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"acheivement" poems
Hello wats your name?!?”  It all started with a greeting  She was fine so when she answered it felt like an acheivement.  She seemed so innocent he didn’t kno she was so strategic  That same innocence in her face made him believe it.  Time passed and they got cooler. Not later but sooner  she started to manuever  She was an assassin  Her weapon was passion  She used it so flawless  Somethin she caught him off gaurd with  She was a professional bent on teachin him a lesson bro  And he was susceptible to all of the pressure though  See at first he was strong wit it, he couldn’t go wrong wit it.  She knew he was gonna diminish when he realize he was targeted.  He was blunt. Said he dont trust girls cuz he cant throw them that far  But a couple sweet nothings made him lower his guard.  Defenses down he began to believe the things she had to say  He stopped his  wrongdoings and crazy acolades  He done heard alot of lies too Cant tell if her words are true or not  She tell him she been thru alot but **** he been thru alot  It was all to perfect, thought to himself is it worth it, cuz life is worthless if you not working towards perfect.  He thought he was the predator but he was her pray  So he settled in but she wanted it that way  She caught that boy slippin and he fiinally learned his lesson  Left the **** in him dead a pool full of love.the ****** weapon affection.  See fellas if you let a girl **** that **** in you  That ***** you feel is invincible  Just know that same girl you called a ***** or a *** had it planned it was all premeditated ******
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Aug 31, 2011
Aug 31, 2011 at 1:39 PM UTC
Premeditated ******
Hello wats your name?!?”  It all started with a greeting  She was fine so when she answered it felt like an acheivement.  She seemed so innocent he didn’t kno she was so strategic  That same innocence in her face made him believe it.  Time passed and they got cooler. Not later but sooner  she started to manuever  She was an assassin  Her weapon was passion  She used it so flawless  Somethin she caught him off gaurd with  She was a professional bent on teachin him a lesson bro  And he was susceptible to all of the pressure though  See at first he was strong wit it, he couldn’t go wrong wit it.  She knew he was gonna diminish when he realize he was targeted.  He was blunt. Said he dont trust girls cuz he cant throw them that far  But a couple sweet nothings made him lower his guard.  Defenses down he began to believe the things she had to say  He stopped his  wrongdoings and crazy acolades  He done heard alot of lies too Cant tell if her words are true or not  She tell him she been thru alot but **** he been thru alot  It was all to perfect, thought to himself is it worth it, cuz life is worthless if you not working towards perfect.  He thought he was the predator but he was her pray  So he settled in but she wanted it that way  She caught that boy slippin and he fiinally learned his lesson  Left the **** in him dead a pool full of love.the ****** weapon affection.  See fellas if you let a girl **** that **** in you  That ***** you feel is invincible  Just know that same girl you called a ***** or a *** had it planned it was all premeditated ******
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Hello wats your name?!?”  It all started with a greeting  She was fine so when she answered it felt like an acheivement.  She seemed so innocent he didn’t kno she was so strategic  That same innocence in her face made him believe it.  Time passed and they got cooler. Not later but sooner  she started to manuever  She was an assassin  Her weapon was passion  She used it so flawless  Somethin she caught him off gaurd with  She was a professional bent on teachin him a lesson bro  And he was susceptible to all of the pressure though  See at first he was strong wit it, he couldn’t go wrong wit it.  She knew he was gonna diminish when he realize he was targeted.  He was blunt. Said he dont trust girls cuz he cant throw them that far  But a couple sweet nothings made him lower his guard.  Defenses down he began to believe the things she had to say  He stopped his  wrongdoings and crazy acolades  He done heard alot of lies too Cant tell if her words are true or not  She tell him she been thru alot but **** he been thru alot  It was all to perfect, thought to himself is it worth it, cuz life is worthless if you not working towards perfect.  He thought he was the predator but he was her pray  So he settled in but she wanted it that way  She caught that boy slippin and he finally learned his lesson  Left the **** in him dead a pool full of love.l he ****** weapon affection.  See fellas if you let a girl **** that **** in you  That person you feel is invincible  Just know that same girl you called a ***** or a *** had it planned it was all premeditated ******
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Aug 31, 2011
Aug 31, 2011 at 1:40 PM UTC
Premeditated ******
Hello wats your name?!?”  It all started with a greeting  She was fine so when she answered it felt like an acheivement.  She seemed so innocent he didn’t kno she was so strategic  That same innocence in her face made him believe it.  Time passed and they got cooler. Not later but sooner  she started to manuever  She was an assassin  Her weapon was passion  She used it so flawless  Somethin she caught him off gaurd with  She was a professional bent on teachin him a lesson bro  And he was susceptible to all of the pressure though  See at first he was strong wit it, he couldn’t go wrong wit it.  She knew he was gonna diminish when he realize he was targeted.  He was blunt. Said he dont trust girls cuz he cant throw them that far  But a couple sweet nothings made him lower his guard.  Defenses down he began to believe the things she had to say  He stopped his  wrongdoings and crazy acolades  He done heard alot of lies too Cant tell if her words are true or not  She tell him she been thru alot but **** he been thru alot  It was all to perfect, thought to himself is it worth it, cuz life is worthless if you not working towards perfect.  He thought he was the predator but he was her pray  So he settled in but she wanted it that way  She caught that boy slippin and he finally learned his lesson  Left the **** in him dead a pool full of love.l he ****** weapon affection.  See fellas if you let a girl **** that **** in you  That person you feel is invincible  Just know that same girl you called a ***** or a *** had it planned it was all premeditated ******
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The trial i must follow the legacy i must keep the track i must maintain my own path is where i wanna follow not the legends of yester-years not the model’s of the present not the fatherhood legacy box not the fantics of people or the fantasy of people but my own path a path that’s new that many scarcely know that none has not seen my own path is a push like a destiny maker am a chief of my own track a track am not meant to compete but a path of creatives where only me knoweth it my own path i aim to follow it my own path that i vow to follow in this journey of life it’s inevitable many would forsee me many might push me but my own path that i vow to follow in my own path a story i must create never to cross another but to follow my own path that is my greatest acheivement to follow
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 5:10 AM UTC
E-rated poemier-my own path
I read this poem and a line read "I love me." And I was so proud of that author I had no idea who or what has made them who they are. Because I myself cannot love me. And this is one of my many faults because I can see the perfection in so many others yet my reflection is all but that. So I applaud you. For that is indeed a great acheivement to be thankful for. Because for many out there loving yourself is one of the hardest things to do.
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Dec 7, 2014
Dec 7, 2014 at 10:11 PM UTC
Untitled
you know you've made it when you're good enough at showing off how good you are at listening and how well you know the song and show them all how to lead that's an intractable skill, i mean finding one between the other and getting the dance right between the two you know you've made it when you can't tell one from the other when it flows through you how well you know the song and show them all how to bleed that's an amazing achievement, i mean putting one before the other getting the balance right between the two you know you've made it when both sides make sense to you alone when it glides through you how much you know you're wrong an achievement indeed not choosing sides but living the moment we should sometimes try and achieve know not the consequence nor the challenges just close your eyes and believe
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Dec 19, 2017
Dec 19, 2017 at 3:49 PM UTC
acheivement
HE IS MY BABYSITTER AND I AM THE BABY EVEN THOUGH HE CARED ME LIKE I AM HIS BABY WHY DOES HE ADORES ME SO MUCH?? WHY DOES HE KEEP ME HAPPY SO MUCH??? I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THAT AND I DOUBT THAT I WILL EVER FIND SUCH A BABY SITTER WHO WILL NEVER MIND REALLY NEVER MIND CLEANING MY **** AND WASHING MY BODY AS YOU SEE MY FATHER WAS A WORKAHOLIC NEVER FOUND TIME FOR ME MY MOM WAS A NATURAL ALCOHOLIC NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT ME THE BABYSITTER HE HE PLAYED WITH ME HE WATCHED ME OVER SO THAT I DO NOT FALL HE HELPED ME IN EACH AND EVERY STEP WHERE I NEEDED NEEDED MY REAL PARENT HE WAS THERE LIKE A A REAL PARENT EVEN IF IT WAS A PROGRAM IN WHICH I PARTICIPATED EVEN IF IT WAS PARENTS MEETING OR EVEN SO IT BE TAKING ME OUT FOR EATING HE WAS THERE WHEN THE THUNDER CLAPS IT'S LIGHT AND I CRY WITH FEAR HE WAS THERE I ADORED HIM HIM LIKED HIM WISHED HE WERE TO BE MY REAL PARENT SCOLDED ME EVEN MY TEACHER SCOLDED ME BUT HE KISSED ME IN CHEEKS LICKED MY TEAR AND WOULD WOULD BE HAPPY IN MY ACHEIVEMENT IN EVERY SENSE HE WAS LIKE MY REAL PARENT SO HOW CAN I NOT TELL I LIKED HIM MORE THAN MY MY ACTUAL PARENTS SO HOW CAN I NOT TELL I LOVED HIM MORE THAN MY MY ACTUAL PARENTS
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Jul 26, 2018
Jul 26, 2018 at 11:18 AM UTC
LOVED HIM MORE THAN MY PARENTS