he was at the start, so he doesn't count.   Rosen... Guilden... dead Old hamlet is dead, Plonius is dead. Horatio is alive; can't imagine he's very happy, because everyone else is dead. Laurence Olivier is handsome, he's dead too.
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Aug 15, 2014
Aug 15, 2014 at 5:05 PM UTC
Poor Yorick (and everyone else too)
1.  If it doesn't take place at 4 in the morning, immediately change the setting. 2. You should center all your work. Centering makes the piece unique and improves readability. 3. You should invoke the idea of The Mask. Paul Laurence Dunbar didn't do it well enough. 4. One word lines improve readability and do a great job of making emphasis. Use them a lot. 5. On the other hand, really long lines explain points wonderfully. Feel free to be essentially prosaic. 6. The subject should be obvious and everyday, that way everyone can easily understand what you're trying to say. Subtext is dated. 7. Confessions and heartbreak are unique to you. 8. Not editing makes the work extremely human and relatable. 9. Emoticons and the ilk are the cutting edge of the English language. Feel free to use them without reservation. 10. Rhyme scheme doesn't need meter. 11. Making a word into waterfall letters tells the reader you're falling apart (See #3). 12. Journals, diaries, blogs and Tumblr are old news when it comes to venting. Write an angry poem about your day instead. 13. You're probably going mad according to the DSM-5. Definitely write about that.
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Aug 22, 2013
Aug 22, 2013 at 2:23 PM UTC
How to write a successful Hello Poetry poem
Thrift Shop Confessional Old carts squeak down re-sale aisles "One of," "two of," Sometimes "three of" items Tempting treasure-sifting shoppers, Bargain-needing families, Women seeking up-brand names at low-brand prices... Our wives, followed by their husbands, Acquiescent, but quiescently seeking Seeking a thrift shop oasis. A cast-off dining set beckons, Sturdy enough, if a little battered, To make us solemnly content to wait Carted clothing trundling Off to fitting rooms. He shuffled up with a foolish grin. "I think I'll join this convocation of Waiting gentlemen. My wife is a shopper... She'll close the place down." I moved a chair and gave some space; Strangers become brothers in this place. Five minutes on, I knew he was a vet: Army, Vietnam Nam... "I don't like to think about it," Cleared his throat, "Never can forget." I turned to look at him. "A little girl came running, With her hand behind her back. She only stood this high," he said, And showed me with his palm her height, "They carried grenades that way... All of 'em...couldn't tell which ones... Sergeant told us, 'Don't ever check...just shoot.'" The voice trailed off.... I sat sweating in a thrift store, Captive of my own politeness, Half a century, Half a planet, Transported in his words into a soldier's Hell. "So I shot... Nothing else to do." Silence then. A total stranger staggering under the weight of having Murdered his Albatross.... Of having carried this thing, This memory, Inside him all these years, Of finding me, The unsuspecting thrift shop guest Who'd listen to his lonely tale, Perhaps so he could earn some rest.... I, his unwitting Confessor, Uncertain what to say, Certain something must be said... Certain nothing could be said... Sat dumb, but understanding The wisdom of confessional dividers, The private comfort of two booths Where prayerful exchanges Intersperse uncertain silences, Present in the overhanging need: Demanding sorrowful returns, Impending memories of sorrows... And lonely trudgings home.... (Connections with Fr. Laurence's "Riddling confession finds but short shrift," in Romeo & Juliet, and Coleridge's "Rime of the Ancient Mariner")
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Apr 7, 2013
Apr 7, 2013 at 5:39 PM UTC
Thrift Shop Confessional
Thrift Shop Confessional Old carts squeak down re-sale aisles "One of," "two of," Sometimes "three of" items Tempting treasure-sifting shoppers, Bargain-needing families, Women seeking up-brand names at low-brand prices... Our wives, followed by their husbands, Acquiescent, but quiescently seeking Seeking a thrift shop oasis. A cast-off dining set beckons, Sturdy enough, if a little battered, To make us solemnly content to wait Carted clothing trundling Off to fitting rooms. He shuffled up with a foolish grin. "I think I'll join this convocation of Waiting gentlemen. My wife is a shopper... She'll close the place down." I moved a chair and gave some space; Strangers become brothers in this place. Five minutes on, I knew he was a vet: Army, Vietnam Nam... "I don't like to think about it," Cleared his throat, "Never can forget." I turned to look at him. "A little girl came running, With her hand behind her back. She only stood this high," he said, And showed me with his palm her height, "They carried grenades that way... All of 'em...couldn't tell which ones... Sergeant told us, 'Don't ever check...just shoot.'" The voice trailed off.... I sat sweating in a thrift store, Captive of my own politeness, Half a century, Half a planet, Transported in his words into a soldier's Hell. "So I shot... Nothing else to do." Silence then. A total stranger staggering under the weight of having Murdered his Albatross.... Of having carried this thing, This memory, Inside him all these years, Of finding me, The unsuspecting thrift shop guest Who'd listen to his lonely tale, Perhaps so he could earn some rest.... I, his unwitting Confessor, Uncertain what to say, Certain something must be said... Certain nothing could be said... Sat dumb, but understanding The wisdom of confessional dividers, The private comfort of two booths Where prayerful exchanges Intersperse uncertain silences, Present in the overhanging need: Demanding sorrowful returns, Impending memories of sorrows... And lonely trudgings home.... (Connections with Fr. Laurence's "Riddling confession finds but short shrift," in Romeo & Juliet, and Coleridge's "Rime of the Ancient Mariner")
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Home boy thought he was a killer Kept a necklace round his neck In a villa near manila A strange accurance Small body found dead Little ***** died underneath the currents Homeboy was sure of his assurance A good swimmer His name was probably Laurence He was just a few feet from shore, When this Alligator about six feet or four, His eyes went wide, bug eyed and crazy This is when it all got a little hazy
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Feb 24, 2013
Feb 24, 2013 at 11:26 AM UTC
Alligators
person feels a wave of heat through their neck and face when struck with a thought of their ex boyfriend. a ninth grader gives them a ***** look. person leans against a cold cinderblock wall and relaxes their face. focus on the empty space between the eyeballs and the brain. feel the limp arms and identify the beat of a pulse running through them. repeat after me: self care is boring. paul laurence dunbar knows why the caged bird sings. he never wanted to be an elevator operator. it's a point of privilege. person asks a ninth grader if a bird could see the wind, the river, the sun. "oh... no..." one thing person notices time and again is that when these students drop something they do not pick it up. they let someone else do it. where person is from it is not like that. students would not help person like that, they think. person remembers one time, when they themselves were in the ninth grade, dropping their lunchbox in a crowded hallway and picking it up swiftly in the next step without slowing down. a tall boy behind them said "smooth". person felt proud at the time. person feels good remembering this.
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Sep 24, 2018
Sep 24, 2018 at 7:44 PM UTC
person walks past 3 sleeping bodies in the train station at 7:07 AM
Violent delights Have violent ends so as They kiss they consume The sweetest loathsome honey Confounding the appetite.
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Apr 26, 2010
Apr 26, 2010 at 12:12 PM UTC
Laurence Mashup
La nuit, quand par hasard je m'éveille, et je pense Que dehors et dedans tout est calme et silence, Et qu'oubliant Laurence, auprès de moi dormant, Mon cœur mal éveillé se croit seul un moment ; Si j'entends tout à coup son souffle qui s'exhale, Régulier, de son sein sortir à brise égale, Ce souffle harmonieux d'un enfant endormi ! Sur un coude appuyé je me lève à demi, Comme au chevet d'un fils, une mère qui veille ; Cette haleine de paix rassure mon oreille ; Je bénis Dieu tout bas de m'avoir accordé Cet ange que je garde et dont je suis gardé ; Je sens, aux voluptés dont ces heures sont pleines, Que mon âme respire et vit dans deux haleines ; Quelle musique aurait pour moi de tels accords ? Je l'écoute longtemps dormir, et me rendors ! De la Grotte, 16 décembre 1793.
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Jocelyn, le 16 décembre 1793
My favorite poets and literary artists are Marcus Garvey James Weldon Johnson Phillis Wheatley Langston Hughes Maya Angelou Countee Cullen Paul Laurence Dunbar These are mine who are yours.
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Dec 20, 2015
Dec 20, 2015 at 12:22 AM UTC
who are your favorite poet, literary artist, and writer
We wear the mask that grins and lies, It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes- This debt we pay to human guile; With torn and bleeding hearts we smile, And mouth with myriad subtleties. Why should the world be over-wise, In counting all our tears and sighs? Nay,let them only see us, while We wear the mask. We smile,but, O great Christ,our cries To thee from tortured souls arise. We sing, but oh the clay is vile Beneath our feet, and along the mile; But let the world dream otherwise, We wear the mask!
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Dec 23, 2013
Dec 23, 2013 at 2:04 AM UTC
We Wear the Mask by Paul Laurence Dunbar
Solemn sweet pipes of de o'gan      Heav'nly music I've hyead play, But I'll tell you somefin' truly      Certain ez is Judgment Day: Angels present at de service      Ev'ry Sunday spread dey wings, Lif' dey hands, an' witness glory      When Malindy sings.
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Mar 27, 2024
Mar 27, 2024 at 1:43 PM UTC
The Lost Stanza of "When Malindy Sings" by Paul Laurence Dunbar
Am restored,follow my heart I was patient cause someone was patient with me I play the piano in my limo Good or bad life is good My empire like a VLC player I play hard like Laurence HARDER You don't giveup when you are ****** cause life itself is ****** I will teach you how to play,but don't wna take the lead It a  lawless world, don't break rules We rule despite in the midst of the darkness You drive your limo,I roll my tricycle Ain't we equal? You don't have to giveup it not the end of the world. . .
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Aug 10, 2015
Aug 10, 2015 at 8:40 PM UTC
Patience!
Un baiser sur mon front ! un baiser, même en rêve ! Mais de mon front pensif le frais baiser s'enfuit ; Mais de mes jours taris l'été n'a plus de sève ; Mais l'Aurore jamais n'embrassera la Nuit. Elle rêvait sans doute aussi que son haleine Me rendait les climats de mes jeunes saisons, Que la neige fondait sur une tête humaine, Et que la fleur de l'âme avait deux floraisons. Elle rêvait sans doute aussi que sur ma joue Mes cheveux par le vent écartés de mes yeux, Pareils aux jais flottants que sa tête secoue, Noyaient ses doigts distraits dans leurs flocons soyeux. Elle rêvait sans doute aussi que l'innocence Gardait contre un désir ses roses et ses lis ; Que j'étais Jocelyn et qu'elle était Laurence, Que la vallée en fleurs nous cachait dans ses plis. Elle rêvait sans doute aussi que mon délire En vers mélodieux pleurait comme autrefois ; Que mon cœur sous sa main devenait une lyre Qui dans un seul soupir accentuait deux voix. Fatale vision ! Tout mon être frissonne ; On dirait que mon sang veut remonter son cours. Enfant, ne dites plus vos rêves à personne, Et ne rêvez jamais, ou bien rêvez toujours !
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I know what the caged bird feels, alas! When the sun is bright on the upland slopes; When the wind stirs soft through the springing grass, And the river flows like a stream of glass; When the first bird sings and the first bud opes, And the faint perfume from its chalice steals-- I know what the caged bird feels! I know why the caged bird beats his wing Till its blood is red on the cruel bars; For he must fly back to his perch and cling When he fain would be on the bough a-swing; And a pain still throbs in the old, old scars And they pulse again with a keener sting-- I know why he beats his wing! I know why the caged bird sings, ah me, When his wing is bruised and his ***** sore,-- When he beats his bars and he would be free; It is not a carol of joy or glee, But a prayer that he sends from his heart's deep core, But a plea, that upward to Heaven he flings-- I know why the caged bird sings!
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Oct 29, 2014
Oct 29, 2014 at 6:43 PM UTC
Sympathy - Paul Laurence Dunbar
Laurence Stephen feeling lowly Lonely as the sea Sits watching the matchstick crowds go by He isn't going to the match Or the mill He's in his back room With imagined ladies and Bellini
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Feb 23, 2018
Feb 23, 2018 at 5:59 AM UTC
L.S Lowry
“I’ve only seen her, Charles. Like a shooting star, I’ve only seen her. But I’d be a king amongst kings to subject myself to that arduous task— of knowing her, and letting her know me. So that we could, some day, and only if she too desires me, arrive at the gates of love.” “And what about doing that would make you a king, Laurence?” “Oh don’t you know, Charles? The wait to reach her is as golden as any king’s riches,” And here, he turns to look at him and smiling, baring teeth and pride, tells his dear friend, “and would make me twice richer.” .
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Jun 2, 2019
Jun 2, 2019 at 9:02 AM UTC
In Preparation of Becoming King
"this is what is going to send us *all over the edge!"* somebody's worried about falling into the saint laurence seaway and i'm worried about falling into a waterfall just past the edge of the blade *(all the money in the world could probably buy me my peace of mind but it couldn't buy me happiness and it would leave everyone else in the world without any money)* and this life my friends is what is going to send us all over the edge. s m o t h e r me in fresh snow m u f f l e d through notes to self s c r i b b l e d on scraps of paper to a p p o i n t m e n t s i never met and call the weekend a stanza just one stanza in a poem of months and time *(to be one person and lost is not much to the world but it is one person's entire world to be lost)* break my back split my heels **** winter except don't because i like winter i just want something anything to curse at blame my mood on scuff my cash on knit my apron on ***** my lid on so tight that someday i'll explode this is what is going to send us all over the edge *(i don't live in a vacuum but neither do you)*
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Nov 24, 2016
Nov 24, 2016 at 11:56 AM UTC
edges
# "Oh Charles, Oh dear friend... what shall I do? She is somewhere far and I can't reach her hand. I can't tell her with my mouth the things I need to say. Only though letters- through ink and paper can I say anything at all. And I'm no good with words, Charles! Why, I- I'm only an animal, a dog who will lick you and look at you with those full moon eyes to tell you that it loves you, and, and I can't take it anymore, Charles. I miss her. Oh I shall go mad if this continues!" "I thought the wait would make you king, Laurence? What's changed?" "..." "Why don't you tell her?" "Tell her. Tell her what?" "Tell her the way you feel." "My dear Charles. It... it isn't yet time. I've barely spoken a word to her. She’d think me truly mad then!— if I were to tell her about my childish yearning. She's been ill, you know. Away, being taken care of by those blessed enough to know her. And me, I'm nothing to her yet; I am ****** too young and dry still, without the waters of her baptism. Oh if only she were near..." "You'd fumble about and tip the tub with all its water, you would!" "Oh hush..! At least then she'd see me. In all my fumbling and stuttering, Charles. She would see me." "That she would, dear friend. That she would."
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Jun 9, 2019
Jun 9, 2019 at 11:00 PM UTC
The Maddening of Laurence Guillen pt2
.I  should say it loudly my dear Or i will scream it on all the roofs I adore you beautiful Muse , All the words i write it's you Who inspire them to me , Muse! Even if i am not Roméo But you really deserve To be that dreamed Juliet . you are that dreamed Muse On a balcony , and i am singing My lovelly song that summer after-noon That wonderful  day called tuesday And if I should die at the end I would do as did once That lover named Roméo I die every day a little beat in that homeland .but for your love I should live till the end of the light love is that why i was born for love should be our first religion I am singing loudly as a tenor voice or so i feel my self as Laurence Olivier on a stage performing the play itself the one written by that famous William without love i can not sing my song nor write those words to tell you again and again pretty Muse! I love you and moreover i  adore you !
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Aug 20, 2019
Aug 20, 2019 at 8:40 PM UTC
DREAMED JULIET
.finally! i've been skewing, stalling, to write this one sentence for almost a week, not out of difficulty, but out of a nuanced castacade of observation that "got in the way"... how else to begin rather than with a fireside adlous huxley 1950s english... that grand extract from the history of a language, that sardonic look upon a saxon past.... well... the evil of hollywood when it comes to movies with scenes of actors brushing their teeth... evil, evil, evil, loki-esque diabolical... chauvinism via elbow shuffling: via elbow pushing past the english sacrosanct idea of the supermarket queue... cordiality mon frère... cordiality mon frè(re) - grave accent? you write in the -re: but you cut off given the grave accent on the e-grave... mon fré! it's evil what they do in hollywood h'america... all those movies... actors brushing their teeth, spitting... they brush, they spit... but they don't rinse! and what's wrong with the pea-sized amount of paste once a day? why two times a day? once a day will do... and... once you've brushed your teeth?! you rinse them! you don't do what hollywood actors do, you don't brush your teeth, spit out dry and "forget" to rinse your teeth afterwards... pea-sized amount of paste, brush, spit, rinse... you have to rinse your teeth after the brushing... you don't climb into bed thinking the non-rinsed teeth are your extra: chewing gum! when you brush your teeth: you rinse... i'm a tobacco smoker, all the adverts suggest i should be having stains on my teeth... i'm not getting the scaremongering stains expected... i don't follow hollywood's dentistry's rules... i rinse my gob once i've scrubbed my ivories... hollywood is evil that way... it's all marathon man herr szell (laurence olivier) when it depicts actors brushing their teeth, spitting the paste out, but not rinsing! pea sized dollop, once a day, but rinse rinse rinse! tongue come ice-ring on the touchy-feely side of things after... tongue skidding on enamel! i once loved...    what an unfathomable presence of an unbelievable statement...   i once loved... it almost feeds into my luxury of vampire fiction... i once loved... i did... but then... whatever love there was, to begin with... had to become morphed into the ugly circumstance of experiencing the basic foundation, of reality. i no longer love, i do what other people tempt "to love", the basic realism of the exploited, unaware...           i once loved from the pages of fiction, of poetry...         now?          this, lost idealism... well... the love it kept intact... but the interactions kept limited...                 whatever counter theory comes my way...         an open wheat field... and a scuttling ramble's worth of a brain to match it; nothing worth being desired to match a father figure, or compose itself into a figurehead for the worth of establishing family.
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Apr 7, 2019
Apr 7, 2019 at 10:29 PM UTC
brick on brick encounter
.finally! i've been skewing, stalling, to write this one sentence for almost a week, not out of difficulty, but out of a nuanced castacade of observation that "got in the way"... how else to begin rather than with a fireside adlous huxley 1950s english... that grand extract from the history of a language, that sardonic look upon a saxon past.... well... the evil of hollywood when it comes to movies with scenes of actors brushing their teeth... evil, evil, evil, loki-esque diabolical... chauvinism via elbow shuffling: via elbow pushing past the english sacrosanct idea of the supermarket queue... cordiality mon frère... cordiality mon frè(re) - grave accent? you write in the -re: but you cut off given the grave accent on the e-grave... mon fré! it's evil what they do in hollywood h'america... all those movies... actors brushing their teeth, spitting... they brush, they spit... but they don't rinse! and what's wrong with the pea-sized amount of paste once a day? why two times a day? once a day will do... and... once you've brushed your teeth?! you rinse them! you don't do what hollywood actors do, you don't brush your teeth, spit out dry and "forget" to rinse your teeth afterwards... pea-sized amount of paste, brush, spit, rinse... you have to rinse your teeth after the brushing... you don't climb into bed thinking the non-rinsed teeth are your extra: chewing gum! when you brush your teeth: you rinse... i'm a tobacco smoker, all the adverts suggest i should be having stains on my teeth... i'm not getting the scaremongering stains expected... i don't follow hollywood's dentistry's rules... i rinse my gob once i've scrubbed my ivories... hollywood is evil that way... it's all marathon man herr szell (laurence olivier) when it depicts actors brushing their teeth, spitting the paste out, but not rinsing! pea sized dollop, once a day, but rinse rinse rinse! tongue come ice-ring on the touchy-feely side of things after... tongue skidding on enamel! i once loved...    what an unfathomable presence of an unbelievable statement...   i once loved... it almost feeds into my luxury of vampire fiction... i once loved... i did... but then... whatever love there was, to begin with... had to become morphed into the ugly circumstance of experiencing the basic foundation, of reality. i no longer love, i do what other people tempt "to love", the basic realism of the exploited, unaware...           i once loved from the pages of fiction, of poetry...         now?          this, lost idealism... well... the love it kept intact... but the interactions kept limited...                 whatever counter theory comes my way...         an open wheat field... and a scuttling ramble's worth of a brain to match it; nothing worth being desired to match a father figure, or compose itself into a figurehead for the worth of establishing family.
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