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I fold my shadow, pack it purposely for transition through districts that nightly invariably abort me on salty frigid sand mornings that never smelled night and night that never ends.
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Aug 9, 2025
Aug 9, 2025 at 1:58 AM UTC
beachcomber
The leaflet reads: “Be mindful of your desires, be careful where they come from and where they’re heading. Use drive to drive choice. Be the one who decides before you join in and follow along. Otherwise the path to your freedom is then walked down bare feet and bare mind. The good ol’ valley of yours.” Inside your own head, own voice, while taking a handful.
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Mar 26, 2025
Mar 26, 2025 at 4:26 AM UTC
Drive
Our unconscious mind is very dark, so we dream -- of the dawn of day.
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Jan 6, 2023
Jan 6, 2023 at 1:55 AM UTC
[ Our unconscious mind ]
Suddenly recognized  a day running in the morning An enemy that I was raising another myself Why you are there How long have you been there You have tackled me against my entire identity You have denied  what I was doing Stop You came from society when I was young By the words from nearest people I refused to accept you But you have slid to my space Shocked It was me who was raising in the place that calls unconsciousness Now I have found you I **** you
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Jun 14, 2020
Jun 14, 2020 at 11:07 AM UTC
End of the guerrilla warfare
A short but intense melody Catching up with the seen and unseen. Boundary of day and night, Where earth's surging spin Inexorably melts 
Cascading aches and melancholy spills 
 Thirsty planets open,
For the ****** of rockets and unfurling of roots. Nature holds her breath
and decides to wait. The bursting promise within
the boundary of mountains and water Life hesitates  Where serenity of silence rules over this deserted border. Seen or unseen,the border of unconsciousness.
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May 10, 2020
May 10, 2020 at 4:00 AM UTC
Boundary,unconsciousness
I wake up seeing bruises on my body. Huh. Turns out self harm can knock a person out Just as much as her smile does.
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Jul 26, 2018
Jul 26, 2018 at 9:45 AM UTC
Bruised
The eyes look, but I see The skin touches, but I feel The nose sniffs, but I smell The ears listen, but I hear The tongue licks, but I taste. So observation proves another. A silent partner, Silent until prompted Waiting... and acting When conscious eyes of experience aren't there to catelog being. When all seems to flow naturally I am not there to reflect And no memory of my own can reveal My lucidity. An acting unconsciousness leaves awareness wanting.
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Jun 26, 2018
Jun 26, 2018 at 9:49 PM UTC
Sleepwalking
she looks at his eyes while he stares at her thighs and he's wondering if she's going to sleep with him tonight the dress that hangs by her dainty physique is meant to impress but all he pictures is what's underneath their hearts beat giving values to their chests of treasured boxes kept locked away from all of the rest she wishes for solace and an assurance to not be pressed he wishes to gain her trust and to take over, hoping for a nightly event of passionate *** he lures her into a loophole of false intent she smiles at his slipping mask but continues to reciprocate they exchange words over drunk breaths but she is too intoxicated so she forgets her tenuous wrists are taken into his she tries to refuse but eventually gives in to forceful attainment and prohibited entry she wonders if her racing heart will be heard through her thin exterior she wonders if there are other words for "help" and why men always have to be the superior her fingers are helpless along with tight shut eyes clothing sliding from svelte body parts, past unconscious skin she senses heavy breathing, not hers, to keep herself wondering unaware and completely susceptible she falls asleep, passing out with her body against his the sun will kiss her tender cheeks with the absence of coffee drinks she will be awake and lying next to nothing but empty sheets she will remember looking into his eyes hoping that he was the one to keep her safe from reoccurring lies but he was nothing but a crooked thief who robbed her of her entirety n.j.
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Dec 27, 2015
Dec 27, 2015 at 10:33 PM UTC
recurrence
she looks at his eyes while he stares at her thighs and he's wondering if she's going to sleep with him tonight the dress that hangs by her dainty physique is meant to impress but all he pictures is what's underneath their hearts beat giving values to their chests of treasured boxes kept locked away from all of the rest she wishes for solace and an assurance to not be pressed he wishes to gain her trust and to take over, hoping for a nightly event of passionate *** he lures her into a loophole of false intent she smiles at his slipping mask but continues to reciprocate they exchange words over drunk breaths but she is too intoxicated so she forgets her tenuous wrists are taken into his she tries to refuse but eventually gives in to forceful attainment and prohibited entry she wonders if her racing heart will be heard through her thin exterior she wonders if there are other words for "help" and why men always have to be the superior her fingers are helpless along with tight shut eyes clothing sliding from svelte body parts, past unconscious skin she senses heavy breathing, not hers, to keep herself wondering unaware and completely susceptible she falls asleep, passing out with her body against his the sun will kiss her tender cheeks with the absence of coffee drinks she will be awake and lying next to nothing but empty sheets she will remember looking into his eyes hoping that he was the one to keep her safe from reoccurring lies but he was nothing but a crooked thief who robbed her of her entirety n.j.
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It is dark here The folds of cloth sheltering Smoke drifts by lazy in the air The fear is present Stay here Stay underneath It is safe here My head rings loudly inside Like a branding iron in my brain Don't get up The light makes it worse Underneath is safe Shut your eyelids Let unconsciousness sweep the pain away
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Apr 8, 2015
Apr 8, 2015 at 7:52 PM UTC
Stay Underneath
Do not presume to think dear sun To ****** away my dreams The dark still holds me in it’s thrall Within the great unseen They will not lift these limbs of mine They wallow in their weight Enjoy the burden of their bonds Refuse to animate A captive to these strains of sleep Gladly shackled to my bed I revel in their sweet confines My eyelids drawn with lead I Self sedate with each warm breathe Benumbed by this safe drug Which toxifies my consciousness I revel in it’s fug I will not wake, I’m staying here Please do not liberate me Reality’sbecome too much For me to cope with lately.
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Dec 11, 2014
Dec 11, 2014 at 11:37 AM UTC
sleep
There’s a gap between unconsciousness and unconsciousness. © Barbara-Paraprem, 2014
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Jun 29, 2014
Jun 29, 2014 at 10:46 AM UTC
THE GAP
Balance.  What a charged and pregnant word. Balance.  Common in our daily vernacular but void of it's innate and innermost meaning Balance - what do you see? The Golden scales of antiquity? What a dichotomous lie For Balance is multi-planar, multi-dimensional Multitudes of exponential, fractal-like branches Hanging from the largest trunk of the largest tree with the largest network of life-providing roots spreading in all directions at once like a wild-fire with unlimited fuel Balance.  It's perfectly symmetrical reflection Only distorted by the waters of our perception Thrives and simultaneously strives for connection Connection to the mirrors of eternity The pristine, naked, flesh-covered bodies of pure vulnerability, set free to explore this spherical dream Balance is a friend, but left unseen, reaching for our touch without so much of a glance towards it's arduous efforts to bond with the deep dwelling dreams of Souls, Balance can be distorted, as the tree is, in the ripples of our confused and distracted minds. Crack!  A branch breaks. Balance falters, catches itself and picks up its severed limb - a sacrifice, for the greater good.  The only good. Crack!  Another branch breaks. Balance steps to redistribute it's misaligned weight A sacrifice, for the greater good.  The only good. A fitting mantra. Crack!  Crack!  Crack!  Branches breaking back to back Plummeting to the cold hard ground. This sudden decay is too much to handle The limbs of this great tree, the greatest amongst all cannot regrow at the speed at which the others wither Ironically, balance is now imbalanced Shaking, desperately grasping the ground with its roots  to stay upright, at the very least, to remain present, persistent, possible, but, most importantly, present Present for those vulnerable naked bodies to one day glance past their distorted waters and into the depths of what truly is... A force, so strong, so humble, so forgiving reaching out through it's remaining, fatigue-strewn branches in a dire need to make contact with the branches of our mortality When branches unite, as they shall, as they always do from time to time, Imbalance is washed away as waves wash the shore And Balance emerges from the distorted waters, now retreating, pulled by the tide of self-awareness Perfectly, our fingers fill the gaps of our grief-stricken but eternally determined ally and meet with it's tender stumps, the necessary wounds of time A fusion of worlds meld the two together in a forge as hot as the sun but as nourishing as a mother's touch Balance, in all it's glory, sewn to us through the channels of our consciousness is now, truly, and undeniably, Balanced. - Brian Patrick Williams 11/13/2013
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May 15, 2014
May 15, 2014 at 4:13 PM UTC
An Ode to Balance
Balance.  What a charged and pregnant word. Balance.  Common in our daily vernacular but void of it's innate and innermost meaning Balance - what do you see? The Golden scales of antiquity? What a dichotomous lie For Balance is multi-planar, multi-dimensional Multitudes of exponential, fractal-like branches Hanging from the largest trunk of the largest tree with the largest network of life-providing roots spreading in all directions at once like a wild-fire with unlimited fuel Balance.  It's perfectly symmetrical reflection Only distorted by the waters of our perception Thrives and simultaneously strives for connection Connection to the mirrors of eternity The pristine, naked, flesh-covered bodies of pure vulnerability, set free to explore this spherical dream Balance is a friend, but left unseen, reaching for our touch without so much of a glance towards it's arduous efforts to bond with the deep dwelling dreams of Souls, Balance can be distorted, as the tree is, in the ripples of our confused and distracted minds. Crack!  A branch breaks. Balance falters, catches itself and picks up its severed limb - a sacrifice, for the greater good.  The only good. Crack!  Another branch breaks. Balance steps to redistribute it's misaligned weight A sacrifice, for the greater good.  The only good. A fitting mantra. Crack!  Crack!  Crack!  Branches breaking back to back Plummeting to the cold hard ground. This sudden decay is too much to handle The limbs of this great tree, the greatest amongst all cannot regrow at the speed at which the others wither Ironically, balance is now imbalanced Shaking, desperately grasping the ground with its roots  to stay upright, at the very least, to remain present, persistent, possible, but, most importantly, present Present for those vulnerable naked bodies to one day glance past their distorted waters and into the depths of what truly is... A force, so strong, so humble, so forgiving reaching out through it's remaining, fatigue-strewn branches in a dire need to make contact with the branches of our mortality When branches unite, as they shall, as they always do from time to time, Imbalance is washed away as waves wash the shore And Balance emerges from the distorted waters, now retreating, pulled by the tide of self-awareness Perfectly, our fingers fill the gaps of our grief-stricken but eternally determined ally and meet with it's tender stumps, the necessary wounds of time A fusion of worlds meld the two together in a forge as hot as the sun but as nourishing as a mother's touch Balance, in all it's glory, sewn to us through the channels of our consciousness is now, truly, and undeniably, Balanced. - Brian Patrick Williams 11/13/2013
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