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karizma Apr 1
galti to meri thi jo tumhe apna soch liya
ye itefaq tha humaari kismaton ka aise judna

kyun maine socha tumhaare iraade sache the?
galti to meri thi jo pyaar ke andhe ko apne dil ki kaahaniyaan suna di

galti to meri thi jo maine apne aansoon'o ko vaada kiya tumhaare naam se rone ka.

kaise koi kisi ko itna pyaar kaise kar sak ta hai?

galti to meri thi jo socha tumhne un palon ka unse aur bhi kuch socha hoga.

kya tum kabhi bhi mere baare mein nahi sochte the?
galti to meri thi maine apna pur dil de diya usko jisko dil ki baat nahi karni aati thi.

Aaj, tumhaari baatien dil mein abji bhi bethi hai, jaise intezaar kar rahi hon kab tum aayo, aur inhe mehekaayo.

par galti to meri hai ke aaj bhi tammana rakhti *** ke tum mere kabhi ** hi sakte **.

kyun tumhne woh pal dikhaye agar unka koi matlab nahi tha?
galti to meri thi maine aasha rakhi un baaton ka, un paalon ka kuch aur matlab **.

galti to meri thi tum aah gaye aur miane socha tum mere layak **.
galti to meri thi maine tumse itna pyaar kiya ke tumhe bechenni hoyagi mujhse.

galti to meri thi.
DEAR                                                                                                                                  

GALTI MERI  THI
USNE MUJHE CHAHA HI NAHI
MAI CHAHAT SAMAJH BAITHA
GALTI MERI THI

USKI PAL BHAR KI MUSKURAHAT KO
PYAR SAMAJH BAITHA
GALTI MERI THI

WO TO HAR BAAT PAR HAA KARTI THI
MAI HI  IQRAR SAMAJH  BAITHA
GALTI MERI THI

USNE MUJHSE JYADA AHMIYAT DI MERE DOSTO KO
MAIN USKI YE AADDA MAJAK SAMAJH BAITHA
GALTI MERI  THI

USNE KAHA V THA
KOI AUR HAI USKI ZINDGI ME
MAI HI KHUD KO USKI
ZINDGI SAMAJH BAITHA......

GALTI MERI THI
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             WRITTEN BY    :  PANKAJ KUMAR RAI  (BABA)
Maa
Jab aankh khuli to amma ki
godi ka ek sahara tha
uska nanha sa anchal mujhko
bhumandal se v pyara tha.....
uske chehre ki jhalak dekh
chehra phulo sa khilta tha
uske stan ki ek bund se
mujhko jeevan milta tha
haatho se baalo ko noocha
pairo se khoob prahar kia
phir v us maa ne puchkara
humko jee bhar ke pyar kia

Mai uska raja beta tha
wo ankho ka tara kahti thi
mai banu budhape me uska
bas ek sahara kahti thi
ungli ko pakad chalaya tha
padhne vidlaya bheja tha
meri naadani ko v neej
antar me sadasaheja tha

Mere saare prashno ka wo
fauran jawab ban jaati thi
meri raho ke kaante chun
wo khud gulaab ban jaati thi
mai bada hua to college se
ek rog pyar ka le aaya
jis dil me maa ki murat thi
wo ramkali ko de aaya

shaadi ki pati se papa bana
apne rishto me jhul gya
ab karwa chauth maanta hu
maa ki mamta ko bhul gya
hum bhul gye uski maamta
mere jeevan ki thati thi
hum bhul gye apana jeevan
wo amrit wali chaati thi

Hum bhul gye wo khud bhukhi
rah karke hume khilati thi
humko sukha bistar dekar
khud geele me soo jaati thi
hum bhul gye usne hi
hotho ko bhasha sikhlayi thi
meri neendo ke lie raat bhar
uss maa ne lori gaayi thi

hum bhul gye har galti par
usne danta samjhaya tha
bach jau buri najar se
kala teeka sada lagaya tha
hum bade hue to mamta wale
saare bandhan tod aaye
bangle me kutte paal laye
maa ko vridhaashram chod aaye
apano sapno ka mahal girakar
kankar -kankar been laye
khudgargi me uske suhag ke
aabhushan tak cheen laye

Hum maa ko ghar ke batware ki
abhilasha tak le aaye
usko paawan mandir se
gaali ki bhasha tak le aaye

to be continued ........(next part may be in next week)
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axr Nov 2014
zakhamon ki batein in na karo
bahut chotein pahuchai hai tumne
maram lagane kind koshish na karo
hum nahi ban sake farishtey

maine tumhare aakhon ke andar ki aandhi dekhi hai
maine tumhari saans ginni hai
kya pata ki main kis din mar jaaon?
aapki galtiyon ki bare mein main kya batao?
saanse gin kar mein kabhi nahi thaki
taare, grah jo chaho le aaon
kitne baar maafi magun?
jab meri galti thi nahi

aaj thand bahut hai
saans lene mein taqlif hai
ab maram lagane ki koshish na karo
mein idhar ***, mujhe marte hue dekho.
first hindi piece in years. Should i post a transltion?
Translation
Don't talk about injuries
you have hurt me a lot.
Don't try to heal me
We can't become angels

i have seen the storm in your eyes
i have counted your breathes
who knows when i shall die
i am no one to point out your mistakes
never been tired from counting your breath
stars, planets,whatever you want, i shall bring it you.
how many more times should to apologise to you when i am not to blamed

its cold today
i am having trouble breathing
now, dont try to heal me
i am here, watch me die.
Teri zulfon k chav mei
chamakta yeh chand sa chehra,

Aab isse jyada mai tujse aur kuch na keh raha.

Sunane ko bahut kuch hai
Par sun ne ko koi nahi.

Mana galti thi meri
Kya mai Maafi k layak hu nahi?
Aryan Sam Nov 2018
Galti bhawe meri c
Ya teri
Par rishta ta apna c
Jo khtam ** gea
@ @
!  !
SmArTy Jan 2018
Hiiiii....u knw what aaj ky hai....
aaj bhot special prsn ka bday hai...
meli bestieee.... kaaa
paglu ka
bhot special tu duffr mere lyee...
&
chalo kuch meethi meethi yaade yaad dilata hu...
apni....
yaaad hai jab humari fst tym baaat hui thi....wo cmnt k rply me
ladai se hui thi startng
ki pata tha itne impo ** jaynge ek dusre k lye
fr wo humara din bhar choti choti si baat pr ladna
manana
fr draaame dikhana ki tu lunch ni kalega to b ni kalungi....
tu gannna ...tu gannniii
hihihihihi
bhot misss krta hu m bo ladaiyaaa
punishment b inni pyali ki galti krne ka man kre
....
school se aate hi beg rakhne se phle....mobile on krna...
net on hone se phle whatsappp pr msz type krna....
agr ek mint b reply late hua to bawal ,machana...
fr shaq wali nigaaho se dekhnaaa.....
hihihi binna galti k es masssom bacheee se solly bulbana.....
pure pure din baat krke b pet ni bharta tha
deere deere baat krte krte special one bn gyi merelyee....
fr kisi se b baat ni kalta tha m
muujhe aaj b yaad hai wo din
8/4/1999 mela bday gifttt
maine tainu 1st tym dekha tha...
hihihihi...
apni yaari ese hi bni rahe hamesha....
bs yadi pray krni hai... mainu...rab se.....
i love u my....bestieee...... happy bday tooo.....uuuuuuuu...
ab bta babu ky gift chaahiye teko.
.
Friendship memo..
Vineeta rai Dec 2018
Log Kehte hai jo pyar karta hai...
Wo hi gussa karte hai....
To kya gussa aur beizzat Karne Me...
Wo farak nahi janta hai....
Kisi ke liy pyar Me gussa karna jayas hai....
Par...par...
Kya ush pyar ke naam par ushe jalil karna ulta kehna Abuse karna bhi pyar me jayas hai...
Janab Agar ishe pyar kahte hai to dur hi raho aise pyar se...
Jo khusiyo ke jagah udaasi de...
Khusi ke jagah gum De...
Izzat ke bajae beizzat kare...
Aur last me galti accept krne ke bajae ush glti ko aisa naam de...
Pyar me dono partner ko imp. Dena jaruri hai...
Ek jhuke to ye nahi ki app hmesa ushpe ungli uthao ushe jhukao...
Jb tk wo jhuk rahi thik hai jis din wo ye sochne lagi ki hmesa wo kyu...
To kuch bhi kar loge wo laut ke nahi aaegi....
Waqt se pehle kadar Karna sikh lo..
Aksar hame jiski kadar nahi hoti wo kadar tumhe waqt dilata hai...
Aur tb tak bahut der ** jati hai...
Relationship ek dhage ke trah hota hai...Jada khichne par tut jata hai...ushe bacha ke rakho...hmesa samne wale ko jhukta mt dekho kv khud v jhuko relationship me bus ek nahi 2 log hote hai dono ka farz bnta hai....
Shrivastva MK May 2018
1-Dil ki baatein agar dil me hi dab jaye,
Khuda kasam dil dardo ka manzar bn jaye,
Agar thori bhi smjh hoti unhe mere pyar ki,
Zindagi bita dete hum unki ruh me samaye,

2-Khudgarz nhi mazbur tha main,
Tere dil se bahut dur tha main,
Tumne mujhe us galti ki sza di,
Jis galti me bekasoor tha main...
Riya jain Sep 2018
baat wo jaani pehchaani thi,
school ki wo kahani thi.
subah uthke wo school ko jaana,
waha jate hi teacher ki daant khaana.
class mein chhup ke tiffin khaana,
or har galti par naya bahana.
class mein roz halla karana,
or galti khud ki pe dost ko fasana.
fir chup2 ke dost ko hasana,
usse kehna zara chehra toh dikhana.
pal haseen ye kahin gum se gaye,
ab hum sab alag hogye.
class wo humari ek kamra ban gyi,
or baatein humari yaadein ban gyi.
firse doston ka mela hum lagaynge,
par wo school ke din waaps na aynge.

Riya
Vineeta rai Nov 2018
Dosti hai hmari Jaan....
Dosti hai hmari pehchaan...
Ek dusre ke liy jaan Dena...
Hai dosti ka naam...
Dost bina jindagi kuch ni....
Dost bina hum kuch nahi....
Ishliy dosti hai hum sb ki shaan...
Dosti me hui galti ko...
maaf krna ae jaan....
Dosto ki dosti chalegi umra tamaam...
My words my thoughts about frndship if you agree like nd comment
Riya jain Oct 2018
andheri thi jo raat wo,
us raat ki kya baat kahun.
jis raat se wo mila nahin,
us raat ki kya subah kahun.

har raat ki h subah mgr,
us raat ki bhi subah hui.
charcha hui to khabar mili,
us shaqs ki toh maut hui.

shaqs to tha wo dost mera,
us shaqs ki kya baat karun.
ladka tha wo bigda magar,
uske dil ki kya taarief karun.
  
maut nahi thi tha wo khoon,
un kaatilon ki kya baat karun.
jese tadpaya un sbko,
Isse bhattar maut unko m ada krun.

galti kya thi un maasumo ki,
jo aisi bhynkr maut mili.
khuda tu hi jawab dega,
kynki tune thi wo maut likhi.

sbko jisne khush tha rkha,
uski shanti k m dua krun.
Yaad rkhnge use hmesha,
uski yaadon ki kya baat karun.

@riya
Aryan Sam Apr 2018
Kina kuj chal reha
Kina kuj hor chlna he

Eh dila di gal c
Mukadra di ban ke reh ***

Kujteri galti c
Kuj meri galti he
Baki rola sab jaata paata da
Jo ishq na pura ** sakde

Kuj tu dari c
Kuj me darda c
Kuj darde c sade maape
Me kiwe samjawa
Ki beet rahi mere naal
Nitt marda ha teri ik jhalak paan de lai
Aryan Sam Feb 2018
Me
Roi ja reha he kuch dina to
Pata nai ki he jo roi ja reha ha
Kuch nikal gea he mere hath wicho
Kuch kho chukea ha me apnis kismat wicho

Yakeen na kar sakea me apni himmat te
Kiti hundi us time ta aj he nobat na hundi
Sochda si kucj jyada hi ghardea

Tere viah wale din
Roea me sara din
Teri shugraat wale din
Roya me sari raat

tenu kyu peni *** k

Kadar de layak na rahi ***
meri

Manda ha galti c meri
Par tetho wadd ke pyar kita bi ta kisnu

Akha wich he paani
Dil wich he ik chees jahi

Kiwe pawanga mud ke *** tenu
Ehi soch wich nikal jandi raat meri
Riya jain Jul 2018
Wo bhi kya din the,
Jab dost bhut the,
mann laga rehta tha,
din bana rehta tha,
hum bade hote gaye,
dost kam hote gaye,
kuch khaas bach gaye,
kuch khaas bhi badal gaye,
hum soch soch ke thak gaye,
ki kya galti kar gaye,
par jab ye sab samajh gaye,
tab tak **** guzar gaye,
fir ek naya mod aaya,
aur hum chalte chale gaye.
kuch khaas ko yaad kar,
kuch khaas ko bhul kar,
hum bhi aage bhadte chale gaye.
Ankit Dubey May 2019
Itne kareeb aakar ku door chali jati **,
Pyaar jab karti ** mujhse ku har galti pe rooth jati **,
Kai bar rulat hu mai tmhe mai b janta hu,
Kai bate aisi jo tmhe nahi hai pasand mai vo b karta hu,
Takdeer ne kiya hai dar badar khata meri hi nhi Fir bhi paas tum mere ati **,
Hai adat ab to tumhari har sans me,
Ye jante hue b na jane ku dur chali jati **,
Hai majburiya tumhari b mai samajhta hu shayad yahi wjh h k kai bar mjhe rota hua chodkr b chli jati **
Aryan Sam Mar 2018
Menu filhal kuj ni pata
Tuci kithe viah kita
Munda ki krda
Ki usda background
Kiwe da dikhda oh
Kuj bi pata nai kita

Eda jigra nai haje mera

But yakeen maneo
Pata me sab kr lena
Bada kuj chlda aj kal mind wich
Putt jinni meri galti c
Uni hi thuhadi bi he
Mano ya na mano
Me ikala kasurwar nai
Apne bichode wich
Tuci bi barabar de haqdar **
Zindagi barbad krke rakh lai apni te meri
Chowdhary Ishrat Jun 2018
Tere Pyaar Ki Inteha Hogyi
Ab To Zulm Ki Inteha Hogyi
Tujhse Boht Ab Wafa Hogyi
Shyd Teri b Poori Wafa Hogyi
Teri Har Galti Mjse Rafa Hogyi
Tujhse To Wafa He Rafa Hogyi
Wafa He Tujhse Khafa Hogyi
Ab To Zindagi b Khafa Hogyi
Jaane Hum Se Kya Jafa Hogyi
Tujhse To Wafa He Jafa Hogyi
Har Khushi Ab Dafa Hogyi
Zindagi Se Ishrat Dafa Hogyi
12:16 AM
20th May 2018
Aryan Sam Oct 2018
Menu supne ande rehnde a
Tere te ode ni
Ohnu bhenchod nu sine te sulawe
Tu har raat hanere ni
Mera chehra nai ghumda
Tere odo chaar chufere?

Une matha chumea pehla?
Ya hath chumme tere?

Son nai dinde menu eh khyaal
Sari raat ehi soch ke lang janda
Ki kite pregnent ta nai hongai
Aj eh kita hona
Oh kita hona
Dil te satt lagdi he
Bus hanju nai ande, bcz show nai kr sakda hanju
Udo ronda ha andro andri

Menu apni galti di saz mil rahi he
Nd me kush ha ki menu saza mil rahi he
Saali fat jandi he
Nd daily fatdi he

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