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"externalized" poems
To whom or what do I refer when I use the name "One"? Is there a recurring character named "One"? Is it an impersonal pronoun for "you"? Is it a sort-of metaphysical Unity? Is it a symbolic, externalized "I"? Is it that "One" is many things? Do I know if I know? No; that is, I don't know if I know; while that is not to say "no" to any of my prior questions, I can't truly say "yes" to any, either, for "One" always seems to shift, to me, and could be any, all, or none at any given Time And so, I suppose, it is to say: "perhaps One knows"
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Oct 30, 2013
Oct 30, 2013 at 6:44 AM UTC
One
filled up with enmity coiling up inside The chest billows up Thy want to heave it out Then destined to tranquility The claws scratch the flesh Death gnaws on the remnants of longevity Unless visions have a chest To burst out into effervescence Spontaneous sigh is kicked out of your breath The clavicles sharpen, the eyes ogle ahead The nothingness dilates The flicker has no entrance for itself to adumbrate For utopia has its own gore To marvel over inside, The plasters of bliss Have guffawed over the gullible dusk The gloom has left with a whisper A muttering not to be heard The relief has sewed on flesh With the clouds coming out of thy outburst The relief rebirths the serenity Has been meandered, halted For thou shed leaves Making agony to clouds of no return Utopic defiance, the idiosyncratic anectodes Stains of externalized innundation For the literal existance of hope.
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Mar 5, 2017
Mar 5, 2017 at 7:13 AM UTC
Illusions
Silence is deafening Waking from a cacophony of sounds much like "A Day in the Life" Only to find that silence is greater than any voluminous discord imagined Feeling like a superhuman, the world is now illuminated With choirs of percolating atoms spinning Pure harmonious energy that goes under the human threshold Silence is actualizing Awakening to the potentialities and nuances lost in the clutter of prepositions and pronouns Experiencing how momentous each rise and fall of breath erupts to revitalize the whole world Perceptions externalized and internalized merge as one truth Tangibly existing as a universe within a boundless wave of sensations Silence is beautiful Silence is breathtaking Silence is humble Silence is abundant Silence is the world Silence is the body Silence is the mind Silence is the soul Silent I am
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May 25, 2015
May 25, 2015 at 12:23 PM UTC
Vocal Rest
Were you born to be a boss, or just work for one? So lost inside a storm, but the perfect one. These verses run, away from the 1st of months. Bills are in the way of genuine workless fun, but when the work is done, I’m left to my devices Vices like some **** and everything that seems so **** exciting. Igniting is the spark of curiosity my velocity, has got to be along the lines of something like hyp hop crisy. Quite possibly, everything you want to see, open up your eyes and believe achieve exactly who you want to be. Do everything you can, and he can do the rest. In the hands of the most high, if you seek success. History is written one word at a time, so I’m sprinting to the finish, as I’m learning to fly. People watch you ******* struggle, start diverting their eyes. Those claiming that they love you, hurt the worst when it’s lies... …no ones perfect, but try.
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Apr 11, 2016
Apr 11, 2016 at 9:49 PM UTC
Externalized
these lights are fluorescent or something along those lines i am not a scientist but the point is these lights bring an atmosphere to the cement tunnels that can only be described as harsh and here i sit soft and warm under the cold beams feeling all too human and yet not real enough as the tips of my toes wriggle trying to escape the cage of my shoe and my fingers are typing out words that have nothing to do with anything except my inner monologue which has been externalized into poetry and now it is my shield saying see? i have feelings proving that i am not as cold as these unwavering lights there is real fire somewhere within me and i conduct experiment after experiment trying to find that spark and all i end up with is poetry, pooling navy blue in my cupped palms as a reminder to myself that somewhere deep inside the jail cell that my ribs create there might still be a heart and it might still play some small part in my life
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Nov 17, 2013
Nov 17, 2013 at 4:57 PM UTC
fluorescent
Mother may I crawl back inside? A warm place of nothingness. A void of remembrance, lack of life. What future does this path hide? In isolation and loath for kin, it disgusts me. We were the spawn of two ruined shells. Who’s childhood hell could only teach hollowness and disconnect. I’m sick of being rolled like die. Like there’s some uncertainty in where we’ll land. The hand we were cast left an oily darkness no amount of water can wash. I bounce off life’s surface, and experience things seemingly at random as I fly. When we stop we will always find one. Destined to be lonely and hateful like you, and to be confused in the origin of our disposition. It’s not your fault you lead two souls down the red brick road. You both thought you could be normal. Be human. But you’re nothing, just like he and I. You both externalized trauma long past, if sympathy ran in the family I’d share some. We’re all alone, with nothing in common. I just want the alienation and confusion to end. The needles that stick in and ******* bend. Mother? Oh ******* please. Mother may I crawl back and die?
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Feb 24, 2021
Feb 24, 2021 at 1:38 AM UTC
Mother May I
One who is possessive of Love is nothing shy of Narcissistic: for, what is selfish Love but externalized vanity? Love lets 'as is' be. Not because it yields or compromises, but because it knows that to alter another for oneself is a form of vanity. True Love is unconditional. Which, itself, seems uncaring. But, quite the opposite is true. You must change yourself instead. Have the courage to be your own control group. Otherwise: get in whichever over-generalized, socially acceptable line suits you best and wait your turn in somebody else's rigged game.
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Oct 22, 2014
Oct 22, 2014 at 3:34 AM UTC
Harmonization
Last year I was inert, A desert of my own A planet out of orb I saw things from a distance I felt things, only safely And I only did things When no one was looking But I grew, boy, did I grow Like a ***** breaking forth From a sidewalk crack I externalized a long held internal scream And I let, Yes, I allowed Myself to beam To show the world The very best and the very worst Parts of me These days, I refuse to feel shame For the things about me That are less than I am broken and beautiful Incomplete on my own, yet strong And I refuse to hide myself In fear of being attacked by an onslaught of criticisms, Telling me of everything about myself that is wrong But I choose to take the risk, Everyday, To walk out into this world, Armorless and brave So maybe I will have the chance To reach out to an ailing heart, Like I once had, And help those hurt people to see that They are so loved, By Jesus And that in Him we are made complete.
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Jul 20, 2017
Jul 20, 2017 at 10:38 PM UTC
Inert
stop trying to be a **** poet w a cute rhyme and start writing like some deep, faster-than-light angular gut feeling has struck you so ******* true you've no other choice but to track it down w a derivative but necessary assembly of abstract externalized thoughtscrapers in the vain attempt to capture a mere sliver of it so to remember and summon it come those inevitable dark days which loom ahead, or whatever
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Dec 3, 2015
Dec 3, 2015 at 3:14 PM UTC
goodbye poetry