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"errored" poems
Mock not my indiscretions. Much can come from errored choice. lessons oft come by misdirection, So give me not the taunting voice. Ask me when I am older If my dreams have proven true. Perhaps by then shall I be bolder, Humbled e'en, maybe grateful too. Should I never reach that status Hold me not with disrespect. Ask instead how life would shape us Were we all so circumspect. Do love me please for what I am. Hold me dear for all I give you. I really do the best I can, Judge me not on what I should do.
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Sep 8, 2010
Sep 8, 2010 at 1:08 AM UTC
Growing up
Incompossible <>   not mutually possible: INCONSISTENT, INCOMPATIBLE <> inconsistent, yes, incompatible, never *we have lived and loved each other since a singular moment in grade school profound! (what a perfect compositional word!) friendship, intuitively embraced, circumstances dictated an on/off interspersed coexistence decades in length, a hit or miss geographical distancing, thst technology overcame with no evaporative loss of  sensational connectivity across great times and greater distances we trialed and errored our landlines, for a time, we lived together, then nearby, with other spouses, who knew and tolerated, our exceptional to the rules of coexistences, we were closer than close, the space between us was of wafer size, nearly invisible to the naked eyes of others, but unchanging as much as it was unique and uncharted periods of absence of years measurable and the first conversation began exactly where the long ago prior had ceased never fully accepted, surely not ever fully tolerated + understood, we stumbled upon a word, incompossible that captured the drama, the hopefulness, the hopelessness of our separated conjoining as a summary perfect of us a true tale, a novel of pro-found loss and gain that cannot be be told or totaled, a sum of summary, an unavowed marriage of souls with no legality, and yet by its very in-completed nature, it was perfected by it's very unending undefinable defiance of definition: we made the incompossible, possible, the incompatible, patible, unfounded by circumstances, unbounded in our intuition, we yet live in a hopeful state of unfulfilled totality of* almost fufillment
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May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025 at 2:23 PM UTC
Incompossible
Incompossible <>   not mutually possible: INCONSISTENT, INCOMPATIBLE <> inconsistent, yes, incompatible, never *we have lived and loved each other since a singular moment in grade school profound! (what a perfect compositional word!) friendship, intuitively embraced, circumstances dictated an on/off interspersed coexistence decades in length, a hit or miss geographical distancing, thst technology overcame with no evaporative loss of  sensational connectivity across great times and greater distances we trialed and errored our landlines, for a time, we lived together, then nearby, with other spouses, who knew and tolerated, our exceptional to the rules of coexistences, we were closer than close, the space between us was of wafer size, nearly invisible to the naked eyes of others, but unchanging as much as it was unique and uncharted periods of absence of years measurable and the first conversation began exactly where the long ago prior had ceased never fully accepted, surely not ever fully tolerated + understood, we stumbled upon a word, incompossible that captured the drama, the hopefulness, the hopelessness of our separated conjoining as a summary perfect of us a true tale, a novel of pro-found loss and gain that cannot be be told or totaled, a sum of summary, an unavowed marriage of souls with no legality, and yet by its very in-completed nature, it was perfected by it's very unending undefinable defiance of definition: we made the incompossible, possible, the incompatible, patible, unfounded by circumstances, unbounded in our intuition, we yet live in a hopeful state of unfulfilled totality of* almost fufillment
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I tripped along the railroad tracks trying to escape from your trespasses of my trust; trotting t'wards that treasure I hid on a trail beyond those trees there. Triggered by treachery, the truth in these tribulations trialed and errored and transformed.. Tricky triumph, trifle ***** I tripped along the railroad tracks.
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Jun 21, 2018
Jun 21, 2018 at 3:39 AM UTC
Love Train, A Travesty.
When I was down, You lifted me up. When I errored , You forgave. When I was sick, You received me in your arms. When I was lonely, You reminded me, "I am always with you." When my broken heart despaired, You healed me with your Love. When I did all that I could and wanted to quit, You carried me. Lifting me securely into your arms. When I learned to see you I found you in everyone's eyes. Divine Love, I love you. Within my heart of hearts,   As one Love,  never ever will we part. Oh my beautiful Divine Love Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
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May 17, 2020
May 17, 2020 at 2:01 PM UTC
Divine Love
grit on my face…damn! <> city boy,  progeny of the multi-cultures any new yorker breathes, the grit fills in the mini pores, but even better, the lines and the deep furrowed creases of squinting worries, inherent and inherited from years of peering into the future whose outcomes always fell outside the range of ordinary misperceptions and into the realms of extraordinarily ordinary… even the grit and the grip of grief, cause and consequence of my endless errored foreseeing, equally crinkly when smiling and/or grimacing, for I read what I have written smilingly, and grimace with the unknown knowledge yet within, there is more to come, but from who knows where or when, and the grit hardened exterior groans with the thrill of pulling and purging yet more words from the Sea of Churn, whose burning sensations brings cherried sundae of mixed anxious trepidations and a groan of relief when the work of words is done and done & delivered, and yet: (that fearsome worded curse) sadly seeds the junkies need for the next fix… and my lips issue a pleasured **** 7:59am Sabbath Sat. 29 June 2024
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Jun 29, 2024
Jun 29, 2024 at 8:25 AM UTC
grit on my face...damn!
I am just like you pretty when I was born beautiful when I grew I was just a person walking on God's creation living life with His certain my color should not matter we are the colors in His crayon box mixed and matched, to create a splatter as it takes form our blood bleeds the same red His painting of perfection has lead to the now the intelligence He bestowed upon us perhaps He errored in trusting us I can envision His hand wiping the palate clean a tear rolls down His mighty cheek Heart broken from what He,s seen
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Nov 3, 2017
Nov 3, 2017 at 9:33 PM UTC
His Tear