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#unsatisfactory
We were met on two shores trying to get to the beach we both knew the terminus stood just out of reach and we settled for us with the thought in our heads that if something improved we’d move out of there. Then the storm had subsided and none of us cried it was more than we’d hoped for and mother just moped there for days but we’ll raise her spirits buy in more spirits and drink her a toast while the waves belt the coast.
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Apr 15, 2021
Apr 15, 2021 at 8:10 AM UTC
destination
W*hy am I me? I had a chance to turn into many But why did I get stuck with me this version, there are so many bugs I am always lagging behind Often I freeze midway I am seldom muted the voice quality is so mediocre the display so unsatisfactory why this me*?
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Jul 28, 2020
Jul 28, 2020 at 1:17 PM UTC
Can I return it?
Maybe if you were ******* me it’d be enough for you to want to marry me, and release your notion of security. Maybe that’s what it takes. Maybe that’s why she was different.
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Oct 8, 2019
Oct 8, 2019 at 11:18 AM UTC
Why was she different?
Unsaid thing makes unsatisfactory humans.
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Jan 26, 2019
Jan 26, 2019 at 4:28 AM UTC
Untitled
I found out during class one day That there’s no way to satisfy everyone No matter what you say Talk too much Sullen eyes turned your way Tucking away agreivement to mutter about later Talk too little They barely notice your presence And eventually, Slowly but surely You’re gradually disincluded No longer the one they think of When they have nothing to think of you by So where is the balance, How do you satisfy everyone? One can’t go about their life being apologetic Although I’ve certainly tried So isn’t it about time we stopped determining our self worth on what others think of us?
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Sep 11, 2018
Sep 11, 2018 at 9:09 PM UTC
Unsatisfactory no matter How hard you Try
Slugging outside of this imploding cube Instantly, the air is contaminated, And only momentarily, will I pollute the entire room, My jangly displeasure consolidated. I come in solely as an interior Burying my face in my cuffs. You look down at me as I am inferior, Smiling, with your hands full of ashes and dust, Of all that remains from our cremated hearts. Your swift steps reverberates the dilapidated tiled floors Like the hums of wishes through laboured breathing, Like the creaking in my head from the pre-vocalizing doors. Sinking into the essence of my sadness, Journeying back and forth and back again. Uncomfortably, through these conditioned doors I crawl, To seek and assemble words, To position them like Velcro on the polysyllabic cerebrum walls. That will shape the size of my cuts and bruises In undeniable places, As a mouthful begins to cascade and fall. Sinking in my invertebrate state, My physical texture of life Salutes me once again. Of the stem of creation, And unpleasant satisfaction, Inside my gelatin head.
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Nov 24, 2015
Nov 24, 2015 at 11:08 AM UTC
My Gelatin Head