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#undeserved
he got caught in a downpour on what seemed like the sunniest of days when he stopped for a coffee he didn't really need and hadn't noticed the sky's shifting grey he would have been home long before the storm came if he had kept walking but the torrent began so suddenly one of those where the raindrops feel enormous every impact an undeserved or unwelcome pat on the back with neither umbrella or coat he found cover in a sheltered alley between two buildings and begrudgingly chose to wait two buoyant women elderly but clearly not showing their age scampered playfully into his refuge their umbrellas forgotten for now while their mood somehow remained remarkably well disposed even though those webs of nylon had protected only heads and shoulders while their lower halves had become saturated they seemed not to care greeting him with a grin they chatted and gestured and laughed he would have no idea what their story was where they were going or coming from but in those moments sheltering amidst their joie-de-vivre his frustration was dampened              ironically and with a smile that would last his entire walk home he stepped out into the ongoing deluge
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Aug 6, 2025
Aug 6, 2025 at 4:17 PM UTC
the ongoing deluge
Lost in reverie Crying - a natural response to undeserved love
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Jan 13, 2023
Jan 13, 2023 at 11:01 AM UTC
Watery grave
i don't want to let you down i think i try but it's in my head you don't have to forgive me but you do i'm sorry i let you down i want to help, really it's true but don't cut me slack because it's undeserved and you shall want it back when you see me
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Jun 26, 2020
Jun 26, 2020 at 9:15 AM UTC
undeserving
GRACE | MERCY | LOVE | RIGHTEOUSNESS "YOU DON'T NEED TO EARN IT... STOP TRYING... AMEN" [DCNYC] @desire.is.dope 20190317 2300HRS
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Mar 17, 2019
Mar 17, 2019 at 11:15 PM UTC
UNEARNED | UNDESERVED
I met a girl today, let’s call her, “A”. She had brown hair which flowed down over her shoulders and back like ripples in a river of melted chocolate. Her eyes were rich and sweet like pools of poured molasses. Underneath layers of woolen thrift shop fabric, her lovely pale wrists and neck peeked out. We spent hours together, inviting strong coffee to splash down our throats, and giggles to bubble up from our lungs like hot springs. Through shared trust, she confessed to me that her pastel skin had once been painted black with alien brushes, Her Hershey hair had known the touch of uninvited fingers, And her cocoa eyes are forced to replay visions of unimaginable horror in color.   But I could imagine. Oh, sweet girl, I could imagine.
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Jan 29, 2019
Jan 29, 2019 at 2:21 PM UTC
Me Too
when they talk of the vacuum two lovers locked gazes make. the removal of all else except of the other and ones self. where does everyone else go? are they the victims of entropy, the selfless souls who disappear at the twitch of an eyelid? for they are blessed and cursed with a most wonderful scene; Love, yet not meant for them.
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Jul 26, 2017
Jul 26, 2017 at 3:22 PM UTC
in the singularity