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a haw and saw. a thorn. fruit: it is ecstasy never bit and undeniable. you slurp—a cat licking its paws ruby and clear. moth and cloud drape over fruit, make up sparkling nectar. love is sickening. you spend five dollars on a rose at a bar for a girl you will never see again. she will take the flower and throw it in the trash outside with the hundreds of other roses. no matter. they have fruit, and fruit concludes. it is life cut with claws. their beauty, seemingly to be always in the clusters above. **** you, rose. **** your dew.* they seem to say. that’s when the light hits and microbial bleeds to miss ruby. JAZZ! at night retrains beauty, makes it edible. the rose, changing the color of its dew—black pearl in this drape of mystery-shaped night.
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Jul 15, 2017
Jul 15, 2017 at 12:49 PM UTC
a rose changes the colors of its dew
I bought myself a kite to fly I tossed it up and ran around I tried to pull it through the sky But found it just dragged on the ground. It landed in the mud, it was mangled, it was done And thus concludes the tragic tale of the kite I numbered one. My second kite was different. It caught a mighty gale I flew it well, then let it go And in the end I failed. It joined released balloons and leaves, whatever else is there In the ***** lonely cloudland in the out-of-picture air. I still had hope and so I bought My final silken bird I told myself that I would soon Unleash it to the word. The kite's debut date got pushed back and further back until It found a final resting place untested in its skill. I bought myself three kites to fly The first two meet ill fates The third one has a dusty shelf Where it keeps very safe.
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Sep 13, 2018
Sep 13, 2018 at 10:34 PM UTC
Tales of Three Kites
Dear ************           This is the hateful letter. This is the one in which I tell you how much of a ******** you are and how I am so much better off without you, so thanks for leaving me. It was the best thing that ever happened to me. This is where I tell you that you’re an idiot if you ever thought I depended on you for my self-worth, because I don’t need you for validation, and I never have. I was trucking along just fine before you came along, and will continue to do so without you, so you can go **** yourself.           This is the part where I call you a ******* for saying all those things you said. If you weren’t trying to hurt me, you must be an idiot to think that it was a good idea to say what you did. I’ll tell you that it ****** me off to realize that you obviously didn’t know me as well as I thought you did. It ****** me off that our communication was clearly not functioning like it should have been.           And I’ll tell you how ******* livid it makes me that you just sat there and thought and thought and ******* thought about this while I was still writing ******* poems for you. I am angry at how oblivious I was, which I also blame on you. I blame you for being so introspective and quiet, for needing to think important issues through in your head, only with yourself, before you can voice them, and I am angry because you thought and thought and ******* thought and made a decision that was logical from the inside of your head and you were confused by my reaction because, surprise! Owen’s-head-logic is not the same as Katie-is-being-broken-up-with-logic. And that’s where your speech faltered, where I stopped saying the lines that you wrote for me in your script, and that’s when all of those stupid words came tumbling out of your stupid head and things continued to not go as planned and it all eventually cumulated in this: zero contact. I know it’s not what you wanted but you’re a ******* If you were smarter about it, we may still have been talking, but you said all of the exact wrong things. So I am angry at you for hurting me with your idiotic words, but I am also angry at you for pushing me away. I may have liked to still be talking to you, but all of the **** that came out of your mouth just ruined whatever chance we could have had, so way to go. You are a ruiner - and so concludes the part where everything is always your fault.           This is the part where I understand where you’re coming from, I would have broken up with me too if I were you, I know it’s hard for you to put your words together sometimes, I know your (brutal) honesty only comes from a place of love, I know you love me, I know you miss being my friend…and so on.           That last section makes me sadder than I am willing to be at this point, so I think I’ll stick with anger for the time being and you can **** my nonexistent **** ************ Your Ex-Girlfriend.
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Jun 22, 2010
Jun 22, 2010 at 6:33 PM UTC
Love Letter XXIII - Dear ************
Dear ************           This is the hateful letter. This is the one in which I tell you how much of a ******** you are and how I am so much better off without you, so thanks for leaving me. It was the best thing that ever happened to me. This is where I tell you that you’re an idiot if you ever thought I depended on you for my self-worth, because I don’t need you for validation, and I never have. I was trucking along just fine before you came along, and will continue to do so without you, so you can go **** yourself.           This is the part where I call you a ******* for saying all those things you said. If you weren’t trying to hurt me, you must be an idiot to think that it was a good idea to say what you did. I’ll tell you that it ****** me off to realize that you obviously didn’t know me as well as I thought you did. It ****** me off that our communication was clearly not functioning like it should have been.           And I’ll tell you how ******* livid it makes me that you just sat there and thought and thought and ******* thought about this while I was still writing ******* poems for you. I am angry at how oblivious I was, which I also blame on you. I blame you for being so introspective and quiet, for needing to think important issues through in your head, only with yourself, before you can voice them, and I am angry because you thought and thought and ******* thought and made a decision that was logical from the inside of your head and you were confused by my reaction because, surprise! Owen’s-head-logic is not the same as Katie-is-being-broken-up-with-logic. And that’s where your speech faltered, where I stopped saying the lines that you wrote for me in your script, and that’s when all of those stupid words came tumbling out of your stupid head and things continued to not go as planned and it all eventually cumulated in this: zero contact. I know it’s not what you wanted but you’re a ******* If you were smarter about it, we may still have been talking, but you said all of the exact wrong things. So I am angry at you for hurting me with your idiotic words, but I am also angry at you for pushing me away. I may have liked to still be talking to you, but all of the **** that came out of your mouth just ruined whatever chance we could have had, so way to go. You are a ruiner - and so concludes the part where everything is always your fault.           This is the part where I understand where you’re coming from, I would have broken up with me too if I were you, I know it’s hard for you to put your words together sometimes, I know your (brutal) honesty only comes from a place of love, I know you love me, I know you miss being my friend…and so on.           That last section makes me sadder than I am willing to be at this point, so I think I’ll stick with anger for the time being and you can **** my nonexistent **** ************ Your Ex-Girlfriend.
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Sun slits in through slats of kitchen window blinds and she is alone. The art major is cooking spaghetti, pretending her thrifted T-shirt bearing a cotton copy of Campbell's Soup Cans is not stained with tears and blood. Oh, but that's hysterics and hyperbole; art has a tendency of making its worshippers melodramatic...no? The blood is only tomato sauce and the tears... well, what are tears but water and salt? After all, dramatizing the mundane is just one awkward shade of artistic temperament. Visualizing life through a heavy silk screen. The art major sighs and stirs. The spaghetti is redder and redder as she cooks. Just as her paintings bleed more blood as she dangles a brush over them - the teary-eyed watercolours. The art major has decided that drawing out extremities of colour might transform her own life into a pop of a Warhol painting. The art major sighs and stirs. She thinks, tries to think in technicolour. Today's thought-pencilled thesis concludes (like a brush stroke of uncertain finality) that love is the red of tomato soup cans. Anger is the boil, passion is the gulp, danger, caution, warning, the hot breaths, fleeting warmths, the burn and sweet and tang. She looks down at the scarlet of Warhol's soup cans, blooming in worn out cotton on her chest. It might as well be blood, she thinks. It is, it is, it is. Blood red love - tomato soup cans. Sun sets in slits through kitchen window blinds and she is still alone. The art major sighs and stirs. The spaghetti is ready.
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Aug 2, 2015
Aug 2, 2015 at 6:41 AM UTC
Warhol
Sun slits in through slats of kitchen window blinds and she is alone. The art major is cooking spaghetti, pretending her thrifted T-shirt bearing a cotton copy of Campbell's Soup Cans is not stained with tears and blood. Oh, but that's hysterics and hyperbole; art has a tendency of making its worshippers melodramatic...no? The blood is only tomato sauce and the tears... well, what are tears but water and salt? After all, dramatizing the mundane is just one awkward shade of artistic temperament. Visualizing life through a heavy silk screen. The art major sighs and stirs. The spaghetti is redder and redder as she cooks. Just as her paintings bleed more blood as she dangles a brush over them - the teary-eyed watercolours. The art major has decided that drawing out extremities of colour might transform her own life into a pop of a Warhol painting. The art major sighs and stirs. She thinks, tries to think in technicolour. Today's thought-pencilled thesis concludes (like a brush stroke of uncertain finality) that love is the red of tomato soup cans. Anger is the boil, passion is the gulp, danger, caution, warning, the hot breaths, fleeting warmths, the burn and sweet and tang. She looks down at the scarlet of Warhol's soup cans, blooming in worn out cotton on her chest. It might as well be blood, she thinks. It is, it is, it is. Blood red love - tomato soup cans. Sun sets in slits through kitchen window blinds and she is still alone. The art major sighs and stirs. The spaghetti is ready.
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(Rock Lake, Canada) In this country there is neither measure nor balance To redress the dominance of rocks and woods, The passage, say, of these man-shaming clouds. No gesture of yours or mine could catch their attention, No word make them carry water or fire the kindling Like local trolls in the spell of a superior being. Well, one wearies of the Public Gardens: one wants a vacation Where trees and clouds and animals pay no notice; Away from the labeled elms, the tame tea-roses. It took three days driving north to find a cloud The polite skies over Boston couldn't possibly accommodate. Here on the last frontier of the big, brash spirit The horizons are too far off to be chummy as uncles; The colors assert themselves with a sort of vengeance. Each day concludes in a huge splurge of vermilions And night arrives in one gigantic step. It is comfortable, for a change, to mean so little. These rocks offer no purchase to herbage or people: They are conceiving a dynasty of perfect cold. In a month we'll wonder what plates and forks are for. I lean to you, numb as a fossil. Tell me I'm here. The Pilgrims and Indians might never have happened. Planets pulse in the lake like bright amoebas; The pines blot our voices up in their lightest sighs. Around our tent the old simplicities sough Sleepily as Lethe, trying to get in. We'll wake blank-brained as water in the dawn.
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Two Campers In Cloud Country
He gives life At that instant he takes your innocence Born into sin He gives hope And in return takes away your faith in humanity They say your born free He gave us the power of choice But takes our ability to deal with Its consequences Gives us the love Allowing he or she to take our breath away Then give us the strain and tribulations While taking our patience and tolerance Yet our trust he demand He gives us strength and confidence All while stealing our youth And leaving a bigger number at the end of every year What good is wisdom if its carrying the baggage of age What good is ambition if the goal is leaves you crippled He gives us challenges that inevitably take our humility He gives us beauty and talent And in an instant takes our hair, teeth, and skin But leaves us with wrinkles and bad posture and the hope to remain relevant He gives us vanity and punish us the above mentioned Gives us dream and sleepless nights Let's us take chances but what is chance in a predestined existence? Though we create art, music, literature, and monuments He takes credit for its inspiration and crumbles what isn't in his tribute Give homage or else And no true artist is never prime unless there gone and buried He gives mercy in the form ****** And his miracle usually means escaping his wrath Guess I'm ******* Hudini in his eyes He gave us the vastness of the universe to gaze and only gave us a grain of sand to inhabit on his cosmic infinite beach Gives you a soul and let's you promise it to someone you love then betray that promise repeatedly by demanding its salvation in the end Give you the end too soon after the beginning fades away Takes advantage of your ego and feeds it temptation Gives you indulgence to punish your self with Then when all life concludes leaves you and your loved ones with what you were the day before your inception and the day after death Nothing So what is it you want me to praise you for? Guess we'll discuss it if you ever catch us. -XIN-
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Oct 22, 2012
Oct 22, 2012 at 10:01 PM UTC
Gods give and take
He gives life At that instant he takes your innocence Born into sin He gives hope And in return takes away your faith in humanity They say your born free He gave us the power of choice But takes our ability to deal with Its consequences Gives us the love Allowing he or she to take our breath away Then give us the strain and tribulations While taking our patience and tolerance Yet our trust he demand He gives us strength and confidence All while stealing our youth And leaving a bigger number at the end of every year What good is wisdom if its carrying the baggage of age What good is ambition if the goal is leaves you crippled He gives us challenges that inevitably take our humility He gives us beauty and talent And in an instant takes our hair, teeth, and skin But leaves us with wrinkles and bad posture and the hope to remain relevant He gives us vanity and punish us the above mentioned Gives us dream and sleepless nights Let's us take chances but what is chance in a predestined existence? Though we create art, music, literature, and monuments He takes credit for its inspiration and crumbles what isn't in his tribute Give homage or else And no true artist is never prime unless there gone and buried He gives mercy in the form ****** And his miracle usually means escaping his wrath Guess I'm ******* Hudini in his eyes He gave us the vastness of the universe to gaze and only gave us a grain of sand to inhabit on his cosmic infinite beach Gives you a soul and let's you promise it to someone you love then betray that promise repeatedly by demanding its salvation in the end Give you the end too soon after the beginning fades away Takes advantage of your ego and feeds it temptation Gives you indulgence to punish your self with Then when all life concludes leaves you and your loved ones with what you were the day before your inception and the day after death Nothing So what is it you want me to praise you for? Guess we'll discuss it if you ever catch us. -XIN-
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Plan A: there is none as such; though unflinching ego makes complex calculations, concludes, reassures it is best laid for sure. Plan B, hence has no actual relevance A mountain river, life is, it rushes the way the cryptic GPS message directs. If you ask how it works, try to understand the intricate organic correlations, involving factors that  even a super computer can't process but your mind would, somehow easily tell you in a clear voice, if only you are ready to  listen. Every best laid plan is merely a wish the more profound is spoken as a prayer words addressed to the voice inside, that listens and acts fulfillment then, is an emotional construct you need the scent of that flower to inspire life. Who says the cosmic plan is mysterious? One who walks the karma path right, even when eyes closed knows how to reach where one is headed to. The truth this: one leads oneself, so keep the inner eyes open. Subtle wishes that bring smile on the face of thy neighbor are much more meaningful than selfish desires
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Sep 18, 2014
Sep 18, 2014 at 9:36 AM UTC
Hey there, will thy plan stand the cosmic scrutiny?
We live in a straight world. You might not think it’s true, “Gays are coming out everyday could be them next or her, maybe you too” Well I’ll take a minute to prove it to you. If I told you I’m into girls I’d see your brain short circuit in real time, “But you don’t look gay” you’d say. “Straight passing” is what they call a girl like me, who still looks feminine but doesn’t want the D. This “luxury” of remaining in the closet is really hurting my game, Added another straight boy to my list of those who lost it when they heard me exclaim, “I appreciate the offer, but I’m gay” Let’s not forget the most important issue “Gays will ruin the sanctity of marriage” Here, I’ll hand you the tissues. Man and woman, hand in hand, till death do they part, and yet more than half of all marriages end in the perfected art of divorce. Far be it from me, to take anyone’s right to do and say what they want, while you embrace the hate and live fighting the inevitable reality of any queer couple tying the knot. It might be 2018, but I still can’t hold a potential partner’s hand in a public facility without getting disgusted leers and a dreadful look at multiple cases of unprovoked hostility. So, try to look me in the eyes, And tell me I’m not right. But despite it all I’ll keep my head up high And let that rainbow flag fly Because this might be a straight world, But love is love is love is love. And that concludes this winded verse.
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Mar 27, 2018
Mar 27, 2018 at 10:05 PM UTC
Heteronormativity
We live in a straight world. You might not think it’s true, “Gays are coming out everyday could be them next or her, maybe you too” Well I’ll take a minute to prove it to you. If I told you I’m into girls I’d see your brain short circuit in real time, “But you don’t look gay” you’d say. “Straight passing” is what they call a girl like me, who still looks feminine but doesn’t want the D. This “luxury” of remaining in the closet is really hurting my game, Added another straight boy to my list of those who lost it when they heard me exclaim, “I appreciate the offer, but I’m gay” Let’s not forget the most important issue “Gays will ruin the sanctity of marriage” Here, I’ll hand you the tissues. Man and woman, hand in hand, till death do they part, and yet more than half of all marriages end in the perfected art of divorce. Far be it from me, to take anyone’s right to do and say what they want, while you embrace the hate and live fighting the inevitable reality of any queer couple tying the knot. It might be 2018, but I still can’t hold a potential partner’s hand in a public facility without getting disgusted leers and a dreadful look at multiple cases of unprovoked hostility. So, try to look me in the eyes, And tell me I’m not right. But despite it all I’ll keep my head up high And let that rainbow flag fly Because this might be a straight world, But love is love is love is love. And that concludes this winded verse.
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I refuse to continue silently creeping through this empty forest with the only company being my darkest demons. I look down and see only a pathway,        nothing but a never-ending grey haze         I reach a dilemma          as the pathway concludes.           It dawns on me that I must change direction            into a golden meadow of many opportunities             or a black tunnel of nothingness,              where I would no longer feel a thing. I remain indecisive
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Nov 17, 2013
Nov 17, 2013 at 9:36 AM UTC
Pathway
***A Woman's Reflection on Her Reflection (Valence and Value) one poem, written by two authors*** ~~~ **Ever the analyst, A mirror functions as surface to Parse the fleeting constant Of youth's beauty. From genetic gift Of symmetry and bone, To technological tampering, Until the equation is solved, As experience and character Models and maps the result. The answer, a reflection, Of individual valence and value** (written by S.D., a woman) ~~~ (written by N.L., a man) unbidden and unannounced, a "not fully formed poem, but a simple reflection" inbound missile arrives inbox, armed with silent power, the lethality of the Holy Unexpected the man reflects on her mirror-on-the-wall's fulsome reply, parsing the words of a woman's reflection, while gazing on her own every human's momentary glass notation, but an instance of summation, a human poem, whose editing, unceasing a comma here, a period inserted, an eye shadowed, an eyebrow tweezed, a eye dark circle line added, to tree-mark time's authorship all  these but a person's excerpted extraction, notarized, then auto-erased and revised, as out of date,   instantaneously compromised but, ***it is upon  the conceptual, valence and value, more that the man reflects perpetual, less on transitory morphing changes of exterior mortality while overlooking her glassine realization from behind, he concludes: every reflection, no matter how oft the snapshot, the unfleeting constancy of the combining of the princes of principles, valence and value that he witnesses, in the calming pool of her eyes, (those borrowed windows into her soul's well,) so well reflect her unchanging greater finery, her character this reflection, metamorphosis transformed. into a planetary permanency poem, high placed in his the firmament of their conjoined sky***
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Feb 25, 2016
Feb 25, 2016 at 8:54 PM UTC
A Woman's Reflection on Her Reflection (Valence and Value)
***A Woman's Reflection on Her Reflection (Valence and Value) one poem, written by two authors*** ~~~ **Ever the analyst, A mirror functions as surface to Parse the fleeting constant Of youth's beauty. From genetic gift Of symmetry and bone, To technological tampering, Until the equation is solved, As experience and character Models and maps the result. The answer, a reflection, Of individual valence and value** (written by S.D., a woman) ~~~ (written by N.L., a man) unbidden and unannounced, a "not fully formed poem, but a simple reflection" inbound missile arrives inbox, armed with silent power, the lethality of the Holy Unexpected the man reflects on her mirror-on-the-wall's fulsome reply, parsing the words of a woman's reflection, while gazing on her own every human's momentary glass notation, but an instance of summation, a human poem, whose editing, unceasing a comma here, a period inserted, an eye shadowed, an eyebrow tweezed, a eye dark circle line added, to tree-mark time's authorship all  these but a person's excerpted extraction, notarized, then auto-erased and revised, as out of date,   instantaneously compromised but, ***it is upon  the conceptual, valence and value, more that the man reflects perpetual, less on transitory morphing changes of exterior mortality while overlooking her glassine realization from behind, he concludes: every reflection, no matter how oft the snapshot, the unfleeting constancy of the combining of the princes of principles, valence and value that he witnesses, in the calming pool of her eyes, (those borrowed windows into her soul's well,) so well reflect her unchanging greater finery, her character this reflection, metamorphosis transformed. into a planetary permanency poem, high placed in his the firmament of their conjoined sky***
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I am so proud to announce my new cookbook The Four Seasons Let's cook, lets sing and shout have fun with each recipe no doubt oh I so hungry I have went all out oh my I hope there is no drought... I need my herbs thats in my garden so please I cry let it rain, don't let it harden oh yes dear Lord give me a pardon where my veggies can grow but not random ..... To make all our foods so delicious that they include the best tastes that concludes our hearts and stomachs so happy to alludes..... Debbie Brooks 2014
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Oct 14, 2014
Oct 14, 2014 at 5:20 PM UTC
My New Cookbook
I revisit long-forgotten places and a past that no longer offers warmth. I yearn to return to where the spark ignited, to the realm of genuine emotions and dreams. I flee from my own essence, reaching for the stars, as frigid as my heart. I have become a stranger to all that once was. The day concludes, giving way to night, during which my heart awakens to beat more fervently in a torrent of memories and illusions that rise repeatedly. Only in the morning do I rediscover my true self within the vacant walls. And I aspire to become a star – Just as frigid, to radiate from the heavens and remain unattainable to all. My thoughts drift to distant valleys as I seek the ancient past that eludes me. I experience a continual demise within myself, yearning to feel the warmth of beloved hands, if only in my dreams. I escape from my own being by reaching for the stars. There is no affection in castles built in the air, and my heart remains shattered.
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Sep 24, 2025
Sep 24, 2025 at 8:06 AM UTC
I revisit
The film starts with narration from Mother Nature herself, discussing an experiment with Father Time that went horribly wrong; On the fictional island of Wongo she has created a tribe where the men are brutish & ugly & the women exceedingly beautiful. She then creates another tribe on a nearby island called Goona where the women are repulsive & the men are strong and handsome; For years the two tribes lived unaware of each other's existence, until ape men from across the ocean attack the village of Goona. The tribe sends the son of their king to seek help against the invaders. The son finds the island of Wongo the day before the village men are to pick their brides & the women, seeing the handsome prince, begin questioning their life among the ugly brutes that dwell in their village. The men growing jealous of their visitor, plan to **** him. The women of Wongo, finding out about the plot, risk their lives to protect the handsome prince, in doing so offending the crocodile god of the Wongo people [portrayed by stock footage of a crocodile and rubber model]. The women are rounded up by the village men & sent into the wilderness until the reptile god has drawn blood for the slight; The women banding together, watch each other's backs until the ape men arrive at their village & the women dispatch the invaders to their god, the women then leave in search of the men that had abandoned the island of Wongo. In Goona, the men begin their rite of manhood, in which they go into the jungle without weapons for a month. The women of Wongo coming upon the weaponless men, decide to take advantage of their helplessness & one by one, claim them in marriage; The film concludes with all the beautiful men and women married & the ugly men with the ugly women.
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Aug 27, 2018
Aug 27, 2018 at 9:49 PM UTC
The Wild Women of Wongo
The film starts with narration from Mother Nature herself, discussing an experiment with Father Time that went horribly wrong; On the fictional island of Wongo she has created a tribe where the men are brutish & ugly & the women exceedingly beautiful. She then creates another tribe on a nearby island called Goona where the women are repulsive & the men are strong and handsome; For years the two tribes lived unaware of each other's existence, until ape men from across the ocean attack the village of Goona. The tribe sends the son of their king to seek help against the invaders. The son finds the island of Wongo the day before the village men are to pick their brides & the women, seeing the handsome prince, begin questioning their life among the ugly brutes that dwell in their village. The men growing jealous of their visitor, plan to **** him. The women of Wongo, finding out about the plot, risk their lives to protect the handsome prince, in doing so offending the crocodile god of the Wongo people [portrayed by stock footage of a crocodile and rubber model]. The women are rounded up by the village men & sent into the wilderness until the reptile god has drawn blood for the slight; The women banding together, watch each other's backs until the ape men arrive at their village & the women dispatch the invaders to their god, the women then leave in search of the men that had abandoned the island of Wongo. In Goona, the men begin their rite of manhood, in which they go into the jungle without weapons for a month. The women of Wongo coming upon the weaponless men, decide to take advantage of their helplessness & one by one, claim them in marriage; The film concludes with all the beautiful men and women married & the ugly men with the ugly women.
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Attend my lays, ye ever honour’d nine, Assist my labours, and my strains refine; In smoothest numbers pour the notes along, For bright Aurora now demands my song. Aurora hail, and all the thousand dies, Which deck thy progress through the vaulted skies: The morn awakes, and wide extends her rays, On ev’ry leaf the gentle zephyr plays; Harmonious lays the feather’d race resume, Dart the bright eye, and shake the painted plume. Ye shady groves, your verdant gloom display To shield your poet from the burning day: Calliope awake the sacred lyre, While thy fair sisters fan the pleasing fire: The bow’rs, the gales, the variegated skies In all their pleasures in my ***** rise. See in the east th’ illustrious king of day! His rising radiance drives the shades away— But Oh! I feel his fervid beams too strong, And scarce begun, concludes th’ abortive song.
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An Hymn To The Morning
391 A Visitor in Marl— Who influences Flowers— Till they are orderly as Busts— And Elegant—as Glass— Who visits in the Night— And just before the Sun— Concludes his glistening interview— Caresses—and is gone— But whom his fingers touched— And where his feet have run— And whatsoever Mouth be kissed— Is as it had not been—
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A Visitor in Marl
I'm not saying that this is how it is But, In all my years of school the one thing I've been taught Again and Again ... is the American Revolutionary war Which makes sense since, it was technically the official formation of the country I currently live in But really, In 10th grade I'm having deja-vu back to fourth grade when we even had a musical about it (I was student #2 by the way) And now we have the Broadway musical Alexander Hamilton which, I am TOTALLY a fan of Despite the numerous reoccurring themes I've had stuck in my face enough to remember for the rest of my lifeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ... Okaaay, So, Revolutionary War: ... ... ... AftertheFrenchandIndianwarBritianwasindebtsotheytriedtaxingthecollonieswhichthecolloniesweretotallyagainst.Miscommunication(allthewayacrossthesea)alongwithotherthingsincludingphrasessuchas"notaxationwithoutrepresentation"werethrownaround.EventuallyitjustblewupintotheactualwarwhichAmericaendedupwinningdespiteBritain'ssuperiorarmyandinthenAmericawasleftwithamessofstatestanddisagreeablefoundingfatherstocometoaconsensusandfiguresomethingout. Okay, I don't know if you actually got anything from that but basically it was a rushed (sort of) summaryish of the American Revolutionary war ... ish. Well, I mean I've only learned about it from one side Anyway, by now I almost know the facts we learn in school here as well as the back of my hand ... which I don't know very well by the way why do people even use that? Anyway, it's not completely old material that we're learning because now, there's analyzing too Just today we analyzed the differences between Federalists and Anti-federalists ... Okay, you probably don't want the nitty-gritty details ... And that concludes my (Strange) tirade/(I can't really call it a tirade because it wasn't angry so maybe narration?) About history class ... Hope this quirky piece of writing gave you a few smiles! (Or if not confusion works too.)
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Sep 26, 2018
Sep 26, 2018 at 7:26 PM UTC
My Tirade about History Class
I'm not saying that this is how it is But, In all my years of school the one thing I've been taught Again and Again ... is the American Revolutionary war Which makes sense since, it was technically the official formation of the country I currently live in But really, In 10th grade I'm having deja-vu back to fourth grade when we even had a musical about it (I was student #2 by the way) And now we have the Broadway musical Alexander Hamilton which, I am TOTALLY a fan of Despite the numerous reoccurring themes I've had stuck in my face enough to remember for the rest of my lifeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ... Okaaay, So, Revolutionary War: ... ... ... AftertheFrenchandIndianwarBritianwasindebtsotheytriedtaxingthecollonieswhichthecolloniesweretotallyagainst.Miscommunication(allthewayacrossthesea)alongwithotherthingsincludingphrasessuchas"notaxationwithoutrepresentation"werethrownaround.EventuallyitjustblewupintotheactualwarwhichAmericaendedupwinningdespiteBritain'ssuperiorarmyandinthenAmericawasleftwithamessofstatestanddisagreeablefoundingfatherstocometoaconsensusandfiguresomethingout. Okay, I don't know if you actually got anything from that but basically it was a rushed (sort of) summaryish of the American Revolutionary war ... ish. Well, I mean I've only learned about it from one side Anyway, by now I almost know the facts we learn in school here as well as the back of my hand ... which I don't know very well by the way why do people even use that? Anyway, it's not completely old material that we're learning because now, there's analyzing too Just today we analyzed the differences between Federalists and Anti-federalists ... Okay, you probably don't want the nitty-gritty details ... And that concludes my (Strange) tirade/(I can't really call it a tirade because it wasn't angry so maybe narration?) About history class ... Hope this quirky piece of writing gave you a few smiles! (Or if not confusion works too.)
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There is beauty in the End; Beauty in a conglomerate of Failed fairy tales we Once thought would make up Our life's happy trails. Virtue hangs purposefully On quivering lips and racing heartbeats that foretells a demise- There's MEANING in the End. Wipe your tears. Dry your eyes. These are means to every End. So enjoy that Last Kiss and mourn not the story that it concludes But await the one that it begins. For like I said, There is Beauty in the End
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Jun 4, 2015
Jun 4, 2015 at 11:58 AM UTC
Last Kiss
Whales were, above all else, deliberate about the pace with which they moved through the world, conscientious, perhaps to a fault, about the economy of movement required to propel such incredible mass over such enormous, empty spans of open ocean. Here is a humpback whale resting, face-down staring into the cerulean abyss, alone but singing, perhaps for enjoyment, perhaps out of boredom, or perhaps due to loneliness and longing. She twists and turns a single eye up toward the surface, her iris catching   sunbeams and contracting, as she gauges the gargantuan effort she must exert in order to gain her next breath. In this case, she concludes that, yes, the effort will be worth it. But what you must know about whales is that on rare occasion, they would cast these concerns of intentionality and efficiency aside, and choose to activate the entirety of their being, from the sinews to the soul, and propel themselves, heedlessly and at top speed toward, through, and past the surface of the ocean, as though they were attempting to fully take flight, to escape, with finality, the cold confines of their known existence, the omnipresent, furrowed gaze of the void below. But invariably, and in spite of their best efforts, the whales would be pulled back downward, by forces they could not fully comprehend, sure as the tides would fall shortly after the moon passed overhead. Yes, the physical impact of colliding with the surface of the ocean would be painful for the whales, but what hurt so much more than that was having to return to the stark, lonely calculus of whether or not to keep going.
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May 22, 2021
May 22, 2021 at 11:55 AM UTC
Whales
Whales were, above all else, deliberate about the pace with which they moved through the world, conscientious, perhaps to a fault, about the economy of movement required to propel such incredible mass over such enormous, empty spans of open ocean. Here is a humpback whale resting, face-down staring into the cerulean abyss, alone but singing, perhaps for enjoyment, perhaps out of boredom, or perhaps due to loneliness and longing. She twists and turns a single eye up toward the surface, her iris catching   sunbeams and contracting, as she gauges the gargantuan effort she must exert in order to gain her next breath. In this case, she concludes that, yes, the effort will be worth it. But what you must know about whales is that on rare occasion, they would cast these concerns of intentionality and efficiency aside, and choose to activate the entirety of their being, from the sinews to the soul, and propel themselves, heedlessly and at top speed toward, through, and past the surface of the ocean, as though they were attempting to fully take flight, to escape, with finality, the cold confines of their known existence, the omnipresent, furrowed gaze of the void below. But invariably, and in spite of their best efforts, the whales would be pulled back downward, by forces they could not fully comprehend, sure as the tides would fall shortly after the moon passed overhead. Yes, the physical impact of colliding with the surface of the ocean would be painful for the whales, but what hurt so much more than that was having to return to the stark, lonely calculus of whether or not to keep going.
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Service the sections we skim on four limbs, integral to the insect cause and effectively crippling the cross culture, dumb and auspicious in the year of the opposable thumb. Feline friction in the way you hug the fuzz and tug at the tension, a conscious show of subterfuge and pretentious pretenses concludes in the dismal aftermath of a stamped and sent ten cent envelope filled with nothing but hope. Sacrilegious privileges construct reality, obstructing the graffiti art along the cosmonaut crosswalk. The fire, fought with wine in the dark etched an imprint in ash where the cadre had left its' mark in the colors of a corroded battery. Under spray paint stars, hollow, half sunken sights echo through the illegitimate children of a wind chime. Sulfurous silver lining igniting the ego. A blue reaction in a black field, refraction with a maximum yield, it all glows. Feline friction in the way you hug the fuzz and tug at the tension, smooth and rigid, we fit in the grooves and service the sections in a crippled cross culture that crawls on all fours, integral to an insect cause.
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Oct 11, 2010
Oct 11, 2010 at 5:27 PM UTC
Integral
with each passing day, I understand less and less, for who could ever claim to know it all, yet, the simplicity of our base-ic basest instincts makes evil so easily attractive, that now, I forgive almost nothing, anyone for the cruelty inherent in on the surfacial skin of our normalcy, so easily, revealed, and reveled in, wrecks me, and the poetry sparks are not doused, but wick and ember shriveled oh the irony, that foolish me should write of the commandment to love just as the world displays old levels of hate historically deep… .I am hated, to many who would know me only as Jew, and this refresher course in my brain, reminds me, that love thy neighbor as thyself, can morph into a generational opposite, that my former degree of comfort, beliefs, was only skin deep…and Tolstoy was a naïf, a romantic, a royal, who hoped for the best in each man, and that cannot ne achieved for hate is so easy digestible, so sweet a treat for humans, who desire no compass other than simple baseness to know which direction to take…. ————————————————————————————- ”There can be only one permanent revolution—a moral one; the regeneration of the inner man. How is this revolution to take place? Nobody knows how it will take place in humanity, but every man feels it clearly in himself. And yet in our world everybody thinks of changing humanity, and nobody thinks of changing himself." Tolstoy ”To perform evil deeds a person must discover “a justification for his actions,” so that he can regard stealing, humiliating and killing as good. “Macbeth’s self-justifications were feeble,” and so conscience restrained him. He had no ideology, Solzhenitsyn observes, nothing like “anti-imperialism” or “decolonization” to allay pangs of guilt. Solzhenitsyn concludes: “Ideology—that is what gives evil-doing its long-sought justification and gives the evil-doer the necessary steadfastness and determination . . . so that he won’t hear reproaches and curses but receive praise and honors.Solzhenitsyn
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Oct 20, 2023
Oct 20, 2023 at 3:08 PM UTC
Tolstoy uses a French expression, “Tout comprendre, c’est tout pardonner”: To understand all is to forgive all.
with each passing day, I understand less and less, for who could ever claim to know it all, yet, the simplicity of our base-ic basest instincts makes evil so easily attractive, that now, I forgive almost nothing, anyone for the cruelty inherent in on the surfacial skin of our normalcy, so easily, revealed, and reveled in, wrecks me, and the poetry sparks are not doused, but wick and ember shriveled oh the irony, that foolish me should write of the commandment to love just as the world displays old levels of hate historically deep… .I am hated, to many who would know me only as Jew, and this refresher course in my brain, reminds me, that love thy neighbor as thyself, can morph into a generational opposite, that my former degree of comfort, beliefs, was only skin deep…and Tolstoy was a naïf, a romantic, a royal, who hoped for the best in each man, and that cannot ne achieved for hate is so easy digestible, so sweet a treat for humans, who desire no compass other than simple baseness to know which direction to take…. ————————————————————————————- ”There can be only one permanent revolution—a moral one; the regeneration of the inner man. How is this revolution to take place? Nobody knows how it will take place in humanity, but every man feels it clearly in himself. And yet in our world everybody thinks of changing humanity, and nobody thinks of changing himself." Tolstoy ”To perform evil deeds a person must discover “a justification for his actions,” so that he can regard stealing, humiliating and killing as good. “Macbeth’s self-justifications were feeble,” and so conscience restrained him. He had no ideology, Solzhenitsyn observes, nothing like “anti-imperialism” or “decolonization” to allay pangs of guilt. Solzhenitsyn concludes: “Ideology—that is what gives evil-doing its long-sought justification and gives the evil-doer the necessary steadfastness and determination . . . so that he won’t hear reproaches and curses but receive praise and honors.Solzhenitsyn
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when love's not served on silver, but sliced on knives' edge from wounds we learn to draw the gentlest pledge the violence unseen it shapes our soul's embrace transforming scars into verses a tender grace nothing concludes with verse or rhyme's decree yet endings birth poetry from life's debris blood once spilled held no beauty in its hue just crimson streams a truth we misconstrue yet in the gaze upon our wounds we endeavor to find solace beyond in moments that sever
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Apr 26, 2023
Apr 26, 2023 at 7:59 PM UTC
compilations
The coach capsized and spilled its freight, a glut of rabid reprobates, who swarm towards a sea of lights and fill their cups with harbour nights. We do not heed the lighthouse glare, or match the fortune-teller's stare. We storm the cliffs as if to pillage the gift shops of this seaside village. We mill around a restaurant's doors and nip at hot dogs with our claws. Stockpiling rock up by the stick, whilst wearing hats marked 'Kiss Me Quick'.   Because we cannot hear their cries for whispered arcade lullabies, the gulls will dance above the tide and mock sandcastle suicides. The distant fort once planted proud, clings to the hillside like a shroud. Its craggy face a last dissuasion, against the sea's saline invasion. Perhaps the Ferris wheel's arc,   can count each dawn against the dark. A spotlight shone upon each heart, as we rehearse our weathered parts. Pastime play or parlor show, we forget the lines we ought to know and stumble on with blind devotion, to pour our years into the ocean. And yet! We catch the child's smile, projected on a seafront mile. His mirth casts doubt upon the claim, that each new act concludes the same. The beach begins and ends each dance, each interval a second chance   to wake the youth we put to sleep and cast the hourglass into the deep.
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Mar 4, 2014
Mar 4, 2014 at 11:25 AM UTC
Tides
“I’ve become lost in the cross hairs of love and lust.” His line of thought became stagnant with no one to watch, spellbound by her snare looking for someone to care, her words would trimmer proving to much to bare— “it’s just not the same, in the way that i love you, something doesn’t remain.” A sword breeched his heart that day, vessel went off course filling with black waters of spite, lines became blurred, compass askew, naive conceptions of a roadmap wouldn’t do. “Rain washed away our chalk, it’s not all lost” this thought’s become seared, simmering in his mind until the time would come. I can’t talk of the grilling in our prince’s kingdom, except that the tyrannical king, made hell his home. Acidity was palpable, yet still he continued, never ceasing words kept him through— “but I do love you” until the fat lady’s tune, sulking in the nostalgia of her swoons. He continued to praise her more than the moon thanks the sun, for illuminating it’s room, in the sky, and the stars scream out cries, for the mangled prince lays waiting only for her shine; however the lyrics must stop, at some point, the fat ladies pitch will drop, until the nightingales love song stops. Scared to be hurt once again, a vow has been made that no more friends will be lost, or bring pain, but this came at a cost. Drowned by sorrow he knew only one way to manage, cut everyone out because they can do damage. Reclusive, seclusive, he shut out all, friends’ unaware, the ball couldn’t have dropped further; ashamed, self-disdained the thought feels like ****** What of the piper that doesn’t pipe?—As grim as tales come, stuck between a gloc and a hard bane. “Baring may be impossible” he said to cold steel, heavier than expected, ice-like to his lips, sitting against the wall, with a cumbersome grip. Last text sent “Take care of everyone for me, you’re now the guardian.” Panic set in friends, but it was all to late to heed. Until the end comes, he looks into the cosmos of his mind, and lastly to her shrine; final thoughts unknown, except to the wall and rug bellow but here I’ve presumed— “I will love you forever” trigger pulled, death concludes. RIP- Clay
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Dec 28, 2012
Dec 28, 2012 at 2:39 PM UTC
Tragedy Struck
“I’ve become lost in the cross hairs of love and lust.” His line of thought became stagnant with no one to watch, spellbound by her snare looking for someone to care, her words would trimmer proving to much to bare— “it’s just not the same, in the way that i love you, something doesn’t remain.” A sword breeched his heart that day, vessel went off course filling with black waters of spite, lines became blurred, compass askew, naive conceptions of a roadmap wouldn’t do. “Rain washed away our chalk, it’s not all lost” this thought’s become seared, simmering in his mind until the time would come. I can’t talk of the grilling in our prince’s kingdom, except that the tyrannical king, made hell his home. Acidity was palpable, yet still he continued, never ceasing words kept him through— “but I do love you” until the fat lady’s tune, sulking in the nostalgia of her swoons. He continued to praise her more than the moon thanks the sun, for illuminating it’s room, in the sky, and the stars scream out cries, for the mangled prince lays waiting only for her shine; however the lyrics must stop, at some point, the fat ladies pitch will drop, until the nightingales love song stops. Scared to be hurt once again, a vow has been made that no more friends will be lost, or bring pain, but this came at a cost. Drowned by sorrow he knew only one way to manage, cut everyone out because they can do damage. Reclusive, seclusive, he shut out all, friends’ unaware, the ball couldn’t have dropped further; ashamed, self-disdained the thought feels like ****** What of the piper that doesn’t pipe?—As grim as tales come, stuck between a gloc and a hard bane. “Baring may be impossible” he said to cold steel, heavier than expected, ice-like to his lips, sitting against the wall, with a cumbersome grip. Last text sent “Take care of everyone for me, you’re now the guardian.” Panic set in friends, but it was all to late to heed. Until the end comes, he looks into the cosmos of his mind, and lastly to her shrine; final thoughts unknown, except to the wall and rug bellow but here I’ve presumed— “I will love you forever” trigger pulled, death concludes. RIP- Clay
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A familiar garden. Irises quietly ponder, Tulips shyly unfurl, Daffodils chime with glee. Each seed buried and broken, Carving paths and Gasping for breath. Sunlight in small doses And rain in large. Relentless battles against those who Grew faster and taller but Fell much harder. A moment of flourishing From a thousand moments of nourishing. Petals soaking up The glory of the day and The tranquility of the night. And as the season concludes And the seeds fall once more, I have faith That my sacrifice will once more feed The familiar garden.
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May 23, 2022
May 23, 2022 at 1:45 AM UTC
Familiar Garden
When garnet sunset dances across a panorama ribbons of fire aflame add to the drama majestic, splendid as hot molten lava then too soon concludes the sun's samba
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Oct 20, 2014
Oct 20, 2014 at 10:53 PM UTC
Sun dance