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Dear Tin Man, you can keep your armor, that silver shell you wear so well. You think you’re safe from all the heartache, but I know what your silence tells. See, I’m just a girl, sixteen and hoping that love won’t break me like before; I hold my chest and feel it aching, wondering what this heart is for. If you ever want to trade, Tin Man, I’d hand you all these shattered dreams; You could show me how to not feel, how to disappear inside the seams. But if you knew what it’s like to cry over midnight texts that never come, you’d see my tears are proof I’m living, even if they leave me numb. So keep your tin, your quiet shelter, I’ll keep my heart, however bruised; ‘Cause loving, losing, feeling sorrow, It’s worth the pain of being used. And if you ever change your mind, Tin Man, and want to know my side, you’ll find me holding all these pieces, learning how to love and survive.
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May 24
May 24, 2026 at 10:11 PM UTC
Tin man (my version)
Man of numbers and data Stuck at zero, wants to be one I can't paint, I can't build So I thought Art is not for me I calculated away Trying to find a way until I realized Words can speak the feelings of my weak I was free. The tinman found his heart Through poetry
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Mar 21, 2021
Mar 21, 2021 at 4:56 AM UTC
The tinman
I’m a man, made out of the tin; sheets of worn-out metal, decaying in an orchard with my trusty axe and kettle. I cried myself to rust because I have no heart, No love for this metallic man; no soul mate counterpart. Can’t you hear the sounds that echo underneath? A hollow empty shell where a heart's supposed to beat. The days are long and grinding; the nights are even longer. Rotting away in this field my mind begins to wonder. I dream of sweet devotion that I want to feel and cardiac vibrations put in this man of steel. A coronary muscle overflowing with affection is all I ever wanted, an emotional connection. Wait! What’s this......?? I see ruby sparkles and stare with fascination. It's skipping upon some yellow bricks, is this a hallucination?? To Be Continued.....
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Oct 18, 2020
Oct 18, 2020 at 1:48 PM UTC
Inside The Mind Of The Tin Man (Part One)
I gave up somewhere along this road— When it was I don’t know. So I’ll sit here, underneath the shade And wait for the Tin man, Now rusted in time, far behind me. I discovered, sitting there, that day— That losing a heart Was actually an easy thing to do.
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Mar 13, 2018
Mar 13, 2018 at 11:31 PM UTC
Tin Man
Myths They were not statues and now you see what they see looking back at you Man Her tongue, was so sharp dissevers men from their ****** kisses them goodnight! Our blind date went well Next time leave my mask at home, and her eyes attached. Scratched, stained, double locked. Basement corner, light bulb off. Refrigerator. Won't let him hurt you. I promise, now go and hide, Daddy is coming... I don't remember, I keep having these blackouts. Sorry I hurt you. Movie Make-out Point, moonlight... Turn their car radio on, leave my hook behind. 50 ft. Woman, dreams of a fifty foot world. Curse my two left feet. Empty, shiny man His axe hacks you limb from limb You hear a heartbeat Wound too tight, tied down Whisper lies, impale your skull What is a real boy? "Last person on earth, dif'rent faces in mirror." - Frankenstein's Monster Miscellaneous appeared as a zit it grew, no concern for it it spoke! holy **** Lamprey fingertips Coarse hair on infected tongue Lotus seed ****** My beast sounds like love, vanity to a monster, hero to a ghost. from Horrors Grotesque, the existential monster fears little carpals.
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Aug 7, 2015
Aug 7, 2015 at 4:29 PM UTC
Monster Haiku
As the ashes slowly turn to dust I slowly begin to rust For my love is gone He took it all Along with my heart And I slowly begin to realize how hard my body took the fall But this isn't the end My story can't end here I just have to take my time and mend Then once again I'll rise When someone new comes and picks up my broken pieces And breaks through my disguise So I must wait Standing here exposed like bait Until someone takes the time of day To despite my now heartless chest Love me anyways
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Apr 23, 2015
Apr 23, 2015 at 5:32 PM UTC
Tinman
I was born empty, never feeling I was just a shell, Was the breath real Did that which I'd touched Know that it had been like a Feather blown upon a breeze I neither Felt, Touched, Registered With each thing within my grasp, It was not knowing, only my grip by sight, They said I would learn I would touch, feel, Knowing the gentleness That I could hold in my palm, I was born empty, They call me the "Tin man" That a machine doesn't have a heart, I feel sadness for the loneliness I am only one, I have mastered an emotion But not the one I want, They say I am empty That to feel you have to feel inside, "But I was born empty" Will I learn to Feel, Touch Love The emotions that will make me Less empty than before, I am only one, The one no one understands.
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 4:39 PM UTC
Born Empty
with a body concealed in armor and a heart filled with iron bars let me in to see your light the man had a past of thorns yet a soul of gold invite me in to reveal your sweeter side with a mind set of a government spy and the emotion of burdened soldier smile to me wide and let your guard down the man had the memories on the battlefield yet no scars to prove his achievement come sit close and tell me the tales of your life with the courage of a fighter and the actions of a member of the counterculture lean in close and let your lips meet mine the man who thought he had no heart to love yet held the key for an eternal sanctuary forget all your tales, and spare your future to adventure with me
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Nov 10, 2014
Nov 10, 2014 at 9:28 PM UTC
Tin Man