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fem in isms, i imagine Sapphic eyes: bad *** advert coruscates elite fairness sensing slavish blind in gestate calm affirm in genders More numerous of Windows-- Superior--for Doors-- O harsh judgement foiled, as a foil, as unknown truth foil-doubles in the brow, abject symmetry to systemize a fertile lack of sterile barrenness, i am a mediatrix rend, nirwaan, hijra wonderment aside from transemotion's ground swells demeaning to be understood. i celebrate and face the same to be what paperwork tests being normal being, freely chosen atom each belonging moves an asterisk of paths of mutate art of nature social darwin maze. i imagine Sapphic eyes, ginko soft they pile up all cobble memories themselves concretely cloistered fame spray of salty waves, macho screams symbol for dismissal ease for tearing at an inner unsaid war with lists offense of proper taste to what posterity intends an undulation womblike seeming nourish safety sounds. i imagine Sapphic eyes past debauched meanderings where hyster-clarity rejoins its titular and reliable escapisms curl the lips of maleness found here and there  smile  sneer love i imagine Sapphic eyes linguistic pirouettes congest that wisdom nonetheless the moment passed  on to a feigning truth in pretty rhyme ornamenting time with fine  meter  fine vernacular chimes peter in to juggle perspectival paradox, redichotomize the twilight idols, resolve the conflict like a dawn Aurora, i imagine Sapphic eyes running plastic with Alaskan wolves, toga floats to snow to let us see the purest fairness form a ****** circle, Hypatia ascends from tenebrous grave, Impregnable of Eye is pregnant now with Wollstonecraft revered in liberation's fount families held exemplar gaze of Taylor, ****** Cady, Anthony resanctified to vote entitlement's empathic origins, waxen mold of nascent categories, narrow hands spread wide to panoply anew the manifest evolve in true unknowns
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Nov 23, 2012
Nov 23, 2012 at 11:56 PM UTC
i imagine Sapphic eyes
fem in isms, i imagine Sapphic eyes: bad *** advert coruscates elite fairness sensing slavish blind in gestate calm affirm in genders More numerous of Windows-- Superior--for Doors-- O harsh judgement foiled, as a foil, as unknown truth foil-doubles in the brow, abject symmetry to systemize a fertile lack of sterile barrenness, i am a mediatrix rend, nirwaan, hijra wonderment aside from transemotion's ground swells demeaning to be understood. i celebrate and face the same to be what paperwork tests being normal being, freely chosen atom each belonging moves an asterisk of paths of mutate art of nature social darwin maze. i imagine Sapphic eyes, ginko soft they pile up all cobble memories themselves concretely cloistered fame spray of salty waves, macho screams symbol for dismissal ease for tearing at an inner unsaid war with lists offense of proper taste to what posterity intends an undulation womblike seeming nourish safety sounds. i imagine Sapphic eyes past debauched meanderings where hyster-clarity rejoins its titular and reliable escapisms curl the lips of maleness found here and there  smile  sneer love i imagine Sapphic eyes linguistic pirouettes congest that wisdom nonetheless the moment passed  on to a feigning truth in pretty rhyme ornamenting time with fine  meter  fine vernacular chimes peter in to juggle perspectival paradox, redichotomize the twilight idols, resolve the conflict like a dawn Aurora, i imagine Sapphic eyes running plastic with Alaskan wolves, toga floats to snow to let us see the purest fairness form a ****** circle, Hypatia ascends from tenebrous grave, Impregnable of Eye is pregnant now with Wollstonecraft revered in liberation's fount families held exemplar gaze of Taylor, ****** Cady, Anthony resanctified to vote entitlement's empathic origins, waxen mold of nascent categories, narrow hands spread wide to panoply anew the manifest evolve in true unknowns
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Accomplishment Milestones Completion...of a step What does it mean to be done Is there such a thing? Sometimes the moment of doneness passes by                  Invisible Revealed only in hindsight Savor the moments Of completion Accomplishment Being done Even if only of this step The best laid plans can always go awry So celebrate along the way Celebrate the effort The intention The support you receive Doneness as you expected may never come to pass If it does You will more concretely see                                                     all the steps it took to get there Either way We all benefit From celebrating milestones All the steps along the way Whether that means dreaming an idea Or completing a voyage Across a sea Intact
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Sep 1, 2021
Sep 1, 2021 at 8:24 PM UTC
Steps along the way
You ask me how I find the time, But time is not the issue, For they, are all prepared, needing only recognition, For they, are all in readiness, needing only composition I see a toddler swaying, see him to disaster lurching, Somehow avoided with last second seer-like swerving, Ten times in a ten foot walk across a patio, My eyes code red at the incredible risk/reward ratio, It is nature at it most incredible, miraculous, ordinariness A young girl of ten wears a pocketbook across her forearm, In the style of an elderly woman, as she plays with Barbie, Tho her body immature, her psyche, says note my Iconology, her accoutrement, texts a message subtly, I am preteen, I am near woman, treat me accordingly Dueling iPads in bed is a poem in my head, rhymes accurate of screen reflections of an X factor that stimulates my cerebral cortex. Verbal ointment that I posses can't fix a flat tire, but sets me up for a personal review, self awareness Gone mad and with finger, on gas station floor, In the grime, words are realized/written concretely, what my heart speaks freely Within each day, miracles present themselves, Gauntlets thrown, note them well and be justified, Visions, external to my physical self, Yet product of internal chemical reactions That blow through my veins, swirling, Word leaves, on a November weekend, Windswept from a thousand directions, So you ask me how I find the time, The question proper be amended, How do the times find me, How do I know them, And why, do I share them
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May 21, 2013
May 21, 2013 at 1:14 PM UTC
You ask me how I find the time to write, ask how do the times find me...
You ask me how I find the time, But time is not the issue, For they, are all prepared, needing only recognition, For they, are all in readiness, needing only composition I see a toddler swaying, see him to disaster lurching, Somehow avoided with last second seer-like swerving, Ten times in a ten foot walk across a patio, My eyes code red at the incredible risk/reward ratio, It is nature at it most incredible, miraculous, ordinariness A young girl of ten wears a pocketbook across her forearm, In the style of an elderly woman, as she plays with Barbie, Tho her body immature, her psyche, says note my Iconology, her accoutrement, texts a message subtly, I am preteen, I am near woman, treat me accordingly Dueling iPads in bed is a poem in my head, rhymes accurate of screen reflections of an X factor that stimulates my cerebral cortex. Verbal ointment that I posses can't fix a flat tire, but sets me up for a personal review, self awareness Gone mad and with finger, on gas station floor, In the grime, words are realized/written concretely, what my heart speaks freely Within each day, miracles present themselves, Gauntlets thrown, note them well and be justified, Visions, external to my physical self, Yet product of internal chemical reactions That blow through my veins, swirling, Word leaves, on a November weekend, Windswept from a thousand directions, So you ask me how I find the time, The question proper be amended, How do the times find me, How do I know them, And why, do I share them
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ginko soft they pile, strewn on cobble memories themselves concretely devised cloister inward, revise, revise, revise: debauched meanderings fully marble escapes to curl the lip, adorable here and there, whether smile sneer incise linguistic pirouettes or paler lies congest that wisdom indefinable -- the moment past moves on to feigning truth with pretty rhyme, for ornamenting time with myths to filter in an Avalon, juggle perspectival paradoxic ruth with fine meter fine, vernacular chimes, and resolve the conflict like a dawn
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Dec 2, 2012
Dec 2, 2012 at 9:47 AM UTC
clarity rejoins its titulars (little Petrarchan song)
trapped beneath a fitted rubber sheet a lump in the mattress suffocating on rancid latex sweat and yesterday's dried fluids who were they the nameless in the dark this one smelled of popcorn that on howled in delight a collage of senseless noise scented by cats and Ajax leftovers always go bad Chuck-will's-widow in the tree by the window it must be after midnight though noon looks the same in this cage that gives just enough to torture with possibilities of breaking free freedom is overrated roses stain glass with the bloodletting of thorny mishaps blurred by smeared wounds ain't life grand when love ceases to be a goal how can one find what is utterly indefinable if it cannot be decisively named it cannot be concretely attained then again, love's fluidity is its charm no hard edges ebbing and flowing elusive and longing **** me latex blind unseen and used by those who never did mind a lumpy mattress
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Apr 13, 2018
Apr 13, 2018 at 4:10 PM UTC
Loveless, Sexless, Lifeless, and Free
Sprouting from a loamy soil a small green leaf does toil Working its way above the earth Stretching out, to shake off dirt Upon arrival, does the Sun grant it Life, it has begun Per single word, upon a page it's gift to Man, belies its age It bleeds upon parchment white and dances in the pale moon light as the world begins to mellow so dies the parchment, turns to yellow Here it comes, this digital age where mathematical genius is Mage Electricity feeds upon our brains Riding currents with glittered reigns Gifting of our temporal lobe Emotions waiting to implode Hark, the buzz of midnight writ behind glass screens, magically lit are words that are concretely bound in empty ether, rooting for ground Soothing are the songs of Soul that find they're way from a hole If nothing ever comes, but Hope Our words are but a slippery slope
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Oct 18, 2013
Oct 18, 2013 at 1:57 AM UTC
Poetry ~ pəʊɪtri ~ a noun
Here is the object, the object of my heart, With a description, let us start, A subtle depiction, let the vague depart. Travelling through my mind I am a seer. I’m in love with an idea, This idea is an untouchable spectre, And with my intuitive detector, I detect its origin, it’s in my soul, But now with the desire coming in, Coming in in bounds and flicks and one mighty roll, I remember what the silence stole, The silence of this concept, And I reflect, on the reason why no answer is coming, I must stave off this crumbling, Crumbling of my heart, must keep it beating and drumming. Oh why is it so unforthcoming? Because I can’t imagine the words of another, It would only be another word from my mind. And I find, and I discover, This idea is love with intricacy, Such a delectable delicacy. I feel it in its immediacy, Concretely. But initially, lacking intimacy. Where do I turn to find such a thing? A connection beyond the cogitations, With passionate love to bring, A reflection of my desideration’s. Consecrations of the heartbeats, Longing is strong and hope never retreats. You can do no wrong with love in your being, That is what the world needs For us to sow seeds, But that’s not what I’m seeing, I gander but do not witness, The sprouts of love and peace, Let’s plant them in the stillness, And feel the release, The seed that will grow, Soon they will show, And grow in emotive ways, It never decays, Come on now let’s increase, All of our compassion and empathy, We are not each other enemy. A sudden caprice, I feel it now and it is correct, It’s helping me to connect. And we need that so much more than you think, For when we’re all gone and others remain, The world will drink, Our blood and our sweat and our pain. It’s time to regain, Our courage, let us stand tall, And let forgiveness enthrall.
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Jun 18, 2015
Jun 18, 2015 at 5:59 PM UTC
Here is the Object, the Object of my Heart.
Here is the object, the object of my heart, With a description, let us start, A subtle depiction, let the vague depart. Travelling through my mind I am a seer. I’m in love with an idea, This idea is an untouchable spectre, And with my intuitive detector, I detect its origin, it’s in my soul, But now with the desire coming in, Coming in in bounds and flicks and one mighty roll, I remember what the silence stole, The silence of this concept, And I reflect, on the reason why no answer is coming, I must stave off this crumbling, Crumbling of my heart, must keep it beating and drumming. Oh why is it so unforthcoming? Because I can’t imagine the words of another, It would only be another word from my mind. And I find, and I discover, This idea is love with intricacy, Such a delectable delicacy. I feel it in its immediacy, Concretely. But initially, lacking intimacy. Where do I turn to find such a thing? A connection beyond the cogitations, With passionate love to bring, A reflection of my desideration’s. Consecrations of the heartbeats, Longing is strong and hope never retreats. You can do no wrong with love in your being, That is what the world needs For us to sow seeds, But that’s not what I’m seeing, I gander but do not witness, The sprouts of love and peace, Let’s plant them in the stillness, And feel the release, The seed that will grow, Soon they will show, And grow in emotive ways, It never decays, Come on now let’s increase, All of our compassion and empathy, We are not each other enemy. A sudden caprice, I feel it now and it is correct, It’s helping me to connect. And we need that so much more than you think, For when we’re all gone and others remain, The world will drink, Our blood and our sweat and our pain. It’s time to regain, Our courage, let us stand tall, And let forgiveness enthrall.
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Freedom is simply a façade to the fact that we are all slaves to ourselves. Beauty is only genuine in our material creations. Beauty is something that we have conjured in our polluted minds, as a stepping stone for hope of something better and concretely pleasing. Oasis’s were created to give us peace of mind from the terrors of the rest of the world, but while we sit and admire the soft billow of the wind, and the gentle grace displayed by the adolescent creatures that appear out of the creek, the tornado of destruction lives on inside each and every one of our forlorn and despair ridden souls, creating what is the rest of a fearful society, fretting the day they carry their misery over to the realm of the next. Benevolence is foreign. So disperse yourself if you wish in blissful ignorance, worrying only about the direction of the cool breeze that playfully tassels your strands, but dare ye turn blind to the authentic substance this cruel cycle of life and existence, understanding will never become native in your heart.
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Apr 9, 2013
Apr 9, 2013 at 2:55 PM UTC
Optimism is an Illusion.
*this feeling of emptiness, this state of being, isn’t a conflict between feeling dead and alive. it’s more an ethereal, metaphysical sensation of not really being here. in the past two years I’ve changed identities more often than I have had the chance to find out whether the mould fits. I’m adaptable, for sure. disciplining my thoughts and personalities towards serving productive ends. I know how to give people the me they want - the happy, loving, family me; the productive, efficient, smart me; the me that’s gotten her **** together; the me who has her life in order. but I feel amorphous. shapeless. less and less anthropomorphic. less and less concretely human. as I focus on the tangible accomplishments, on numbers and approving looks. as I condition myself in a certain way to succeed, I feel like I’m losing something concretely human. an element of constancy in my personality, a key indicator of concrete humanness. it’s not that I’m spineless - I know how the world values the opinionated, the fiercely independent. I just feel faceless. shapeless. no identity. no humanness. no concrete indicator that I’m actually here, in the real world. that me existing as me - whoever she is - counts for something.*
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Sep 27, 2016
Sep 27, 2016 at 9:49 AM UTC
faceless
***You ask me how I find the time, But time is not the issue, For they, are all prepared, needing only recognition, For they, are all in readiness, needing only composition*** I see a toddler swaying, see him to disaster lurching, Somehow avoided with last second seer-like swerving, Ten times in a ten foot walk across a pool's patio, My eyes code red at the incredible risk/reward ratio, It is nature at it most incredible, miraculous ordinariness A young girl of ten wears a pocketbook across her forearm, In the style of an elderly woman, as she plays with Barbie, Tho her body immature, her psyche, says note my Iconology, her accoutrement, texts a message subtly, I am preteen, I am near woman, treat me accordingly Dueling iPads in bed is a poem in my head, rhymes accurate of screen reflections of an X factor that stimulates my cerebral cortex Verbal ointment that I posses can't fix a flat tire, yet sets me up for a personal review, a self awareness, Gone mad, I am, and with finger, on a gas station floor, In the grime, words are realized/written concretely, what my heart speaks freely Within each day, miracles present themselves, Gauntlets thrown, note them well and be justified, Visions, external to my physical self, Yet product of internal chemical reactions That blow through my veins, swirling, Word leaves, on a November weekend, Windswept from a thousand directions, ***So you ask me how I find the time, The question proper be amended, How do the times find me, How do I know them, And why, do I share them*** <> May 21, 2013
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Jul 15, 2016
Jul 15, 2016 at 5:54 PM UTC
You ask me how I find the time to write; ask how do the times find me...
***You ask me how I find the time, But time is not the issue, For they, are all prepared, needing only recognition, For they, are all in readiness, needing only composition*** I see a toddler swaying, see him to disaster lurching, Somehow avoided with last second seer-like swerving, Ten times in a ten foot walk across a pool's patio, My eyes code red at the incredible risk/reward ratio, It is nature at it most incredible, miraculous ordinariness A young girl of ten wears a pocketbook across her forearm, In the style of an elderly woman, as she plays with Barbie, Tho her body immature, her psyche, says note my Iconology, her accoutrement, texts a message subtly, I am preteen, I am near woman, treat me accordingly Dueling iPads in bed is a poem in my head, rhymes accurate of screen reflections of an X factor that stimulates my cerebral cortex Verbal ointment that I posses can't fix a flat tire, yet sets me up for a personal review, a self awareness, Gone mad, I am, and with finger, on a gas station floor, In the grime, words are realized/written concretely, what my heart speaks freely Within each day, miracles present themselves, Gauntlets thrown, note them well and be justified, Visions, external to my physical self, Yet product of internal chemical reactions That blow through my veins, swirling, Word leaves, on a November weekend, Windswept from a thousand directions, ***So you ask me how I find the time, The question proper be amended, How do the times find me, How do I know them, And why, do I share them*** <> May 21, 2013
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Unmotivated by mundane I mirrored minds Meta- Contrived cognition was the condition To compose concretely the matterful agenda Lines are only written When stimulating inhibition So I brewed up a prescription To allow me a peace of mind Branching out like a child During the first day of school I pondered intently a question Already dismissed by fools Last lucid breath lingers Is it inception or indifference Fitting finale or frightening fallacy Eloquently exposed, exemption of esperance
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Mar 22, 2012
Mar 22, 2012 at 8:56 PM UTC
Life and Coffee
If I ever have children I’ll teach them about god On Family road trips In a mini-van With a candy wrapper carpet And warm melted crayons In the seats grand canyons As the Arizona sun sets Over the Copper State Where you could almost swear It was the red dusted desert Painting the sky Rain-less-bows of color With broken butte brush stroke Across the restless desert As you twist around in your seat-belted Body of eight years old To the rearview window Of an AC blasted Softly singing stereo Escaping out gaping windows Leaving nothing behind But a heatwave Trying to settle down Tire teased dust For the evening stretch ahead That you think might never end As if god was using the road as a string He had tied tightly to the family car Carving the way though Salty cactuses drinking licks of sand left by Dirt devils dancing across the graves of Lizards Who pretended they didn't exist But couldn’t fool the hawks Who watched and waited For more than just a lost tail Or a forgotten story But something clay Concretely carved in to caves and caverns With rock and bone Something solid to hold on to But my children need to know That an existence is a slippery thing Like the color from the buttes As it slowly drips off the sky And back into the sand Leaving speckles of white Freckling the blackness Swirled with little Tizzles of light As homage to the desert moon Whose crying stars for Coyotes Howling in time To the crickets metronomic harmonies   Singing the desert back from its camouflage Life bursting breath though The earth cast shadows Breathing heart beats across the land That's just been Brought back to living And if I ever have children I'll teach them That this road will never end At least not where we expect it to Because god Isn’t who We make him to be He Doesn’t string us along a road But he holds the world on a string                                                           The End.
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Apr 25, 2012
Apr 25, 2012 at 12:58 PM UTC
Strung Up
If I ever have children I’ll teach them about god On Family road trips In a mini-van With a candy wrapper carpet And warm melted crayons In the seats grand canyons As the Arizona sun sets Over the Copper State Where you could almost swear It was the red dusted desert Painting the sky Rain-less-bows of color With broken butte brush stroke Across the restless desert As you twist around in your seat-belted Body of eight years old To the rearview window Of an AC blasted Softly singing stereo Escaping out gaping windows Leaving nothing behind But a heatwave Trying to settle down Tire teased dust For the evening stretch ahead That you think might never end As if god was using the road as a string He had tied tightly to the family car Carving the way though Salty cactuses drinking licks of sand left by Dirt devils dancing across the graves of Lizards Who pretended they didn't exist But couldn’t fool the hawks Who watched and waited For more than just a lost tail Or a forgotten story But something clay Concretely carved in to caves and caverns With rock and bone Something solid to hold on to But my children need to know That an existence is a slippery thing Like the color from the buttes As it slowly drips off the sky And back into the sand Leaving speckles of white Freckling the blackness Swirled with little Tizzles of light As homage to the desert moon Whose crying stars for Coyotes Howling in time To the crickets metronomic harmonies   Singing the desert back from its camouflage Life bursting breath though The earth cast shadows Breathing heart beats across the land That's just been Brought back to living And if I ever have children I'll teach them That this road will never end At least not where we expect it to Because god Isn’t who We make him to be He Doesn’t string us along a road But he holds the world on a string                                                           The End.
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Maybe if I defined it I could achieve it concretely I just want a little credit From my own racing mind And an OK to take a break With out the guilty looks from inside
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Dec 23, 2016
Dec 23, 2016 at 3:35 PM UTC
Productivity
I'm a Yankee in the South Far from where I was bo-ahn, Th' other half of this Country stout, But not where I'd call home. I talk too fast and walk too fast And speak with easy grin; And every word that I say once I must repeat again! If you're black you're Black, down he-ah, and if you're white, you're White; I don't fit well, I'm mostly brown, They just don't feel it's right. I work each Sunday in the sto-ah, I do the work of three; Back home I went to Sunday Mass And Godless they call me. Godless Yank, I'm rude, I'm cold, I started the great War - (Not our Great War, you see, but one that came somewhat befo-ah). I've tried their greens, I've tried their grits, I've had biscuits n' gravy, Oh what I'd give for chowdah hot Or some lobstah tasty! I like my tea, I like it hot, Not sickly-sweet and iced, Brew it black and brew it strong - No  sweeter will suffice. Well, I'm a Yankee in the South, But I wish I'd never gone. So in a month I'll pack me up And home I'll be 'fore long! I'll eat cannolli in North End, I'll visit Fenway Pahk, I'll watch the city glow with light The minute it gets dahk. I'll roam the rivers, fields and woods, All dusted up with snow; The northern bogs, the stony beaches, That's what I call home! I never should have come, I sweah, I'll never go again; There's plenty here to tide a girl A hundred years and ten. The long-sought day has dawned at last, And now we'll sally forth, So clear and a bit chilly, it's A promise of the North. We drove and drove and drove again, And then we drove some mo-ah, We started out at ten to six, And now it's half-past **** And when I'm shovelin' the snow, Cursing potholes in the road, I'll think of all the Southern folk And smile at every load! Well we're home again, we're home at last, I won't leave anymo-ah, I've proved without a doubt there is Nuthin' to leave it **** Well, I was a Yankee in the South, It's not what I'd call nice, And now I can concretely say I wouldn't do it twice!
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Apr 30, 2016
Apr 30, 2016 at 4:45 PM UTC
The Displaced Yankee
I'm a Yankee in the South Far from where I was bo-ahn, Th' other half of this Country stout, But not where I'd call home. I talk too fast and walk too fast And speak with easy grin; And every word that I say once I must repeat again! If you're black you're Black, down he-ah, and if you're white, you're White; I don't fit well, I'm mostly brown, They just don't feel it's right. I work each Sunday in the sto-ah, I do the work of three; Back home I went to Sunday Mass And Godless they call me. Godless Yank, I'm rude, I'm cold, I started the great War - (Not our Great War, you see, but one that came somewhat befo-ah). I've tried their greens, I've tried their grits, I've had biscuits n' gravy, Oh what I'd give for chowdah hot Or some lobstah tasty! I like my tea, I like it hot, Not sickly-sweet and iced, Brew it black and brew it strong - No  sweeter will suffice. Well, I'm a Yankee in the South, But I wish I'd never gone. So in a month I'll pack me up And home I'll be 'fore long! I'll eat cannolli in North End, I'll visit Fenway Pahk, I'll watch the city glow with light The minute it gets dahk. I'll roam the rivers, fields and woods, All dusted up with snow; The northern bogs, the stony beaches, That's what I call home! I never should have come, I sweah, I'll never go again; There's plenty here to tide a girl A hundred years and ten. The long-sought day has dawned at last, And now we'll sally forth, So clear and a bit chilly, it's A promise of the North. We drove and drove and drove again, And then we drove some mo-ah, We started out at ten to six, And now it's half-past **** And when I'm shovelin' the snow, Cursing potholes in the road, I'll think of all the Southern folk And smile at every load! Well we're home again, we're home at last, I won't leave anymo-ah, I've proved without a doubt there is Nuthin' to leave it **** Well, I was a Yankee in the South, It's not what I'd call nice, And now I can concretely say I wouldn't do it twice!
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The loops. Intrusion. They permeate. Confusion. All the lies, they arise. I'm advised to realize the illusion. I see them for exactly what they are. Concretely Deceit Disbarred from my mental radar.   you thought you had me? ha! for a while, sure. Now I'm reassured. Yes it's true, you romanced me. Entranced me - for a time. But He has washed away your grime from my mind. you should walk along, forget me. I march with a different heartbeat. you don't fascinate me at all. I absolve myself of everything you stand for you know what's in store. This is war.
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Mar 6, 2021
Mar 6, 2021 at 4:43 PM UTC
This is War
10 billion galaxies in the universe, an average of 100 billion stars in each one of those. That’s 1 billion trillion (that’s a one and 21 zeroes) of stars in the known universe. At least 10 percent of those may have at least 1 planet; that is 100 trillion (that’s a hundred and 18 zeroes) of planets. There might (“might”) be about 11 billion planets similar to ours, of those, we concretely know of about 10 (ten. One one, one zero), that number includes us, and we only know there’s life in one of those 10, us; that is a percentage of 0.000, 000, 000, 000, 000, 001 of 100 trillion. Well, ****
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Mar 28, 2019
Mar 28, 2019 at 7:15 PM UTC
Scale
Why do we keep putting ourselves down Believing in our own lies? How creative are we to fool ourselves with our own words Trusting them as realities. Following my own set of rules to destruction, Craving for validation and people to our own happiness, When happiness is just a state of mind not a result. The culprit, the brainchild, the source, "thoughts". Barriers and walls are broken Beliefs are bent, The mind goes to the hole of confusion, When we realize there were no walls to begin with. All and all being created, Imaginatively, concretely, Each measure of the brick So true and so false. Tricks and games Manipulation and lies All has a reason And all with an end. But embedded in it, Lies a piece of wisdom A wise reaction to the actions An answer to our very "thoughts". This short span of creation called "life" Why do we tend to lead it with worry? To inadequacy and lack of trust, While all we have to do was just to love ourselves. Love ourselves so much till we love every single being. Appreciate each incapabilities as our unique traits, Each failures as our own personalities, Every mistakes as our biggest prizes won. As in these lies our biggest trust to ourselves, To the construction of our own personalities, To the acceptance we so crave for And also, to love and be loved.
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May 25, 2019
May 25, 2019 at 10:30 AM UTC
Us and life
The more concretely you tell a story, the less -- you'll be understood.
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Aug 5, 2024
Aug 5, 2024 at 4:02 AM UTC
[ The more concretely ]
Light, filtered by oak leaves, dances over the translucent surface of my windshield And my windows. In this bubble, pierced by fragments of fuzzy radio white noise, I dive beneath the surface of the sea Surrounded by sharks zooming by, blaring bass throbbing against my ears Then gone all too quickly. I don’t believe I’ve ever been this calm. Driving requires a certain zen: The menial activities of turning the wheel— hands 10 and 2— Pushing down right or left pedal as required, speeding up (Or slowing down) The rushing, trundling, kaleidoscopic world around me. I am omniscient. Feel the energy throbbing beneath my body, the roar of The engine, the pure, Unaltered power of the Cogs and Pistons. I control this segment of my life absolutely, concretely. You Could argue it’s the only thing I do control at all. This leaves my mind free to remember, to wonder Whether you remember, or wonder at, me. Air conditioning, or windows down?
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Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 12:44 PM UTC
Driving Home on a Saturday Afternoon
Concretely, you are gone I am generations later Reading Your thoughts, Your works. I am grateful! You give me literary sustenance And pleasure, Inspiration and insight... Thank you, writers from the past! I want to do the same, Leave something behind...a picture, A song, or a piece of writing; something Concrete and tangible for posterity... And Will someone like me, who is still To be born Look over my works when I too Are No longer concrete?
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Apr 11, 2016
Apr 11, 2016 at 3:20 AM UTC
Abstract Thought
What happens when you shower in the dark? you can't tell the environment around you, only the soap laddering on your skin, and the streetlight peering into the scene. you don't get to see your arrogance accumulating from loneliness like soap rinse-off left to dry on the ground. the act of showering is to be clean but you can't concretely see your arm so how do you get to cleaning when you can't see? how do you continue to hold on to hope when the feeling of the need of warmth is pushing unto every square inch on you? when you know the moment you turn the shower off that coldness comes rushing in. leaving your skin prickle displaying bumps like that of a feather-plucked chicken readying for the feast. Now you've got to resist, and hopefully they say he would flee. Then you step in front of a mirror, remember its dark. meaning there is nothing to see, but the fog is there to feel bubbling in your face, churning your skin. you know this darkness is not good for you, but you embrace it like well a known friend reeling in its obscurement, applying layers of cream.
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Nov 8, 2021
Nov 8, 2021 at 10:09 AM UTC
showering in the dark
on the stairs in front of the old row house two doors on the front between two Azaleas beautifully displaying their grandeur I sit non-competitive with a thing in this world the paint flaking under my *** on the worn out tongue and groove floor and a tilted brick post supports the roof and I am concretely not caring about peeling paint or the leaky roof or the neighbor's complaining constantly how my Gardenia bushes by the property line so full so gorgeous voluptuously block their view little things don't matter I sweat them off because I got some heavy duty anti-perspirant I cook up myself don't tell the DEA
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Aug 9, 2017
Aug 9, 2017 at 9:06 PM UTC
don't tell the DEA
it's happened already, we know this, for sure but nothing solidifies it more concretely as when i hear you say it to your friends it happened a year ago, completely, for sure because when we both started acting discretely i had already seen two different ends one in which the path would straighten and we'd grow the same way, as before one in which we end up so far apart that it wouldn't matter it might even have healed by now but i didn't anticipate the third or the fourth or the fifth nor the sixth the seventh, eleventh the eighth, the hate the ninth, not mine not even yours, surely because i really care for you, and i don't want you to die i just want us to be honest about what's left of you and i
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Oct 28, 2018
Oct 28, 2018 at 4:00 PM UTC
you and i