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#suddendeath
Really only knew you from your posts On Facebook That made me smile or Made me cringe at times Or made me curious. A family man But seemingly alone Two teenage daughters Apparently who you'd see rarely. I didn't pry too much. Just saw your presence through the stream Of news feeds. Every other day.. Only A picture or two of you Otherwise generic public images With short proverbs Or offensive religious posts.. I know your father. But again, I didn't pry it seems there was little contact between you. Today, as the dawn broke, I saw you'd left. Just an image of you, shades on, With RIP, JS (same initials as my long gone timeless love) Too young to leave. Didn't know you were ill? No, reading the comments I discover it was not a sickness, Just another day, outside While chopping down a tree. That came down on you with massive force. The blow was delivered by nature at least.. And in that there may be some comfort I hope For the loved ones you leave behind. And perhaps an opening for love to return To you and your dad. Who I know to be a most sensitive soul. And Who I'm sure is quietly shedding a river of tears For a son who left the world so suddenly, Just 10 hours ago. On a winter day while chopping down a tree.
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Dec 11, 2014
Dec 11, 2014 at 11:26 AM UTC
Exit Stage ~ RIP J.S.
Just found out Dear friend is gone R.I.p angel This is yo song
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Jun 28, 2015
Jun 28, 2015 at 2:57 PM UTC
He left us suddenly
I would say to thee that still live; This world is not my home, I’m just passing on by, And if my time is up, And on ice is where I now rest, I hope this gift called life I lived to be my very best, I hope my memory brings summer where death brings winter, And my smile lights you up when grief brings darkness, I hope the times we shared become treasures for which you care, And laughter may be a thing you all now share, This world is not your home, One day you too will call this casket home, All that you own means nothing after they lay you to rest, And you will only be remembered for how you handled life's test. In any time zone I no longer exist, But you do; and, I hope you are kind to one another, That you shine your light in this world that is as cold as the ice I now call my bed, I hope you lift each other up, And love each other as deeply as Our Heavenly Father commanded, I hope you live in the moment; Like the lilies of the field that that labor not & spin not I hope you live in gratitude; And be content in every season no matter what I hope you live in truth, nobility & righteousness And think only about the goodness of this life I hope that you share in others troubles; And remember the He gives you all the strength that you need, I hope that you do not seek to posses what this earth has to give, And that you always practice selflessness as our beloved Christ did, And finally, my loved ones, Just like I did, I hope you too choose to live a life filled with laughter; And that  joy & happiness you never seize to seek! My home is now in your hearts, And there I shall always live!
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Jul 24, 2019
Jul 24, 2019 at 4:18 PM UTC
If from the grave I was to speak,
I would say to thee that still live; This world is not my home, I’m just passing on by, And if my time is up, And on ice is where I now rest, I hope this gift called life I lived to be my very best, I hope my memory brings summer where death brings winter, And my smile lights you up when grief brings darkness, I hope the times we shared become treasures for which you care, And laughter may be a thing you all now share, This world is not your home, One day you too will call this casket home, All that you own means nothing after they lay you to rest, And you will only be remembered for how you handled life's test. In any time zone I no longer exist, But you do; and, I hope you are kind to one another, That you shine your light in this world that is as cold as the ice I now call my bed, I hope you lift each other up, And love each other as deeply as Our Heavenly Father commanded, I hope you live in the moment; Like the lilies of the field that that labor not & spin not I hope you live in gratitude; And be content in every season no matter what I hope you live in truth, nobility & righteousness And think only about the goodness of this life I hope that you share in others troubles; And remember the He gives you all the strength that you need, I hope that you do not seek to posses what this earth has to give, And that you always practice selflessness as our beloved Christ did, And finally, my loved ones, Just like I did, I hope you too choose to live a life filled with laughter; And that  joy & happiness you never seize to seek! My home is now in your hearts, And there I shall always live!
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There she stood with a hope in her mind            but all that she did       was walk away cryin' He simply never showed          up as she waited on        'cause he had passed        at the break of dawn
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Jun 26, 2016
Jun 26, 2016 at 2:19 AM UTC
The forgotten promise