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Something’s not right— inside my head it echoes, like distant shellfire. Even in silence, I hear what never truly left me. The mines still remain, wired beneath ordinary days— I step carefully. Every sound feels like a threat, every shadow breathes danger. I speak with the dead, not always words—just mutterings, their voices linger constant. Answering in broken tones, like memories half-remembered. The world stains itself— grass, sky, trees all bleed the same— or maybe it’s me. Flares still burn behind my eyes, colour refuses to settle. They come close at night, gathered around my still bed, keeping me breathing. When they fade, I come undone— left alone with what survived. They understand it— the ****** I cannot see, the traps in each step. This world feels no different now from the one I left behind. Now I lie awake, between ward walls and old wars— never quite returned. If something has broken here, it still speaks… and won’t be still.
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Apr 27
Apr 27, 2026 at 3:17 AM UTC
ThePoppiesStillBloom
CasualtyMental Ward
Something’s not right— inside my head it echoes, like distant shellfire. Even in silence, I hear what never truly left me. The mines still remain, wired beneath ordinary days— I step carefully. Every sound feels like a threat, every shadow breathes danger. I speak with the dead, not always words—just mutterings, their voices linger constant. Answering in broken tones, like memories half-remembered. The world stains itself— grass, sky, trees all bleed the same— or maybe it’s me. Flares still burn behind my eyes, colour refuses to settle. They come close at night, gathered around my still bed, keeping me breathing. When they fade, I come undone— left alone with what survived. They understand it— the ****** I cannot see, the traps in each step. This world feels no different now from the one I left behind. Now I lie awake, between ward walls and old wars— never quite returned. If something has broken here, it still speaks… and won’t be still.
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By LongJohn There’s a moment, right at the end, when the noise fades, the smoke thins, and the gun sits there cooling like an old dog catching its breath. You’ve fired all you were given, done what was asked, and now there’s just one round left — the last round. It’s never just ammunition. It’s a marker. A line in the sand. A quiet nod to the lads beside you and the ones who aren’t. You handle it different — not softer, but with a kind of respect that doesn’t need explaining. The det feels it too. Voices drop. Movements sharpen. Everyone knows the weight of it. “Last round…” The Number One says it calm, like he’s announcing the weather, but you hear the history in it — every battery, every battle, every gun that ever stood its ground. The layer leans in, the loader steadies himself, and for a heartbeat the whole world holds still. Then the order comes, the gun speaks one final time, and the echo rolls out like a curtain closing. After that, there’s no cheering, no swagger — just the quiet satisfaction of a job done right and the knowledge that the gun will sleep tonight because you didn’t let her down.
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Feb 8
Feb 8, 2026 at 7:43 AM UTC
ThePoppiesStillBloom
"The Last Round"
By LongJohn There’s a moment, right at the end, when the noise fades, the smoke thins, and the gun sits there cooling like an old dog catching its breath. You’ve fired all you were given, done what was asked, and now there’s just one round left — the last round. It’s never just ammunition. It’s a marker. A line in the sand. A quiet nod to the lads beside you and the ones who aren’t. You handle it different — not softer, but with a kind of respect that doesn’t need explaining. The det feels it too. Voices drop. Movements sharpen. Everyone knows the weight of it. “Last round…” The Number One says it calm, like he’s announcing the weather, but you hear the history in it — every battery, every battle, every gun that ever stood its ground. The layer leans in, the loader steadies himself, and for a heartbeat the whole world holds still. Then the order comes, the gun speaks one final time, and the echo rolls out like a curtain closing. After that, there’s no cheering, no swagger — just the quiet satisfaction of a job done right and the knowledge that the gun will sleep tonight because you didn’t let her down.
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