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let's all revel in the duplicity duplicate posts that lack authenticity authentic thoughts fall to the simplicity simple minds are guilty of complicity a new origin of no originality original thinking crushed by formality formal rules lead to our commonality common perspectives to lower our mentality
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May 20, 2016
May 20, 2016 at 3:00 PM UTC
facebook - common mentality - quantum loop poem
I'm on a social networking site on the internet, What is the internet? Forgive me for my ignorance 18th century friends, It's a connection of machines that can share information. Yes, and that "social networking site" is part of the connection of machines to try and make people feel less lonely. It does feel strange sometimes when I'm on there. And then the possession inside the machine says; "but without me you wouldn't know this music, this picture, this place, this girl." And now, for the first time, I am not subdued. For the first time, I answer back, but what things would I know without you? What forests would I have walked through? What people would I have met? What noises would I have heard? O the less trivial things I would have learned. What streets would I have crossed (both in this layer of reality, in metaphor and metaphysical) What girl's eyes would be staring towards mine, instead of those of a camera's. I've got to talk about the internet I've got to talk about the facebook^tm (though in a year it will be gone) It feels all so inauthentic so I indulge in the scary technology but then omit it from my memories when I see your pics online I write about them like they are authentic genuine photographs I have yellowing in an album in the attic I don't have an attic either
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Dec 14, 2013
Dec 14, 2013 at 11:54 PM UTC
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