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"astonishment" poems
It’s just easy for them Isn’t it? This couple on the train. They walked on laughing together Holding hands And I felt that familiar something- Not jealousy Not envy But... Chagrin. Astonishment. Incredulity. Incomprehension. Looking at them feels like looking at one of those Impossible pictures Where the stairs keep going forever in a loop. It’s just Easy for them. It doesn’t hurt anymore, that thought, But thinking it feels so odd in my mind When I can’t imagine loving someone without Shame, Without pain. They fit. These people, They fit without having to carve anything out. They fit without punishing each other. They fit like puzzle pieces cut from the same board- No worries, they just go together, and that Is that. They fit like “Of course.” Like breathing. Neatly. Simply. Carelessly. I can’t imagine what it’s like I can’t comprehend it- To fit Somewhere Much less to fit somewhere With someone. I am always trying to corset myself into this world, Lungs burning, Trying to remain small enough to squeeze by Catching myself by the wrist to keep from reaching For anything. And if there seems to be a spot where I might be able to exist as I am It is always Occupied. Like a shiny pinprick That thought hurts- Not like the others it is newly cut And still ****** The idea that maybe there is a home for me And that maybe I was too late for it. They’re laughing. He says something clever, Passes a hand along the small of her back And she leans into it, Smiling because she loves that he wants to touch her innocently. They seem to exist behind glass. Not for the first time I wonder If I could just slip into that life Like a drop into an ocean I want it badly I want it stupidly And I examine all the parts of myself, All the edges and cracks, All the things I’ve worked so hard to protect and repair. It is not a welcome sight- I am not a home I am like an old ruin Full of murmurings and cold spots Full of dusty sunlight. I sigh, Knowing the secret I keep so poorly- That if I really had a choice to be otherwise I would have already made it. I couldn’t reach them if I ran for a thousand years, They are too far away. They walk off the train, arms linked Talking about nothing And I watch them go Like a hallucination, Like a mirage in the desert. Her perfume smells like forgetfulness And it lingers.
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Sep 28, 2018
Sep 28, 2018 at 12:48 AM UTC
Easy
It’s just easy for them Isn’t it? This couple on the train. They walked on laughing together Holding hands And I felt that familiar something- Not jealousy Not envy But... Chagrin. Astonishment. Incredulity. Incomprehension. Looking at them feels like looking at one of those Impossible pictures Where the stairs keep going forever in a loop. It’s just Easy for them. It doesn’t hurt anymore, that thought, But thinking it feels so odd in my mind When I can’t imagine loving someone without Shame, Without pain. They fit. These people, They fit without having to carve anything out. They fit without punishing each other. They fit like puzzle pieces cut from the same board- No worries, they just go together, and that Is that. They fit like “Of course.” Like breathing. Neatly. Simply. Carelessly. I can’t imagine what it’s like I can’t comprehend it- To fit Somewhere Much less to fit somewhere With someone. I am always trying to corset myself into this world, Lungs burning, Trying to remain small enough to squeeze by Catching myself by the wrist to keep from reaching For anything. And if there seems to be a spot where I might be able to exist as I am It is always Occupied. Like a shiny pinprick That thought hurts- Not like the others it is newly cut And still ****** The idea that maybe there is a home for me And that maybe I was too late for it. They’re laughing. He says something clever, Passes a hand along the small of her back And she leans into it, Smiling because she loves that he wants to touch her innocently. They seem to exist behind glass. Not for the first time I wonder If I could just slip into that life Like a drop into an ocean I want it badly I want it stupidly And I examine all the parts of myself, All the edges and cracks, All the things I’ve worked so hard to protect and repair. It is not a welcome sight- I am not a home I am like an old ruin Full of murmurings and cold spots Full of dusty sunlight. I sigh, Knowing the secret I keep so poorly- That if I really had a choice to be otherwise I would have already made it. I couldn’t reach them if I ran for a thousand years, They are too far away. They walk off the train, arms linked Talking about nothing And I watch them go Like a hallucination, Like a mirage in the desert. Her perfume smells like forgetfulness And it lingers.
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Am I really so alone in my own thought That I can find no one with the same vision as me? The same astonishment? The same confusion? The same frustration? Someone who may console me and tell me that I am not insane? Am I insane? If I am not, then why can’t I find a single soul that See things the way I see them? Is everyone blind? Am I?
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Jul 31, 2013
Jul 31, 2013 at 2:48 PM UTC
So Very Alone
*break astonishment at perception of a third-world child making it up that totem-pole amidst paltry conditions even beyond the half-way mark* 1. a standing man in silent message and the woman in red with thin-sling shoulder-bag holding lipstick, weekly-ticket and purse oh, how she frightens honchos out their skull draped round her sister's head shroud eternal coughing sore 2. grannies recount lively griot-tales where hope is never barren young boys play in swamped dirt-trails drawing absent father-figures in the sand the wind has carried them off to mines deep in the crust of earth's ire adolescent future sits on labour-farms where keen spirit is dulled with worthless hops keeps the sly farmer happy and he tells them the fruit is free yet they've already paid for it manifold when she reaches twenty she will have at least two kids whose lives lie in the granny's luxury while she runs off to the golden city-lites to jump through higher hoops for ****** spoils all cheapened by long-term neglect 3. there lies hope unlost in every girl-child who goes to school who finds encouragement from words kindly given if but from a stranger *no hand-me-outs no forlorn begging* she... the empowered mother of boys will help them to grow into young men of such sensibility as to keep their hands to deeds of honour who, in turn become fine fathers to daughters they love and cherish raise to be luminary *each step up from that totem-pole such a steep climb strengthens invisible wings and unworldly rewards and when final rung is reached heralds untainted take-offffffff*...... S T,  27 aug
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Aug 27, 2013
Aug 27, 2013 at 11:01 AM UTC
totem-pole
*break astonishment at perception of a third-world child making it up that totem-pole amidst paltry conditions even beyond the half-way mark* 1. a standing man in silent message and the woman in red with thin-sling shoulder-bag holding lipstick, weekly-ticket and purse oh, how she frightens honchos out their skull draped round her sister's head shroud eternal coughing sore 2. grannies recount lively griot-tales where hope is never barren young boys play in swamped dirt-trails drawing absent father-figures in the sand the wind has carried them off to mines deep in the crust of earth's ire adolescent future sits on labour-farms where keen spirit is dulled with worthless hops keeps the sly farmer happy and he tells them the fruit is free yet they've already paid for it manifold when she reaches twenty she will have at least two kids whose lives lie in the granny's luxury while she runs off to the golden city-lites to jump through higher hoops for ****** spoils all cheapened by long-term neglect 3. there lies hope unlost in every girl-child who goes to school who finds encouragement from words kindly given if but from a stranger *no hand-me-outs no forlorn begging* she... the empowered mother of boys will help them to grow into young men of such sensibility as to keep their hands to deeds of honour who, in turn become fine fathers to daughters they love and cherish raise to be luminary *each step up from that totem-pole such a steep climb strengthens invisible wings and unworldly rewards and when final rung is reached heralds untainted take-offffffff*...... S T,  27 aug
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Pale legs sprawl out; untangling and stretching, as I absorb the Montana air. Isolated, we sit, under the big sky. Silent. White clouds float through a sea of orange. The same shade of orange as those sugary push-up's my father would shove down my throat. Gas station sweets to make me me forgive him. I shake the feeling of comparisons— they never did me any good. Instead, I lie down and allow you to touch my tense body. Softly, you reach over, muffling words of beauty and astonishment. I do not flinch. I flash a smile and focus on Montana. The mountains in West Virginia rolled; they flowed, so graciously together. There was never a road that was not winding. I've never seen a rugged mountain. Snow-capped and radiant. Not until Montana. Until this moment, I, too, have tried to flow. Living the same ways, in which I experienced, Mother Nature. Going through the motions— with no purpose. No passion. The fear of becoming an abrasive, overbearing woman urged me to flow. To slide through life, barely noticed. Never climbing for more, to discover the true beauty in becoming a bit rocky.
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Aug 20, 2018
Aug 20, 2018 at 11:06 PM UTC
Teachings From Mother.
*with a discovery of symmetrical elegance.. beauty in pattern fresh from asymmetry.. Astonishment of simplicity Why had discovery not leaped before..? then in elation discoverer declares proof is irrelevant Elegance is all sufficient imperative Truth...*
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 12:42 AM UTC
Elegance
You won't recognize them I bet, your secrets, even in broad day light, if they walk towards you smiling, wearing dark glasses to hide their eyes in a humid day.They now wear clothes of different styles to take you for a ride, even cross dress and change the accents, they play games with your hazy mind --the secrets you once buried deep under. They stand peeping behind blinded windows prowl as shadows soliciting behind half open doors,. Time flies in a hurry like migratory birds left behind, you have to strain your ears too much to hear even the faint foot falls of the past! Old memories have changed their manners they try to distract one with invented details Like the muffled voices in an attic dark, on a fateful day so long, your old secrets speak an archaic tongue, that needs to be interpreted. One has to be artful as the turbaned village elders who would for your astonishment interpret the vocabulary of lizard calls, key to nature's intents. Or the trained eye of an elder who in flashes of meteor falls, reads the secret messages of universe. To get a true sense of your own secret you have to tread the places they hide. Make them shed their crusted hides by which they conceal their true color, which one has been waiting to see, with a palpitating heart, walking back to where one walked once, long forgotten. That is why elders on days of yore would exhort, embarrassingly repeat too, not to have any hidden secrets that hurt even if breathtakingly beautiful like a courtesan. In some moment one won't  expect dreadful they could turn and become witches, with fiery eyes, dreadlocks, and long nails.
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Mar 25, 2017
Mar 25, 2017 at 4:11 PM UTC
Dreadlocks and long nails
You won't recognize them I bet, your secrets, even in broad day light, if they walk towards you smiling, wearing dark glasses to hide their eyes in a humid day.They now wear clothes of different styles to take you for a ride, even cross dress and change the accents, they play games with your hazy mind --the secrets you once buried deep under. They stand peeping behind blinded windows prowl as shadows soliciting behind half open doors,. Time flies in a hurry like migratory birds left behind, you have to strain your ears too much to hear even the faint foot falls of the past! Old memories have changed their manners they try to distract one with invented details Like the muffled voices in an attic dark, on a fateful day so long, your old secrets speak an archaic tongue, that needs to be interpreted. One has to be artful as the turbaned village elders who would for your astonishment interpret the vocabulary of lizard calls, key to nature's intents. Or the trained eye of an elder who in flashes of meteor falls, reads the secret messages of universe. To get a true sense of your own secret you have to tread the places they hide. Make them shed their crusted hides by which they conceal their true color, which one has been waiting to see, with a palpitating heart, walking back to where one walked once, long forgotten. That is why elders on days of yore would exhort, embarrassingly repeat too, not to have any hidden secrets that hurt even if breathtakingly beautiful like a courtesan. In some moment one won't  expect dreadful they could turn and become witches, with fiery eyes, dreadlocks, and long nails.
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She gives him his eyes, she found them Among some rubble, among some beetles He gives her her skin He just seemed to pull it down out of the air and lay it over her She weeps with fearfulness and astonishment She has found his hands for him, and fitted them freshly at the wrists They are amazed at themselves, they go feeling all over her He has assembled her spine, he cleaned each piece carefully And sets them in perfect order A superhuman puzzle but he is inspired She leans back twisting this way and that, using it and laughing Incredulous Now she has brought his feet, she is connecting them So that his whole body lights up And he has fashioned her new hips With all fittings complete and with newly wound coils, all shiningly oiled He is polishing every part, he himself can hardly believe it They keep taking each other to the sun, they find they can easily To test each new thing at each new step And now she smoothes over him the plates of his skull So that the joints are invisible And now he connects her throat, her ******* and the pit of her stomach With a single wire She gives him his teeth, tying the the roots to the centrepin of his body He sets the little circlets on her fingertips She stiches his body here and there with steely purple silk He oils the delicate cogs of her mouth She inlays with deep cut scrolls the nape of his neck He sinks into place the inside of her thighs So, gasping with joy, with cries of wonderment Like two gods of mud Sprawling in the dirt, but with infinite care They bring each other to perfection.
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Bride and Groom Lie Hidden for Three Days
She gives him his eyes, she found them Among some rubble, among some beetles He gives her her skin He just seemed to pull it down out of the air and lay it over her She weeps with fearfulness and astonishment She has found his hands for him, and fitted them freshly at the wrists They are amazed at themselves, they go feeling all over her He has assembled her spine, he cleaned each piece carefully And sets them in perfect order A superhuman puzzle but he is inspired She leans back twisting this way and that, using it and laughing Incredulous Now she has brought his feet, she is connecting them So that his whole body lights up And he has fashioned her new hips With all fittings complete and with newly wound coils, all shiningly oiled He is polishing every part, he himself can hardly believe it They keep taking each other to the sun, they find they can easily To test each new thing at each new step And now she smoothes over him the plates of his skull So that the joints are invisible And now he connects her throat, her ******* and the pit of her stomach With a single wire She gives him his teeth, tying the the roots to the centrepin of his body He sets the little circlets on her fingertips She stiches his body here and there with steely purple silk He oils the delicate cogs of her mouth She inlays with deep cut scrolls the nape of his neck He sinks into place the inside of her thighs So, gasping with joy, with cries of wonderment Like two gods of mud Sprawling in the dirt, but with infinite care They bring each other to perfection.
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i'd like to expand your consciousness darling tell me how to accomplish this dwelling in sheer confidence where existence can't seem to conquer it a look of pure astonishment pronouncing every consonant your words fail to reach my grip as they melt off your tongue and lips.
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Jan 6, 2015
Jan 6, 2015 at 11:59 PM UTC
cotton-mouth
FINFIN THE DOLPHIN Poor Fin Fin, once was Fred's favourite toy dolphin; But was now sadly rejected; and lying in a dustbin. Thrown out it was because a drunk servant fed it a little gin. A small rag-picker boy, picked it up; from the dustbin. washing it, wiping it; now made it look new and clean. As he was walking past a river, in it fell poor FinFin. Sad was the lad, this was really bad; for now drowned FinFin. A man, consoling him said, "grow n come up one day will, this dolphin". Come Danny, would daily, our lil boy, to look for his FinFin. To his astonishment great, one day he saw a big dolphin. With glee he cried, as he saw it, " look, here's my dear FinFin". Days went by, with some food, he would daily feed FinFin; Throw a ball at it, he would n return it back, would the dolphin. Gathered people now to see this play; giving him money, in a bin. Happily jump, dance and spin around would, FinFin . During one such act, along with the ball, fell the lad as he did over-lean. Promptly picked him up and brought him safely back, our cute FinFin. Friends for ever they became; lil Danny and our cute FinFin, the dolphin. Armin Dutia Motashaw
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Feb 3, 2019
Feb 3, 2019 at 5:18 AM UTC
FINFIN THE DOLPHIN
Mannequin smiles with masks of plastic stand and huddle, fight and juggle, for their space in the crowd. Elbows touching torsos, torsos touching hips; kisses under the darkness, bonfire warming the lips. A child sits on the shoulders of her rock, hands resting in the lap of his head, waiting for the fireworks to be ignited, set off, lit and begin. Eyes of raw astonishment, watery with cold, a deer eye mould, looked up at the firework display. Sharp colour crayon lines were drawn in the night-time sky. Sound followed, cheers and claps, applauds too. They were lost in the hollow hole of the houses around, this’ll be the one she remembers. Her first display of sound and light and she’ll remember how she jumped up and down to carnival music and carnival folk, rides and light, menagerie sights. News from the blog regarding my new poetry pamphlet, check the link out>> http://www.coffeeshoppoems.com/2012/11/homeland-borderland.html
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Nov 6, 2012
Nov 6, 2012 at 1:07 PM UTC
A CHILD'S FIRST FIREWORK DISPLAY.
The acoustic guitar plays softly, in the background of a critiqued ball room as he made his entrance. The attention of the audience fell upon him; As he walked readily towards the dance floor, The melody of the flute and the rhythm of the bass guitar, Dramatized his beauty. The spectators in fear, but his passion so real, As I stared into his eyes, that made beauty felt unreal everything else that surrounded me disappeared. He focused his eyes on the dance floor they began to whisper; Who will he choose? Who has to leave now? He flashed his eyes upon the viewers that were once in shock, now in terror, but their ****** expression in awe. The apothegm states that he continually seeks for the one that would heal his disease but bound to the power of the earth’s forces, his determined, stunning eyes will never be able to reveal, the secret one that can heal. The bass drums play wildly as he shows the crowd his fury. The once stunned viewers now begin to panic, but I draw myself closer. Before I could reach him someone else got in the way. “I would like to die” was the words I know her to repeatedly say. He gently pushed himself away in anger. He looked around the ball room, and observed the reaction of the audience to his response. They’re now in astonishment. He then stopped and his focal point was clear. The piano and the cello played softly to become one with his voice. He said to me “let us dance.” I’m frightened, the majority of the onlookers left in a daze. My vision weakened before our dance began. He smiled, and as he looked upon my face all the instruments faded away. He said to me is this your last dance? Will you leave us tonight? I’m the kiss of death will you close your eyes forever or will you leave me in delight?”
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Nov 19, 2009
Nov 19, 2009 at 9:39 AM UTC
Let's Dance
The acoustic guitar plays softly, in the background of a critiqued ball room as he made his entrance. The attention of the audience fell upon him; As he walked readily towards the dance floor, The melody of the flute and the rhythm of the bass guitar, Dramatized his beauty. The spectators in fear, but his passion so real, As I stared into his eyes, that made beauty felt unreal everything else that surrounded me disappeared. He focused his eyes on the dance floor they began to whisper; Who will he choose? Who has to leave now? He flashed his eyes upon the viewers that were once in shock, now in terror, but their ****** expression in awe. The apothegm states that he continually seeks for the one that would heal his disease but bound to the power of the earth’s forces, his determined, stunning eyes will never be able to reveal, the secret one that can heal. The bass drums play wildly as he shows the crowd his fury. The once stunned viewers now begin to panic, but I draw myself closer. Before I could reach him someone else got in the way. “I would like to die” was the words I know her to repeatedly say. He gently pushed himself away in anger. He looked around the ball room, and observed the reaction of the audience to his response. They’re now in astonishment. He then stopped and his focal point was clear. The piano and the cello played softly to become one with his voice. He said to me “let us dance.” I’m frightened, the majority of the onlookers left in a daze. My vision weakened before our dance began. He smiled, and as he looked upon my face all the instruments faded away. He said to me is this your last dance? Will you leave us tonight? I’m the kiss of death will you close your eyes forever or will you leave me in delight?”
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“Two teaspoons of coffee, one teaspoon of sugar, and pour it right before it boils down”, my mother said smelling the coffee she is cooking to perfection. I stand there and wonder what scent Hamlet was smelling when he said “Something’s rotten in the state of Denmark”, I’m guessing it’s the same scent colonizing this house. I look at the ***** ceiling and start sniffing the air. My mother looks at me and says “your nose is nearing the skyline, keep it where your feet are. Men don’t like prideful women”. I looked around trying to see what smelled so repulsive. My grandmother lit incense, my sister baked a fresh orange cake for celebration, my other sister splashed a few drops of the musk that the Arab man gifted us all over the house, and father held a stack of 500 Riyal banknotes to his nose.   The rich Arab that knocked on our door last week asking if we have an extra womb for sale is visiting again today. My mother prepared a hot bath for me an hour ago; she said I have to smell like freshly uprooted Baladi roses, so I soaked in the bathtub trying to figure out what is this repulsive scent I am smelling. Right after I finished my bath I told my mother “something stinks”. Her reply was dragging me to the kitchen where she teaches me how to make coffee. I say “mother, nobody drinks coffee here”, she says “You need to learn how to properly make coffee to serve our sheikh some tonight. Remember, eyes on the ground”. I reply reciting the lesson she just taught me “Keep them where my feet are”. I hear people in the city overlook what lies beneath their feet; a 16 year old city girl will never know what it means to have to walk 30 kilometers with a broken shoe in order to read one book. I guess farming taught me a thing or two about looking down. I remember reading before that African slaves were shipped to America to primarily work in farms, coffee and sugar farms to be exact. I realize now what this stink is. I look at my mother and tell her “I will not marry him. This ring reeks of slavery”. She looks at me in astonishment, and I reply reciting the lesson she just taught me “and pour it right before it boils down”.
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Aug 25, 2018
Aug 25, 2018 at 7:18 PM UTC
something stinks.
“Two teaspoons of coffee, one teaspoon of sugar, and pour it right before it boils down”, my mother said smelling the coffee she is cooking to perfection. I stand there and wonder what scent Hamlet was smelling when he said “Something’s rotten in the state of Denmark”, I’m guessing it’s the same scent colonizing this house. I look at the ***** ceiling and start sniffing the air. My mother looks at me and says “your nose is nearing the skyline, keep it where your feet are. Men don’t like prideful women”. I looked around trying to see what smelled so repulsive. My grandmother lit incense, my sister baked a fresh orange cake for celebration, my other sister splashed a few drops of the musk that the Arab man gifted us all over the house, and father held a stack of 500 Riyal banknotes to his nose.   The rich Arab that knocked on our door last week asking if we have an extra womb for sale is visiting again today. My mother prepared a hot bath for me an hour ago; she said I have to smell like freshly uprooted Baladi roses, so I soaked in the bathtub trying to figure out what is this repulsive scent I am smelling. Right after I finished my bath I told my mother “something stinks”. Her reply was dragging me to the kitchen where she teaches me how to make coffee. I say “mother, nobody drinks coffee here”, she says “You need to learn how to properly make coffee to serve our sheikh some tonight. Remember, eyes on the ground”. I reply reciting the lesson she just taught me “Keep them where my feet are”. I hear people in the city overlook what lies beneath their feet; a 16 year old city girl will never know what it means to have to walk 30 kilometers with a broken shoe in order to read one book. I guess farming taught me a thing or two about looking down. I remember reading before that African slaves were shipped to America to primarily work in farms, coffee and sugar farms to be exact. I realize now what this stink is. I look at my mother and tell her “I will not marry him. This ring reeks of slavery”. She looks at me in astonishment, and I reply reciting the lesson she just taught me “and pour it right before it boils down”.
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In dazzled astonishment She looked up from her reverie As she heard the flap of wings overhead And saw the flash of laser beams in her dim lit room Before her, stood a winged seraph A radiant silhouette with such gentleness and grace As never beholden on any human face With its hands raised in benediction, It saluted Mary and said “Blessed art thou amongst women… …………………………………… The rest she heard in a trance. Unable to comprehend what was said, The girl looked up nonplussed. Again it said, “The Holy Ghost shall come upon thee And a son shall be born of thee Whom you shall call Jesus” In that nanosecond of a new revelation Did Mary’s world shatter like glassware Or did her ****** womb thrill with new life Did she swim in the waters of joyful tidings? Or gyrate in the sweeping swirl of tidal waves For the girl already espoused to a man In whose dreams his comely form had begun Flitting in and out Was it a moment of silent ravishment? Or of stupefied bewilderment Did a dagger cut through her heart? Or did her soul take wing in flight???
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Dec 15, 2016
Dec 15, 2016 at 5:39 AM UTC
Tidal Waves
Pressing His Cherub face against the window glass, To get the * Better View. Even as the Heat from his Breath caused the Fogging of the Glass ! Standing now on His Tip-Toes trying harder yet to get that Better View.. The crowds around Him, were pressing in, Pressing in as if they would *NEVER Get a Turn. The SIGN Clearly said ,,," ALL IN LINE , WILL GET THE OPPORTUNITY TO SEE , TO ASK and to CHOOSE ! " There were no Sequence numbers assigned, SO...the Poor LAD got Shoved further back into the MASSIVE CROWD . Instead of the Line getting smaller, it seemed that it was GROWING even Larger... The LAD with the CHERUB face was now pushed all the way to the OUTER-EDGES of the crowd. Not ONE without a *DRIVING URGE AND SPIRIT, the Lad Shouted in a Loud Voice and Pointing to the *REDDISH-BLUE morning sky. "There HE IS ! There HE IS ! ! " At that moment, everyone in the Great crowd turned toward the Lad and Looked up into the SKY... With Keen Alertness the CHERUB faced Lad Raced toward the entry door......and to HIS ASTONISHMENT,, *THERE HE STOOD,, The Tears of Great JOY and Excitement Poured down the CHERUB Faced Lad. The Lad had made His Choice....AND...He Saw *OPEN ARMS extended Open to Receive HIS Embrace ! ! The Roar of Joy from the Great Crowd did not dilute the TEARS OF DELIGHT Thoughts Racing thru His Mind,, about the CROWD WOULD THEY PRESS-ON AS THIS "CHERUB" HAD DONE.
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Dec 8, 2010
Dec 8, 2010 at 3:10 AM UTC
" * THE CHERUB * " ( #41 )
*Clouds are as thin as satin The cool breeze caresses our faces Millions of stars gleam so bright Like no other I describe the night There I see your eyes ever so pretty Jaw-dropped as they look at mine Your face defines such beauty That It cursed me with dementia Your lips is as red as velvet Cured my color blindness As they move as you speak I can't respond, I'm tongue-tied The warmth of your embrace Overthrew the coldness afar As both our eyes collides I fell more in love with you I stare in your lips one more time For they kept me in astonishment Oh I really wanted to kiss them Yet I can't cause I can't I know that time will come All I have to do is to keep my faith Under this bright blue moon I promise, with all my heart, I will wait*
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Aug 2, 2015
Aug 2, 2015 at 9:30 PM UTC
Blue Moon
Only once she smiled when I cried, That is the time when I was born. She held her breadth and brought me to earth She gave her love without any wanting in return When I first stepped like 24 paired chromosome being She would have been astonished on seeing. Her astonishment would have been imbibed inside my heart, So that I am relieving it now in this form of art. When I reached her height I recognized her might She taught me life Tacitly by her life. Still I am a child to her Though wrinkles sketches my face. In this life of race Next venture could take me to an unknown place That place also will be followed by her love She is very special to me As how every children is special to their mother.
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Feb 22, 2015
Feb 22, 2015 at 6:32 AM UTC
Mother
As we walk, The grass bends beneath our feet, The stars whisper secrets we do not understand, And the wind beckons us towards something. What is it? We don't know, but keep walking south. South toward good days with plenty, in a pursuit of peaceful nights, with good men, and fulfilled dreams. We walk this desert in hope of escaping this conflict we were born into, in order to find rebirth through those coming after us and from us. So we walk. Walking against the grains of sand, looking for better days, with better way. Such is the nature of our journey. We swim in a sea of uncertainty, praying not to drown. Capturing every moment so that it will not be forgotten, so our story can one day be told. We appreciate cuts and bruises along our way so that even when we grow old they will tell of our journey. I turn towards my wife who carries our unborn child, and I tell her, "We will name her 'our hope'." And she will know how we gave up our discomfort for her sake, how her presence brought us a state of determination and stubbornness. How she gave us hope. When she is young she will see our well worn feet disfigured by distance and hellish conditions. She will ask in astonishment, "What, happened?" And we will tell her of our journey. But she will see but not understand that we carry the weight of the past in our feet. That our walk is still heavy and are days are always long. Yet eventually she will see Him through our suffering, because even though our trials are not as great, our feet are like his hands and feet, they are an image of sacrifice.
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May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 11:22 AM UTC
Refugees in Search of Refuge
As we walk, The grass bends beneath our feet, The stars whisper secrets we do not understand, And the wind beckons us towards something. What is it? We don't know, but keep walking south. South toward good days with plenty, in a pursuit of peaceful nights, with good men, and fulfilled dreams. We walk this desert in hope of escaping this conflict we were born into, in order to find rebirth through those coming after us and from us. So we walk. Walking against the grains of sand, looking for better days, with better way. Such is the nature of our journey. We swim in a sea of uncertainty, praying not to drown. Capturing every moment so that it will not be forgotten, so our story can one day be told. We appreciate cuts and bruises along our way so that even when we grow old they will tell of our journey. I turn towards my wife who carries our unborn child, and I tell her, "We will name her 'our hope'." And she will know how we gave up our discomfort for her sake, how her presence brought us a state of determination and stubbornness. How she gave us hope. When she is young she will see our well worn feet disfigured by distance and hellish conditions. She will ask in astonishment, "What, happened?" And we will tell her of our journey. But she will see but not understand that we carry the weight of the past in our feet. That our walk is still heavy and are days are always long. Yet eventually she will see Him through our suffering, because even though our trials are not as great, our feet are like his hands and feet, they are an image of sacrifice.
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“I have something for you to remember me by,” said Tim.     He held a little foam Hippo – the lone play animal supplied by the loonybin to patients in need.      It was brand new – just as every Hippo looked – and I wondered why he’d chosen something seemingly impersonal in comparison to his other, odd gifts.      However, what he did next made his hippo – my hippo – absolutely ideal. To people like Tim and I, that is.      For, to my astonishment, he casually took the toy in his hands, twisted, and ripped it cleanly  in two.      He ripped off its head, which he gave to me, whilst he kept the body.     I will never get rid of that mutilated, foam hippo head. For he understood what no one else had ever come near.      In this way – perhaps – Tim and I became synonyms. Synonyms for what ignorant perceptions would later christen ****** or merely, crazy (the latter - coined by those who remain too depressingly colloquial to invent unfounded diagnoses).      These epithets, catalyzed post personifying such societal taboos as Tim or I committed, follow me still, and have yet to disperse.         A criticaster disaster, personified.      Yes; in this way – Tim and I became synonymously insane. •
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Feb 18, 2016
Feb 18, 2016 at 7:22 AM UTC
HospATTACK: Psych Ward Socios
Two eyes appeared from under a broadrimmed hat. They looked around with astonishment. In a schoolroom, far off in the distance, a boy was Busy making a wooden bowl. The teacher unaccustomed to such slowness Requested a completion date. “I am not slow thought the boy, just working Away until I get it right.” He met the teacher’s gaze with an expression Of opacity and a sense of bewilderment. On another day, at a later date, this same boy Was found in his metalwork class applying Cylinders of gases to his small creation, quietly, Hoping for a connection before he was blown To smithereans. Two blue eyes concentrated as The jets of flames hissed into space. Too long the gases flowed. The master rose, the boy shook and his eyes Widened. In a playground, sometime earlier, A small boy could be seen playing without a coat. Gossiping women spoke of this unnatural act, This exception to the fold. The boy stared back Hearing their words with his eyes. Decades later when his hair had turned from Brown to grey but his eyes were still blue And wide apart, he painted a little *** Sitting on a pale surface, gazing into nothingness. This painting took him a long time. He had to get it right, the tones , the lines, The connections. After he finished ‘Little *** he sat down And stared into the two blue blobs set wide Apart on its surface and he thought, “this is Me, the boy, the man, the painter, of wide Apart, unnameable moments.” The Beginning. Love Mary ***
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Jun 9, 2018
Jun 9, 2018 at 10:42 AM UTC
Little ***
**The clock demands a tower, for it to look outwards night has an absence, the key factor bringing relevance to a lighthouse, the nightingale infuses sweetness to night hours for those listeners who never fancy hearing her on a day a tall wall, a ladder and an iron cutter, perfectly shapes a thief; there is a mysterious disorder pointing the other way to every careful order. The cactus flower and delicate butterfly on it, brings to focus a certain delectable incongruence, eternity has an eye resting on evanescence, a scientist with a reverse cerebral process alone can snake in to the origin of such nuances, where hides the complex aesthetics of the 'other' of what we are familiar, more fascinating than this the universe that's the tip of an iceberg, hides from us though, it exists here with all of the 'multiverse' But who would institute a Nobel prize for 'otherness' to shed light to the dark path, that would gift more astonishment to us**
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Nov 4, 2013
Nov 4, 2013 at 12:10 PM UTC
The delectable 'otherness'
Many doctors had failed to heal her; her wealth was gone; unable to cope, seemingly having no options left, she… faced the idea of being bereft of hope. A difficult issue of continual bleeding, had bothered this woman for twelve years; purposely maneuvering through the crowd, she hoped to meet Christ, and draw near. “If only, I could physically touch Him, my personal need can be forever met.” Summoning the last of her inner strength, she pressed onward without any regret. Her health was dramatically worsening and drastic action was now required; since Christ was visibly close by, perhaps healing she urgently desired would become available to her this day. Moving boldly with faith towards Him, silently reaching out for his garment with her weakened, slender limb… she briefly caressed the hem of His robe. And suddenly- her discomfort was gone! Without warning, virtue leapt out of Him; and now He wanted a face to gaze upon. To everyone’s astonishment, He stopped; then came the simple, unexpected question: “Who touched me?” He patiently inquired. Initially, there was apparent confusion, from not knowing who, He was addressing. Scared and embarrassed, she fell face down at His feet, ready to weep and apologize. “Rise up my daughter, from the dusty ground; tell me your life’s story of suffering; since your faith was successfully released, My strength has cured you of your agony; return home with my blessings and peace.” . . . Author Notes Loosely based on: Mark 5:24-34 Learn more about me and my poetry at: http://amzn.to/1ffo9YZ By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © 2014, All rights reserved.
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Aug 21, 2014
Aug 21, 2014 at 10:45 AM UTC
Poem: Let Me Touch His Garment
Many doctors had failed to heal her; her wealth was gone; unable to cope, seemingly having no options left, she… faced the idea of being bereft of hope. A difficult issue of continual bleeding, had bothered this woman for twelve years; purposely maneuvering through the crowd, she hoped to meet Christ, and draw near. “If only, I could physically touch Him, my personal need can be forever met.” Summoning the last of her inner strength, she pressed onward without any regret. Her health was dramatically worsening and drastic action was now required; since Christ was visibly close by, perhaps healing she urgently desired would become available to her this day. Moving boldly with faith towards Him, silently reaching out for his garment with her weakened, slender limb… she briefly caressed the hem of His robe. And suddenly- her discomfort was gone! Without warning, virtue leapt out of Him; and now He wanted a face to gaze upon. To everyone’s astonishment, He stopped; then came the simple, unexpected question: “Who touched me?” He patiently inquired. Initially, there was apparent confusion, from not knowing who, He was addressing. Scared and embarrassed, she fell face down at His feet, ready to weep and apologize. “Rise up my daughter, from the dusty ground; tell me your life’s story of suffering; since your faith was successfully released, My strength has cured you of your agony; return home with my blessings and peace.” . . . Author Notes Loosely based on: Mark 5:24-34 Learn more about me and my poetry at: http://amzn.to/1ffo9YZ By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © 2014, All rights reserved.
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Why after all this one and not the rest? Why this specific self, not in a nest, but a house? Sewn up not in scales, but skin? Not topped off by a leaf, but by a face? Why on earth now, on Tuesday of all days, and why on earth, pinned down by this star's pin? In spite of years of my not being here? In spite of seas of all these dates and fates, these cells, celestials, and coelenterates? What is it really that made me appear neither an inch nor half a globe too far, neither a minute nor aeons too early? What made me fill myself with me so squarely? Why am I staring now into the dark and muttering this unending monologue just like the growling thing we call a dog? Wisława Szymborska (translated from Polish by Stanisław Barańczak)
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Mar 24, 2014
Mar 24, 2014 at 8:13 AM UTC
ASTONISHMENT
Comes a scented melancholy rolling into love before the call Never doubting your presence or mine Idle talk acquires air which comes before a fall Fading soon into the rapid hum Of your departing spine A resting phrase kissed half blind tears from scented wings Burning them into our memories Yet there was no sorrow, in or about anything Or fear felt when you faded Into the breeze Ancient wisdom came to us, making us serenely aware Of all the ripples rolling into our midst We merely held on to the sweetness we shared Knowing, those ripples would fade No longer exist Comes a scented cheerfulness rolling into our present Never doubting your presence or mine Those ripples have faded into love’s astonishment Forever sending the sweetest chills Up and down our spines
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Dec 24, 2010
Dec 24, 2010 at 7:21 PM UTC
Fading Ripples