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"flensburg" poems
It's late in the evening πŸŽ‡ I'm wondering what clothes to wear 😌 Thinking about our old stuff And brush my long dark hair 😌 I asked "do I look alright? " U said "yes u look beautiful tonight " I went to Bangkok city U can see my straight hair that night I asked "do u feel alright? " U said "yes I feel wonderful tonight " Flensburg far away from me But now can u see ? With my lonely eyes I tried my best in everything πŸ™‚ Why I'm still suffering deep down my mind?
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Jan 30, 2021
Jan 30, 2021 at 7:45 AM UTC
wonderful in painful night
I don't like Flensburg Dalya said as we rode in the passenger carrier she next to me at the back the Polish girl and her mother having changed seats for a different view the Southend teacher prat still in the front with the driver and guide I want to be out of Germany my dad was in Germany in the War she said she stared at the passing view not sure where he was he didn't say much about it I looked at her sitting there the green top and tight blue jeans her dark hair pulled in a bunch at the back my old man was in Egypt in the War I said what did he do there? she said fought the Desert Fox were there foxes in Egypt? he was a German general in the north African fight called Rommel the fight was called Rommel? I looked at the nape of her neck the love bite still there remembering her in her tent unclothed and bare no the general was called Rommel I said was your old man as you term him the general? I remember her ******* like two small jelly moulds shaking there no he wasn't a general he was an engineer he mended tanks somewhat lower in the ranks she pointed out a church as we passed it by my father said he prayed in a church in Germany I rememberer that she said I remembered her laying there unclothed completely bare a soft aroma of onions hanging in the air.
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Aug 15, 2014
Aug 15, 2014 at 4:45 PM UTC
FLENSBURG 1974.