sorrow like a garden grows, around my feet and through my toes. sahn 5/11/14
As always, thank you for reading my work. I like the idea of the 12 and 10w poetry. It is a challenge to get a thought clearly across. I enjoy little rhymes that sort of swim in your head after you've read them.
lady, lady i love you, this could be truth but mostly undoing.
i am always grateful for anyone who meets me through my work. i am always grateful that i have a forum to put it out into the world, this might become a longer piece of work i think....but i like the way it sounds in the 12w format. i think that it is a lover that is conflicted, the words seem to convey so sweetly this.
I can feel the pain inside of me A venom of poison
OUCH!!! :''( ~~~~~<3 I was stung by a bee today on my back...and I am in PAIN!!! ~~~~<3 Don't worry, I'm sure I'll feel better though... It just hurts something terrible!!! :/ ~~~~<3 Please enjoy this 12w poem anyways!!