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#sledding
It was the steepest hill Ever I knew. Named for my great, great Grandparents, The Lords, She was family, Especially when snow fell in winter. Not only neighborhood kids, Adults too sled her. Such was her reputation That we had to endure the arrival of An occasional station wagon Full of thrill seeking townies With their shiny, new Department store sleds. She refused to don an asphalt coat That steep she was. Coats of gravel just pooled at her feet So steep she was. One sunny, summer day Cousin Mel and I stood High upon her summit. His legs straddled my beloved Three speed bike Fully equipped with hand brakes, Narrow rims, And leather saddle. I gripped the bare steel bars Of an old wreck borrowed. No brakes? said I. No brakes! we shouted to seal the deal. Even in the foolish loose life of youth I was an all in kind of guy. Oh we flew! Flesh and steel as one, We flew! In my young life, Not in a car, It was the fastest I had ever moved, ……For twenty seconds. It was pure joy, ……For twenty seconds. Then her feet of pooled gravel Seized my front wheel and Shook it the way my dog Lucy Killed garter snakes, Seizing tails in her mouth And whipsawing the creatures with Shakes of her head so violent Their heads parted bodies. Time stopped. I lay dead. Is not complete cessation of breath ……Death? At last time did return, Kept measure of My drumming pain. So as well did breath return, Shallow, weak and wanting, Unable yet to loose a scream. My sight returned, First black, then grey, Then technicolor. I saw Mel’s face so White with fright. Awareness returned, As did feeling in my Skewed and skewered limbs, All atingle and in tangles In my bier of broken brambles. Movement returned, Mel gave me a hand, Tugging at my body, Helping me to stand. It seemed to take forever, Even working together, To free that stupid bike. I lifted up my t-shirt, Pulled it free Of blood and dirt. Those bare steel bars With a slash made a **** Ripping flesh from my chest Clear down to my belly. We walked. My front wheel was as strangely twisted as My fifth grade school teacher Who liked to push a hand down the back of my pants. Strolling our steel steeds homeward, Passing neighbor’s porches, I was seized by a sense of surreal dread. I saw one woman press hands to her head. One mother jumped Clear out of her seat, Her mouth fell gaping, Her gossip fell silent Down at her feet. My own mother ran into the street, Seized me roughly by both arms, Panic poured stinking from her pores Like the sweat of one gripped In the throes of malaria. Even I was startled by my first look in a mirror. It was clear I entered those vines headfirst, Encountered numerous thorns, Which tore a multitude of cuts All about my face and scalp, Areas rich in capillaries whose Only purpose seems to be to bleed, Then maybe bleed some more. There had been enough red rivulets That one could be excused for thinking I had somehow survived An **** of bloodletting. But dang, my belly sure hurt!
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Sep 20, 2025
Sep 20, 2025 at 6:47 PM UTC
There Are Hills and There Are Hills (an encounter with blackberry bushes)
It was the steepest hill Ever I knew. Named for my great, great Grandparents, The Lords, She was family, Especially when snow fell in winter. Not only neighborhood kids, Adults too sled her. Such was her reputation That we had to endure the arrival of An occasional station wagon Full of thrill seeking townies With their shiny, new Department store sleds. She refused to don an asphalt coat That steep she was. Coats of gravel just pooled at her feet So steep she was. One sunny, summer day Cousin Mel and I stood High upon her summit. His legs straddled my beloved Three speed bike Fully equipped with hand brakes, Narrow rims, And leather saddle. I gripped the bare steel bars Of an old wreck borrowed. No brakes? said I. No brakes! we shouted to seal the deal. Even in the foolish loose life of youth I was an all in kind of guy. Oh we flew! Flesh and steel as one, We flew! In my young life, Not in a car, It was the fastest I had ever moved, ……For twenty seconds. It was pure joy, ……For twenty seconds. Then her feet of pooled gravel Seized my front wheel and Shook it the way my dog Lucy Killed garter snakes, Seizing tails in her mouth And whipsawing the creatures with Shakes of her head so violent Their heads parted bodies. Time stopped. I lay dead. Is not complete cessation of breath ……Death? At last time did return, Kept measure of My drumming pain. So as well did breath return, Shallow, weak and wanting, Unable yet to loose a scream. My sight returned, First black, then grey, Then technicolor. I saw Mel’s face so White with fright. Awareness returned, As did feeling in my Skewed and skewered limbs, All atingle and in tangles In my bier of broken brambles. Movement returned, Mel gave me a hand, Tugging at my body, Helping me to stand. It seemed to take forever, Even working together, To free that stupid bike. I lifted up my t-shirt, Pulled it free Of blood and dirt. Those bare steel bars With a slash made a **** Ripping flesh from my chest Clear down to my belly. We walked. My front wheel was as strangely twisted as My fifth grade school teacher Who liked to push a hand down the back of my pants. Strolling our steel steeds homeward, Passing neighbor’s porches, I was seized by a sense of surreal dread. I saw one woman press hands to her head. One mother jumped Clear out of her seat, Her mouth fell gaping, Her gossip fell silent Down at her feet. My own mother ran into the street, Seized me roughly by both arms, Panic poured stinking from her pores Like the sweat of one gripped In the throes of malaria. Even I was startled by my first look in a mirror. It was clear I entered those vines headfirst, Encountered numerous thorns, Which tore a multitude of cuts All about my face and scalp, Areas rich in capillaries whose Only purpose seems to be to bleed, Then maybe bleed some more. There had been enough red rivulets That one could be excused for thinking I had somehow survived An **** of bloodletting. But dang, my belly sure hurt!
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Childhood chills sledding down hills adrenaline adventure barrel to the bottom sensation celebration reluctant realization arduous climb back ascending again legs languid exhausting escalator planting a flag at the peak finding breath in fresh air inspecting the landscape made for more hills become mountains formula for faster avalanche astronaut garnering Gs the bottom bottoms out cavernous canyon can’t climb back ground too uneasy shifting environment hazards harass some keep sledding.
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Apr 1, 2020
Apr 1, 2020 at 10:54 PM UTC
Sledding
There was a Winter’s chill But we still had fun Sledding down the hill In the clear Winter sun It was a cold day of play Mittens stuck to the sleds A frantic snowball fray With woolen caps on our heads And we all slipped and slid Never really knowing How great it was being a kid In our yard, as it was snowing But then as we grew older Winter never seemed the same Each year grew a little colder Reliving our childhood game By Kirke Wise The first publication of this poem was in the Winter 2019 edition of The Watershed Journal
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Jan 17, 2019
Jan 17, 2019 at 9:53 PM UTC
Snowballs
Flurries fall onto the window As white fills the street With a clean white sheet of snow The phone rings Schools have been cancelled Call up my friends “Let’s go down the BIG sled hill” We meet up around 3PM Where no little kids around to ruin our day We pack snow to make a ramp And drag our sleds up to the top As we race down the sled hill one by one Faster than light Speed, I am speed Feeling the freeze and staring at the jump ahead Until we feel an elevation Then we are sent flying high Soaring faster than planes in the sky Until we land Hard landing but we land Every laugh, every giggle fuels are adrenaline As we take on the ramp And build it up and build it up Until we get the biggest jump And once we get tired of that We race down the hill Trying to knock each other off to win So we can go the finals And be crowned a sled champion In our fake world And we rinse and repeat the same formula Our creative minds wonder Until it turns dark Where our mothers come to pick us up at 8 Where we get hot chocolate at McDonalds And head back to someone's house Where pizza and drinks await Where we go downstairs and play video games And talk about girls all night And sleepover and stay up til late Still playing games Having deep talks Life, sports, girls, parents, etc. Truth or Dare, What are the odds Until we start to feel tired And pass out and start dreaming On the next snowfall Under the white blanket
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Dec 19, 2018
Dec 19, 2018 at 9:17 PM UTC
Snow Day
With darkness came a wisp; barely a flick, a fleck of pristine snow drifting towards earth to pile in mounds, hills, mountains ready for play as darkness came The slippery hill ran fast beneath my plastic shield; standing, swaying, falling down caught in the arms of winter and brought down softly as darkness came Foreboding twilight the bottom, the nadir of the day when all creatures flee into their homes and those unfortunate not to have one perish as darkness came Hot chocolate frothing, boiling, ready for cold lips to return and sip warm life as the sweet splendid smell slides into nostrils and eyes close in peace as darkness came The fire crackling, breaking, untamed and wild giving warmth to all who gather around the amber flames eating the heat as darkness came A kiss, a switch, the lights went out throughout the house; Smothered in blankets, silence and darkness but for a light softly, mildly glowing throughout the night to keep me safe as darkness came.
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Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 4:55 PM UTC
As Darkness Came