#uncontrollably - Hello Poetry

I've started looking at your location less.... and I mean that's nothing amazing but it's something it's something that I've taken out of my routine, something I'm not thinking about as much which means your a little less on my mind still not by much.... but it's enough. It's almost been a month and I have slowly stopped comparing the days to the last time I saw you or to where we made all those memories I stupidly thought would last forever, I guess that's something else my standards of 'okay' are not very high which is such a shame because I could really go for the feeling of being whole again it's just a fond memory that has disappeared into the dark night or from the moment you left me. god, I don't think I'll ever forget, your voice, your hands, your smile, the way you'd talk about everything you loved.... I just thought I was one of them. I should stop writing about you I really should but it's the one thing you didn't take from me, actually you did the opposite, I drown in my words now, they bleed from me.... maybe that's why I feel so empty? either way it's like a choke hold on me, forcing me to bring up something about you, I am drowning in your memory which is bleeding from my hands uncontrollably. I just wonder if you think of me?

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Sep 15, 2025

Sep 15, 2025 at 9:00 PM UTC

Faithcub98

It's maybe better

I've started looking at your location less.... and I mean that's nothing amazing but it's something it's something that I've taken out of my routine, something I'm not thinking about as much which means your a little less on my mind still not by much.... but it's enough. It's almost been a month and I have slowly stopped comparing the days to the last time I saw you or to where we made all those memories I stupidly thought would last forever, I guess that's something else my standards of 'okay' are not very high which is such a shame because I could really go for the feeling of being whole again it's just a fond memory that has disappeared into the dark night or from the moment you left me. god, I don't think I'll ever forget, your voice, your hands, your smile, the way you'd talk about everything you loved.... I just thought I was one of them. I should stop writing about you I really should but it's the one thing you didn't take from me, actually you did the opposite, I drown in my words now, they bleed from me.... maybe that's why I feel so empty? either way it's like a choke hold on me, forcing me to bring up something about you, I am drowning in your memory which is bleeding from my hands uncontrollably. I just wonder if you think of me?

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She is like the Sun Her gravity pulls you in So close that you burn in her magnificence Now you find yourself rotating in her orbit For there is no star like her No fire hotter No gravitational pull stronger She is your sun She is your life And when her fire dies out You want to be ****** in to her black hole along with everything else around her. -©M

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Oct 31, 2017

Oct 31, 2017 at 4:24 AM UTC

Monde

My Star

She is like the Sun Her gravity pulls you in So close that you burn in her magnificence Now you find yourself rotating in her orbit For there is no star like her No fire hotter No gravitational pull stronger She is your sun She is your life And when her fire dies out You want to be ****** in to her black hole along with everything else around her. -©M

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I think the bare truth of it all is that yes, it hurts like hell to look at someone who you had the potential of loving uncontrollably, but they never gave you the chance. And maybe, you will never be able to take your eyes away but that is the beauty of pain, sometimes, it lasts forever. By Chloe Elizabeth

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Dec 11, 2014

Dec 11, 2014 at 11:43 AM UTC

ChloeElizabeth

Bare

I think the bare truth of it all is that yes, it hurts like hell to look at someone who you had the potential of loving uncontrollably, but they never gave you the chance. And maybe, you will never be able to take your eyes away but that is the beauty of pain, sometimes, it lasts forever. By Chloe Elizabeth

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