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Sitting in a café waiting t̶o̶ ̶d̶(̶l̶i̶v̶e̶)̶i̶e̶. There is dogfood art on the wall and I’ve got nice coffee from a barista [Barbie] with tattoos. Pull in one [a(?)] direction already. Like a kite in a park with no kid attached. Gone, going, past. Compliments are t̶o̶o̶ ̶c̶h̶e̶a̶p̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶f̶e̶e̶l̶  valuable these days. “All the girls drink for free.” **** **** FuckFuckFuck.” ******* Drink your sweet, dark-cherry stained lips. Dead eyes masked in mascara masquerading as more. “Bought with bourbon and goes down easy.” Commodify, objectify, consume. Transactional romance drives a BMW.
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Jul 17, 2016
Jul 17, 2016 at 7:32 PM UTC
I just wanted to say hello.
Glowing faces In beautiful destinations Saying "Pay me so I can show you how to live like me" Give them your money, your time Their joyous lives fill your Instagram feed, Filling you with a insatiable need To consume what the lifestyle they are selling Life coaches, spiritual masters, transformation guides All these people who've got the life While you turn to them Through your screen Looking to them to tell you what life means They say "Pay up, happiness isn't free" And you scramble in search for money, Because they say they sell what you need You work your nine to five, And live your tired life You try to make ends meet Your kids are ungrateful, Never looking up from their myriad screens Your husband left you In search of a woman who looks like she could be in her teens You eat your ramen, no, it's not gluten free You wonder how your life got to this-- In two words: Miserable drudgery You go on social media, Look at all these lifestyle gurus Talking about how happy they are That they could burst at the seams They've got the money, And the perfect honey And the luxuries, They take selfies on distant beaches, Smiling cheek to cheek They are happy And they are trying to sell you their lifestyle They create e-courses, e-books, e-everything-and-anythings On how to follow what they did to become so happy, so wealthy, so blessed It's all a mindset, they teach You can get anything you desire If you work hard enough for it It's a revolution, With all these self love lifestyle gurus Infiltrating social media But are we selling our souls, To these people who don't truly understand What it's like to be you? What it's like to be financially poor, Abandoned and lonely, Unattractive by society's standards, I'm not saying they haven't been through their own stuff, But can you really commodify a lifestyle? Can you put a price tag on helping others? Especially when that price tag is thousands of dollars? This help is for the privileged, And those that need help the most will go without, as usual I guess I just crave humility In this selfie culture, I truly ache for authenticity, Real helping, Real healing, And not all of this showiness, Disguised as expressing gratitude for your amazing life On social media Perhaps we can all wake up From the spectacular little daydream of our own lives To the reality of the worldwide suffering going on right at this moment Maybe if we stopped posting about the atrocities on the news, Got off our phones And did something to change our world, Things would be different.
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Dec 26, 2018
Dec 26, 2018 at 12:50 AM UTC
Humility
Glowing faces In beautiful destinations Saying "Pay me so I can show you how to live like me" Give them your money, your time Their joyous lives fill your Instagram feed, Filling you with a insatiable need To consume what the lifestyle they are selling Life coaches, spiritual masters, transformation guides All these people who've got the life While you turn to them Through your screen Looking to them to tell you what life means They say "Pay up, happiness isn't free" And you scramble in search for money, Because they say they sell what you need You work your nine to five, And live your tired life You try to make ends meet Your kids are ungrateful, Never looking up from their myriad screens Your husband left you In search of a woman who looks like she could be in her teens You eat your ramen, no, it's not gluten free You wonder how your life got to this-- In two words: Miserable drudgery You go on social media, Look at all these lifestyle gurus Talking about how happy they are That they could burst at the seams They've got the money, And the perfect honey And the luxuries, They take selfies on distant beaches, Smiling cheek to cheek They are happy And they are trying to sell you their lifestyle They create e-courses, e-books, e-everything-and-anythings On how to follow what they did to become so happy, so wealthy, so blessed It's all a mindset, they teach You can get anything you desire If you work hard enough for it It's a revolution, With all these self love lifestyle gurus Infiltrating social media But are we selling our souls, To these people who don't truly understand What it's like to be you? What it's like to be financially poor, Abandoned and lonely, Unattractive by society's standards, I'm not saying they haven't been through their own stuff, But can you really commodify a lifestyle? Can you put a price tag on helping others? Especially when that price tag is thousands of dollars? This help is for the privileged, And those that need help the most will go without, as usual I guess I just crave humility In this selfie culture, I truly ache for authenticity, Real helping, Real healing, And not all of this showiness, Disguised as expressing gratitude for your amazing life On social media Perhaps we can all wake up From the spectacular little daydream of our own lives To the reality of the worldwide suffering going on right at this moment Maybe if we stopped posting about the atrocities on the news, Got off our phones And did something to change our world, Things would be different.
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power pose in front of the angry men "we're not scared of you" but they should be she spits fire bright from lips she wears matte dark she's digging the perfectly manicured claws into the palms of her hand hands that bring incredible generosity and incredible pain depending on how audaciously you approach her with your alcohol-stenched breath and a body that takes up space but contains nothing of substance aside from liquor of course an empty, angry vessel of wordy slurs and slurred words she knows they don't deserve her tears they should feel grateful to receive even a smirk an ounce of her attention in this economy with the men who untuck their shirts after a long day's work unaware of what the women have been up to is priceless you can't commodify what you can't touch they are not beds waiting for you to lay down on to make your lives easier while you weigh down upon ours her silk sheet skin and the comfort of knowing she will be there at 2pm and 2am this is her home this body is an address it is not your residence loiterers will be fined she will be fine power pose the power grows this is your power prose because mama, you will be fine
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Sep 5, 2017
Sep 5, 2017 at 6:50 PM UTC
mama phoenix
Alienate my body and mind, commodify my core; Is my existence a means to a profit? The 21st century's commercial ***** My labor is not mine, my art is not mine; Everything I create liscensed and taken, another addition to a capitalist's shrine. I understand the poached animal: Ripped apart, skin and teeth hung for all to see, and then, admired for its beauty.
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Nov 25, 2018
Nov 25, 2018 at 7:07 AM UTC
Modern disassociation from one's self
Bird with serrated leather jacket collar When you sip that drink and hit yourself with a mauler Drop a sigh, with your eyes toward the sky but don’t fly, it’s alright to sit low, cry, stay back home in July, and just standby. There is no need to commodify You’re not a lousy fly stuck in a rut nor a feather helplessly swinging into dirt You’re a singer singing each note with your unbuttoned white shirt and a chain of daisies around your throat And remember the melodies your senses wrote? There are places you will go, when you follow the lilts in your heart’s own flow, and when into resonance the murmur grows, there can be no better show there can be no better show
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Jun 25, 2019
Jun 25, 2019 at 4:48 PM UTC
Standby
disclaimer: I’m thinking about the hourglass in your mouth. this is what is left behind when the dust has settled. please find attached:- my heart. my apoplexy, this, your words bleeding into me settling, stagnant clotting around the end of us - salvaging the wound. to have something, but not be able to truly hold it, liquid, seeping through your fingers - to see it pooled on the floor, the remnants of something you had so transiently your fingers don’t even feel wet with it, [not at all] not when you’d rather be immersed. you see, I don’t like to be in my body because it only serves to remind me where your hands once were. when all you want is what you had, what is left behind in your palms? whispers of the last time they were held, and a kind of vacancy you don’t want to fill. [close your eyes, breathe, count how long it takes to fall apart] interesting to think of the systemic effects of heartbreak. interesting how you can pull one heart string and I’ll unravel. I know I’ve been a shadow of myself lately; it’s called “going through the motions”, apologies. safe as in a place, safe as in your arms, safe as in has-been once-was and never again. what happens when the goods commodify themselves? I have never missed someone like I miss you, have missed you since the day of my exile from your heart a concept: existence as a kind of festering, as though I’m in the last place I saw you like a finger probing the wound, septic and exactly the wrong kind of comfort: there is no unloving. it comes in waves - the weight and salt of it makes my back ache and my eyes sting. you see, I’ve never been vulnerable like this before, and I’m wondering if there’s a limit as to how broken a person can be, the same way you can only fold a piece of A4 paper in half seven times? I wanted to be unforgettable and now I’m just trying to Be, hoping that somewhere I linger eat my feelings, stick pencils down my throat   ***** poetry. if my heart is on my sleeve and my sadness upon my eyelids; then my belly is a processor, and all it spits out is simply a checklist of all the things we could have been - our morphogenesis, our eulogy. please. thank you.
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Mar 20, 2018
Mar 20, 2018 at 6:12 PM UTC
HEADACHES
disclaimer: I’m thinking about the hourglass in your mouth. this is what is left behind when the dust has settled. please find attached:- my heart. my apoplexy, this, your words bleeding into me settling, stagnant clotting around the end of us - salvaging the wound. to have something, but not be able to truly hold it, liquid, seeping through your fingers - to see it pooled on the floor, the remnants of something you had so transiently your fingers don’t even feel wet with it, [not at all] not when you’d rather be immersed. you see, I don’t like to be in my body because it only serves to remind me where your hands once were. when all you want is what you had, what is left behind in your palms? whispers of the last time they were held, and a kind of vacancy you don’t want to fill. [close your eyes, breathe, count how long it takes to fall apart] interesting to think of the systemic effects of heartbreak. interesting how you can pull one heart string and I’ll unravel. I know I’ve been a shadow of myself lately; it’s called “going through the motions”, apologies. safe as in a place, safe as in your arms, safe as in has-been once-was and never again. what happens when the goods commodify themselves? I have never missed someone like I miss you, have missed you since the day of my exile from your heart a concept: existence as a kind of festering, as though I’m in the last place I saw you like a finger probing the wound, septic and exactly the wrong kind of comfort: there is no unloving. it comes in waves - the weight and salt of it makes my back ache and my eyes sting. you see, I’ve never been vulnerable like this before, and I’m wondering if there’s a limit as to how broken a person can be, the same way you can only fold a piece of A4 paper in half seven times? I wanted to be unforgettable and now I’m just trying to Be, hoping that somewhere I linger eat my feelings, stick pencils down my throat   ***** poetry. if my heart is on my sleeve and my sadness upon my eyelids; then my belly is a processor, and all it spits out is simply a checklist of all the things we could have been - our morphogenesis, our eulogy. please. thank you.
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I live underground— with fiendish hands that reach through the dirt and mass, grasping at a sound. To their mile-wide gaze of white wall eyes, my lungs collapse, crumble and fold— taken in and out of sight. Through earthly glass, I am a broken con artist. My cries, a faux pas, my skin off-brand, while somewhere a heart beats, embodied. Amidst this push-pull throng, a long goodbye speaks to dead space, bearing dead weight down on the world— Commodify my breath. Call me sanctioned off. Ship me to the doorstep of a funeral home, where I can be buried again in my fever-hot coffin. One would call it a soul, forever dropping in— from the other side.
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Nov 1, 2024
Nov 1, 2024 at 7:33 AM UTC
Unidentified Heads On My Ceiling