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No one ever comes to visit, I like that, though -- it is regretful.
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Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 2:22 AM UTC
[ No one ever comes ]
stagnant frustration no vacation from my station, little to no elation, burn this nation with no foundation, and on the grave a single carnation.
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Nov 28, 2025
Nov 28, 2025 at 11:55 AM UTC
No Visitors
In all my iterations, and my frequent reiterations, Introspection reflection, run a muck, I find it unnecessary To talk to God; the reason being quite simple, is It and I are in constant dialogue, nary a pause, chattering Round the clock, 24 seven, night and day, sleep interruptus, I think to myself  God has some nerve, why can't he bother others? in other parts of the world… And so he does! Visitors from far away lands, and languages I do not understand, but applaud their attempts to decipher the English one, that we share in common; if the lands are exotic, the names are more delightfully so, almost ****** It excites and titillates, to greet these kindred souls whose words be greeted by puzzlement, intrigue, like the delight of rediscovering vanilla, it's the same language spoken differently! and god smiles and says: "knew you would eventually speak my soul language!'"
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Jul 29, 2025
Jul 29, 2025 at 11:23 AM UTC
Visitors from far away lands/I never talk to God
The old threshold is not worn out, my visitors -- step right over it.
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Feb 23, 2023
Feb 23, 2023 at 2:35 AM UTC
[ The old threshold is ]
a 2021 holiday story Lisa’s dad has a visitor from out of town - a “very important man.” He came early. He was dressed casually, in slacks, and a jacket over a mock-turtleneck. He was genial, behind tortoiseshell glasses, but he seemed ordinary, polite and a bit grandfatherly. The adults visited, in the living room, while we girls played gin-rummy. Later, seafood was delivered from “Le Bernardin” -  I got fried shrimp and 18 raw oysters on the ½ shell (yum). After dinner, I was free (having set the table) to relax on Lisa’s balcony and watch the city. It was cold-ish but the breeze had gentled, it was the tail end of dusk and the fast-darkening sky was bluer than blue. Why waste time sitting inside on the Internet flipping Instagram’s flat little pictures - when there’s this stunning, 3D reality available? The important man came out to smoke a cigar. The steady breeze blew the smoke away in the other direction. We sat silently, like astronauts in space enjoying the view of earth. The city's traffic, reduced to pinpricks of red and white light, reminded me of dewdrops along a spider web. After a few minutes, he pointed his cigar at the view and said, “The city lights, a seductive woman, a cigar and bourbon - who needs more?” I was momentarily confused, then I bristled, but didn’t show it. Of course, it was just fluff and flattery, a non sequitur compliment from another age - aimed at both of us really - so polished it wrapped around again to the generic. He, of course, was the romantic lead and I the seductive woman. “Is that what I am?” I asked myself, trying to transpose the male gaze. The glass door opened, interrupting the moment and Leeza (12) came out with a tray and two huge pieces of Dutch-apple-pie à la mode for the two of us. She looked at the avuncular man and said, “I could only carry two, can I get you something?” “No thanks,” he said, raising a bar glass half full of bourbon. A moment later Lisa’s dad joined him, saying, “I called Mumbai and bla, bla, bla, boring boring.” Leeza and I took our leave. Lisa and her mom were just finishing the dishes. I came close-up to Lisa, flounced my hair and said, in my slinkiest voice, “I’m a seductive woman.” Lisa laughed and replied, “Well of course you are!” Her mom, Karen, also understanding the joke, rolled her eyes. I could almost feel Leeza, locked onto us, trying to decipher the context for that exchange. Lisa says, in a conspiratorial whisper, “I think he has a thing for you,” wiggling her eyebrows.  “Ooo, Marry me, DADDY,” I say, batting my eyes and wiggling vampishly. “Shhh,” Karen says, shaking her head, finger to lips and chuckling.
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Jan 21, 2022
Jan 21, 2022 at 7:36 AM UTC
an important man
a 2021 holiday story Lisa’s dad has a visitor from out of town - a “very important man.” He came early. He was dressed casually, in slacks, and a jacket over a mock-turtleneck. He was genial, behind tortoiseshell glasses, but he seemed ordinary, polite and a bit grandfatherly. The adults visited, in the living room, while we girls played gin-rummy. Later, seafood was delivered from “Le Bernardin” -  I got fried shrimp and 18 raw oysters on the ½ shell (yum). After dinner, I was free (having set the table) to relax on Lisa’s balcony and watch the city. It was cold-ish but the breeze had gentled, it was the tail end of dusk and the fast-darkening sky was bluer than blue. Why waste time sitting inside on the Internet flipping Instagram’s flat little pictures - when there’s this stunning, 3D reality available? The important man came out to smoke a cigar. The steady breeze blew the smoke away in the other direction. We sat silently, like astronauts in space enjoying the view of earth. The city's traffic, reduced to pinpricks of red and white light, reminded me of dewdrops along a spider web. After a few minutes, he pointed his cigar at the view and said, “The city lights, a seductive woman, a cigar and bourbon - who needs more?” I was momentarily confused, then I bristled, but didn’t show it. Of course, it was just fluff and flattery, a non sequitur compliment from another age - aimed at both of us really - so polished it wrapped around again to the generic. He, of course, was the romantic lead and I the seductive woman. “Is that what I am?” I asked myself, trying to transpose the male gaze. The glass door opened, interrupting the moment and Leeza (12) came out with a tray and two huge pieces of Dutch-apple-pie à la mode for the two of us. She looked at the avuncular man and said, “I could only carry two, can I get you something?” “No thanks,” he said, raising a bar glass half full of bourbon. A moment later Lisa’s dad joined him, saying, “I called Mumbai and bla, bla, bla, boring boring.” Leeza and I took our leave. Lisa and her mom were just finishing the dishes. I came close-up to Lisa, flounced my hair and said, in my slinkiest voice, “I’m a seductive woman.” Lisa laughed and replied, “Well of course you are!” Her mom, Karen, also understanding the joke, rolled her eyes. I could almost feel Leeza, locked onto us, trying to decipher the context for that exchange. Lisa says, in a conspiratorial whisper, “I think he has a thing for you,” wiggling her eyebrows.  “Ooo, Marry me, DADDY,” I say, batting my eyes and wiggling vampishly. “Shhh,” Karen says, shaking her head, finger to lips and chuckling.
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I believe that fire was still a mystery when the hunt was interrupted by the visitors knowing that the creatures were startled by their presence these visitors could passively drop the gold dust into the creek from which they drank and as expected, the dumbfounded four with mouths agape watched in disbelief without twitching a muscle though it is not ascertained that disbelief was a function of the thought process that they were at this time capable it was not lost on these creatures however, our forefathers that these odd newcomers were far superior than the mastodon they were tracking with rocks the 3 visitors gave a glance to their soon-to-be hybrid offspring and were off the ability to convey their experience when they returned to their caves fell futile there were as yet no grunts to properly describe what they had witnessed the DNA structure leading to the ceiling of the evolutionary scale was no longer a towering, folding beast but rather a mere stepladder fire was discovered tools, arrows, weaponry and monuments that we have yet to explain how were constructed while the last true human but a young child when the visitors came who had observed from afar drank only from a pond that they had not touched he passed like a story from the ancients forgotten in time
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Apr 3, 2018
Apr 3, 2018 at 4:08 PM UTC
gold dust
We are just visitors For a brief time Travelling through a few milestones Our time is finite Our interactions are finite So, why have an ego Which is also finite? Let us be friends with the world With the people, plants Trees and climbers With the butterflies And the beasts as well Since our journey is finite Make Life as easy as possible And make it merry as well.. Leave a few sweet memories For those who come after us.
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Sep 28, 2017
Sep 28, 2017 at 1:11 AM UTC
We are just visitors
I am in a wheelchair on grass outside the hospital I hear birds sing and distant traffic I stare into the darkness trying to fathom my blindness my toes feel itchy even though my legs have gone and the stumps well bandaged hello Grace a voice says from my right side Anthony? I say is it you? yes Grace it is he says I sense him near me I reach out to touch him he takes my hand Donald said you were coming I say did he? Anthony says I hear someone else come and place something on the grass nearby this is Philip Anthony says hello a voice says a hand take my mine and shakes it how are you? Philip says rather lost I say any news about your eyes? Anthony asks they think I will always be blind I say o so sorry Anthony says I hear them sit down and whisper things I cannot fathom look Grace I'll be honest with you if Donald told you I was thinking of marrying you then he got the wrong end of the stick Anthony says I look toward  the voice and stare at darkness I see but as you yourself never told me about marriage then it doesn't matter I say (Donald said Anthony said he was going to ask but I say nothing) who would want a blind legless woman for wife anyway? I say more bitterly than I intended it's not that Anthony says it would be out of pity not love he says I mean not the love necessary to handle such he adds Clive may have done but he's dead I say killed at Dunkirk there is silence I look away from the voice and look downward maybe you will find that someone Anthony says after a few moments of silence maybe I will I say a hand touches mine I'm sure you will Philip's voice says and are you the expert on finding matches for blind legless women? I say coldly look Grace I must go make a telephone call Anthony says and he goes off it is quiet for a moment or two how would you like to go out for a meal somewhere? Philip says to my left like this? no in a dress and with make up he says who would want me in their restaurant like this? I say I know a place where we would be welcome he says softly and you would want me like this there? have you a dress and make up? he asks no my house was bombed I lost everything including legs and sight I say with a sigh maybe I can buy you a dress and clothes if you tell me your size? I have no coupons everything has gone I say I can arrange that I work for the Foreign Office he says why would you want to? I say I admire your courage he says I look toward the voice I tell him my size and other things then sit quiet looking into the darkness again Anthony returns and sits and says look sorry about the short visit but I've got an urgent message must go he says and he kisses my cheek and goes again I'll do what I can Philip says and he kisses my hand and goes I am left alone with bird song and itchy toes which are not there and I sit and sigh and stare.
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Jan 9, 2016
Jan 9, 2016 at 6:14 AM UTC
GRACE'S VISITORS 1940.
I am in a wheelchair on grass outside the hospital I hear birds sing and distant traffic I stare into the darkness trying to fathom my blindness my toes feel itchy even though my legs have gone and the stumps well bandaged hello Grace a voice says from my right side Anthony? I say is it you? yes Grace it is he says I sense him near me I reach out to touch him he takes my hand Donald said you were coming I say did he? Anthony says I hear someone else come and place something on the grass nearby this is Philip Anthony says hello a voice says a hand take my mine and shakes it how are you? Philip says rather lost I say any news about your eyes? Anthony asks they think I will always be blind I say o so sorry Anthony says I hear them sit down and whisper things I cannot fathom look Grace I'll be honest with you if Donald told you I was thinking of marrying you then he got the wrong end of the stick Anthony says I look toward  the voice and stare at darkness I see but as you yourself never told me about marriage then it doesn't matter I say (Donald said Anthony said he was going to ask but I say nothing) who would want a blind legless woman for wife anyway? I say more bitterly than I intended it's not that Anthony says it would be out of pity not love he says I mean not the love necessary to handle such he adds Clive may have done but he's dead I say killed at Dunkirk there is silence I look away from the voice and look downward maybe you will find that someone Anthony says after a few moments of silence maybe I will I say a hand touches mine I'm sure you will Philip's voice says and are you the expert on finding matches for blind legless women? I say coldly look Grace I must go make a telephone call Anthony says and he goes off it is quiet for a moment or two how would you like to go out for a meal somewhere? Philip says to my left like this? no in a dress and with make up he says who would want me in their restaurant like this? I say I know a place where we would be welcome he says softly and you would want me like this there? have you a dress and make up? he asks no my house was bombed I lost everything including legs and sight I say with a sigh maybe I can buy you a dress and clothes if you tell me your size? I have no coupons everything has gone I say I can arrange that I work for the Foreign Office he says why would you want to? I say I admire your courage he says I look toward the voice I tell him my size and other things then sit quiet looking into the darkness again Anthony returns and sits and says look sorry about the short visit but I've got an urgent message must go he says and he kisses my cheek and goes again I'll do what I can Philip says and he kisses my hand and goes I am left alone with bird song and itchy toes which are not there and I sit and sigh and stare.
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Got my whole world closed down In a lockdown Under surveillance Hoping no one can see what's inside No one is allowed in Without special permission Yet you’re here How did you get in You snuck in under my radar like no one before You must have some serious skill But now I must remove you from the premises of my world You are a threat to the wellbeing and surroundings You don't belong here yet How did you get here Why are you here My whole world is closed down to everyone around me In a lock down with security heavily guarding every part How did you get in Sure you can visit Sure you can take a peak But don't cross inside That's how it's always been So how did you get past the barb wire How did you get past the landmines Snuck in under my radar Now I don't know how to get you out You know to much already Seen too much of what happens in here How did you get in to this place Where no one else has been aloud before. My world is closed down to everyone else So how did you sneak your way in Please don't leave Visitors are nice And are few and far between I don't mind them once in a while Promise you won't spill the secrets you have seen Or the secrets you have heard. You've seen too much already You know too much now.
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Sep 15, 2014
Sep 15, 2014 at 8:48 PM UTC
Under my radar
She had stopped crying. All evening in her black-mesh coup de voodoo. On the plane she had been crying For her Summer pal. Yesterday she had been to market Big brown bags and white bags, little pink bags filled with crimsony scents, Capricornia, looseleaf newsprint, postcards, and colored pencils, She had hands full of handles, bags bundled, stitched in strict Saturday fashion. He could barely break a step, he could fake dance with her feet on his tip toes. She was only three quarters the perfect size to fit inside his frame. The grand disappearing act. And she was only ifs and suicides. A stranded ray of sun-draped hair on a cooly porcelain forehead, the segments were all just wrong, Something so wrong, trembling heart cries over a mute coo through a flattened tongue. The sickle tongue, dodgy on Tuesday's, She had a simple mug, oh! But so cute and soothing, the nape That wrapped around, my arm lapped its hands in a clapping ginormous duck's bill! Lapping rhythmically. Thwack! Thwack! Like no crying I had ever heard. Nor Earthen beauty I had never seen. Her little lamb legs lumbered over, her awkward thinness and long limbs spilt on top of her, Her tiny shoulders searching for support from her hips. White aurulent doll head on a stick, She had sad defeated eyes, whimpering, pathetic, Too small, and she shuttered and she shook, And she shivered out every teardrop her body ever made. And she fell back on her bottom, and looked Up as if to see a white steed standing with her guy striking a poised hand down to her, He split down the middle, stammering, broken pieces of words crumbling out of his mouth With eager intentions. He was too weak To give her his feet, or pull her up in, he hadn't the gumption. He was fully occupied standing, He wept too; then shuffled a little Towards where she had fallen. He knew she wasn't right She couldn't get the devil out of her piercing blue pupils, she couldn't She lied. Then she just piled on top of her knees and fumbled as if to rise like a demure lamb trying to rise off its Newborn legs, she just curled her legs, So stiffly built, and narrow footed, built with such inequality to her siblings, She got in the way of herself, a little lamb that could not manage. Too whittled for him, he tried, he really tried, but three years had drained his strength, no real help. When he sat her upright on her bottom, she opened her eyes, and for a moment smiled, grabbed for His hand but then after awhile she was lost, she lost interest, her pupils wandered. He was orchestrating everything. A real project, much more urgent and important. By nightfall she could not stand. It was not That she couldn't smile or laugh or love, she was born With everything but the will to live - That cannot be destroyed, just like a love. Melancholy was more important to her. Life could not get her attention. So she died, with her handles still in her hands, green grass stains her legs. She did not survive another warm summer night. And then he wept uncontrollably again. "The wind is oceanic in the elms And the blossom is all set." 2 The boy has come back From the seashore, and atop the plateau. The woes of women are like a genocide In the morning, when the killing is over, And the heat begins, and the bodies lie, And stark life moves for its sobbing bones, The curved women move with fire. Father Father Father the girls Are weeping, and crying and I cannot resist that gentle frailty They are shucked in their skin suits rising from their soporific slumbers In decadent leathers and frou frou dresses. They cling to bold faces, Nothing can escape that cold crying of women weeping for their princes. Blood-letting rage cannot overthrow the meadow from the pebble brook, As a laden head bleats its tarnished tongue across a milky breast, it cannot Escape the sounds of blue-stained teardrops cascading across the plains, The sounds of woolbirds braying while their skins are sheared against the Sluicing sound of water rushing through the flume. All summer they have lamented, gorging on melancholy, tottering their cotton pyramid heads, Shaking their cries in deliberation, bald skinny victim women screaming out! Cotton-mouthed clams yaffing, hearts in panic, wholes of bodies clambering in a *** of woe. They roost useless, pollard and wethered, jealous Squinting out the last droplets of desperation from their eyes, screaming their mouths in awful Togetherness, this cacophony of tortured tongue-song They curdle the last notes of despair out under knotted breaths With every inch of strength left inside them, they bray this way and that. Their mothers scream out in wretched despair, ahhh! On distant cliffs, on scrawny legs Their stiff pain goes on and on in the September heat. "Only slowly their hurt dies, cry by cry," Whipped bodies toting wergeld on a shore. The Day She Died Was the gloomiest day of the new century, The first of calamitous, unfortunate autumns to come, The first dying breath from piceous lungs. That was yesterday. Early morning, soft rime droplets Frosted to every blade of grass, not like any other Earlier June day we've ever had. In the deep twilight The syzygy announced the moon and demoted the sun. The Earth-crisp frost nuzzled snow droplets. Black bands of ravens whipping. Martens littering Fresh kills of red-eyed rabbits on stark white stale Summer lawns. A fox grayed, its cold bones Mapped by ravaged feasts. A possum prowling In a spot of tawny light. The concrete spread into a maze Of black veins ripening in the acute niello Destitution of its widening cracks, And when the summer left It left without her. It will have to accept, In the paley dim light of this vengeful wilderness - She is gone. But for now the warmth has not returned but a naked, half-pomegranate Rotten moon for us two. And a great vacancy in our memory.
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Apr 26, 2014
Apr 26, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
summer saturday
She had stopped crying. All evening in her black-mesh coup de voodoo. On the plane she had been crying For her Summer pal. Yesterday she had been to market Big brown bags and white bags, little pink bags filled with crimsony scents, Capricornia, looseleaf newsprint, postcards, and colored pencils, She had hands full of handles, bags bundled, stitched in strict Saturday fashion. He could barely break a step, he could fake dance with her feet on his tip toes. She was only three quarters the perfect size to fit inside his frame. The grand disappearing act. And she was only ifs and suicides. A stranded ray of sun-draped hair on a cooly porcelain forehead, the segments were all just wrong, Something so wrong, trembling heart cries over a mute coo through a flattened tongue. The sickle tongue, dodgy on Tuesday's, She had a simple mug, oh! But so cute and soothing, the nape That wrapped around, my arm lapped its hands in a clapping ginormous duck's bill! Lapping rhythmically. Thwack! Thwack! Like no crying I had ever heard. Nor Earthen beauty I had never seen. Her little lamb legs lumbered over, her awkward thinness and long limbs spilt on top of her, Her tiny shoulders searching for support from her hips. White aurulent doll head on a stick, She had sad defeated eyes, whimpering, pathetic, Too small, and she shuttered and she shook, And she shivered out every teardrop her body ever made. And she fell back on her bottom, and looked Up as if to see a white steed standing with her guy striking a poised hand down to her, He split down the middle, stammering, broken pieces of words crumbling out of his mouth With eager intentions. He was too weak To give her his feet, or pull her up in, he hadn't the gumption. He was fully occupied standing, He wept too; then shuffled a little Towards where she had fallen. He knew she wasn't right She couldn't get the devil out of her piercing blue pupils, she couldn't She lied. Then she just piled on top of her knees and fumbled as if to rise like a demure lamb trying to rise off its Newborn legs, she just curled her legs, So stiffly built, and narrow footed, built with such inequality to her siblings, She got in the way of herself, a little lamb that could not manage. Too whittled for him, he tried, he really tried, but three years had drained his strength, no real help. When he sat her upright on her bottom, she opened her eyes, and for a moment smiled, grabbed for His hand but then after awhile she was lost, she lost interest, her pupils wandered. He was orchestrating everything. A real project, much more urgent and important. By nightfall she could not stand. It was not That she couldn't smile or laugh or love, she was born With everything but the will to live - That cannot be destroyed, just like a love. Melancholy was more important to her. Life could not get her attention. So she died, with her handles still in her hands, green grass stains her legs. She did not survive another warm summer night. And then he wept uncontrollably again. "The wind is oceanic in the elms And the blossom is all set." 2 The boy has come back From the seashore, and atop the plateau. The woes of women are like a genocide In the morning, when the killing is over, And the heat begins, and the bodies lie, And stark life moves for its sobbing bones, The curved women move with fire. Father Father Father the girls Are weeping, and crying and I cannot resist that gentle frailty They are shucked in their skin suits rising from their soporific slumbers In decadent leathers and frou frou dresses. They cling to bold faces, Nothing can escape that cold crying of women weeping for their princes. Blood-letting rage cannot overthrow the meadow from the pebble brook, As a laden head bleats its tarnished tongue across a milky breast, it cannot Escape the sounds of blue-stained teardrops cascading across the plains, The sounds of woolbirds braying while their skins are sheared against the Sluicing sound of water rushing through the flume. All summer they have lamented, gorging on melancholy, tottering their cotton pyramid heads, Shaking their cries in deliberation, bald skinny victim women screaming out! Cotton-mouthed clams yaffing, hearts in panic, wholes of bodies clambering in a *** of woe. They roost useless, pollard and wethered, jealous Squinting out the last droplets of desperation from their eyes, screaming their mouths in awful Togetherness, this cacophony of tortured tongue-song They curdle the last notes of despair out under knotted breaths With every inch of strength left inside them, they bray this way and that. Their mothers scream out in wretched despair, ahhh! On distant cliffs, on scrawny legs Their stiff pain goes on and on in the September heat. "Only slowly their hurt dies, cry by cry," Whipped bodies toting wergeld on a shore. The Day She Died Was the gloomiest day of the new century, The first of calamitous, unfortunate autumns to come, The first dying breath from piceous lungs. That was yesterday. Early morning, soft rime droplets Frosted to every blade of grass, not like any other Earlier June day we've ever had. In the deep twilight The syzygy announced the moon and demoted the sun. The Earth-crisp frost nuzzled snow droplets. Black bands of ravens whipping. Martens littering Fresh kills of red-eyed rabbits on stark white stale Summer lawns. A fox grayed, its cold bones Mapped by ravaged feasts. A possum prowling In a spot of tawny light. The concrete spread into a maze Of black veins ripening in the acute niello Destitution of its widening cracks, And when the summer left It left without her. It will have to accept, In the paley dim light of this vengeful wilderness - She is gone. But for now the warmth has not returned but a naked, half-pomegranate Rotten moon for us two. And a great vacancy in our memory.
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