"concatenating" poems - Hello Poetry

Joe wants to know how'm I doing? an innocuous query, little can he know, bye bye is my merry, marooned on a skerry, noxious fumes in the aerie, currently inhabiting my foreheady, worry waves, rolling thunderous tides, have myself beside thus the answer to your toll, something bad, on me, got a hold Joe, life is, more than a tad concerting concerting? surely you meant converging, or perhaps, concatenating, or concaving? discombobulating, or more likely, plain ole disconcerting? indeed, all of the above, fit like a glove, but best combinated in steaming mug of concerting "to contrive or arrange by agreement: to plan; devise" the world is secret contriving, the world is secret devising, a plan for my demising, forces are concerting re me... most concerning, as trends converging, concave hollow chains clinking, a concatenating chorus voicing their displeasure, at my happy existence, which now gone, its loss, wept for, in great measure life dissing me, in a manner concerting and dis-concerting, my composure, decomposing, the ides of depression, hip hop discombob- (undu)lating throb but then again, what's in a word, what's in a rhyme, jes that old timey R&B;, rhyming and blues, of a verbal kind so, Joe, how'm I doing? now that you are knowing, as men of distinguished letters, students of history, part time poets, Your Reply must only be: "Oh no, Natty, say it ain't so"

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Jan 18, 2014

Jan 18, 2014 at 5:03 AM UTC

nat-lipstadt

R&B: Joe wants to know

Joe wants to know how'm I doing? an innocuous query, little can he know, bye bye is my merry, marooned on a skerry, noxious fumes in the aerie, currently inhabiting my foreheady, worry waves, rolling thunderous tides, have myself beside thus the answer to your toll, something bad, on me, got a hold Joe, life is, more than a tad concerting concerting? surely you meant converging, or perhaps, concatenating, or concaving? discombobulating, or more likely, plain ole disconcerting? indeed, all of the above, fit like a glove, but best combinated in steaming mug of concerting "to contrive or arrange by agreement: to plan; devise" the world is secret contriving, the world is secret devising, a plan for my demising, forces are concerting re me... most concerning, as trends converging, concave hollow chains clinking, a concatenating chorus voicing their displeasure, at my happy existence, which now gone, its loss, wept for, in great measure life dissing me, in a manner concerting and dis-concerting, my composure, decomposing, the ides of depression, hip hop discombob- (undu)lating throb but then again, what's in a word, what's in a rhyme, jes that old timey R&B;, rhyming and blues, of a verbal kind so, Joe, how'm I doing? now that you are knowing, as men of distinguished letters, students of history, part time poets, Your Reply must only be: "Oh no, Natty, say it ain't so"

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Beautiful and mysterious illusions Concatenating the beautiful thread of life Beginning from the question From where are from...!! Joining the ridiculous answers Still not found the right yet Both science and faith Derived different definitions But still remains enigma... The one and all mysterious creation From his mesmerizing frame work Created the world and life.. The proven theories Built in science of origin Explained some other else But still remains enigma... Anyhow life being an enormous enigma Hard to explain But easy to realize A positive energy mounted all over Encapsulating the whole universe Beginning from the bright shine To a glossy night Cleared the enigma Tried to believe And believe.... Started to dream And found the right answer Through dreams.... Made true the dreams And cleared all enigma And begin to walk Succeeded with his powers And thus life became smooth And life became easy...

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Jun 5, 2018

Jun 5, 2018 at 12:14 PM UTC

catherine-9

ENIGMA

Beautiful and mysterious illusions Concatenating the beautiful thread of life Beginning from the question From where are from...!! Joining the ridiculous answers Still not found the right yet Both science and faith Derived different definitions But still remains enigma... The one and all mysterious creation From his mesmerizing frame work Created the world and life.. The proven theories Built in science of origin Explained some other else But still remains enigma... Anyhow life being an enormous enigma Hard to explain But easy to realize A positive energy mounted all over Encapsulating the whole universe Beginning from the bright shine To a glossy night Cleared the enigma Tried to believe And believe.... Started to dream And found the right answer Through dreams.... Made true the dreams And cleared all enigma And begin to walk Succeeded with his powers And thus life became smooth And life became easy...

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Restore me, those words are stones dropped into a lake of voices. Rippling, The loudest of them, repeat ad nauseam. In this nexus, i am the oppressed. Jackals swim concatenating the worst of thoughts, plotting tomorrow’s coup d'é tat. My proclivity, to take the wheel Invariably pulls me under. Here in this place I am greased like Atlas Punished to become the choices I’ve made And for that I’m grateful.

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Aug 5, 2018

Aug 5, 2018 at 10:57 PM UTC

AlexSalazar

The mountain that fell

Restore me, those words are stones dropped into a lake of voices. Rippling, The loudest of them, repeat ad nauseam. In this nexus, i am the oppressed. Jackals swim concatenating the worst of thoughts, plotting tomorrow’s coup d'é tat. My proclivity, to take the wheel Invariably pulls me under. Here in this place I am greased like Atlas Punished to become the choices I’ve made And for that I’m grateful.

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