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#surrounded
atmospheric romance the encompassing of Heaven in an ordinary day
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Apr 12
Apr 12, 2026 at 10:14 AM UTC
10w atmospheric
Another night, Where I feel completely alone Surrounded by people I care about. What's the point? Love coming at the price Of self-sacrifice, Break my body Take control, But what do you know?
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Jun 5, 2023
Jun 5, 2023 at 12:44 AM UTC
Too Few To Mention
can I like just go in a forest and fall quietly quickly without people hearing me or will they invade me again
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Nov 16, 2019
Nov 16, 2019 at 3:28 PM UTC
trees
It's incredible, if not amazing... How you can feel so surrounded by the people that enclose you But still feel empty and alone...
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Feb 4, 2019
Feb 4, 2019 at 11:41 AM UTC
Surrounded but Lonely
How i dream to be surrounded by the mist of mystery
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Mar 17, 2018
Mar 17, 2018 at 1:10 PM UTC
mist of mystery
She was a mystery. She gave me her heart to understand the type of music she listened to. Her playlist was filled with trap beats before it became fashionable. The rattling of empty trunks. The rattling of sticker covered tags. This is how I saw myself before she gave me a pair of headphones. I asked her for more. Not liking the way track six ended. Track 7 and 8 captivated my heart. Keeping it all to myself. She fooled me. Her playlist composed of the same beat over and over. 9 tracks with something added. Another taken away. Overtime it would become all that I listened to. Her influence over two rocks shaken in a can. My heart. Beginning to nod my head and cut the volume to the max. I played it at work. I listened to it in the car. A natural disaster to those that I passed. The rattling of my trunk almost non-existent. A more crisp sound coming from the speakers. It was Summer. Before I heard her playlist in the hands of someone else. She placed her heart inside of the music knowing I'd stumble across it first. Unsure if I'd ever find her love. To participate in the aggression of her love. The originality of all that she was. I listened in silence with the headphones she gave. To be surrounded by everything I love all at once
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Feb 4, 2018
Feb 4, 2018 at 5:43 AM UTC
Playlist
Old buildings weather youthful storms And trees bear more children than we’ll ever know Humanity is not a curse But a whisper down an empty hall No shadow lies without intent Or climbs beyond a human’s back And though we bend and break with age We are born again just to take it back How needlessly we weave between The bitter roots, the grass and trees Sit at the base of life content And remember all which you’ve seen Because we leave our better trees To depart the earth into the soil   And though we hope to forever stand No building will ever endure No, in the end We all will break and fall again
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Aug 31, 2017
Aug 31, 2017 at 4:38 PM UTC
Surrounded By Trees
You're at your lonliest when you have people beside you.
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Aug 19, 2017
Aug 19, 2017 at 6:07 AM UTC
Lonely (10w)
Gripping the clouds To fly upon their wings Heaven's delight Every time it sings Tell me father Tell me now Show me the way Show me how To educate To show them the light Teach them when to bend Advise them when to fight We demand change While staying the same Want the power to fight? Pick a different flame
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Jul 7, 2016
Jul 7, 2016 at 6:06 PM UTC
The Landscape
I’m a planet. I, like them, feel surrounded. Surrounded and Isolated. How is that even possible? I used to think being alone was hard. Now I realize that I feel alone in a room full of people, and that’s even harder. I worry my planet is missing something. Missing the will to keep moving. But I know that I must, for I am a planet that will not burn out. (-DF-03/04/16-)
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Mar 27, 2016
Mar 27, 2016 at 10:43 AM UTC
I Am A Planet.
Surrounded yet completely alone, It's the rule that our mothers taught us, always stay together. Together, entanglement binds it together, Predators take at ease to engulf, consume. Those that swim, flow solo. So I remain huddled, I merge and now I'm surrounded, All the same, completely isolated. I stay for hope, protection and direction, is this a false impression? Split, torn in silence I suffer, So I turn back to reflect, "I had, I have control, right?" I segregate and eliminate the feeling of metamorphosis, From prayer to predator. Now I've shifted gears, further up the food chain once more, Again, I'm surrounded yet completely alone. Though, this time I've grown! Poem by Lionelle Nsarhaza
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Mar 18, 2016
Mar 18, 2016 at 9:42 PM UTC
School Of Fish
I need, You need, And we all, Comfort it is, We plead! Satisfied are you, When it comes your way, Cheerio! I, too have found Comfort! Cheerio!
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Nov 2, 2015
Nov 2, 2015 at 12:01 AM UTC
Some Comfort
Wake up It's Monday Lace up your shoes Walk out the door No one to notice anymore There's no one here anymore Wake up It's Tuesday Makeup your face Walk straight to work To get a good tip just flirt Smile so it doesn't have hurt Wake up It's Wednesday Comb out your hair Go through the rain The wet can hide the pain That's on your face in stains Wake up It's Thursday Look in the mirror Avoid your eyes Don't listen to empty lies To whispers in their eyes Wake up It's Friday Brush your teeth Swallow all fear No one left to listen here None to shout, **** or jeer Wake up It's Saturday Click out your notes Play back the laughs You've recorded in drafts Not much ever seems to last Wake up It's Sunday Button your dress Go pray at church Tell yourself it all has worth How could it get any worse Wake up It's Monday Lace up your shoes
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Sep 16, 2015
Sep 16, 2015 at 11:56 PM UTC
Wake up, it's Monday.
Shall I ever have a bad day I remind myself of the way the green of the trees compliments the violet of the nighttime southern summer sky; Shall I ever feel lesser I remind myself of the way my mother appears as her eyes well with tears of pride and joy; Shall I ever experience a sense of emptiness I remind myself of the sound of my dad's laugh, of the way my brother always gets my references; Shall I ever have a moment of doubt I remind myself of the reverberations that hollow your insides when the guy you like kisses you for the first time; Shall I ever forget my purpose I remind myself of the way it felt when I saw my nanny's husband on my graduation day; Shall I ever doubt the future I remind myself of the way I moved on from my deepest love; Shall I ever feel weak I remind myself of my first days in D.C. as I stumbled aimlessly through streets with which I was unfamiliar; Shall I ever be devoured by ambiguity I remind myself of the peace I have felt as I watch the steady ripples of the Ohio; Shall I ever get lost I remind myself of the paths I have forged, of the arms that extend open; I may seek resurrection mother nature offers me in the sand I have felt in my toes, of the grass that has tickled my back, of the sunsets that have moved my soul, in the water bodies that have sung me to sleep; I may be reborn in the rifts of my favorite songs, in the quotes of my favorite movies, in the words of timeless poems; in the love the world extends I shall never go without comfort, inspiration, rejuvenation; I shall never truly become lost for the world always finds me.
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May 31, 2015
May 31, 2015 at 11:55 PM UTC
Surrounded
Shall I ever have a bad day I remind myself of the way the green of the trees compliments the violet of the nighttime southern summer sky; Shall I ever feel lesser I remind myself of the way my mother appears as her eyes well with tears of pride and joy; Shall I ever experience a sense of emptiness I remind myself of the sound of my dad's laugh, of the way my brother always gets my references; Shall I ever have a moment of doubt I remind myself of the reverberations that hollow your insides when the guy you like kisses you for the first time; Shall I ever forget my purpose I remind myself of the way it felt when I saw my nanny's husband on my graduation day; Shall I ever doubt the future I remind myself of the way I moved on from my deepest love; Shall I ever feel weak I remind myself of my first days in D.C. as I stumbled aimlessly through streets with which I was unfamiliar; Shall I ever be devoured by ambiguity I remind myself of the peace I have felt as I watch the steady ripples of the Ohio; Shall I ever get lost I remind myself of the paths I have forged, of the arms that extend open; I may seek resurrection mother nature offers me in the sand I have felt in my toes, of the grass that has tickled my back, of the sunsets that have moved my soul, in the water bodies that have sung me to sleep; I may be reborn in the rifts of my favorite songs, in the quotes of my favorite movies, in the words of timeless poems; in the love the world extends I shall never go without comfort, inspiration, rejuvenation; I shall never truly become lost for the world always finds me.
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I know I'm not alone. I know that when I get home there's people who love me. I am surrounded by love even from those faraway. And that my friends is a beautiful thing I can say. Because sometimes I feel weak and bland and terrible, to say the least. Sometimes I don't even love myself, if I may speak. But other people's love keeps me going, because it is always showing. And that is the best kind of love isn't it? One not defined by words, but by actions and forgiveness.
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Dec 17, 2014
Dec 17, 2014 at 11:54 AM UTC
Surrounded
I sit in the middle of a dark room Surrounded my forty eight candles Burning brightly and quietly, they flicker with the slightest breeze One candle is one year of my life, their wax melting graciously to the floor One burns out then another my life is being extinguished swiftly Darkness envelopes me whole a little light and warmth present Twenty four candles out haunting feelings set in What has happened to my life sickening feeling besets me Three to go, its going too fast my final words, my final breathes Pitch black Heart stops I am gone
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Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 3:16 PM UTC
Candles
by Arcassin Burnham ... talking to me as if I'm awake, but I'm asleep, so theres no way you can repeat, escaping your emotions as the night falls, creeping in desperation, breaking down the walls, i would search the nation, to see you fall in love, i would search the nation, to see you fall in love, she turned it on, and me as well, will the teenage love making occur, only the time will tell, she turned it on, and me as well, will the teenage love making occur, only the time will tell, put me in your magical trance, expressing my emotions, like the ring of a bell, come with me baby, we could rule the night if we dance, the dance floor couldn't handle us, just tell me you will.....
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 6:47 PM UTC
"Nite Lite" (Short V.)
The prey is surrounded by hunters waiting to make their next move. To make the light leave the preys glancing eyes and the blood pour out from it's veins leaving it dead for them to rip apart. It's only appreciated when it's gone down their throats, into their stomach and as the hunger starts again the poor creature is already forgotten and the hunt for a new prey has begun.
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Jun 25, 2014
Jun 25, 2014 at 3:39 PM UTC
The prey
When you're surrounded by hundreds of people but no one notices you. No one chooses to hear you. Everyone except from him. Him with the goofy big smile from one ear to another. He sees what no one else sees. You. He sees when you look alone surrounded by people. He sees you when you have that distant look in your eyes, like you aren't present. But when you're with him everything changes. You're there, you're not alone. You're in love.
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May 13, 2014
May 13, 2014 at 3:48 PM UTC
Realizing
As I stand, sit, stand Tears stream out of my eyes Who are you? Surrounded by love for you I cry Not for the stranger the lies behind the curtain A corpse But for those I love. I love. Those who loved you. Black surrounds me Subdued colours Black rustle, slink, stretch Your picture stares out at us all as we sit Stand,sit Listen to a song I've never heard before You loved it, its happy I don't think you would have liked to see this The crying. Grief surrounding your remains I brought some flowers to put On the plot where your ashes will be But you didn't want anything They are burnt alongside you The memories aren't burnt. They remain Brighter than before. Calendars and Jumpers. Always too small but I wore them anyway. I didn't know you, but I miss you.
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May 15, 2014
May 15, 2014 at 1:55 PM UTC
Who?