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Not just the stumbles, not just the fumbles, but a heart that humbles. I am more than an evil veil of night. For thou who truly understandest, I am more than what thy eyes behold.
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Mar 1
Mar 1, 2026 at 5:16 AM UTC
Veil of Night
"The heavenly stars are on fire," you wrote—so I traced their embers in your lines, but where’s the smoke? Perhaps it lingers between syllables, between a stick figure future and a melting past, between the chaos you ransom and the whispers you inflame. "Some locks need two keys," you mused—so tell me, Anaïs, does poetry need two voices to unlock a moment? Because your words unfasten thought, weave mischief into meaning, turn science into sentiment— each stanza a blade, a bloom, a rebellion. You run from hackneyed halls, freewheeling with Johnny Cash, eluding rulers and repressive lies— and somehow, still, you pause to drop a pizza emoji, a signature, a hunger that ink alone won’t satisfy. So tell me, Yale’s ink-stained philosopher, do you write in crust and cheese too? Does every stanza deserve a side of marinara? Because if poetry is fuel, then surely, you are proof that pizza and prose can both be divine addictions.
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Mar 2, 2025
Mar 2, 2025 at 1:41 PM UTC
Ink, Fire & A Slice of You🍕@Anais Vionet