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man (?) the tomatoes?   patty m., a grievous error thy commissioned tomatoes are the quintessential feminine fruit red juicy, round, curvy, sweet with a flavor at once the same, yet never again always different, diffident, asized, and blonde or red, never contrived without it, would pizza be pizza? without it, would **** ***** love, be merely a good salad or a poem ever be the same? “me love tomatoes” cookie monster
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Apr 19, 2018
Apr 19, 2018 at 11:33 AM UTC
"man the tomatoes?"
Side by side, their faces blurred, The earl and countess lie in stone, Their proper habits vaguely shown As jointed armour, stiffened pleat, And that faint hint of the absurd - The little dogs under their feet. Such plainness of the pre-baroque Hardly involves the eye, until It meets his left-hand gauntlet, still Clasped empty in the other; and One sees, with a sharp tender shock, His hand withdrawn, holding her hand. They would not think to lie so long. Such faithfulness in effigy Was just a detail friends would see: A sculptor's sweet commissioned grace Thrown off in helping to prolong The Latin names around the base. They would no guess how early in Their supine stationary voyage The air would change to soundless damage, Turn the old tenantry away; How soon succeeding eyes begin To look, not read. Rigidly they Persisted, linked, through lengths and breadths Of time. Snow fell, undated. Light Each summer thronged the grass. A bright Litter of birdcalls strewed the same Bone-littered ground. And up the paths The endless altered people came, Washing at their identity. Now, helpless in the hollow of An unarmorial age, a trough Of smoke in slow suspended skeins Above their scrap of history, Only an attitude remains: Time has transfigures them into Untruth. The stone fidelity They hardly meant has come to be Their final blazon, and to prove Our almost-instinct almost true: What will survive of us is love.
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An Arundel Tomb
so someone remarks and thus a poem commissioned... *a better world, a wish no one can turn a back to... a literacy of mine own, a bridge too far... but such a lie too glorious to ignore... blessed be the wisher for he gave this day water and wine to a lapsed Jew who reincarnates the containership of body and soul from the Star of David,* it, burr~etched upon his chest, and embraces lost tourists who unfated unfazed stumble upon the guide dog of his verbal chicanery and funny bone, smiling for as long as it takes to cross that last bridge, nearer our god, you than me..
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Apr 24, 2018
Apr 24, 2018 at 11:07 AM UTC
“a better literate world of your own making”
The night has been commissioned to awaken in me the ubiquitous longing for your touch. The mindlessness consumes me when I wander from dream to dream, fantasizing the ever after that’ll mysteriously become present once you touch. The exuberant charm in every swipe of the breeze broadens a smile, reminding me of the endless passion for good humor and intense delight that you decree in large measures whilst I quail in love. It is diabolical, this game you play of keeping in shadows while I wither, in the unremitting glare of the sun that keeps me on the banks of the dark lake leaving me with only a few drops to wet my hand. I will implore to have an end to this ceaseless battle of restraint and abandon, But am only left with a tremulous belief, it is all not false what I see, in the glorious mist that night casts, I do not only sleep.
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Nov 13, 2012
Nov 13, 2012 at 2:05 PM UTC
Phantom Lover
train myself to write anywhere and at any time... as commissioned by ms. melan ~'~'~'~'~ so I, being a being, a poet who carries his mind scheming with him: drags along his body and soul, just in case: that his hands might feel the touch of beauty, skin and beyond, the exteriors of his interiors, to feel, to feel, to feel every one of his surfaces, the reality of his peculiar real his eyes so one can envision the unimaginable, and thus, never be satisfied, for all is always new, beyond original that his ugly, ungainly ears, may never miss the sound of his tripping & falling head!over!heels with the realization, he just might be foolishly in love the tastes of life's living that make his pulse race, crease his smiling face, causing his blood pressure so high he pleads to surrender, just begging to let his tongue survive and smells that arouse, producing & promising words proud &  profound, that have yet to succeed in capturing the fullness of the special musk odor that masks allure of attraction no, not a lot to ask for… 5:26am SunSep13 two zero two five
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Sep 14, 2025
Sep 14, 2025 at 5:35 AM UTC
Part Two: train myself to write anywhere
~for Verlie Burroughs, a ‘fellow’ islander poet with a sense of human humor~ walking the reservoir on a warm spring day, Central Park littered with tourists and pale face, fellow islanders, all of non-Algonquin Indian descent released from Rikers Island (of course) Prison, six month sentence served behind bars of winter grayscale skies and snowy steel and grey prison everything an out-of-townsfolk young lady passes me in a pink t-shirt, where humans these lazy days declare their entire philosophy, “I’d rather live on an island” and thus a poem commissioned well, rather brought forth from the chilled, deep waters surrounding the brain where winter vegetables rooted but cannot  surface, the iced ground frozen impermitting bodies to be buried, no war and death monument foundations to be poured, flower-powered poems unable to pierce as well, even with the upwards ****** of cesarean birth and or, one last push and me begging breathe winter strangled but I walked today the Central Park reservoir and all I got was that stupid t-shirt provocation with tulips and daffodils, dogwood and magnolias, and cherry blossoms confirming, it’s okay today to write of islands and shoreline once more, of boundaries now and again though the idea had prior brief transversed the thought canal, was struck into action when realized suddenly a dawning - a l l  m y  l i f e,  I  h a v e  l i v e d  o n  a n  i s l a n d counting backwards seven decades with a collegial exception, of living by a great lake, which is but an island in reverse, poet *** prophet had to always walk on water to get home <•> my poems are travelogues, not pretty words and tonguing talk, sorry not, more tales than wagging tongue wordy tails but dumbstruck by the ocean notion that I live by the grace of an Ocean that waits patiently to reclaim my island, stealing my unborn poem children and tried with a Sandy haired girl a few years ago hurry home to scribe, and imbibe, write upon its streetscape with colored chalk and upon it once more, the concrete paths and a reservoir dirt path surrounding and shorelines that are all the shaping of me all my life, and Neverland realized I am a seagull disguised as human*
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Apr 16, 2018
Apr 16, 2018 at 11:25 PM UTC
all my life, an islander
~for Verlie Burroughs, a ‘fellow’ islander poet with a sense of human humor~ walking the reservoir on a warm spring day, Central Park littered with tourists and pale face, fellow islanders, all of non-Algonquin Indian descent released from Rikers Island (of course) Prison, six month sentence served behind bars of winter grayscale skies and snowy steel and grey prison everything an out-of-townsfolk young lady passes me in a pink t-shirt, where humans these lazy days declare their entire philosophy, “I’d rather live on an island” and thus a poem commissioned well, rather brought forth from the chilled, deep waters surrounding the brain where winter vegetables rooted but cannot  surface, the iced ground frozen impermitting bodies to be buried, no war and death monument foundations to be poured, flower-powered poems unable to pierce as well, even with the upwards ****** of cesarean birth and or, one last push and me begging breathe winter strangled but I walked today the Central Park reservoir and all I got was that stupid t-shirt provocation with tulips and daffodils, dogwood and magnolias, and cherry blossoms confirming, it’s okay today to write of islands and shoreline once more, of boundaries now and again though the idea had prior brief transversed the thought canal, was struck into action when realized suddenly a dawning - a l l  m y  l i f e,  I  h a v e  l i v e d  o n  a n  i s l a n d counting backwards seven decades with a collegial exception, of living by a great lake, which is but an island in reverse, poet *** prophet had to always walk on water to get home <•> my poems are travelogues, not pretty words and tonguing talk, sorry not, more tales than wagging tongue wordy tails but dumbstruck by the ocean notion that I live by the grace of an Ocean that waits patiently to reclaim my island, stealing my unborn poem children and tried with a Sandy haired girl a few years ago hurry home to scribe, and imbibe, write upon its streetscape with colored chalk and upon it once more, the concrete paths and a reservoir dirt path surrounding and shorelines that are all the shaping of me all my life, and Neverland realized I am a seagull disguised as human*
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-for Zukiswa Mvunguse~ and for ~ Jul, who once again, loved each line best~ having already deduced that: “the unplanned is his plan, it’s his faceted flaws that refract his coloratura”^ the titled alliteration teases him into thinking there, is more to be said, more to be prayed, the unplanned lesser lesson is as-of-the-yet unlearned, and the sunburst of a full fledged lying-in-bed born from a static spark of kinetic energy, awaking in an unfamiliar bed or a too familiar state of mind, begs for birth and vainglorious death-by-anon/amity of another poem   I have written poems commissioned, “write about suicide,” asked a friend, “take this word and artfully knead it,” once, was once an oft request, twisty manipulate your scheming resources into finely assaying a field rock raw, laboratory mind-mine it into an essay that delve dives where you fear to treacherous tread, resultant, an awkward prayer, now, a valued mineral no poem is truly planned and no prayer ever truly answered, but as you compose, pushing the last, next word ever farther to the right, you self-confess, expecting no absolution, that the poem, this one as well, and the next, and the next, and the next has always been planned since your inception, always a prayer asked, and in creation conception, answered even if not directly answered, for in the bare minimum asking, is the answering, is the planning, is the poem and the prayer, is his owned alliteration
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Mar 24, 2019
Mar 24, 2019 at 8:16 AM UTC
poetry, planning and prayer (and answers)
What does a painter do? A painter paints. Of paintings inspired by the universe; Of legends luminous as pious saints. But people like me work to fill my purse. Not artisan by trade nor rich merchant, With rough and stubby fingers callused palms, I'll starve if I were the master's servant And soon to take the streets to beg for alms. I paint for sake of commerce not for art; I paint all kinds of buildings, houses, schools. None enters, jobs can't start till I depart; Scrappers, ladders, paints, brushes are my tools. Do what I'm commissioned to do. To paint. But Leonardo or Angelo I ain't.
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Aug 24, 2018
Aug 24, 2018 at 8:48 PM UTC
The Painter; Sonnet #13
Consanguinity: A Commissioned Poem (How Well Do You Know Me?) This request, from wolf spirit aka quinfinn, accidentally hit the spot of what was foremost on my mind. Cosanguinity:  A relationship by descent from a common ancestor; kinship (distinguished from affinity).  A close relationship or connection. Poetry, mine, yours, Ours, Invades my consciousness. We write poems on the same subject, Even the same title, But a few days apart. Insanity, Coincidence, or Consanguinity? Perhaps we are reading each other's stuff Too much. But that's crazy, Or Consanguinity? Yet, And yet, We see the same things So incredibly different. That is the answer. We see the same thing and I am Struck down. A billion sights. A billion words. Yet, the human computer, Sorts, collates, and generates A billion different writes In a similar spirit, Employing the same phraseology. All right. Alright. Malaysia. Minnesota. East Coast. West Coast. Geographical differences. Time differences. No difference. A billion differences. The stylistic differences enable, No, correction, Ennobles us to coexist, Value each other, Learn. Observable differences. But more interesting, More pleasurable, are the incredible, visible, signs of Consanguinity. Mere affinity? Kinship. A poem? Nah. But at 1:11am in my location, It's what's on my mind. Now that I know the meaning of Consanguinity.
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Nov 4, 2013
Nov 4, 2013 at 1:21 AM UTC
Consanguinity: A Commissioned Poem
As culled from an arts magazine, 13 March 2019 Socialist Realism - The official doctrine in Soviet art and literature after 1932 that evolved from the traditional commitment to social and civic concerns into an all-pervasive general ideological mandate.             -Yevgeny Yevtushenko, 20th Century Russian Poetry collective exhibition space vibe community interactive narrative brown neighborhood defined commodified Indigenous identity tone-deaf decolonial narratives populist intertwined exhibition curatorial vision culture local artists arts district small galleries DIY spaces speaking out against gentrification displacing shelter studio space elsewhere late stage capitalism collective mantra underdog art savior corporate entity partnering insensitive ignorant collective brown people art contemporary work that may not fit into establishment art galleries media advisory venture collaborate creative community authentic local statement of expression excitement creative energy arts district project many levels collaborate local creative important creative community what that collaboration looks like ongoing local artists going to be engaged in planning commissioned project community buy-in consulted members of the creative community Indigenous artists curators museum directors professors burgeoning landscape cultural framework critique talk individuals entities inclusivity open dialogue opportunities project conversations collaboration discuss your projects share our work with you common ground work together healthy sustainable accountable decolonization
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Mar 16, 2019
Mar 16, 2019 at 5:41 PM UTC
A Contemporary Vocabulary for Writers and Artists
As culled from an arts magazine, 13 March 2019 Socialist Realism - The official doctrine in Soviet art and literature after 1932 that evolved from the traditional commitment to social and civic concerns into an all-pervasive general ideological mandate.             -Yevgeny Yevtushenko, 20th Century Russian Poetry collective exhibition space vibe community interactive narrative brown neighborhood defined commodified Indigenous identity tone-deaf decolonial narratives populist intertwined exhibition curatorial vision culture local artists arts district small galleries DIY spaces speaking out against gentrification displacing shelter studio space elsewhere late stage capitalism collective mantra underdog art savior corporate entity partnering insensitive ignorant collective brown people art contemporary work that may not fit into establishment art galleries media advisory venture collaborate creative community authentic local statement of expression excitement creative energy arts district project many levels collaborate local creative important creative community what that collaboration looks like ongoing local artists going to be engaged in planning commissioned project community buy-in consulted members of the creative community Indigenous artists curators museum directors professors burgeoning landscape cultural framework critique talk individuals entities inclusivity open dialogue opportunities project conversations collaboration discuss your projects share our work with you common ground work together healthy sustainable accountable decolonization
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*this poem didn't come easy. written amidst buffeting emo's, V will not be natural flow, probably flawed. You, self-chosen people, will come along, please, to see the process, and the proceeds too. But as usual, the poem was write before me, needing only human kindness overflowing to guide the way.* V V words lord, excluding all others, phonetic juggernauts, never met a V word that had no personality. victory is the one word that my/our brains think of first. sure there is vortex, victuals, veer and valor exam, the latter, what ever it means is a gift, curtsy-courtesy of auto-incorrect. but it is victory on top, victorious in its own way. try it on another if you must... what is the word that starts with a V that first comes to mind?* so let us talk of victories. so oft, I write in the dark, even as I do now. came home soul weary, face worn-worry, gotta go out to meet Peter Bogdanovich later, to chat about his latest movie. woman looks me over. X-ray glance, an MRI of my heart, no deductible charged, but oh yes, a co-pay due, indeed! Peter will keep, tonight you're-mine, to bed I send, right after we consume Large Thin Mush, cause pizza with shrooms contains mood serotonins, that erase the "pain of the day" that be a victory nonpareil. a Waterloo, a Normandy landing, that be a victory where both sides hug and kiss, and make with their long, stubby Churchillian fingers, V's all night long with goofy grins, cigars and bowler hats, just to go along. so here I am in the dark, having been "put" to bed, one mo' time, slicing and dicing letters into a word-salade, instead of resting. dreaming of the day when I can no longer need to pretend to be a Seuss, but truly, can be writing poems for all my children~friends. one for each letter of the alphabet, teaching us to write upon our faces laugh lines thin and fine, mine, ours, yours. product of pizza poems, some that come not circular, but tonite shaped just like a woman, just like a V.
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Nov 7, 2013
Nov 7, 2013 at 8:34 PM UTC
V: A Sorta-Commissioned Poem
*this poem didn't come easy. written amidst buffeting emo's, V will not be natural flow, probably flawed. You, self-chosen people, will come along, please, to see the process, and the proceeds too. But as usual, the poem was write before me, needing only human kindness overflowing to guide the way.* V V words lord, excluding all others, phonetic juggernauts, never met a V word that had no personality. victory is the one word that my/our brains think of first. sure there is vortex, victuals, veer and valor exam, the latter, what ever it means is a gift, curtsy-courtesy of auto-incorrect. but it is victory on top, victorious in its own way. try it on another if you must... what is the word that starts with a V that first comes to mind?* so let us talk of victories. so oft, I write in the dark, even as I do now. came home soul weary, face worn-worry, gotta go out to meet Peter Bogdanovich later, to chat about his latest movie. woman looks me over. X-ray glance, an MRI of my heart, no deductible charged, but oh yes, a co-pay due, indeed! Peter will keep, tonight you're-mine, to bed I send, right after we consume Large Thin Mush, cause pizza with shrooms contains mood serotonins, that erase the "pain of the day" that be a victory nonpareil. a Waterloo, a Normandy landing, that be a victory where both sides hug and kiss, and make with their long, stubby Churchillian fingers, V's all night long with goofy grins, cigars and bowler hats, just to go along. so here I am in the dark, having been "put" to bed, one mo' time, slicing and dicing letters into a word-salade, instead of resting. dreaming of the day when I can no longer need to pretend to be a Seuss, but truly, can be writing poems for all my children~friends. one for each letter of the alphabet, teaching us to write upon our faces laugh lines thin and fine, mine, ours, yours. product of pizza poems, some that come not circular, but tonite shaped just like a woman, just like a V.
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If there was a Medal worn on your Neck Un-Commissioned by any Metal or Cast Was one Purple Flag which many would respect But worry on how your ****** will last Such Flag just stood by, waiting for Salute, Open-palm-right timed to Shots Twenty-One Take it or leave it; Your Brand absolute Better to change Clothes than survive with none What Concern, Sir, does my own interfere If Bland Words tweeted are Letters unread Folly how your Cousin charges me here To assume such Feelings are most undead. He thinks of the Separate and Exist And so do you, which you tend to Resist.
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Mar 12, 2013
Mar 12, 2013 at 2:56 AM UTC
SONNET TRIBUTE SUNDRY - FIFTY-SEVEN - TOM DALEY
The Mendacity of Beauty,  Marvels of the Mundane <1/1/2023 10:38 PM> commissioned by Pradip^           <> A special carnet permits the day, though day itself unremarkable, permissioning of a thousand, even, tens of ten thousand grasping new love poems all mundane, all marvelous an aborning of odes re the vastness of sea, sandy sky, multifarious penumbras of hewn hues, vibrantly diverse, still, requiring the expanse and pretense of “new” adjectives and metaphoric in combos recalculating precisely, it’s the enormity, of the difficulty of verbal capture upon tablet of these natural treasures, once, more, yet again, but in somehow in a new-never quite-before conceptional~postulation-realization I sojourn amidst both man made and natural beauty, provoking, invoking, a steady stream of potable knowledgeables, performing as a hand-written-thank-you-note for the grace, the imagination of their mishmash existences addressed only to “whom it may truly concern…” I’m eager to confess that the poetry inherent in the mundane, requiring not-so-easy mining, a sales taxing innovation to capture the subtlety of less visible flecks of gold, that present a rarer challenge to the poet’s senses where glory abides in pyrite pebbles strewn and trod upon by most indifferently, *ah, write of the marvel of the mundane, **** dare you!* <> ^Pradip: “writing of the mundane is mandatory for me…” Aug 12 2022
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Jul 1, 2023
Jul 1, 2023 at 11:10 AM UTC
The Mendacity of Beauty, Marvels of the Mundane
the unthinkable is our specialty ~ there are special periods of varying length when we are given grants of capability where solutions transferable like shared salt drops and red gummy bears you need, I believe, and the no contract is signed and commissioned, belief is suspended, for the eyes have the evidence, the ayes win the nomination, the shaken but unbreakable longest kiss secures the deal, and the local island newspaper banners a headline, “miracles on the island expand contagiously!” this is when this is where one walks the streets and the dirt roads sing song smiling, the tide always incoming, the peeks of sun perfectly strong, installing a feeling of safe and home and not alone where is shelter? *here here, here is shelter, hear is shelter, in words and deeds and on our embracing fingertips* 9:45am April 11, 2019
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Apr 12, 2019
Apr 12, 2019 at 3:44 PM UTC
the unthinkable is our specialty
Take me back to when top hats were like business suits When the white moths had become black with filth When the Thames was brown like the rotted teeth of beggars And not just because of the mud When the Irish and the Slavic were exotic When London was Birmingham When Birmingham was Liverpool When Liverpool was a country village When there were millions And yet they were still so innocently oblivious Take me to the city clothed in black For there was always a funeral somewhere London The noisy factories And crowded slums The fear that the cold brings The pain that disease brings The real London The honest London The dark, deadly London of my nightmares Every narrow, dimly-lit alleyway dripping with **** and blood Full of criminals and drunks Ominous dark brown bricks The suffocating stink that follows you wherever you go Cursing, begging Lifting, cuffing, gaffing, looting, nicking, pinching, swiping, thieving, pilfering, pillaging Hundreds of words for stealing Where the poor are painfully poor Where every woman that smiles at you is a ********** Corpses lying in the streets Next to gas lamps The only beacons of light People packed into bedrooms like chickens Sleeping on the string Highly disturbing But it's best not to interfere For someone else will deal with it Industry and decency will save us all There is no trace of that now Except the noble stone buildings Commissioned by the corrupt This is my fear and obsession
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Mar 29, 2012
Mar 29, 2012 at 4:10 PM UTC
Victoria's London
A continent's scout That once touched Pacific sands, Has on the Natchez Trace Taken his life at Grinder's Stand. Such the news the Chickasaw Agent bore Telling President Jefferson The great scout Meriwether Lewis Is no more. Five years prior, you were commissioned To a quest, Mr. Jefferson sending you forth To explore the core of a new nation's Enigmatic west. The Mandan's song still warbles In your ears, While the mighty Missouri's current Still rushes through your tears. And now, on a porch of a tavern In west Tennessee, You look back in that direction That has ever seduced thee-- You cannot seem to shake him-- That black dog of lassitude-- That murderous hell-hound what has Shadowed you across majestic American longitudes. His image is there, in the polish Of your piece With every throb of your head His moan ebbs at your peace. During the journey, Clark was always There to help stay the hound... Knew how to handle him, Knew how to keep him bound. Perhaps that is why you are looking west This time around. Not for something new, That, you have found. No, you are simply looking yonder for Someone to **** this **** hound.
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May 23, 2017
May 23, 2017 at 11:28 PM UTC
Reflections on the Tragic Death of Meriwether Lewis
Central Park transformed, a natural stadium of tourists, strollers, drunk on: spring beer Buds, or buds of forsythia maps upside down, smiles right-side up Amazing, they don't even notice, 'walk on by,' *the white shirted, black suited   unicorn playing the accordion* or the *violinist imitating Charlie Chaplin, playing both her instrument and her hula hoop, simultaneously* ah Central Park, your air is like a first cup of spring, a first morning coffee, a fresh breath of a special new, if you know how to just be, in NYC
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Apr 13, 2014
Apr 13, 2014 at 10:08 AM UTC
A Commissioned Poem: Just Another NYC Saturday
Sa pamamagitan ng kabutihan ng Kanyang Kabutihan ~~~ *the message arrive by private telegraph line, "write," she behests, more than a mortal's requests, an authoritative pleading, an urgent prompting with an element of divinity attached, almost a command by virtue of her virtue, who am I to refuse, though the writing gene/genie, somnolent, suppressed, quiescent, melatonined by the pills the life force feeds us from a bottle lonely labeled, "whether you like it or not" reckless explore the venues you would prefer to never venture, so, this poem becomes her, this poem be comes her, this poem be comely for and because of her unbare chambers that have rusted shut, be unafraid, she seances me telepathically, in the poet's way, a crying smile accentuated with "write of the titles you have confessed to the body's mind inquisitor that be stored in the warehouses of thy heart" this irrecusable, willing bidding, sneaks in the back door, so easy oiled opened by virtue of her virtue seven years of grain Pharaoh stored in preparatory for the lean ones that inevitable come yes, have so many would be's gestated, but not fully formed, none adequate to honor sufficient her comely behest thus commissioned, my purposeful mission, to honor her once more, with a simple honorific, her wish, no matter how couched, t'is my duty to fulfill so here, full and filled I grant her wishes, with impoverished verses inadequate, for you know her too, as she full and fills us all* ***by virtue of her virtue***
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Mar 19, 2016
Mar 19, 2016 at 4:54 PM UTC
Behest: By Virtue of Her Virtue
Sa pamamagitan ng kabutihan ng Kanyang Kabutihan ~~~ *the message arrive by private telegraph line, "write," she behests, more than a mortal's requests, an authoritative pleading, an urgent prompting with an element of divinity attached, almost a command by virtue of her virtue, who am I to refuse, though the writing gene/genie, somnolent, suppressed, quiescent, melatonined by the pills the life force feeds us from a bottle lonely labeled, "whether you like it or not" reckless explore the venues you would prefer to never venture, so, this poem becomes her, this poem be comes her, this poem be comely for and because of her unbare chambers that have rusted shut, be unafraid, she seances me telepathically, in the poet's way, a crying smile accentuated with "write of the titles you have confessed to the body's mind inquisitor that be stored in the warehouses of thy heart" this irrecusable, willing bidding, sneaks in the back door, so easy oiled opened by virtue of her virtue seven years of grain Pharaoh stored in preparatory for the lean ones that inevitable come yes, have so many would be's gestated, but not fully formed, none adequate to honor sufficient her comely behest thus commissioned, my purposeful mission, to honor her once more, with a simple honorific, her wish, no matter how couched, t'is my duty to fulfill so here, full and filled I grant her wishes, with impoverished verses inadequate, for you know her too, as she full and fills us all* ***by virtue of her virtue***
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i’m the man who’s gonna wake up next to you slipping away, a non-starter, her leg crosses over mine, a right sided shakedown shackle, adhesion flesh as tough as old yellowed scotch tape sticking stuck no escaping, a known 6:00am risk when you sleep with a pre-advertised holy roller, twist and turner woman, making you into an unofficial woe-man (too) left hand grabs the lamenting instrument, the beat up iPad, to record your enslavement, a distraction from the bladder’s faint morn winking at you with a Cheshire grin, muffling a chuckle, at a predicament wonderful familiar, but unresolvable this situation, a category of life’s small measure of annoyances, invokes the wordy title, and a write-down list of pluses and minuses, which I’ll spare which o’witch be the longer list poems are where you find them, under your nose, looking out a city bus window, but sometimes like flypaper, they just come unasked and stick to you, the separating of the skin, like a too tight bandaid, ain’t worth the pain and freedom gained later, share this missive and her suggestion, she will prepare an NDA (a non-disclosure agreement)  or adopt other strategies like pushing me out of the bed without warning when i am typing , to witch and to wit, reply, ah! another poem commissioned, and *perhaps, name change too, needed, making love in the morning* 12/14/19
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Dec 14, 2019
Dec 14, 2019 at 1:40 PM UTC
i’m the man who’s gonna wake up next to you
*enlighten — verb (used with object) to give intellectual or spiritual light to; to instruct; impart knowledge to; Archaic: to shed light upon.* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ like an overdue library book, the omission of a failed commission, makes me a bad boy. request submitted. progress stalled, dust accumulated. guilty of failure to perform, a fineable offense where I come from. perhaps it was the word? Enlightened... down too many paths possible this word obvious, but not, a distortion, to me. the definition I seek, is not in dictionary listed! for I want to enlighten you, make you lighter, carefree, But Not Through Spirit or Intellect. for what spiritual guidance can I give thee, that would not burden you, with collected do's and don'ts. my intellect impoverished, reduce to grunts and curses, my opinions, even if valid, are simplistic truisms. nonetheless, I want to enlighten you. "put the load right on me." **"Give me your tired, your poor, Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free, The wretched refuse of your teeming shore. Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me."** Give me those-parts of you, convoluted, twisted, that need bearing, but cannot be borne any more, for there comes the line, where the totals are recorded, the sums noted, black or red, matters not, disposal ready, my truck is marked Heavy Load. make me fat with seven years of plenty, plenty worries, plenty troubles, shed those pounds of weighty words that gain no recognition, misheard, misunderstood, or just ignored, so I can enlighten you. what skill you posses, doing this noble thing? skill is simple, merely human, only the human touch can enlighten, take out the trash. I am your man. what makes you heavy hearted, enlightens me, and makes you lighter than air, thus, miraculously, we are both enlightened. *send what you need to be rid of, promise, I will read and keep, every poem you send.*
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Dec 11, 2013
Dec 11, 2013 at 11:47 PM UTC
Enlightened: A Commissioned Poem
*enlighten — verb (used with object) to give intellectual or spiritual light to; to instruct; impart knowledge to; Archaic: to shed light upon.* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ like an overdue library book, the omission of a failed commission, makes me a bad boy. request submitted. progress stalled, dust accumulated. guilty of failure to perform, a fineable offense where I come from. perhaps it was the word? Enlightened... down too many paths possible this word obvious, but not, a distortion, to me. the definition I seek, is not in dictionary listed! for I want to enlighten you, make you lighter, carefree, But Not Through Spirit or Intellect. for what spiritual guidance can I give thee, that would not burden you, with collected do's and don'ts. my intellect impoverished, reduce to grunts and curses, my opinions, even if valid, are simplistic truisms. nonetheless, I want to enlighten you. "put the load right on me." **"Give me your tired, your poor, Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free, The wretched refuse of your teeming shore. Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me."** Give me those-parts of you, convoluted, twisted, that need bearing, but cannot be borne any more, for there comes the line, where the totals are recorded, the sums noted, black or red, matters not, disposal ready, my truck is marked Heavy Load. make me fat with seven years of plenty, plenty worries, plenty troubles, shed those pounds of weighty words that gain no recognition, misheard, misunderstood, or just ignored, so I can enlighten you. what skill you posses, doing this noble thing? skill is simple, merely human, only the human touch can enlighten, take out the trash. I am your man. what makes you heavy hearted, enlightens me, and makes you lighter than air, thus, miraculously, we are both enlightened. *send what you need to be rid of, promise, I will read and keep, every poem you send.*
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strangely, I think that this ought be, must be, responsibly, be the best poem I’ve ever writ, (though unlikely, as the best will always be the next) that mine own eyes commissioned, better be, just got to be, this holy-moly notion jeepers weepers, conceptual rocks me deepest, an awesome responsibility to find away of saying that this beyond conceptual, coring, especially special sample If there was to be a but one, a singularity, a distinguishing feature of what the human definition innate contains, how choice that we animals, elevate ourselves to being human beings, the only ones capable of wonderfully weeping the implications are an astounding! what a glorious burden, what a wonderful decision, the designer slipped in this microscopic checkmark, somewhere in our cellular DNA perma-dynasty, runs a common thread, these saltwater fears, a residual global amniotic fluid hint, from where we humans out-of-crawled that empathy, the signal of an elongated journey of eons, the marker that says show the caring, a trait-ed statement, us, unique so often do I weep, sometimes visible - in my poems listed, oft indicated - so you could know its sharing was an absolution that I granted myself, that that particular  poem was a costly one, womb bloomed, tongue taken, eye written sometimes invisible  - even more, do they, (nobody knows, nobody sees) just well up, eye cornered kept, secreted, only skin-staining the underneath-my-eyes one more shade darker, a reminder to all, to mirrored me, that to forgive myself doesn’t forgive forgetting is this then my best? sufficient to breech your reserves of pseudo-cool, that correct boundary pretense that keeps us as mismatched separates? you be the judge, you be the jury, you be the prosecutor and the defender, for it is all of us standing in the dock, on trial, for in our lifetime guilty of the inhuman crime, of not crying enough
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Jun 27, 2019
Jun 27, 2019 at 7:15 PM UTC
humans are the only animals that weep
strangely, I think that this ought be, must be, responsibly, be the best poem I’ve ever writ, (though unlikely, as the best will always be the next) that mine own eyes commissioned, better be, just got to be, this holy-moly notion jeepers weepers, conceptual rocks me deepest, an awesome responsibility to find away of saying that this beyond conceptual, coring, especially special sample If there was to be a but one, a singularity, a distinguishing feature of what the human definition innate contains, how choice that we animals, elevate ourselves to being human beings, the only ones capable of wonderfully weeping the implications are an astounding! what a glorious burden, what a wonderful decision, the designer slipped in this microscopic checkmark, somewhere in our cellular DNA perma-dynasty, runs a common thread, these saltwater fears, a residual global amniotic fluid hint, from where we humans out-of-crawled that empathy, the signal of an elongated journey of eons, the marker that says show the caring, a trait-ed statement, us, unique so often do I weep, sometimes visible - in my poems listed, oft indicated - so you could know its sharing was an absolution that I granted myself, that that particular  poem was a costly one, womb bloomed, tongue taken, eye written sometimes invisible  - even more, do they, (nobody knows, nobody sees) just well up, eye cornered kept, secreted, only skin-staining the underneath-my-eyes one more shade darker, a reminder to all, to mirrored me, that to forgive myself doesn’t forgive forgetting is this then my best? sufficient to breech your reserves of pseudo-cool, that correct boundary pretense that keeps us as mismatched separates? you be the judge, you be the jury, you be the prosecutor and the defender, for it is all of us standing in the dock, on trial, for in our lifetime guilty of the inhuman crime, of not crying enough
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The bridge character is essential to the narrative, it's just not HER narrative. And later, as if because the readers have asked for more, as if something about her caught their imagination, prompting fresh fan questions, she features again and the panels frame more detail, more of her back story, her motivation and perhaps we learn her true name. In a few years time it may be that a reader develops into a writer, or perhaps an editor, and a story is commissioned telling HER history with colour, with space and we see, at last, her scars and at last we see the essential essence of how she came to be. And we identify with HER. But one night when we look back when we read again that first appearance, we realise that there remains some unexplained detail, a few missing pieces of her jigsaw and as we put the final touches to our too tight cosplay, we wait, with hope for her OWN title that just might reveal her full narrative.
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Mar 23, 2019
Mar 23, 2019 at 2:02 PM UTC
Cosplay thoughts
together a man and woman can do things any one wouldn't imagine. they could pretend as lovers, and secretly in their dark minds plan to rob, all that are fascinating in each other, so that their mutual jealousy will subdue for the time being. life gets complex in each passing day we are aware. we had been bitter rivals, now every other hour you call me in between. you research on weather which i also know,  alarmingly changes. the Psunami relief work they undertook in 2005 in Kerala coast is still incomplete! people suffer who cares? human lives are more at risk than ever; that's my current work commissioned by the government. (would any one listen to the findings? i doubt) cynicism is rampant but no one complains; as if it is a luxury of the privileged! we meet here in the middle ground many mistook us as man and wife families have become imagined places where things would  happen like clock work; but fail to keep up with the expectations. individuals get exasperated as families begin to stifle. i love your new dress all i propose to do is slowly undress you like in that  absurd  play we acted,  disjointed  scenes but the audience was in raptures. free from physical ******* of clothes, let's take a dip in this hot springs, i will wash you with my hands, lovingly. the water treatment, the caresses of elements our burning hearts will get tranquilized. we can put on our dresses and go back as rivals as we were.
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Jan 30, 2012
Jan 30, 2012 at 2:05 AM UTC
life gets complex, meaning eludes in relationships..
Fuji, Rainier, now to Africa’s pinnacle she followed, behind a parade of sycophants   marching, single file behind his greatness   few made ascents with him   she only Fuji, on a windless day   though others made the trek up Rainer, surviving a blizzard that hit halfway down   she told her lover his faithful must have thought his presence imbued them with immortality   which he seemed to possess     maybe it did, the lover said   seven decades and one, still ******* old mountains and young women   and she was still there, despite the doctors’ bleak sentence     she was painting, moving while she still could, a water color of Rainier in mist, hanging in some haunted hall in his home now a pale pastel of Kilimanjaro for which he would spend a fortune, to hang somewhere he would not spend a minute     when her extended contract expired   she would be ashes scattered in Big Sur   and he would still be climbing higher   breathing heaven’s ether, a color she never captured   but her signature would be on overpriced art   which from the start, he commissioned to keep her from leaving without having seen rarefied air
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Nov 16, 2015
Nov 16, 2015 at 10:49 AM UTC
pastel of Kilimanjaro
This word does not require a dictionary definition. It does require a shoutout to AmandaFH, who commissioned this poem, and whose surging emotional haikus delight and inspired this poem. Regret first, get a knife. cut yourself figuratively only, in half. take the Memory Part that rises in the gorge, poetry source, that precedes that awful word, regrets, with me, I, and My. dump, flush it fast down the drain, disposal, someplace where there is no retrieval, going back, second chance. cause when that's done, now there is no one who cares about your regrets. that is the easy part. you don't need to be a poet, litany lilting a list so long of loves lost, chances, shots not taken, or worst, those you didn't love well enough and can't go back. gone, but hey, but yet, body still weighed down. incomplete, stop, even with those **** regrets banished, empty spaces sore, empty being a word I don't really like. but I having come to earth to heal, whole you in the places that need soul filling, Invitation: we are gathered here today to remember your future regrets, long may they rest in the land of things that never happened. you are aware of   exactly of what you're avoiding, today's "to do" list that only gets added to, that you never willingly pick up. pick up the phone. I will even accept texts. heck, send them one of those there Po-ems you write so well. if there is one, Then There Are Ten, who need to hear from you, right now, not later never, that you love them. it costs. could even cost more later. do it anyway. cause today is the first day of never having a regret ever. again. beg for forgiveness. grant forgiveness. pay that bill. tear up the bill you think is owed you. choose. pick. decide. apologize. let it go, free the part of you that will be now never be regretted later. here is where I quit this Po-me-em. gotta couple of emails to send, all starting with a warm gracious hi! followed by a couple of missing thinking loving you and it's been a while since... p.s. it's been awhile since, may have overlooked acknowledging your comments and likes, not answered that message, re my words that stirred, so let me start here and repair that error, right, right now, here, cross off that future regret, I humbly, thank you in a way no words could ever fully express.
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Dec 14, 2013
Dec 14, 2013 at 10:00 AM UTC
Regret: A Commissioned Poem
This word does not require a dictionary definition. It does require a shoutout to AmandaFH, who commissioned this poem, and whose surging emotional haikus delight and inspired this poem. Regret first, get a knife. cut yourself figuratively only, in half. take the Memory Part that rises in the gorge, poetry source, that precedes that awful word, regrets, with me, I, and My. dump, flush it fast down the drain, disposal, someplace where there is no retrieval, going back, second chance. cause when that's done, now there is no one who cares about your regrets. that is the easy part. you don't need to be a poet, litany lilting a list so long of loves lost, chances, shots not taken, or worst, those you didn't love well enough and can't go back. gone, but hey, but yet, body still weighed down. incomplete, stop, even with those **** regrets banished, empty spaces sore, empty being a word I don't really like. but I having come to earth to heal, whole you in the places that need soul filling, Invitation: we are gathered here today to remember your future regrets, long may they rest in the land of things that never happened. you are aware of   exactly of what you're avoiding, today's "to do" list that only gets added to, that you never willingly pick up. pick up the phone. I will even accept texts. heck, send them one of those there Po-ems you write so well. if there is one, Then There Are Ten, who need to hear from you, right now, not later never, that you love them. it costs. could even cost more later. do it anyway. cause today is the first day of never having a regret ever. again. beg for forgiveness. grant forgiveness. pay that bill. tear up the bill you think is owed you. choose. pick. decide. apologize. let it go, free the part of you that will be now never be regretted later. here is where I quit this Po-me-em. gotta couple of emails to send, all starting with a warm gracious hi! followed by a couple of missing thinking loving you and it's been a while since... p.s. it's been awhile since, may have overlooked acknowledging your comments and likes, not answered that message, re my words that stirred, so let me start here and repair that error, right, right now, here, cross off that future regret, I humbly, thank you in a way no words could ever fully express.
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