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1               thank you —-   =     ————— X              I love you Teach: Solve For X X is 1, thank you =  I love you if you are lucky, lucky to be adjudged trustworthy, someone’s ******** inside insights freely given, unexpected with no disclaimer, no red stop sign, “danger ahead,” after all, you inquired sincerely you caught out breathless, the big data absorption rate is exceeded, but you understand this tidal wave, formed thousands of miles away, you and your silly notions of ‘learning from love,’ aye, were the trigger! you understand this gale force long in the forming, the unleashing a cleansing, a self-tallying evaluation, a crooked trail of struggle, optimism, recovery, both a reliving and a relieving, and an entree to relief living and you, fancy shaman, you wordysmith, understand, you’ve been appointed a trustee of someone’s heart, can only best muster is an ineloquent encompassing “thank you,”^ acknowledging a bond you’ve granted, a bond accepted and overwhelmed by this Rubicon crossing invitation, you can’t yet blather, pry, think small, just acknowledge this gunshot across the bow landed squarely tween eyes, sensing, hoping that this simple response was pitch perfect minutes later, you receive a summary judgment, to wit an entirely unexpected “I love you,” a declarative, simple equation, understanding that it’s a spontaneous gush, with no judgment, no risk, pure acceptance is purely sufficient, that it comes with an overwhelmingly baked-in affection for, you, fool, for just being there, for asking, for learning,  eyes tearing, if you, fool, have love within you, then you should give it, give it, give it 3:53 PM Tue. Jul 21 Twenty Twenty
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Jul 21, 2020
Jul 21, 2020 at 4:04 PM UTC
When The Reciprocal of Thank You is I Love You
1               thank you —-   =     ————— X              I love you Teach: Solve For X X is 1, thank you =  I love you if you are lucky, lucky to be adjudged trustworthy, someone’s ******** inside insights freely given, unexpected with no disclaimer, no red stop sign, “danger ahead,” after all, you inquired sincerely you caught out breathless, the big data absorption rate is exceeded, but you understand this tidal wave, formed thousands of miles away, you and your silly notions of ‘learning from love,’ aye, were the trigger! you understand this gale force long in the forming, the unleashing a cleansing, a self-tallying evaluation, a crooked trail of struggle, optimism, recovery, both a reliving and a relieving, and an entree to relief living and you, fancy shaman, you wordysmith, understand, you’ve been appointed a trustee of someone’s heart, can only best muster is an ineloquent encompassing “thank you,”^ acknowledging a bond you’ve granted, a bond accepted and overwhelmed by this Rubicon crossing invitation, you can’t yet blather, pry, think small, just acknowledge this gunshot across the bow landed squarely tween eyes, sensing, hoping that this simple response was pitch perfect minutes later, you receive a summary judgment, to wit an entirely unexpected “I love you,” a declarative, simple equation, understanding that it’s a spontaneous gush, with no judgment, no risk, pure acceptance is purely sufficient, that it comes with an overwhelmingly baked-in affection for, you, fool, for just being there, for asking, for learning,  eyes tearing, if you, fool, have love within you, then you should give it, give it, give it 3:53 PM Tue. Jul 21 Twenty Twenty
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There are many illusions. The fear of not being reciprocal. The doubt that it can work . The fear that he will give up. The confusion that it will leave in my heart. And every night I'll sleep no more, from now on.
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Dec 17, 2019
Dec 17, 2019 at 8:29 PM UTC
A Bad Date
I want to be the potter and you the clay I want to work you with my hands My fingertips pressing now....against the keys the board stiff under the sensitive pads as I feel you press back against me imagining your lips soft wet tenderly pressing into me. The clay soft and supple under my hands forming you, widening you again and again my muscles working against your stiffer aspects as we spin together wetting, re-wetting and smoothing my hands against your silky slick foundation strong and yet pliable seeking relief from standing strong and unyielding need. You are a deeper container than I anticipated and I, a roaring flood threatening sweep you away. but you hold... steady. What Joy! What Relief! we never expected to contain one another without harm! without fear! Peaceful now our lines flow together the potter the clay the hand and the wheel we come together. I love how we feel.
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Jul 28, 2019
Jul 28, 2019 at 4:32 AM UTC
Hea(r)t Expansion
a (the) woman’s body (pretty pleasing) is my reciprocal her waist is my happy place her neck is my doorway the rest is best when she is mirror accessorizing, preening, **** upon first rising, tallying the gains and the losses unaware of my watching, never satisfied she, tho she is 98% unadmitting contented, as she shifts her weight, from knee to knee extended alternating with slow delicacy for the pleasure is trebled for her imagine image reverberates throughout the house for ever(y) mirror is pre-positioned, accidentally angled just so, lol, her image transported from living room to dining alcove all the way to the kitchen’s bleacher seats she doesn’t know and asks why I’m grinning, answer is no confessionary, no telling I’m swelling and sinning eyes scheming-dreaming of her reciprocity she smiles and says   “good morning bad boy” maybe she does know but you won’t tell her, we, you and me, are pretty pleasing she is 1/me she is won over me
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Aug 19, 2018
Aug 19, 2018 at 8:39 AM UTC
a woman’s body/ 1 over me/pretty pleasing reciprocal
i'd advise you; not to fall unless you are able to pick yourself up. to not fall in love unless you are able to love yourself. to not write poetry unless you are able write without a story. to not tell others advice unless you are able to follow your own. i cannot advise you.
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Sep 19, 2017
Sep 19, 2017 at 5:21 PM UTC
by your love alone
You are still waters that run deep; a challenge some may say. But to me, your closed emotions are like a test to see if I can crack you open. You're not one to spill your secrets yet every time we talk whether it be cellular device or heart to heart in person I notice (for intrinsically I notice everything hidden and important not seen with the naked eye) I notice you slip some of your most shielded vulnerabilities and I catch them with soft cold hands (because for some reason or other my hands are always cold) with soft cold hands warmed by your toasty rough ones warmed by your sensible muttering warmed by your discreet aspirations warmed by your witty attitude. I like that we can be waggish together like two jesters high strung. My facetious view on life is somewhat wrought with doubt. My senseless family drama scaling backwards for months on end. Return is what I want; a sense of peacefulness whereas I'm pulled into the flighty nature of my parents' inconsistencies and my aunts' finicky nature when all I want is for everyone to get along. You have your barriers drawn and  sometimes and I don't mind it. We are emotional opposites, bouncing off each other like ping pong ***** but in this scenario it works because we've both got paddles and are willing to play. That's what I see in you. An ever-eager possibility; passionate in your politics, loyal to your friends, leader in some circumstances when I am at a loss for words. And you spark a sort of electric chord within me, plugging right into my frontal lobe, sparking my interest, lighting up my receptors. My neurons have never been this happy before; I have never in my life had a romantic reciprocal relationship like this before. Nothing has prepared me for this. This floundering of feelings, sloppy, spilling, leaking out of the cauldron every time we speak. You are boiling broth, a frothy drink I've put up to my lips and sipped from, a drink I did not order but delightful all the same. You are still waters that run deep; a sensual spice of parsley or dill that can lighten up any dish; and it doesn't take a genius to see how much I need a person like you in my life to challenge every predisposition of romance I've seen, read, fantasized or imagined. Caught in the slipstream of figuring out my future after the new year has yet to arrive. There's still so much to work out; there's still so much hope I have brimming inside me even after my confessions, even after I've asked for forgiveness and complacency. Where there's hope and forgiveness, there's also peace. Maybe all it took was the repetition of swimming pools in dreams this past week to understand where I stand. I'm not drowning anymore. I'm on the edge of the pool looking into clear waters, finding the wise guide of my blue water dragon and his humongous whiskered face staring straight at me, into me, telling me that I have all the strength I need to overcome the obstacles. I need not cling to fear any longer. I need not hide away, like I've done in the past, behind thick curtains to blot out the light. My only constant now is the sun rising and the moon waning. You are still waters that run deep; a sure-bound belief that everything will be okay.
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Jan 20, 2017
Jan 20, 2017 at 1:29 PM UTC
Still Waters
You are still waters that run deep; a challenge some may say. But to me, your closed emotions are like a test to see if I can crack you open. You're not one to spill your secrets yet every time we talk whether it be cellular device or heart to heart in person I notice (for intrinsically I notice everything hidden and important not seen with the naked eye) I notice you slip some of your most shielded vulnerabilities and I catch them with soft cold hands (because for some reason or other my hands are always cold) with soft cold hands warmed by your toasty rough ones warmed by your sensible muttering warmed by your discreet aspirations warmed by your witty attitude. I like that we can be waggish together like two jesters high strung. My facetious view on life is somewhat wrought with doubt. My senseless family drama scaling backwards for months on end. Return is what I want; a sense of peacefulness whereas I'm pulled into the flighty nature of my parents' inconsistencies and my aunts' finicky nature when all I want is for everyone to get along. You have your barriers drawn and  sometimes and I don't mind it. We are emotional opposites, bouncing off each other like ping pong ***** but in this scenario it works because we've both got paddles and are willing to play. That's what I see in you. An ever-eager possibility; passionate in your politics, loyal to your friends, leader in some circumstances when I am at a loss for words. And you spark a sort of electric chord within me, plugging right into my frontal lobe, sparking my interest, lighting up my receptors. My neurons have never been this happy before; I have never in my life had a romantic reciprocal relationship like this before. Nothing has prepared me for this. This floundering of feelings, sloppy, spilling, leaking out of the cauldron every time we speak. You are boiling broth, a frothy drink I've put up to my lips and sipped from, a drink I did not order but delightful all the same. You are still waters that run deep; a sensual spice of parsley or dill that can lighten up any dish; and it doesn't take a genius to see how much I need a person like you in my life to challenge every predisposition of romance I've seen, read, fantasized or imagined. Caught in the slipstream of figuring out my future after the new year has yet to arrive. There's still so much to work out; there's still so much hope I have brimming inside me even after my confessions, even after I've asked for forgiveness and complacency. Where there's hope and forgiveness, there's also peace. Maybe all it took was the repetition of swimming pools in dreams this past week to understand where I stand. I'm not drowning anymore. I'm on the edge of the pool looking into clear waters, finding the wise guide of my blue water dragon and his humongous whiskered face staring straight at me, into me, telling me that I have all the strength I need to overcome the obstacles. I need not cling to fear any longer. I need not hide away, like I've done in the past, behind thick curtains to blot out the light. My only constant now is the sun rising and the moon waning. You are still waters that run deep; a sure-bound belief that everything will be okay.
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We're two puzzle pieces trying to fit together perfectly Secretly hoping that my curves and your angles fit together snugly Except you can never put a square inside of the circle hole on the children's toys And you can never put a circle in the square hole. So you whisper sweet nothings in my ear hoping that your love will be reciprocated Like a lost puppy looking for a home Crying out for the love it needs to survive. And I give what I can but my love isn't quite what you were wanting You try to drown your sorrows and pain forgetting that your a puzzle piece Leaving your edges torn and tattered I hold you close trying to fix all the damage But I'm no puzzle maker You seemed to have forgotten That we fit together perfectly Because your head fits perfectly in the crook of my neck And your arm fits perfectly around my shoulders Even though the curve of your lips doesn't quite match up with mine Don't think for a second that I won't hold you close while you try to mend a broken heart.
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Oct 30, 2014
Oct 30, 2014 at 4:18 PM UTC
Puzzle Pieces