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"backdraft" poems
It’s been said that infatuation makes for a fast spiral down to sightlessness.  But do you say the blind cannot see? I bear no mind to mere optics for I need not the sense to possess the sight. I have your radiance with me, branded to the backs of my lids for I cannot help but have you always until the next time I look upon you. With a clutch of my hand you have me at your will. You present this present with your presence and I shall honor this with my eyes, never to shield whilst I have you before me. Consumed I become as you lay me down beneath the leaves. Take all you will from me for I shall remain exposed to your desires. My gaze wandered up and found the leaves on fire. There was no smoke; there was no fear for we had been the fire all along. The flames of yours and mine together had consumed the air of our yesterdays, leaving nothing to look back on and ceasing the urge to look forward; we were here, existent, ready to ignite once more. This surge required naught save for the breaths of yours and mine to chance; your breath compelling this sealed backdraft longing for indulgence, growing wild with every touch, every scent, every taste of your delicate tongue as it wrapped in mine. The embers knew nothing of destruction but rather renewal of that which I had longed for. I once believed it foolish to feel the same with another synchronously. A belief I now find fault in for just as the two flames who dance incoherently; once they touch they become unified in their brilliant engagement, creating a distinct cohesion that most will undoubtedly remain unaware to. It is that moment, that paradise we search for. A sensation that last a moment but for those without sight, a single moment becomes the ultimate reality of eternity; a single slice in our whole of existence which we stay hungry for. So look no further for I am close at hand. We have already set this world ablaze and altered the realm of our tomorrows. It is now, in this very moment where we shall get a taste of eternity and there will never be anyone more adequate to share this paradise with other than that who makes me sightless.
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May 2, 2013
May 2, 2013 at 8:13 PM UTC
Flames of Eternity
It’s been said that infatuation makes for a fast spiral down to sightlessness.  But do you say the blind cannot see? I bear no mind to mere optics for I need not the sense to possess the sight. I have your radiance with me, branded to the backs of my lids for I cannot help but have you always until the next time I look upon you. With a clutch of my hand you have me at your will. You present this present with your presence and I shall honor this with my eyes, never to shield whilst I have you before me. Consumed I become as you lay me down beneath the leaves. Take all you will from me for I shall remain exposed to your desires. My gaze wandered up and found the leaves on fire. There was no smoke; there was no fear for we had been the fire all along. The flames of yours and mine together had consumed the air of our yesterdays, leaving nothing to look back on and ceasing the urge to look forward; we were here, existent, ready to ignite once more. This surge required naught save for the breaths of yours and mine to chance; your breath compelling this sealed backdraft longing for indulgence, growing wild with every touch, every scent, every taste of your delicate tongue as it wrapped in mine. The embers knew nothing of destruction but rather renewal of that which I had longed for. I once believed it foolish to feel the same with another synchronously. A belief I now find fault in for just as the two flames who dance incoherently; once they touch they become unified in their brilliant engagement, creating a distinct cohesion that most will undoubtedly remain unaware to. It is that moment, that paradise we search for. A sensation that last a moment but for those without sight, a single moment becomes the ultimate reality of eternity; a single slice in our whole of existence which we stay hungry for. So look no further for I am close at hand. We have already set this world ablaze and altered the realm of our tomorrows. It is now, in this very moment where we shall get a taste of eternity and there will never be anyone more adequate to share this paradise with other than that who makes me sightless.
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You speak of change constantly. Like Flux capacitors are sold in stores. Trying to mend past and future selves. Trusting that they might collide on a single scope. And STOP. Is this pleasing. Easing into planned mediocrity. Dancing to tunes with broken strings. Laughing at hardship. Hoping it's seen as resilience. Then wake to cold sweat in the night. Running from a dreamscape. To escape. But still commemorate thought. Making the real. Less. Than.. ... I step on forgotten land mines. In my mind. Creating a backdraft of emotion. Spent years putting out these flames. And even longer letting the brush burn. Is control then the illusion. Or am I just. Constantly. Waking.
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Jul 22, 2021
Jul 22, 2021 at 8:01 PM UTC
To stir
A hero is a person who has simply done as others do until a certain point in time when they step over safety's line. Then they become something more than a mere human, and have borne another person's trial and pain not thinking of their glory, gain. A hero's the woman who waits and stays and watches while the others play, then takes the drinking people home, wending her way to sleep alone. A hero's the teen who looks and sees a child's kite hung in the trees and climbs farther than he should dare to show the kid that someone cares. The mutt who stays by master's side, Alerting folks with howls and cries. He may be cold, have to defend, But he'll stay with his human friend. The "Boys/Girls in Blue" this word deserve. They bravely work. Protect and serve. Dealing with crime and human woes, They go where others will not go. A fireman breaks down a door. There could be backdraft, but does more, because the baby in the room will almost surely be consumed. He's sustained wounds, and badly burnt, but the little girl survives, unhurt. The soldier who's sent to block, defend. His buddy's met a painful end, but hunkers down, takes back the field. 'Til the end he will not yield. Jesus left His Father's home, went to earth to walk alone. He endured horrid trial and pain, He took our sin, He took our shame. The reason why He was so brave? So that billions would be saved. There are many more of us Who do hard work while others fuss. The single moms and single dads, Nowadays parents have it bad! With no fanfare or applause work long hours on thankless jobs. They ensure kids do more than eat. They can be schooled for greater feats. And if a person takes the time to bring some light, to let it shine, to cheer up people down and blue well, my friend, that hero's YOU. SoulSurvivor Catherine Jarvis (C) February 21, 2009
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Sep 26, 2014
Sep 26, 2014 at 7:07 PM UTC
Who is a Hero?
A hero is a person who has simply done as others do until a certain point in time when they step over safety's line. Then they become something more than a mere human, and have borne another person's trial and pain not thinking of their glory, gain. A hero's the woman who waits and stays and watches while the others play, then takes the drinking people home, wending her way to sleep alone. A hero's the teen who looks and sees a child's kite hung in the trees and climbs farther than he should dare to show the kid that someone cares. The mutt who stays by master's side, Alerting folks with howls and cries. He may be cold, have to defend, But he'll stay with his human friend. The "Boys/Girls in Blue" this word deserve. They bravely work. Protect and serve. Dealing with crime and human woes, They go where others will not go. A fireman breaks down a door. There could be backdraft, but does more, because the baby in the room will almost surely be consumed. He's sustained wounds, and badly burnt, but the little girl survives, unhurt. The soldier who's sent to block, defend. His buddy's met a painful end, but hunkers down, takes back the field. 'Til the end he will not yield. Jesus left His Father's home, went to earth to walk alone. He endured horrid trial and pain, He took our sin, He took our shame. The reason why He was so brave? So that billions would be saved. There are many more of us Who do hard work while others fuss. The single moms and single dads, Nowadays parents have it bad! With no fanfare or applause work long hours on thankless jobs. They ensure kids do more than eat. They can be schooled for greater feats. And if a person takes the time to bring some light, to let it shine, to cheer up people down and blue well, my friend, that hero's YOU. SoulSurvivor Catherine Jarvis (C) February 21, 2009
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I see just a hint of inspiration hanging there Tantalizing me beyond despair a vision in the fog could be a prince, could be a frog Have I the curiosity to care? For I'm not sure a poets life's for me Full of pain, angst and constant agony Paint my heart upon my sleeve for the tales that I weave and publish for the whole world here to see Could it be though that I suffer for my craft or has my poetry become my own life raft am I burned because I write whether morning noon or night or am I doomed to be consumed in its backdraft.
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Jul 5, 2010
Jul 5, 2010 at 5:14 PM UTC
The poets pain
She said, "you won't believe what I'm looking right now. The flames must be fifteen ******* feet above the roof" And I went outside and I could see the plume of smoke like it was a block up from the house so I ran back in and got everyone out of the house and we hopped in the car and sped off toward the flames -just like a gruesome car accident- and when we finally came within a few blocks it looked like the revolution gone and started without us people were running and jumping fences to get closer to it. So we got out and started running through back alleys and back yards and suddenly, we came around a corner and there it was. They said the building was abandoned, that no one had been inside when it started. It wasn't much of a building now. It was a skeleton and the flames were maggots picking it clean. Inside was like the brightness of the sun and the fire crews were giving it all the water in the world to little avail. Gigantic plumes of tiny embers were jetting from its open ribs into the twilight- falling all over houses and businesses and all I could think was "what if it doesn't stop? What if this is it? and it can't be contained? and the whole city goes down with it?" We were standing in the middle of a riot ready to happen- it was like a backdraft- an explosion minus one ingredient- a single exhaled breath. So what if this is it? What if the end starts right here, right now? So I began to root for the fire, not the firefighters. I prayed for it to collapse and eject all that hot ash over everything to end us all. But it didn't. and after fifteen minutes or so the firefighters were winning. So we turned on heel and we hobbled home. Live to fight another day.
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 2:13 PM UTC
Conflagration
She said, "you won't believe what I'm looking right now. The flames must be fifteen ******* feet above the roof" And I went outside and I could see the plume of smoke like it was a block up from the house so I ran back in and got everyone out of the house and we hopped in the car and sped off toward the flames -just like a gruesome car accident- and when we finally came within a few blocks it looked like the revolution gone and started without us people were running and jumping fences to get closer to it. So we got out and started running through back alleys and back yards and suddenly, we came around a corner and there it was. They said the building was abandoned, that no one had been inside when it started. It wasn't much of a building now. It was a skeleton and the flames were maggots picking it clean. Inside was like the brightness of the sun and the fire crews were giving it all the water in the world to little avail. Gigantic plumes of tiny embers were jetting from its open ribs into the twilight- falling all over houses and businesses and all I could think was "what if it doesn't stop? What if this is it? and it can't be contained? and the whole city goes down with it?" We were standing in the middle of a riot ready to happen- it was like a backdraft- an explosion minus one ingredient- a single exhaled breath. So what if this is it? What if the end starts right here, right now? So I began to root for the fire, not the firefighters. I prayed for it to collapse and eject all that hot ash over everything to end us all. But it didn't. and after fifteen minutes or so the firefighters were winning. So we turned on heel and we hobbled home. Live to fight another day.
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He Walked through the long corridor of Green Park tube station. There was a strong backdraft that pushed him from behind. He entered the train heading westbound to Russel Square, on the Picadilly line. It was packed with every kind of person imaginable--the weird, schoolkids, the bankers, tourists, parents with babies and then there was her. She had shoulder-length brown hair. She was slim, pale and had piercing green eyes. She was wearing khaki chinos with a white Ralph Lauren Polo shirt. A black choker on her neck and holding a book. Murakami's 1Q84. The same book he was reading. There was a hush in the air as their look lingered for several seconds. She looked at him, smiled and lifted her eyebrows. He looked at her and said, "If you can't understand what just happened now without explanation, then you won't understand it with an explanation." She smiled and remembered the line in the book.
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Dec 19, 2016
Dec 19, 2016 at 2:37 AM UTC
IQ84
Heavy atmosphere Lapping around my ankles. Drawing me into its maelstrom. Into its echo. Chambers of my heart Exploding as I try to breathe Deeper than I should. I exhale rust. Heavy flames All the torrential reigns Of all hellish nightmares Siphon off into a furnace of discomfiture. I lean from your cool hands To welcome the backdraft. ** Heavy earth** What if you called me strong? Would that be an epiphyte Worthy of me? Nay. You are more like. While I, Atlas, hold the World, spinning you hold up my universe. SoulSurvivor Catherine Jarvis (C) September 24, 2014
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 2:12 AM UTC
Heavy [Three Muses]
Wavering. Seems to be stuck in the sidecar. With doubt in in back.   And fear spilling out of every pocket. Where can anything else fit. It always seems like the only option is to floor it. And hope. The next experience isn't. A wreckage. Time seems to slow in this moment. As if to give you one last replay. Of what can never change. Tumbling end. Over beginning. Through logic. And past the last chance. Lementing choices and decisions. Hate flowing through burning veins. Igniting the very air. Causing a caustic reaction that seems to backdraft the entirety of it all. Leaving only the ash to tell the tale. And then there are those who see this very disturbance. And find something within themselves never before used. Touched. Or seen. And alter the very fabric of repetition. With nothing more than a smile and. Willingness. Fear knot the emotions that entangle others. For it only takes one to wade through the murky echoes of the past. To ensure. That The insanity will recede. There are no shackles. Only encumbering thoughts. The only impass. Is the very reflection staring back.
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Mar 18, 2016
Mar 18, 2016 at 10:39 PM UTC
Dust
The treasure chest Her ((Piece De Resistance)) French skills of perseverance She was a hollow crown of jewels Not the zircon bright yellow The darker to see you my dear near my pillow That death by chocolate how she craved those sweets Graveyard shift current events Those men dark Batman suits water skiing and internet surfing That bat eye batmobile showdown missile Cells and locks to open the gate and keys A hell  of a wish never on Sunday to ring her bell the Siren She made their hair home Sunday  dark gravy Lips were too thin and skully Was a cycle her lowdown Shot glass don't touch my Philly So gravely razor suit and a shave Her mouth Tornado But the vivacious Viking   Crypt look hellhole The gathering dead again Santa dead pole couldn't stop bickering No-one cared to notice her dreadlocks "The Cryptocurrency" what urgency She was drawn into the Arsenic and Lace Viva Las Vegas roll the dice Cryptic engraved cellar Like the maestro was playing his serenade She-devil Pillar catching her death of cold Feeling high winding staircase Wearing her gown ripped lowdown Being blown off the town lace Oh! Fiddlestick with the ***** of light Breaking free from husbands sight The rise of the current storms heads up she drinks Grand dead Marnier Took over such a restraint This wasn't black and gray spray paint What a fiercest most recent ancient  current events Reptilian and it was the family of witches and covens Words engraved so cryptically She was wearing her snakeskin bag signature The body of dead sea such rapture The fire feet stepping over seashells Takes the hell out of Sahara snakes   She got a backdraft Black widow of waistlines 13 inches Spyder Graphics Those shifters and heretics He was the Rocky face The shorelines those laugh-lines Sad clown dark eyes scratched The cat feline Her addiction was the guylines Crypt crooked cop fines Another startup kit The dark edgy women her legs just fit
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Jun 18, 2018
Jun 18, 2018 at 6:39 PM UTC
Crypt Look So Current
The treasure chest Her ((Piece De Resistance)) French skills of perseverance She was a hollow crown of jewels Not the zircon bright yellow The darker to see you my dear near my pillow That death by chocolate how she craved those sweets Graveyard shift current events Those men dark Batman suits water skiing and internet surfing That bat eye batmobile showdown missile Cells and locks to open the gate and keys A hell  of a wish never on Sunday to ring her bell the Siren She made their hair home Sunday  dark gravy Lips were too thin and skully Was a cycle her lowdown Shot glass don't touch my Philly So gravely razor suit and a shave Her mouth Tornado But the vivacious Viking   Crypt look hellhole The gathering dead again Santa dead pole couldn't stop bickering No-one cared to notice her dreadlocks "The Cryptocurrency" what urgency She was drawn into the Arsenic and Lace Viva Las Vegas roll the dice Cryptic engraved cellar Like the maestro was playing his serenade She-devil Pillar catching her death of cold Feeling high winding staircase Wearing her gown ripped lowdown Being blown off the town lace Oh! Fiddlestick with the ***** of light Breaking free from husbands sight The rise of the current storms heads up she drinks Grand dead Marnier Took over such a restraint This wasn't black and gray spray paint What a fiercest most recent ancient  current events Reptilian and it was the family of witches and covens Words engraved so cryptically She was wearing her snakeskin bag signature The body of dead sea such rapture The fire feet stepping over seashells Takes the hell out of Sahara snakes   She got a backdraft Black widow of waistlines 13 inches Spyder Graphics Those shifters and heretics He was the Rocky face The shorelines those laugh-lines Sad clown dark eyes scratched The cat feline Her addiction was the guylines Crypt crooked cop fines Another startup kit The dark edgy women her legs just fit
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Sometimes thoughts in my brain Are like burning buildings I can feel their heat From so far away; Ever-present I open the door Hoping to make everything better The backdraft engulfs me; Consuming Then I am nothing But singed and disfigured; A monstrosity Nerves sizzling; Nerves singing It's like swallowing fire What I need to understand That sometimes I must Leave things to burn Until they are no more Than ashes on the floor; The best place to grow again
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Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 12:47 PM UTC
Hot Head
Who am I? Crack of dawn, fresh spill, Fifteen demands before coffee? Who am I? Sport utility, Front facing, Five point harness? Who am I? grey roots, saddlebags tattered unmentionables? What is this? Ground hog week, triple speak, automatic deduction? Whence comes this paper trail? Condensing us into forms, Sorting us into audits, assesing penalties? What happened to 5am? Frozen in time? Slow dawn creeping, into a still-frame prescience? What happened to days in bed? Long hours in my head? To ideas unfiltered, and consecrated ground? What happend to glitter clouds, And living out loud? To boundaries shattered, and reality questioning itself? Where do I find my heartfire? Art and desire? The uncharted, now the lost... Where is my life lust? That signature passion, for this domestic pursuit? My sense of adventue? Why is youth so visceral in its wake? Am I a hollogram to the present, that I exist in this backdraft, of moments passed? How am I consistent to the deadline, but find myself so unready? How is progress such a burden? Why is nostalgia so heavy?
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Nov 14, 2017
Nov 14, 2017 at 10:36 AM UTC
Morning Misanthropy
Just tell me to leave. and I will leave behind the promise we signed in blood in the past, where you left me
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May 10, 2015
May 10, 2015 at 4:21 PM UTC
Backdraft
Ire is in her pupils Rainbow fire Breathing in, breathing out Inspiration expired She is the furnace driving the choir Her backdraft jilts the spirit higher Excuse me... Exposure makes the humor drier And the bread stale
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May 17, 2019
May 17, 2019 at 12:40 PM UTC
Dead Pan