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(an ekphrastic poem based on the painting Nighthawks by Edward Hopper) Four solemn faces, doused in gold, like moths to flame, seek warmth from the cold. Darkness leers, but harsh light shields these lonely creatures from their feelings untold. One diner desolate, a waiter old, and three weary visitors are portrayed. The scene unfolds. Most eat under the sunlight, unlike these nighthawks who flocked from their households. Some loneliness darkens hearts like blindfolds; nighthawks’ hearts aren’t exceptions. The woman red and bold, the man in shadows, and another man with a cigarette in his hold are isolated together. They are controlled and defined by solitude. They don’t belong. No mold fits them. They only have a diner, each other, and lonesome souls unconsoled.
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Jun 2, 2018
Jun 2, 2018 at 1:33 AM UTC
Nighthawks Retold
Snoozing the alarm clocks hit the highest record today, congratulations. We got out of bed after the sixth one went off, then continued to lay in bed until the seventh one blared through. We opened the blinds at two in the afternoon. We went downstairs and didn't eat until 4pm, congratulations it's practically dinner time. Our anxious hands spilt the coffee we carried into the living room because we only got five hours of sleep. We spent the whole evening completing six chores because we had no energy to get up from the floor. Our night consisted of us hiding away in our bedroom until insomnia washed over us and rocked us harshly to sleep yet another night. Congratulations.
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Sep 28, 2017
Sep 28, 2017 at 7:15 PM UTC
congratulations
The gorgeous Fox mesmerizes me, I watch him perform for me, Sing for me, Play for me, Call me out by name. "Little Bird" He cries, "Don't leave me, Let the sun hit your feathers, So you may light up, In brilliant hues, Of gorgeous greens, And blues." "Little Bird" He croons, "Be mine, be my dark, Beautiful raven, And never let me go. Be my songbird, And sing only for me, Because I care about you." And I bathe in the attention of my Fox, I let myself fall for him, I listen to him, I care for him, And as I open my beak to sing, I drop the bread from within my mouth, Which he catches in his teeth, And flees, Leaving his Little Bird, To cry in shame for what she's done.
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Dec 8, 2015
Dec 8, 2015 at 4:24 PM UTC
The Fox and the Raven
I don't fear the darkness I don't fear the light. What I fear is a mixture of those. When I don't know wich one will take over.
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Aug 2, 2015
Aug 2, 2015 at 7:02 AM UTC
I don't fear light nor darkness but what is in between
How to start a conversation? That's the question, isn't it? Don't you dare try to tell me I forgot What niceties bear the *****  of tightness I'm here, aren't I? So how are you? insipid So where were you? cutthroat So what can I call you murderer Since you left? I heard once You broke formation, and told the wave of indifference you'd call me... Where was that, that Stuttering star sign Supposed to make you divine for me? The truth is I'm lonely, But not worn, like So many rocks in the ocean, I think I prefer the company of schools of fish And dark things from the sea Than... Well You know But how to end a conversation? You're the best at ending things. Lonely? What's to be alone? Better, you said it yourself, Better than being apart.
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May 11, 2017
May 11, 2017 at 7:33 PM UTC
Post Boom-Town Economics
Out by silver rocks And fjords of solid ice, to the golden moon's marrow, lay an extended hand, harrowed In draws of every breath, followed All in desperation, borrowed A  forsaken dove, it cries To the golden moon, it flies.
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Nov 17, 2020
Nov 17, 2020 at 11:37 AM UTC
To the Golden Moon
The depression began when my grandmother died. She died at exactly three am (the same hour in which I write this poem). Three am has since become my sort of witching hour, magical. I remember being ten years old and rolling over in bed just when my little alarm clock turned the hour and being told three days later that she had died at three am that night. It was like she was saying goodbye. My grandmother and I shared a bond that I feel was reflected by tiny moments of happenstance from the moment I was born. I was born on July 3rd, her half birthday. It was also the day she was diagnosed. I wake up at three am almost every night now and if I do sleep through the entire night I feel like I missed something.   Hers was the first funeral I’d ever been to. I remember disappearing for a while, in between the service and the grave site, when lunch was served, I wasn’t hungry. My grandma didn’t go to church so I find it strange that her funeral was held in such a large one, it was a complex of chapels and offices I admit I got a little lost. I found myself in the balcony off the main chapel, it was lovely with picture windows. Down at the front there was a priest and a couple with their baby. The baby was being baptized, no fuss, no fanfare. Just loveliness. The baby cried and so did I, for I was wondering Was it the same God reasonable for both events? That’s always been my problem to many big questions needing answering. I’d go to four more family members funerals Before I was fourteen and with each one The sadness grew stronger, I had more questions and even fewer answers. That's never really changed but now I know that I may never get my answers. I say sadness, but depression has nothing to do with being sad really. We all go in and out of sadness but some of us like to hold it to long. I know now that it's only my old paint under the new and I'll keep it that way. I guess the reason I never went through with it is because I felt I didn’t have a good enough reason, how sick is that. The survivors of really tragedy have every right to be angry, to be sad, and yet… That’s one of my questions should I meet God: How can people you’ve hurt so badly love you so much?
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May 13, 2014
May 13, 2014 at 1:12 AM UTC
On Sadness
The depression began when my grandmother died. She died at exactly three am (the same hour in which I write this poem). Three am has since become my sort of witching hour, magical. I remember being ten years old and rolling over in bed just when my little alarm clock turned the hour and being told three days later that she had died at three am that night. It was like she was saying goodbye. My grandmother and I shared a bond that I feel was reflected by tiny moments of happenstance from the moment I was born. I was born on July 3rd, her half birthday. It was also the day she was diagnosed. I wake up at three am almost every night now and if I do sleep through the entire night I feel like I missed something.   Hers was the first funeral I’d ever been to. I remember disappearing for a while, in between the service and the grave site, when lunch was served, I wasn’t hungry. My grandma didn’t go to church so I find it strange that her funeral was held in such a large one, it was a complex of chapels and offices I admit I got a little lost. I found myself in the balcony off the main chapel, it was lovely with picture windows. Down at the front there was a priest and a couple with their baby. The baby was being baptized, no fuss, no fanfare. Just loveliness. The baby cried and so did I, for I was wondering Was it the same God reasonable for both events? That’s always been my problem to many big questions needing answering. I’d go to four more family members funerals Before I was fourteen and with each one The sadness grew stronger, I had more questions and even fewer answers. That's never really changed but now I know that I may never get my answers. I say sadness, but depression has nothing to do with being sad really. We all go in and out of sadness but some of us like to hold it to long. I know now that it's only my old paint under the new and I'll keep it that way. I guess the reason I never went through with it is because I felt I didn’t have a good enough reason, how sick is that. The survivors of really tragedy have every right to be angry, to be sad, and yet… That’s one of my questions should I meet God: How can people you’ve hurt so badly love you so much?
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i held my pen at 3 AM with hopes depleting amidst the air and then i thought what to write is it my sadness or is it my fright? i held my pen at 3 AM my paper blank mind all hollow with another pill to take and swallow to sing me to sleep with its voice so mellow i held my pen at 3 AM with ragged breath and drooping lids then the pen slid out of grasp along with my final gasp
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Nov 9, 2018
Nov 9, 2018 at 7:49 PM UTC
i held my pen
Something is burning i can see the smoke it's black like the void in me that used to be happiness but know sadness resides in that void something is burning i can smell it it smells like a purifying body left to decay left fore nature to consume left to rot away something is burning i can feel it does not feel hot but rather it feels cold.cold like the warmth joy once gave me when i saw my friend's.cold like death the death within you the type you feel when you smile when talking to someone but you realize it's a mask something is burning it taste like bitter sorrow it fills my mouth as luagh not out of joy but out of the psychotic realization that i'm alone something is burning know and i know what it is
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Nov 14, 2017
Nov 14, 2017 at 8:41 PM UTC
Somtehing is burning
Sad rain was falling, and it filled the streets. Sad people were walking, and they filled the streets. Grey was the day, grey were the streets. All the people went towards the same one place. The bells were ringing, calling the people— but they didn't need to be called. They all wanted to be there when they buried the king. The hole had been made, the priests were prepared. The coffin fell. Silence fell as well. The Raven cawed twice, brokenly, as if babbling: "Ca-caw!" And then, the Raven flew.
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Mar 16
Mar 16, 2026 at 10:58 AM UTC
The Raven flew (1)