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"bedlamite" poems
Before you criticize me too soon, I think you should spare some seconds and answer a simple question to yourself... If Shahjahan loved Mumtaz Mahal so much, why he had a harem of wives to use at his own pleasure? While I agree that the Taj Mahal is arguably the most extraordinarily beautiful monument in the world, I don't agree upon the fact that it was built as a tomb of love. It is just a symbol of madness if you asked me. An emperor's insecure feeling to get his name registered in the history books. While it may be one of the most beautiful architectural monument, it was built by over 20,000 architects, craftsmen, masons and engineers who took over 16 years to build the magnificent building. He got this apparently high & prestigious monument of love built but everything that the Emperor did was not pleasant at all. ° The lavishly living Mughal Emperor spent all his - his subjects' money into building this monument of love instead of keeping his subjects well-fed. ° Mumtaz Mahal might have been the luckiest woman to have died and got such a marvelous building built as her mausoleum but she died giving birth to her & Shahjahan's 17th offspring and then Shahjahan who had uncountable other wives was inspired by her demise apparently to undertake what is termed as the biggest project in history build the costliest monument proclaiming his rule. ° The arrogant - falsely proud lover - Mughal emperor didn't know that what he thought to be looked at as the greatest symbol of love will be criticized by some poet in his own land nearly 375 years later. The insane Mughal Emperor got all the builders of the Taj Mahal's fingers cut-off of so that there could be no other Taj Mahal. But Aurangzeb, his & Mumtaz Mahal's son overthrew his power when Shahjahan got older and locked him up in a jail at the other end of Yamuna river where the emperor then died a sad old lovelorn bedlamite person in prison. Aurangzeb was the exact opposite of his dad, he showed religious intolerance and his habits drove the empire towards its doom after his death. But let me think this way; when I look at any picture of the Taj Mahal, what I get the first thing in mind is this: Such a CRAZY emperor who got such a beautiful monument of Egotism built!
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May 7, 2013
May 7, 2013 at 11:23 AM UTC
Taj Mahal - An Epitome Of Love?
Before you criticize me too soon, I think you should spare some seconds and answer a simple question to yourself... If Shahjahan loved Mumtaz Mahal so much, why he had a harem of wives to use at his own pleasure? While I agree that the Taj Mahal is arguably the most extraordinarily beautiful monument in the world, I don't agree upon the fact that it was built as a tomb of love. It is just a symbol of madness if you asked me. An emperor's insecure feeling to get his name registered in the history books. While it may be one of the most beautiful architectural monument, it was built by over 20,000 architects, craftsmen, masons and engineers who took over 16 years to build the magnificent building. He got this apparently high & prestigious monument of love built but everything that the Emperor did was not pleasant at all. ° The lavishly living Mughal Emperor spent all his - his subjects' money into building this monument of love instead of keeping his subjects well-fed. ° Mumtaz Mahal might have been the luckiest woman to have died and got such a marvelous building built as her mausoleum but she died giving birth to her & Shahjahan's 17th offspring and then Shahjahan who had uncountable other wives was inspired by her demise apparently to undertake what is termed as the biggest project in history build the costliest monument proclaiming his rule. ° The arrogant - falsely proud lover - Mughal emperor didn't know that what he thought to be looked at as the greatest symbol of love will be criticized by some poet in his own land nearly 375 years later. The insane Mughal Emperor got all the builders of the Taj Mahal's fingers cut-off of so that there could be no other Taj Mahal. But Aurangzeb, his & Mumtaz Mahal's son overthrew his power when Shahjahan got older and locked him up in a jail at the other end of Yamuna river where the emperor then died a sad old lovelorn bedlamite person in prison. Aurangzeb was the exact opposite of his dad, he showed religious intolerance and his habits drove the empire towards its doom after his death. But let me think this way; when I look at any picture of the Taj Mahal, what I get the first thing in mind is this: Such a CRAZY emperor who got such a beautiful monument of Egotism built!
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A man tired from the waking day hangs his keys on the beaded hook, lets the hat off his grateful head. He places himself in front of the table where he laid down his papers, his skins and his skin. He put on the table, the day's characters, mulled them over in the electronic hum of Aleph and coffee flavoured eyes, rolled them up tight with tomorrow's fears and set them alight. He put there a glass ashtray to catch the embers of regret. He put on the table his dear friend, Old Man Wibble, the bedlamite seer, drunken oracle, _"liquid Jesus, straight from the bottle"_ and longed for a glass to raise. He put there the smoke from his exasperated lungs and the wistful music of his tired throat, he put there every last syllable and every letter left lingering on a lost lovers lips. He put hope on the table, for the weight might crush him as he sat but not the table, solid under this load, to bear weight is what a table must do and tomorrow will always bring another pile.
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Jan 9, 2021
Jan 9, 2021 at 10:34 PM UTC
inscruTable
I dreamt the world it never changed. She never came. My tethered skin tore weathered chains. I swore she knew my given name. Myths are stained. Apocryphal. A pocket full… of gods and cherubs in the fold. Hope is serum of the fools. Hate is fearing all the rules. Love is blind love is blind If you love her say it twice. Broke my words in several places Make amends in several phases String the song with several phrases. We’ll become a bending stalk. Snapped in half ascending up. Blush and makeup. Don’t believe. Rush to make up this belief. So we’re here in disbelief. Petal, scent fall to the earth If mental cries this mind is burnt. I never changed She never sensed our plot unwritten. Lift the pen.
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Jul 8, 2013
Jul 8, 2013 at 10:46 PM UTC
Bedlamite
motionless, inoffensive beige mannequins stare with purple glass eyes. reflecting windows in a grey plaster store shopkeeper embraces handles a broomstick his sense is swarming turns on a television death and corruption death and corruption broadcast test patterns no retribution for the cold and weak a quack, hands in pockets, prances past a roughly-edged black and white photo of a specific eventful sunset, noteworthy in the limitless notebook, a prime number dated, thoroughly checked off, presented the outer design is undeniably fractal it is packaged in crushed red riches; the coloring is so very numbing the experience is so humbling A physical form is misplaced the blueprint is just blank points faulty articles of a future failure (I haven't been led to believe that something makes a good anything)
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Jul 13, 2015
Jul 13, 2015 at 12:39 AM UTC
Bedlamite
A chamber promise nothing less Pre-screened destiny This is how the night begins We slip inside our seventh skins One minute and thirty-nine seconds On short circuit
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Sep 28, 2015
Sep 28, 2015 at 10:58 PM UTC
Bedlamite
Not the Devil or his daughter or the nephew who had caught you, but you tangled with the wrong guys after all. In the bottom of the well where the dreams of dragons dwell and the fires of hell await you, whether homicide or suicide or who has died and did you care? bomb blasts melting oxygen making hot air, burning skin. Not the bible, that won't save you nor the holy book that craves you enter in. In this apocalyptic time apocalypse with always rhyme. The better of two evils is the choice that we could make. But one for sorrow so it's said, two magpies always in my bed, just hedging bets. And when I think it's done and the night sets out a place for me, I wonder if I'll see the new day in a new way or just the same way as I always do. The devil and his family live next door down on this street with me, happily they never got the key that opens up this door.
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Apr 3, 2016
Apr 3, 2016 at 3:37 AM UTC
The Bedlamite