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If not for hellopoetry I would have given up The writing was starting to take its toll Left me emotionally exhausted I was forced to take a break For all my energy it had drained Sleepless nights, endless lines Trying to switch off my brain Left me depressed When sentences formed A story I'd tell About my life in hell Sometimes dramatised to a new level Sometimes I have seen myself become the devil All my emotions that stain the page The blood, sweat and tears Written into each line Left me losing moments in time And for this writing became a crime Didn't feel like I was utilising my mind Until recently I realised this was the only legacy I would leave behind I've seen this art in a whole new light Through words on a page, I've shown my fight I've shown all my emotions, I have been totally open Gave my all in every line Sprinkled in a flavour of rhyme If not for hellopoetry all I'd have is blank pages A mind full of lines, forgotten in time Took some time to unwind And that is when I realised These writings and I are bound for life I've learned to embrace this now Finally proud of all my works, how has it taken me this long To fall in love with this art If not for hellopoetry An appreciation I would never have tasted And this whole community I've embraced it Don't care if you love or hate it It's made me make some changes If not for hellopoetry There are talents I may never have uncovered Some of us are still so young, Still, more room left to improve The elder ones raising us up Understanding a whole new love for this art I once said These lyrics were written in blood Straight from the arteries from my heart That metaphorically speaking I spread all I am, all across the page Bled the led with what I felt   So much heart into every verse All this time it was never a curse It was something special I've been gifted To get all these thoughts out of my system If not for hellopoetry I wouldn't be here...caught within this poetic atmosphere ©2018 Written By Benji James
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Apr 2, 2018
Apr 2, 2018 at 2:18 AM UTC
If not for Hellopoetry
If not for hellopoetry I would have given up The writing was starting to take its toll Left me emotionally exhausted I was forced to take a break For all my energy it had drained Sleepless nights, endless lines Trying to switch off my brain Left me depressed When sentences formed A story I'd tell About my life in hell Sometimes dramatised to a new level Sometimes I have seen myself become the devil All my emotions that stain the page The blood, sweat and tears Written into each line Left me losing moments in time And for this writing became a crime Didn't feel like I was utilising my mind Until recently I realised this was the only legacy I would leave behind I've seen this art in a whole new light Through words on a page, I've shown my fight I've shown all my emotions, I have been totally open Gave my all in every line Sprinkled in a flavour of rhyme If not for hellopoetry all I'd have is blank pages A mind full of lines, forgotten in time Took some time to unwind And that is when I realised These writings and I are bound for life I've learned to embrace this now Finally proud of all my works, how has it taken me this long To fall in love with this art If not for hellopoetry An appreciation I would never have tasted And this whole community I've embraced it Don't care if you love or hate it It's made me make some changes If not for hellopoetry There are talents I may never have uncovered Some of us are still so young, Still, more room left to improve The elder ones raising us up Understanding a whole new love for this art I once said These lyrics were written in blood Straight from the arteries from my heart That metaphorically speaking I spread all I am, all across the page Bled the led with what I felt   So much heart into every verse All this time it was never a curse It was something special I've been gifted To get all these thoughts out of my system If not for hellopoetry I wouldn't be here...caught within this poetic atmosphere ©2018 Written By Benji James
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People say it's all, In our minds, Over-dramatised, But this, Is bigger than us, And they never saw, The bloodshed
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Apr 2, 2011
Apr 2, 2011 at 1:40 AM UTC
Bloodshed
Breathe In, Breathe Out Breathe In, Breathe Out The background silence is deafening against the sound of your own awful struggle. The inevitable is patiently waiting in a darkened corner of the room as we sit around your bed in reluctant readiness. A noble hardy vigil but one that, unlike the others, I must confess is new to me. I had consciously avoided receiving death all my adult life and now here, my greatest champion and comfort was being dragged into the snare. The last hours were truly stifling - I wanted to scream my lungs out and tear down the walls. How could it have come to this ******* pitiful ending? But no, knowing your calm patient Christian ways the only righteous path for you my sweet, was to take your hand and whisper our last words of love to you. It was the only way for you, mother. Death is not the stuff of over-dramatised fiction, it's the quietest test we face for those we love.
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Nov 7, 2018
Nov 7, 2018 at 10:21 AM UTC
Room #9
*in a dream, treading lightly, instilled by the near to bloom magnolia tree, in dream the same magnolia, although dramatised to a near-fluorescent blush, among other flowers whether in shrub, singled-out stalks, or trees (like the magnolia); then being dragged into a room full of people i once could claim to know without added nostalgia i ascribed more to the locations i knew them in, sitting naked, arguing, resorting to punch one of them in the face and then seeing blackness of my eyelids, hearing the clock tick tock tick tock.* narayan's mantra, repeated 19 times, with the head slightly tilted to ease the larynx and open the nasal cavity; the mantra? ōm nāhmāh nārāyānnah                                ōm nāhmāh nārāyānnah ōm nāhmāh nārāyānnah.
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Feb 13, 2016
Feb 13, 2016 at 3:56 PM UTC
Narayan's Mantra