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"communities" poems
Sisters, We are in trouble Overwhelmed by reality We choose to sleep Being awake is painful true But what else would you choose? Disconnected with the truth Disillusioned with "inclusion" But when we as women chose to stand With other women Away from our brethren We undermined our people Their problems weren't ours Respect in our households and communities was never the problem But now we're truly included In the reign of terror By the hegemony that we were never actually excluded from So now while we've branched off Into this group and that Engulfed in the rainbows, weaves, ****** objectification, drugs and popular culture We are sleep crawling To our extinction It is better to live through pain I n order to achieve gain Than to nap through life Never understanding your greatness It is time to rise and return home
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Sep 21, 2015
Sep 21, 2015 at 7:24 PM UTC
ALARM
♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ ♂ Fatherless broods, whose mothers hoped for change Fight the law, abort their restoration; Attack, burn, riot… consider nothing strange Extorting payout from their host nation. Fatherhood, dark elephant in the room, Denigrated, dissed by baby-mamas In his absence, speaks potently of doom (Apparently blessed by both Obamas…) ***** donation, filling the wombs with child, Disorganized communities, off-course Guarantee police work when thugs run wild. With marriage faltering in the race: lame horse. Inhuman nature being what it is Be careful who you shoot—and hold your ****
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Apr 16, 2016
Apr 16, 2016 at 9:32 AM UTC
Don’t Shoot: The Return of Jimmy Justice
☮ ☮ ☮ **Society needs more Social Justice. Humanity needs peaceworkers.** Peace and Social Justice must be promoted aggressively. There are inequities that must be addressed. Power is not equally distributed. Neither are resources or wealth. Neither are poetic gifts or vision equitably distributed. Unearned privilege is rampant. Poetry must confront this global crisis of capitalist exploitation and manipulation. Poetry must speak to the masses. Poetry must radicalize and inform consciousness to new levels of social change. Marginalized citizens must be empowered. All ****** gender-based, racial, religious, age-based, homophobic, xenophobic, and gynophobic bigots must be brought to see in a new way through our poetry. Community building and local empowerment are of the order. Our poetry must be global in scope – yet rooted and grounded in local community empowerment. Selfless acts of service to promote and increase Social Justice are needed. Lives selflessly devoted to establishing social justice are called for. Our poetic lives must be laid on the altar of the dis-enfranchised and unrepresented. We, as consciously aware poets, must advocate and speak out for those who have no voice. We, as poets, must, through stirring words of Social Justice, embody through our radical verses the burning hope of a just and sustainable future. This future must become increasingly collective as formerly marginalized consumers become empowered community-builders  –  through our poetry. As poets of the sustainable future we will empower and inform. Our poetry must collectivize, entitle and enslave. We must speak with ONE VOICE: the voice of change and social justice. Our words will rise with healing in their wings and lift whole communities from despair to radicalized self-awareness in communities filled with strident, intolerant and maniacal practitioners of PEACE & SOCIAL JUSTICE. All poets who do not lay their entire creative and lyrical selves on the altar of struggle to bring CHANGE and SOCIAL JUSTICE will be LIQUIDATED by our own EMPOWERED POETRY. IN THE END WE WILL WRITE A PURE POETRY OF SOCIAL CHANGE, ALL IN CAPS, AND THIS POETRY OF SOCIAL JUSTICE AND EMPOWERMENT WILL BE READ OVER THE GRAVES OF ALL SELL-OUT, CORPORATE, FASCIST, SNITCHING, SELFISH, UNEMPOWERED AND UNEMPOWERING TRAITORS AND ENEMIES OF SOCIAL JUSTICE.  IN THE END THERE WILL BE NO PUNCTUATION OR EVEN WORDS ONLY PURE IMAGES OF CHANGE + VISIONARY COLLABORATION IN SOCIAL TRANSFORMATION/MAYBE SLASH MARKS/OKAY MAYBE EXCLAMATION POINTS TOO BUT ONLY THOSE ! WHY? BECAUSE THE ONLY GOOD POET IS A LIVING POET WHO HAS LIQUIDATED EVERY FALSE POET NOT COMMITTED TO THE STRUGGLE FOR SOCIAL JUSTICE ! LONG LIVE POETRY IN ACTION THROUGH CHANGE! WRITE/SPEAK/AGITATE FOR  SOCIAL JUSTICE  & EMPOWERMENT ! **POETRY IS STRUGGLE☻ STRUGGLE IS CHANGE☻ CHANGE REQUIRES SOCIAL JUSTICE☻ SOCIAL JUSTICE BRINGS PEACE☻ PEACE BRINGS WAR☻ WAR BRINGS CONFUSION & DEATH☻** (SO DON’T BE CONFUSED)
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Sep 9, 2015
Sep 9, 2015 at 9:03 PM UTC
Agitating the Spin Cycle
☮ ☮ ☮ **Society needs more Social Justice. Humanity needs peaceworkers.** Peace and Social Justice must be promoted aggressively. There are inequities that must be addressed. Power is not equally distributed. Neither are resources or wealth. Neither are poetic gifts or vision equitably distributed. Unearned privilege is rampant. Poetry must confront this global crisis of capitalist exploitation and manipulation. Poetry must speak to the masses. Poetry must radicalize and inform consciousness to new levels of social change. Marginalized citizens must be empowered. All ****** gender-based, racial, religious, age-based, homophobic, xenophobic, and gynophobic bigots must be brought to see in a new way through our poetry. Community building and local empowerment are of the order. Our poetry must be global in scope – yet rooted and grounded in local community empowerment. Selfless acts of service to promote and increase Social Justice are needed. Lives selflessly devoted to establishing social justice are called for. Our poetic lives must be laid on the altar of the dis-enfranchised and unrepresented. We, as consciously aware poets, must advocate and speak out for those who have no voice. We, as poets, must, through stirring words of Social Justice, embody through our radical verses the burning hope of a just and sustainable future. This future must become increasingly collective as formerly marginalized consumers become empowered community-builders  –  through our poetry. As poets of the sustainable future we will empower and inform. Our poetry must collectivize, entitle and enslave. We must speak with ONE VOICE: the voice of change and social justice. Our words will rise with healing in their wings and lift whole communities from despair to radicalized self-awareness in communities filled with strident, intolerant and maniacal practitioners of PEACE & SOCIAL JUSTICE. All poets who do not lay their entire creative and lyrical selves on the altar of struggle to bring CHANGE and SOCIAL JUSTICE will be LIQUIDATED by our own EMPOWERED POETRY. IN THE END WE WILL WRITE A PURE POETRY OF SOCIAL CHANGE, ALL IN CAPS, AND THIS POETRY OF SOCIAL JUSTICE AND EMPOWERMENT WILL BE READ OVER THE GRAVES OF ALL SELL-OUT, CORPORATE, FASCIST, SNITCHING, SELFISH, UNEMPOWERED AND UNEMPOWERING TRAITORS AND ENEMIES OF SOCIAL JUSTICE.  IN THE END THERE WILL BE NO PUNCTUATION OR EVEN WORDS ONLY PURE IMAGES OF CHANGE + VISIONARY COLLABORATION IN SOCIAL TRANSFORMATION/MAYBE SLASH MARKS/OKAY MAYBE EXCLAMATION POINTS TOO BUT ONLY THOSE ! WHY? BECAUSE THE ONLY GOOD POET IS A LIVING POET WHO HAS LIQUIDATED EVERY FALSE POET NOT COMMITTED TO THE STRUGGLE FOR SOCIAL JUSTICE ! LONG LIVE POETRY IN ACTION THROUGH CHANGE! WRITE/SPEAK/AGITATE FOR  SOCIAL JUSTICE  & EMPOWERMENT ! **POETRY IS STRUGGLE☻ STRUGGLE IS CHANGE☻ CHANGE REQUIRES SOCIAL JUSTICE☻ SOCIAL JUSTICE BRINGS PEACE☻ PEACE BRINGS WAR☻ WAR BRINGS CONFUSION & DEATH☻** (SO DON’T BE CONFUSED)
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So there I was, and there you were, all of us, everyone, dangling their feet off the rooftop. Four distinctly different artists caught in the same painting yet, none of us holding the paintbrush to our passions, yet. Ambitious, yes, focused, not so much, motivated? Most definitely. Dedicated to manipulation, to making a masterpiece for the masses, a decision to "form a more perfect union".   To map a new demographic before our deaths. If our desire was to make a mark, well, we'd be done already. The mark's been made, but not engraved, and for it to stay we need to stomp on it until our own foot decays. And these days, most pictures will fade, So as us four sat there, dancing with the devil, we dared to begin drafting on our canvas. With no brush, but our own fingers, our own blood, sweat, tears, and elbow grease, finally finding the paintbrush to be figurative, that we were manipulated ourselves. We learned to picture the paintbrush as our pointer, our palms the palettes, our pinkies the varnish, a promise our piece would never be vandalized. The world is your oyster, they say, and the city was our canvas, where we painted nothing but pearls, rare commodities for the communities to cherish until our masterpiece, the indefinite work in progress, is completed.
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Mar 8, 2016
Mar 8, 2016 at 2:13 AM UTC
The Renaissance (The Indefinite Work in Progress)
Unity Why does it mean so much? Why does it matter that it should be amongst us, between friends, in families, our congregation, neighborhood communities Let's think about the word unity again The first three letters stop look closely U. N. I You and I It's Ironic how that works We can't go anywhere with our relationship with the people we love without this next statement in mind Humans creation was designed to be a continuous population and togetherness Yet we always find a way to remain separated. Is it possible you could look deep in your heart and soul and find you need me just as much as I need you. The topic of unity isn't just one underlying issue. It involves communication When you're happy and feel you have to celebrate, send me a text Call when you're sad because I know you battle with being depressed Tell me about your fears no I can't take them away I'm not Jehovah but understand I'm here. Or even when we have a disagreement How am I supposed to know your upset It's not supernatural I don't speak telepathical I feel like khalid. Can you just talk to me? Tell me how your feeling voice your opinions that's what's wrong with society. You know why because the lack unity Patience is also key but that's another song for a different time. We're towards the end **** before I go this is what you should know Coming together is a begining Keeping together is progress, working together is success Without unity there can be no strength
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Aug 7, 2019
Aug 7, 2019 at 8:35 PM UTC
Unity
When the Earth was spinning, All vacant and wasted, And a voice that came thundering, All the poison, that you all tasted, And all the one left, now unwashed, hearing nothing but silence, becoming the one's who suffered, when all the believers, died, and the non believers, survived, the destruction of the planet, hatred heated by a human cannon. Now who will pray for Babylon, When humanity acts upon, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, When Humanity is the Evil Spawn, Now who will pray for Babylon, Amon of the breath and Air, Amon, where is Thebes, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, Humanity, Governments, Religion, Black, LGBTQ Communities, Planting the Evil Seeds. When the Earth was spinning, All vacant and wasted, Adam and Eve was created, To love and be Mother Earth, Father Dearest, Forbidden Fruit that sent you, to Hell, Oh Adam, You're the Devil, Lucifer, Adam, Did you heard the snake voice, Why did you follow the advice, To pick and eat, Do you live in all of us, Do we eat, to become Deceit. Now who will pray for Babylon, When humanity acts upon, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, When Humanity is the Evil Spawn, Now who will pray for Babylon, Amon of the breath and Air, Amon, where is Thebes, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, Humanity, Governments, Religion, Black, LGBTQ Communities, Planting the Evil Seeds. When the Earth was spinning, All vacant and wasted, Everything is our posion, Welcome Poseidon beside us, Say Hello Pontius, God in our heads, Run to the Waves of that the tide tends, In foul disposition trends, As we welcome all our catasthrophes, All the hate, all the lies, All our devine that we hide in Denial, Suicidal Kings and Queens, Here our Heresy, Maybe Religion is a win, Maybe it just a way of sin, All I know it just a linchpin of support, Belief and stability, Belief and hatred, Maybe Communities in it to win it, to scream and fight and hit back, False Flag, Attack that, Found Guilty through entrapment, Of our commandments, You're cooperation is commended, Since the corporation demands it. Now who will pray for Babylon, When humanity acts upon, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, When Humanity is the Evil Spawn, Now who will pray for Babylon, Amon of the breath and Air, Amon, where is Thebes, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, Humanity, Governments, Religion, Black, LGBTQ Communities, Planting the Evil Seeds.
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Nov 16, 2020
Nov 16, 2020 at 9:32 PM UTC
Babylon, Humanity is the Evil Spawn
When the Earth was spinning, All vacant and wasted, And a voice that came thundering, All the poison, that you all tasted, And all the one left, now unwashed, hearing nothing but silence, becoming the one's who suffered, when all the believers, died, and the non believers, survived, the destruction of the planet, hatred heated by a human cannon. Now who will pray for Babylon, When humanity acts upon, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, When Humanity is the Evil Spawn, Now who will pray for Babylon, Amon of the breath and Air, Amon, where is Thebes, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, Humanity, Governments, Religion, Black, LGBTQ Communities, Planting the Evil Seeds. When the Earth was spinning, All vacant and wasted, Adam and Eve was created, To love and be Mother Earth, Father Dearest, Forbidden Fruit that sent you, to Hell, Oh Adam, You're the Devil, Lucifer, Adam, Did you heard the snake voice, Why did you follow the advice, To pick and eat, Do you live in all of us, Do we eat, to become Deceit. Now who will pray for Babylon, When humanity acts upon, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, When Humanity is the Evil Spawn, Now who will pray for Babylon, Amon of the breath and Air, Amon, where is Thebes, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, Humanity, Governments, Religion, Black, LGBTQ Communities, Planting the Evil Seeds. When the Earth was spinning, All vacant and wasted, Everything is our posion, Welcome Poseidon beside us, Say Hello Pontius, God in our heads, Run to the Waves of that the tide tends, In foul disposition trends, As we welcome all our catasthrophes, All the hate, all the lies, All our devine that we hide in Denial, Suicidal Kings and Queens, Here our Heresy, Maybe Religion is a win, Maybe it just a way of sin, All I know it just a linchpin of support, Belief and stability, Belief and hatred, Maybe Communities in it to win it, to scream and fight and hit back, False Flag, Attack that, Found Guilty through entrapment, Of our commandments, You're cooperation is commended, Since the corporation demands it. Now who will pray for Babylon, When humanity acts upon, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, When Humanity is the Evil Spawn, Now who will pray for Babylon, Amon of the breath and Air, Amon, where is Thebes, Now, Who will sing for Babylon, Humanity, Governments, Religion, Black, LGBTQ Communities, Planting the Evil Seeds.
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Dear Donald Trump You don’t know me but I sadly know you Your face has been plastered on tv screens and newspapers for so long And your words have cut into my soul like a knife Twisting each time you spew your venom Never in my life have I been more scared of a man until now I am now forced to be more aware of my surroundings because your supporters are hidden in crowds waiting… Despite all your crushing charades I have never been more proud to be the minority Because for the first time I see my communities standing together Seeing my family work hour on hour only proves you’re a fraud Cause unlike you I spit the truth not lies I preserve differences you block them I strive to build peace between nations while you rather build a wall to separate it News flash, us Hispanics don’t want to be in any country you’re running We aren’t these lazy or uneducated ganstas you make us out to be Us Hispanics are your backbone Were the ones building the skyscrapers you got with your “small loan” We’re the ones that make you look good to your “followers” because we’re your foundation I mean let’s be honest Without us you’d be nothing The only reason you’d be recognized is because you bought a role on home alone 2 And by some weird chance of faith you’ve managed to stay in this twisted race You’ve managed to scare us straight And with some hesitation I say you’ve actually helped us We are now united and stronger than ever Because you’ve open our eyes to the fact that we must fight So as I close my letter want to thank you Because of you my family has finally registered to vote Because of you our determination grows stronger So excuse me if my poem causes you frustration But I thought you deserved some type of credit
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May 15, 2016
May 15, 2016 at 8:03 PM UTC
Dear Donald Trump
Dear Donald Trump You don’t know me but I sadly know you Your face has been plastered on tv screens and newspapers for so long And your words have cut into my soul like a knife Twisting each time you spew your venom Never in my life have I been more scared of a man until now I am now forced to be more aware of my surroundings because your supporters are hidden in crowds waiting… Despite all your crushing charades I have never been more proud to be the minority Because for the first time I see my communities standing together Seeing my family work hour on hour only proves you’re a fraud Cause unlike you I spit the truth not lies I preserve differences you block them I strive to build peace between nations while you rather build a wall to separate it News flash, us Hispanics don’t want to be in any country you’re running We aren’t these lazy or uneducated ganstas you make us out to be Us Hispanics are your backbone Were the ones building the skyscrapers you got with your “small loan” We’re the ones that make you look good to your “followers” because we’re your foundation I mean let’s be honest Without us you’d be nothing The only reason you’d be recognized is because you bought a role on home alone 2 And by some weird chance of faith you’ve managed to stay in this twisted race You’ve managed to scare us straight And with some hesitation I say you’ve actually helped us We are now united and stronger than ever Because you’ve open our eyes to the fact that we must fight So as I close my letter want to thank you Because of you my family has finally registered to vote Because of you our determination grows stronger So excuse me if my poem causes you frustration But I thought you deserved some type of credit
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Four parts, woven together Uniting all universal truths What others do with it's powers Only the future will prove The first strand displays the world's true nature Destroying everything it creates We become unwanted children Who have learned to incorporate Killing in our communities Biting, grinding flesh and bone Swallowing with guilt free demeanors Only leaving foul-stenched excretions as evidence Second Strand speaks of our basic biological anxiety To deny the terror of death Imperatively born, emerging from nothing Given a name and consciousness Hopelessly abandoned from the beginning Only to be fated always with everlasting death Strand three We hide underneath the "Vital lie of the character" Pretend to be shining knights in armor Who will make us forget our Unconscious anxiousness of death We all work to attain prestige, money, and the Fleeting feel of immortality Worshiping Gods with clay feet And when our beliefs are attacked "Holy wars" becomes the pseudonym for Our immortality projects The last strand All the efforts we put into Making this Earth perfect By eliminating scapegoat "enemies" and "evil" deities We end up making everything filthy In the effort to make everything right and pure We turn the Earth's soil black and color the sky red We strived for utopias, making dystopians All these actions seem unconscious But it is not the animals nature or Evolutionary process It's just us trying to pretend We don't have perishable bodies; Trying to deny death
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 11:55 PM UTC
The Denial of Death
Four parts, woven together Uniting all universal truths What others do with it's powers Only the future will prove The first strand displays the world's true nature Destroying everything it creates We become unwanted children Who have learned to incorporate Killing in our communities Biting, grinding flesh and bone Swallowing with guilt free demeanors Only leaving foul-stenched excretions as evidence Second Strand speaks of our basic biological anxiety To deny the terror of death Imperatively born, emerging from nothing Given a name and consciousness Hopelessly abandoned from the beginning Only to be fated always with everlasting death Strand three We hide underneath the "Vital lie of the character" Pretend to be shining knights in armor Who will make us forget our Unconscious anxiousness of death We all work to attain prestige, money, and the Fleeting feel of immortality Worshiping Gods with clay feet And when our beliefs are attacked "Holy wars" becomes the pseudonym for Our immortality projects The last strand All the efforts we put into Making this Earth perfect By eliminating scapegoat "enemies" and "evil" deities We end up making everything filthy In the effort to make everything right and pure We turn the Earth's soil black and color the sky red We strived for utopias, making dystopians All these actions seem unconscious But it is not the animals nature or Evolutionary process It's just us trying to pretend We don't have perishable bodies; Trying to deny death
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Lush mango groves where  the musky scent of mango blooms once wafted making the bulbuls sing in ecstasy from morning till sundown                   are reborn as gated communities,                   where grim seriousness parade.                       In sun drenched vineyards,                       shadows of dreams,                       wanting to dress up as IT parks, spread.                       Bangalore barters its  medley of colors and smells                       for prosperity in terms of greenbacks,                       as people learn to be 'smart' players,                                        and more and more get 'Bangalored'*                                        from around the world. Corn fields that danced to the tunes of  the songs of  toiling farmers go missing within days. To match with the new mood, nature, in this green paradise, till not so long ago shamelessly wears the  unnatural with style.
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Mar 4, 2013
Mar 4, 2013 at 10:09 AM UTC
Getting Bangalored while Bangalore bleeds dry
The Strength of The female carrying a nation in her womb, leaders, criminal master minds and you. Feeding clans, communities and villages, nurturing earth. Sheltering the youth, in storms of the future ahead, wiping your tears strengthening your heart again. She is always there and has The Hands of warmth, holding you tight to lands of joy
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Mar 24, 2015
Mar 24, 2015 at 2:11 PM UTC
Her strength
If I were ruler of all nations... As one of Gods creations There would be policies created from this societies frustrations I wouldn't waste your time... In fact doing so would be a crime It wouldn't be about politics with all it's dirt & grime It would be about the people It would ensure our rights are equal Spread to all from high above, preached atop the highest steeple And I wouldn't be afraid to say... That expiring some freedoms may be the only way And that would mean taking certain peoples "rights" away Some freedoms are given away too easily They should require much harder accessibility Which will aid in the filtration of humanity One right I would retrieve because it's abuse is so hard to believe I'd make it official that not all persons would have the right to conceive Not unless certain criteria are met, I'd have certain rules that would be set I'd put a hold on this right until one disproves their ignorant And since ignorance is bred I wouldn't allow our future to continue to be mislead Stuck in communities that will never get ahead If I were faced with this position, I have no doubt in my disposition Life skills would be taught in school, a required graduation precondition I'd advocate the importance of community Gone would be the privilege of immunity And with it would go all feelings of disunity To ensure all are exposed to equal possibility Early education would include lessons on life & moral responsibility To ensure guidance to all despite personal accessibility I'd replace things like algebra and womans lit with classes on life knowledge It's more important that the youth learn financal stability and manners, those who want to learn the square root of X can take that major in college Priority should be that each leaves high school with the tools to survive Each would leave with equal opportunity to prosper and to thrive Oh if I ruled the world!!
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Mar 11, 2013
Mar 11, 2013 at 8:44 AM UTC
If I Ruled The World
If I were ruler of all nations... As one of Gods creations There would be policies created from this societies frustrations I wouldn't waste your time... In fact doing so would be a crime It wouldn't be about politics with all it's dirt & grime It would be about the people It would ensure our rights are equal Spread to all from high above, preached atop the highest steeple And I wouldn't be afraid to say... That expiring some freedoms may be the only way And that would mean taking certain peoples "rights" away Some freedoms are given away too easily They should require much harder accessibility Which will aid in the filtration of humanity One right I would retrieve because it's abuse is so hard to believe I'd make it official that not all persons would have the right to conceive Not unless certain criteria are met, I'd have certain rules that would be set I'd put a hold on this right until one disproves their ignorant And since ignorance is bred I wouldn't allow our future to continue to be mislead Stuck in communities that will never get ahead If I were faced with this position, I have no doubt in my disposition Life skills would be taught in school, a required graduation precondition I'd advocate the importance of community Gone would be the privilege of immunity And with it would go all feelings of disunity To ensure all are exposed to equal possibility Early education would include lessons on life & moral responsibility To ensure guidance to all despite personal accessibility I'd replace things like algebra and womans lit with classes on life knowledge It's more important that the youth learn financal stability and manners, those who want to learn the square root of X can take that major in college Priority should be that each leaves high school with the tools to survive Each would leave with equal opportunity to prosper and to thrive Oh if I ruled the world!!
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To relate, to imagine something similar to what is being shown, to imagine what it might be like. A metaphorical meaning is like being a shadow that tries to relate to a star. A poem with metaphorical meaning is written with more effort, research, and a deeper understanding of language. I have written more metaphorical poems than average poetry. I work harder on metaphorical meaning than I would with basic techniques. I love a challenge so that's why you see more metaphorical poems written by me. I have researched many languages and meanings to words, my techniques for writing reflect my efforts. I am a writer who writes with imagery and metaphor so often that I am known to be an eccentric writer. It's an exotic way of expression. It helps my readers to relate to what I am thinking. Also, it is how my brain sees the world. I was not born with language like most people are, I am an autistic person. I don't have a natural language in my mind, I have learned how to express myself through writing because of my handicap. I am not perfect but I try to improve myself by learning and practice. I am still learning not to criticize myself too much. I am never a good judge so I try not to think about it too much. I analyze everything so I think it's good for me to try not to analyze my writing as often as possible. I end up changing my work until it turns into something completely different than it started out if I do. I want people to see the effort and time I give my poetry, so I do my best to show it. I am always happy to do something new and challenging. My grammar and spelling has improved because I am willing to take feedback. I love it when people are honest and tell me if I made a mistake because I can learn from the mistake. To grow and develop you need a plan and a place to go when you need space. I have learned this and I believe that is what helps me to improve. Metaphorically speaking, I am like a leaf I change with the seasons and I am willing to grow within a tight space. I love being with other leafs like myself. That's why I join communities like this one. Thank you, Hello Poetry. © 2018 By Amanda Shelton
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Nov 5, 2018
Nov 5, 2018 at 3:39 PM UTC
Metaphorical Poetry
To relate, to imagine something similar to what is being shown, to imagine what it might be like. A metaphorical meaning is like being a shadow that tries to relate to a star. A poem with metaphorical meaning is written with more effort, research, and a deeper understanding of language. I have written more metaphorical poems than average poetry. I work harder on metaphorical meaning than I would with basic techniques. I love a challenge so that's why you see more metaphorical poems written by me. I have researched many languages and meanings to words, my techniques for writing reflect my efforts. I am a writer who writes with imagery and metaphor so often that I am known to be an eccentric writer. It's an exotic way of expression. It helps my readers to relate to what I am thinking. Also, it is how my brain sees the world. I was not born with language like most people are, I am an autistic person. I don't have a natural language in my mind, I have learned how to express myself through writing because of my handicap. I am not perfect but I try to improve myself by learning and practice. I am still learning not to criticize myself too much. I am never a good judge so I try not to think about it too much. I analyze everything so I think it's good for me to try not to analyze my writing as often as possible. I end up changing my work until it turns into something completely different than it started out if I do. I want people to see the effort and time I give my poetry, so I do my best to show it. I am always happy to do something new and challenging. My grammar and spelling has improved because I am willing to take feedback. I love it when people are honest and tell me if I made a mistake because I can learn from the mistake. To grow and develop you need a plan and a place to go when you need space. I have learned this and I believe that is what helps me to improve. Metaphorically speaking, I am like a leaf I change with the seasons and I am willing to grow within a tight space. I love being with other leafs like myself. That's why I join communities like this one. Thank you, Hello Poetry. © 2018 By Amanda Shelton
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A certain spectrum of whiteness still is delusional it thinks it is still torturing black people in private It functions as if it is out in the barren ocean on a slave ship choosing captives to **** degrade and throw to the sharks and the patterns of society are used to it like the sharks that changed their feeding patterns based on this **** and killing by slave overseers The white slave overseers enjoyed **** so much and the money from it that a whole social structure was designed around it the Ivy league institutions made this possible the government made this possible communities made this possible you make it impossible please and thank you
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Jul 10, 2016
Jul 10, 2016 at 3:16 PM UTC
feeding patterns
“and he will rule over you.” I am not ready to release my religion the consistency of it has grown with me i am afraid if i unleash it from my soul the preached darkness will consume it i am afraid that the possibility of its factuality and actuality will hover in the atmosphere at noon i am afraid that by dismissing God too soon he will dismiss me Ironically, with my gaining of knowledge, i have come to begrudge the man in the sky who has cursed my *** to serve man to be taken out of man, to exist only within man he has given a text for those to quote when arguing the entrapment of women how am i to recognize the being when he has ****** me to be at the elbow of an entire gender has blamed my kind for the original sin of sins The Bible has shaped the complications of communities it has manipulated the societies that barely function it has forced people to fight for the basic rights all should hold how am i to forgive such sins committed against my kind? to accept the influences of a book that is thousands of years old that still governs my everyday life?
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Nov 18, 2018
Nov 18, 2018 at 4:01 AM UTC
The Year of the Serpent
Such confidence, To stand as you Repeling all the cursing Enduring all the negatives To be you, To be different, Not afraid of the monochrome communities, Giving opinion that differs from others, To not bow to the majority, Just be you.
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Feb 29, 2016
Feb 29, 2016 at 1:07 PM UTC
Being You
Okay, the only one has been hiding their racism were whites. Trying to blend into society with others because employers require a get along attitude. Go to a bank and instantly you know the hiring schemes. And this any community. Same, with certain restaurants you attend. It's the blend that point the management comfortability out. White flight, existed because the "fearful" can't adjust to a changing society. History has shown this. And they have created it. Jim Crow's laws weren't created by blacks. Asians placed in America concentration camps wasn't their idea. And these were American citizens. History presently has shown that the new "pick on" group is the Latin communities. They MS13 or this or that. Many white businesses must be enjoying their employment keeping them in business. For in many big cities they building the complexes and hotels, and sidewalks. History has shown when it comes to justice they the first to try to scheme out of their crimes. But quick to holler about locking up criminals until it's them. History has shown when investigating wickedness in government. They lead the pack. Then this is just an opinion. And no way connected to alternative facts.
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Aug 13, 2018
Aug 13, 2018 at 11:35 AM UTC
History Has Shown
the lakewater near the banks darken with the shadows of coniferous trees not unlike the way my ***** darkened just the other evening with transgression and i find myself waiting,arcing the ash from my cigarette in fiery transient streaks. this is north west angle's public dock, a sunken relic of the anishinabe appropriately too young to be old just like the ******* rest of us. kee no wahh she spits with conviction, her forked tongue a testament to the near science fiction that keeps its ugly head low to the ground in the backwater communities of rural ontario and manitoba and saskatchewan and beyond. purple and yellow and green galaxies span across the deep space of my neck and that's good enough, they reckon, to land me in the passenger's seat. now the sun's shallow beneath the canadian shield leaving only a violent, open **** on the skyline and the watered down blood of ritual sacrifice to filter up through the cheesecloth of the underbrush and effectively discolour the poplars in a pastel identical to the lining of my **** so ask me how many children have been stranded on the pallid, uneven terrain of my thighs and i'll stop making references to my ******
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Feb 22, 2010
Feb 22, 2010 at 10:12 AM UTC
pow wow grounds
While the calmness returns, the strangers gone, noise of gunshots, the cry of the wounded and dying are no more heard, our children and women came out of hiding, the young men smiling sheepishly as they survived the onslaught of the insurgents. You can see the older women in small groups scattered all over selling food and all kinds of stuff. The stragglers returns, loitering all over the place, trying to adjust and blend into the communities. Laughter and shouts of joy is again heard in our land even the morning songs of the turtle dove. The stray dogs are seen looking for food and handouts. The women pounding their yam in mortar with the pistil are heard in our backyard with the noise of happy children singing and dancing at the village square in the moonlight, while the elders and young men keep watch. What a beautiful moment as peace returns. With grateful heart we celebrate this day. ©2018,Emeka Mokeme. All Rights Reserved.
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Aug 7, 2018
Aug 7, 2018 at 5:15 PM UTC
PEACE RETURNS
OUR POVERTY HAS COLOUR Alexander K Opicho (Eldoret, Kenya; [email protected]) Most illusive and elusive Like the devils of Congo forest Is the impish poverty Permeating all seals with vicious wily Into the midst of callous humanity Biting country men and country women With carnivorous dentalities so ruthless Putting man to a forlorn shame As the wife looks in desperate flaggerbastation Putting matriarchal womenfolk to humiliation As the expectant sire wallow in the askance of looks Condemning communities to status ad absurdum initio Thinning man from man, culling woman from woman Eating flesh by flesh social koprpers of man Eating the native flesh in the farms of Brazil Tearing the ***** steak into ghetto lacerations of Chicago Whizzling sombre morning tunes to the Zulus in the black tundra Cementing pale casted clusters for the Patels of India Commanding suave drills to poor (wo) menfolk; left! Left! Left! –abouuuuturn! With its accomplice Mr. Hunger son of starvation, they both command drills For black factory workers, Maids and gravediggers to dance Watchmen, thieves and prostitutes to match In the hinterland of Africa all the riff-raff in deep despair Dance in a tandem to the irritating drills of the duo; You come on! Left! Right! Left! Right!—fowaaard match! Backward match! Left! Right! Left! Right! Sharpp uuuuuuuturn! The duo communiqué; Go home and wait for your pay announcement. Surely; what colour is our poverty?
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Nov 29, 2013
Nov 29, 2013 at 11:13 AM UTC
our poverty has colour
Edifice erections surreal mistic heights Wayward excursions and catenary's bight Communal collusions of harmonies site Ethereal subsistence on exsertion's light Lingam and yoni are indefatigably tight Exponential overload was communities plight Semantic regalia is myriad temptation Finite being a mutual oblation Vicarious recalcitrance an obeisant sensation Conception's vastness like incalculable equation   Ephemeral effulgence is indomitable pervasion Treacherous traverse and eternal occasion Succinct salience is symbiotic allegory Fecundity's verve a transcendent promontory Imperative ascension the conjunctive's divinatory Audacity's exigence and fertility's invocatory Erotica's erectile like mentality's trajectory Futurity's fatidic and inherent delusory **** it fell right over like categorical imperative's contradictory
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Jun 27, 2015
Jun 27, 2015 at 12:32 PM UTC
Resurrecting the Tower of Babel
Hundreds of homes sit Cookie cutter produced With manicured red rose bushes And fences painted by immigrants The suburban white breads Flock to these copycat communities Eager to fit in with their pale skinned Blue eyes babies and mother-father pair It’s all pleasant and just a bit Creepy; the lack of contrast How are we to manage happiness With such tasteless lives? -x- I’d like to take a hammer To these mass produced homes And hack their roses to mush or Kick their fences to splinters To make a **** original piece No matter how bizarre or damaged So that our skin color, our *** would be The last thing to be seen as ‘weird’ Maybe then we’ll be content with the contrast In a home that just breathes our presence Even if we’re out and about; living No part of us, even our home, will conform To the standards of society
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Nov 6, 2011
Nov 6, 2011 at 4:51 PM UTC
Contrast
Like so many Lemmings they rush to southern climes for greener pastures year round golf a Slower pace Cheaper prices and Tropical temperatures Leathery Tanned Unnaturally taut and Sun-spotted they crowd the local haunts and Clog the highways. At best they tolerate whoever is not Pensioned or Privileged At worst they ban the Underage Unfortunates from their gated communities and social gatherings The pendulum has swung from a time when the Old were at the Mercy of the Young to the present when Youth is Oppressed by Senescence Once democracy’s backbone they now wax Conservative having obtained their Slice of the pie Now there is no pie Mother Earth has been trampled to death and the Toiling hands of those who Stoke the fires of industry are Blistered and discouraged
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Feb 26, 2017
Feb 26, 2017 at 2:27 PM UTC
The Culture of Old
Out in a distant land Church bells are ringing Families and friends are laughing Most of them are crying Not from sadness But from happiness Church bells are ringing Out in a distant land In celebration of a joyous Occasion between two people Between a man and a woman Between two men or two women Church bells are ringing In a far, far away land Signaling the togetherness On two communities And the creation of one One happy community Somewhere over the rainbow Church bells are ringing Marking the end of a struggle A struggle for freedom A struggle for unity A struggle for happiness Somewhere, anywhere, everywhere Church bells are ringing As two people force everyone To take off the mask call hate and discrimination And ignorance and become a family together Church bells are ringing across the world From China to Greenland From the United States to Malaysia The bells have different sounds But the message is the same And is felt in the hearts of everyone Church bells ring for everyone And someday church bells Will ring for you and me
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Oct 10, 2011
Oct 10, 2011 at 2:00 PM UTC
THE WORLD’S WEDDING