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5:30 AM on the beach half sun floating on water like a broken egg yolk
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Jun 5, 2025
Jun 5, 2025 at 12:37 PM UTC
Sunrise
it is the place each day, before it, I morning sit, but technically: A sound is “valley that has been filled with sea water sound is usually formed by the flooding of a river valley… This means that the topography is usually less narrow and more gently sloping than a fjord, but it is no less spectacular.” it is my vista blessing, that a quiet Sound, my Sound, asks daily, this reborn morn body & soul for their exchange of blessings in a give and take of purity of greatness of restoration gratitude… the days is early maturing, the day but a toddler growing up too fast, the heated warmth of the not yet adult noon sun is exactly that, a teen warmth that penetrates the cell’s nuclei, with the casual breeze perfect offset cooling, waving the branches, with a gentility genuine, even the tree swing swinging is of a mind, moved to a gentle rocking in preparation for neighbors children to later come and make it raucous rocking! the shore opposite is a deep forest green population of thick trees, that thankfully masks most of the human pollution, the mega mansions and their trending markings of grown-up toys… This is my morning ~ Vista and I recreate the earth’s rough edged birth, but celebrate with a flooding quietude that only that word, Sound, could so capture and continue to captivate and re~ form me anew, not blameless or innocent, but cleanly reopened and willingly, desirous, of being better, doing better, and shed betterment, to any all that understand that this momentous but momentary miracle of a soundless Sound roars with clean, white glowing, of a thirst slaking hope <> oh i wish u were beside me…
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Jul 27, 2024
Jul 27, 2024 at 8:04 AM UTC
what is a soundless Sound?
it is the place each day, before it, I morning sit, but technically: A sound is “valley that has been filled with sea water sound is usually formed by the flooding of a river valley… This means that the topography is usually less narrow and more gently sloping than a fjord, but it is no less spectacular.” it is my vista blessing, that a quiet Sound, my Sound, asks daily, this reborn morn body & soul for their exchange of blessings in a give and take of purity of greatness of restoration gratitude… the days is early maturing, the day but a toddler growing up too fast, the heated warmth of the not yet adult noon sun is exactly that, a teen warmth that penetrates the cell’s nuclei, with the casual breeze perfect offset cooling, waving the branches, with a gentility genuine, even the tree swing swinging is of a mind, moved to a gentle rocking in preparation for neighbors children to later come and make it raucous rocking! the shore opposite is a deep forest green population of thick trees, that thankfully masks most of the human pollution, the mega mansions and their trending markings of grown-up toys… This is my morning ~ Vista and I recreate the earth’s rough edged birth, but celebrate with a flooding quietude that only that word, Sound, could so capture and continue to captivate and re~ form me anew, not blameless or innocent, but cleanly reopened and willingly, desirous, of being better, doing better, and shed betterment, to any all that understand that this momentous but momentary miracle of a soundless Sound roars with clean, white glowing, of a thirst slaking hope <> oh i wish u were beside me…
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The Picture Window The vista view never changes but daily. The naked eye, registers the same distances, resting objects unmoved, modest alterations by wind and water are noted, but for intent, for purpose, the watercolor one would paint be invariably unvarying as a Swiss Alp. The  subtle nuanced worldview, where the sky stretches from ceiling to a foot above ground, as I lay prone neath the coverlet, vista always subtly differing, from its prior reincarnation, self-reflection demands to know. Alive & Awake? Yes. Breathing steady? Yes. Toes? Still can wiggly to & fro. My soul? Presumably ok, as I write, because I write, the picture window into to my insight, though oft blurry, yet intact, making discernible the changes in light, temperature  and heart rate, as the body/soul contraption modulates, just as the gradient of daylight shifts lighter and higher, with a rising sun bringing more clarity to our interactive encounters with our environments.. The picture window internalized, much the same,as the vista, subtle modest changes, colorations variegated, are registered. Today is mostly cloudy overcast, and shall remain so for the foreseeable future, which be about two days hence. Not unsurprisingly, methinks, the future tends to be cloudy. Beyond that peripheral, no one can say, our macular envisioning only gets weaker,time is a tough taskmaster and uncertainty is it’s own principle. But I can say, forecast from well under the comforter, that more than less, where less is more, this picture window, ex and in, shall remain, unchanged for the remainder of my years that fortune shall provide, and will & would grant me awakenings to the ex-sight and in-sight of a sculpted landscape, of negative entropy,  where disorder minimal. My musings end here, unless you still wish, come the morrow, what the marrow the day reveals, what the window will spill, new and exciting, subtly unchanged, and always different. Caution: The injection of caffeine may dramatically alter the windows perspective, as the exogenous always trumps the endogenous. 5:50 AM P.S. Making coffee clarifies: If the vista in +/- unchanging, then, all my personal, own horizons are immortal as well.
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Jun 4, 2023
Jun 4, 2023 at 6:34 AM UTC
The Picture Window
The Picture Window The vista view never changes but daily. The naked eye, registers the same distances, resting objects unmoved, modest alterations by wind and water are noted, but for intent, for purpose, the watercolor one would paint be invariably unvarying as a Swiss Alp. The  subtle nuanced worldview, where the sky stretches from ceiling to a foot above ground, as I lay prone neath the coverlet, vista always subtly differing, from its prior reincarnation, self-reflection demands to know. Alive & Awake? Yes. Breathing steady? Yes. Toes? Still can wiggly to & fro. My soul? Presumably ok, as I write, because I write, the picture window into to my insight, though oft blurry, yet intact, making discernible the changes in light, temperature  and heart rate, as the body/soul contraption modulates, just as the gradient of daylight shifts lighter and higher, with a rising sun bringing more clarity to our interactive encounters with our environments.. The picture window internalized, much the same,as the vista, subtle modest changes, colorations variegated, are registered. Today is mostly cloudy overcast, and shall remain so for the foreseeable future, which be about two days hence. Not unsurprisingly, methinks, the future tends to be cloudy. Beyond that peripheral, no one can say, our macular envisioning only gets weaker,time is a tough taskmaster and uncertainty is it’s own principle. But I can say, forecast from well under the comforter, that more than less, where less is more, this picture window, ex and in, shall remain, unchanged for the remainder of my years that fortune shall provide, and will & would grant me awakenings to the ex-sight and in-sight of a sculpted landscape, of negative entropy,  where disorder minimal. My musings end here, unless you still wish, come the morrow, what the marrow the day reveals, what the window will spill, new and exciting, subtly unchanged, and always different. Caution: The injection of caffeine may dramatically alter the windows perspective, as the exogenous always trumps the endogenous. 5:50 AM P.S. Making coffee clarifies: If the vista in +/- unchanging, then, all my personal, own horizons are immortal as well.
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And before me lay The glory of the world. Hard as we might try, We could not defeat its beauty.
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Nov 23, 2021
Nov 23, 2021 at 8:01 AM UTC
View
Basking in the glow of a lacerated sun Dripping blessed rays, life pools in an agonising emptiness. Smile upon me with your godless grace Light of life, prying open a necrophyte visage Spotlight upon a murderous parade Of life and happiness. Always watching with Catastrophic intent and purging flame. Behold the beacon of rage as it rips At your vision. Blinding illumination. A scar in the sky. Cataclysmic vista.
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Jun 28, 2020
Jun 28, 2020 at 9:42 AM UTC
Sunshine
once again the fog draws me in, speaking fog soft, “of me, of me, you must,” so write-birthing, I am mustered out, permissioned, commissioned, so ordered. This fog is personal, in your face, changing by masking/unmasking street and bay, slow burning, this one, revealing a tableau, like a theater curtain rising to audience applause for the set before them, so unexpected, eye-delighting, pleasuring perspective. why should you care? what matters this to you? your fog likely little different, in the Cascades, Everest, the California coastline morning burning off, not costing anyone’s life, the Blue Ridges smoking meats, the Quatse River saying, follow me to the Alaska glaciers, (in the Midwest, some states, use rivers as boundaries, so they like the fog to keep the ‘neighbors’ on the other side), the twin Ghats, or mourning steam rising from the Ganges, or the Zambales Mountains, guarding Manila Bay entrance, all mine, here too, so slow retreating, gifting a quiet, wider bay vista tween two islands, one Long, one sheltered. so wrong, it matters so, none beyond compare! these mountain or river comparison, white or gray, listen friend, look closer, see my face, my words fogging your soul’s view, full of carryover affection, so deep, they borrow West Virginia coal miner~heroes to dig it out, a different kind of mining, but, nonetheless, mine. ***so it is here, I see your multi-colored faces like light flickers shedding clarity to these troubled times, troubled waters, saying here we are, we are!*** we here, outside your window, on waters calming, see us dancing, but it’s so hard for me spot you in the mists, for mine eyes are clouded, misted over too, glasses fogged now, **** these **** tears.
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Jun 18, 2020
Jun 18, 2020 at 9:40 AM UTC
once again the fog draws me in (Why Should You Care?)
once again the fog draws me in, speaking fog soft, “of me, of me, you must,” so write-birthing, I am mustered out, permissioned, commissioned, so ordered. This fog is personal, in your face, changing by masking/unmasking street and bay, slow burning, this one, revealing a tableau, like a theater curtain rising to audience applause for the set before them, so unexpected, eye-delighting, pleasuring perspective. why should you care? what matters this to you? your fog likely little different, in the Cascades, Everest, the California coastline morning burning off, not costing anyone’s life, the Blue Ridges smoking meats, the Quatse River saying, follow me to the Alaska glaciers, (in the Midwest, some states, use rivers as boundaries, so they like the fog to keep the ‘neighbors’ on the other side), the twin Ghats, or mourning steam rising from the Ganges, or the Zambales Mountains, guarding Manila Bay entrance, all mine, here too, so slow retreating, gifting a quiet, wider bay vista tween two islands, one Long, one sheltered. so wrong, it matters so, none beyond compare! these mountain or river comparison, white or gray, listen friend, look closer, see my face, my words fogging your soul’s view, full of carryover affection, so deep, they borrow West Virginia coal miner~heroes to dig it out, a different kind of mining, but, nonetheless, mine. ***so it is here, I see your multi-colored faces like light flickers shedding clarity to these troubled times, troubled waters, saying here we are, we are!*** we here, outside your window, on waters calming, see us dancing, but it’s so hard for me spot you in the mists, for mine eyes are clouded, misted over too, glasses fogged now, **** these **** tears.
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there's this old crow, comes around most mornings to perch in the momma pine who sowed her chil'ren down slope. The crow seems to speak through a bluetooth of nature he caws asif conversing, re-plying layers of nuance on my mileau. Listen, I say to him, I want you to be my friend. He sits, quiet. Not disturbing my peace. I take that for a yes.
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Jul 28, 2019
Jul 28, 2019 at 2:17 PM UTC
A black feather treaty
The place, Where the clouds Meet the mountains The vista of it , To get lost within Its euphony, The higher And higher It is The more beauteous It becomes Times wrath And To be infrangible
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Feb 8, 2019
Feb 8, 2019 at 11:17 PM UTC
The mountains
Absent Motility Against Staid Inertia impossible to describe listlessness bedeviling this body electric aye attest motivation to counter glumness seizes motility temporarily to stave off staid purposeless at best, yet aware poetic obfuscation chest barely delineates fierce hopelessness assailing me, when'r awake and/or at everest feeding melancholy feedback loop sparring against faintest momentum - writhing psyche, asper an unwelcome guest emotional friction bringing motionlessness, where lunging futility summoning ability to muster joie de vivre defeated willpower no matter mental health propped up with pharmacological medications prescribed by Doctor George Adams be hest, yet tis NOT suicide, but general malaise as if poison (or stung by a scorpion) jest permeates thy being sparking existential angst hoop fully communicating figurative soffits facilitating emotional bulwark lest ye **** sitter this lix spittled chap messed up in the head, but also that empty nest syndrome - aa bird den, and nefarious pest disallowing merrily rowing my boat subjected to turbulence that doth wrinkle space/time continuum quest punctuating any attempt to take fig yurt heave Newtonian rest without being assailed of drab quotidian predictability re: envious papa towards daughters adventurous lives he rejoices (albeit vicariously) respective lives where offspring lasso lassitude, viz both their electric kool aid acid test how fate didst in vest waning wily woebegone zest!
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Jun 8, 2018
Jun 8, 2018 at 12:52 PM UTC
Deadened Frisson Explains...
Existential views Church bell blues Christian old news Messiah complex Respectful specs Saviour syndrome old tech Love in the heart of the wild A sky cannot be outsourced or out styled It has millions of vistas and views I will never be old news We are the sky We will never die Or sink into religious why's Who is Daniel Hooks? Neither a robber or a crook Just a man who looks Into the depths like the mind who crept into a unfinished novel I keep your secrets in my hovel.
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Sep 2, 2017
Sep 2, 2017 at 6:09 PM UTC
Who is Daniel Hooks?