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It was meant for her she felt it but yet to her she couldn't get it It was in her linage but yet she thought she couldn't get there cus' she was a commoner and of a forbidden race,a Jew It was true her family was wiped out by the Amalekites leaving her and her cousin orphaned still destiny had great plans for them It was true that in the whole of Persia she was among the most beautiful maiden but yet her cousin now her father prevented her from leaving the house and coming in contact with the king As she grew into a lady she became more beautiful and this actually made her the most beautiful lady in the whole of Persia As she was being promised by her late mother her cousin now her father gave her the Tresured Medallion the Star of David when she became a full blown woman Since out of love and care she ran not in disguise of a boy but her self to the palace to save Jesse her friend who they captured to make a palace official but unfortunately for her she was immediately siezed to be among the Queens to be something she always wished for but because of wht they did to her the palace was her most feared place At the palace in the harem she found favour in the eyes of the royal enouch Hegai and everyone in the palace making her the most loved person in the palace Hegai kept the secret of her being a Jew As time went on she waited for the night with the king that single night that would change everything for her and her family and truely that night came and she found favour in the king's eyes and through this she became the Queen of Great Persia We all would be wondering who this lucky girl is and what her name is well this is just a little story of  Jewish girl who was greatly favoured by God whose name was changed from Hadassah to Star of Pussa to Queen Esther
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Sep 1, 2017
Sep 1, 2017 at 5:28 PM UTC
The Favoured Maiden
It was meant for her she felt it but yet to her she couldn't get it It was in her linage but yet she thought she couldn't get there cus' she was a commoner and of a forbidden race,a Jew It was true her family was wiped out by the Amalekites leaving her and her cousin orphaned still destiny had great plans for them It was true that in the whole of Persia she was among the most beautiful maiden but yet her cousin now her father prevented her from leaving the house and coming in contact with the king As she grew into a lady she became more beautiful and this actually made her the most beautiful lady in the whole of Persia As she was being promised by her late mother her cousin now her father gave her the Tresured Medallion the Star of David when she became a full blown woman Since out of love and care she ran not in disguise of a boy but her self to the palace to save Jesse her friend who they captured to make a palace official but unfortunately for her she was immediately siezed to be among the Queens to be something she always wished for but because of wht they did to her the palace was her most feared place At the palace in the harem she found favour in the eyes of the royal enouch Hegai and everyone in the palace making her the most loved person in the palace Hegai kept the secret of her being a Jew As time went on she waited for the night with the king that single night that would change everything for her and her family and truely that night came and she found favour in the king's eyes and through this she became the Queen of Great Persia We all would be wondering who this lucky girl is and what her name is well this is just a little story of  Jewish girl who was greatly favoured by God whose name was changed from Hadassah to Star of Pussa to Queen Esther
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