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__________________________________ The blank page is a loaded gun, dangerous, full of beauty's entropy and combinatory dreams. It's open source ethos, fidgeting with splendor, with that momentum white of the sea at morning. It's not a desert, for whoever's sake, is not a cliff, neither where your mind goes make snow angel ideas, nor a mute inbox that you keep refreshing: The mind is just filled with horror for the void when there's nothing else. The blank page is a loaded gun, a uranium mine field waiting for a chain reaction, where the feelings will collapse upon themselves and hurt the reader by wounding the page, the ink bled a testament to the violence of the rapture always waiting to be born.
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Oct 14, 2014
Oct 14, 2014 at 12:17 AM UTC
The Blank Page is a Loaded Gun
You can't see how many minds have exploded due to it does not matter now what amazing methapataphorical event, and you will never know, no matter what blew shattered disbanded your mind because after the explosions the pieces started traveling at light speed away from you until, nearly infinite Doppler Effects afterwards, all you can see from where you stand is infraredness, for which you'd need of course, special equipment. But then again, your mind had exploded, so it would be of little use for you on your present situation. Unless, you are yourself some kind of Schrödinger's cat person, and can enjoy some superposition state, because till this point no one but you has found out about your mind explosion. Or maybe not just yet.
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Oct 14, 2014
Oct 14, 2014 at 12:31 AM UTC
Oh, So You Say Your Mind is Blown
Photosynthetic void—walls bereft of chroma, No photon cascade, no serotonin spectra. A chamber of entropy, Where mitosis mourns in monochrome. Chrono-displacement: We arrived at 8:20, But spacetime dilated— A tachyon chase beneath scalpel orbit. Dual patient states—pre-op/post-op— Entangled in Schrödinger’s queue, Their vitals suspended In probabilistic purgatory. The medic? A quantum migrant. From outpost to outpost, Clinic to cloud, A baryon of ambition, unbound by Hippocratic gravity. Washroom: A microbial biome of neglect. Fee: A kilojoule transaction for placebo empathy. This isn’t care. It’s thermodynamic collapse In a coat of sterilized prestige. He holds the scalpel, Yet forgets: The heart is not a ledger. And time is not his to hoard.
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Sep 30, 2025
Sep 30, 2025 at 10:06 AM UTC
“Clinical Drift: Phase Shift in White”