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the blinding light of the sun setting two people insignificant compared to the near twilight sky a comet falls through the sky and the sky lit from the beautiful two people run around a large crater and as they pass each other, three years apart they stop the sun sinks out of sight and shifts to twilight the bright light lessens to show the two standing together "kataware-doki" the girl cries in happiness while the other smiles they hug And the girl questions "When will I see you again" the boy suggests "let’s write our names on each other, so we don't forget" he pulls a pen out of his pocket she agrees, and the boy writes on the palm of The girl he has known for a short while, but feels like he's known for years They exchange the pen, and The girl writes the one line- and the pen falls the beautiful can become the terrifying the comet nears the small town the crater overlooks splits and falls
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Oct 24, 2018
Oct 24, 2018 at 6:23 PM UTC
comet