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#scrutiny
I have heard the better word that defined my lack of pride beyond the line I've drawn upon to elevate the livid lies that I was braver, when I was not And they pointed at the arrow sign To my neverland 'far fetched' above my knees gave out and I succumbed to the scrutiny of many eyes
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Jul 10, 2020
Jul 10, 2020 at 8:42 AM UTC
Scrutiny
Her stained thoughts manifest as reckless voice that critiques and confines. Her words jars authenticity and snubs their narrative, cooked from their perspective, and experience. Flames of disapproval, burn brighter with every beat as incompetency bites and acceptance withers. She captures snapshots, and confines them into stereotyped framed of idiosyncratic value. But steadily, as she delayers, scrubs the scrutiny of judgements of her thoughts, and emotions — she steps off the battleground of others skin and becomes the change of creating a embracing society.
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Aug 12, 2019
Aug 12, 2019 at 11:52 AM UTC
Judgemental Eye
Once upon a time, my skin was skin, splendid, as long as I kept it clean. Now I’m told by the TV, internet, and magazines, my skin needs plumping, brightening, smoothing, anti-wrinkle cream. The mirror used to show my reflection – it served a purpose like a toothbrush used to maintain oral hygiene. Now a mirror reflects not just my visage but judgement; flaws that need fixing. Now I’m the clingy lover, insecure, as I hover two inches from the glass surface that is less fragile than my self-esteem sometimes.
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Apr 11, 2019
Apr 11, 2019 at 8:14 PM UTC
Scrutiny
Nothing I do matters I toil and toil away But nothing I do matters I am forever replaceable Forever flawed Forever scrutinized by society I melt, fill a different mold Yet the scrutiny continues   I melt again   Scrutiny persists   How many more times should I melt? Fill a different mold Before I surrender To the unforgiving scrutiny?
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Jul 11, 2018
Jul 11, 2018 at 10:35 PM UTC
Melting into Molds
Not 'in this light' not 'just now' not 'at first sight' not 'from this angle,' but timelessly, universally, after scrutiny, from all perspectives, you are absolutely - wondrous.
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Aug 16, 2017
Aug 16, 2017 at 3:47 PM UTC
Wondrous
I'm not that optimistic, but doesn't mean I can't do what's right I'm a rebel, but doesn't mean I can't follow putting me in a box where I don't belong.. why keep me?....to avoid any trouble? try to cover all the sins but it won't work can't accept me?, don't need you to... I am alone, but it doesn't mean nobody watch for me all my moves, all my words... been carefully observed criticized, judged, pointing your hypocrite fingers for you this is life, for me this is trash you can play with the rules by means of the power given by you but the rules you hold, is only the rules made by you not the rules everybody follows
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Jul 18, 2014
Jul 18, 2014 at 12:10 PM UTC
Scrutiny