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Bare minimum, let alone platinum. Why the **** would you have fallen, or was it just the proximity? 🖇️
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Nov 19, 2025
Nov 19, 2025 at 10:32 AM UTC
Proximity.
On my way out into the yard (always the yard) I slip over the threshold. Shoes slipped on subconsciously. Imprinted habits stored somewhere unknown. At the cliff below the lip of the threshold a pile of shoes and their rubbery texture break my fall but they’re in the way. They’re always in the way. A tangled bunch of laces, knots and, aglets so much complicated than my pair of flip flops. I consciously step on the pile. Maybe out of spite, anger. With this motion completed, I look down at my own shoes only to see that they’re on the wrong feet. Yet, as wrong as it may seem, I leave them as they are.
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Nov 4, 2024
Nov 4, 2024 at 4:52 AM UTC
Backyard Mountaineer
The weight of your love raptures me Above a height unknown to me The clouds caress my face Embraced by the sunlight Cloaked in ethereal bliss When you kiss me I can feel my heart escape the confines of my ribs Your touch electric and warming Your scent envelopes me like a shroud Swathe me in your embrace Lead me towards the edge of oblivion
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Jul 17, 2024
Jul 17, 2024 at 9:17 PM UTC
A Poem To A Lover
This is a warfare;                                we keep  it in photograph,                                we keep it in pages,                                we keep it a secret.                               _I thought I was a keeper_ and then everything is _heavenly_                                   You are beautiful at daytime,                                   and shining bright at night.                                   "You are ethereal"                                                                  the distance is an animosity                                                                  though, **we keep on                                                                  reaching**                                                                    It is not about the                                                              __proximity__                                                                 Yearning; we were still                                                                 looking at the same sky. I thought I could keep you (as I keep everything about you) _you wouldn't  be able to held the sky as it was meant to be ethereal_
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Dec 22, 2021
Dec 22, 2021 at 6:58 AM UTC
Heavenly
This is a warfare;                                we keep  it in photograph,                                we keep it in pages,                                we keep it a secret.                               _I thought I was a keeper_ and then everything is _heavenly_                                   You are beautiful at daytime,                                   and shining bright at night.                                   "You are ethereal"                                                                  the distance is an animosity                                                                  though, **we keep on                                                                  reaching**                                                                    It is not about the                                                              __proximity__                                                                 Yearning; we were still                                                                 looking at the same sky. I thought I could keep you (as I keep everything about you) _you wouldn't  be able to held the sky as it was meant to be ethereal_
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Where the stars align, I'll find you.
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Jan 28, 2021
Jan 28, 2021 at 5:36 AM UTC
Where the stars align
space is my addiction proximity is key get a little closer and i'll never let you leave
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Jun 19, 2019
Jun 19, 2019 at 12:54 AM UTC
proximity
Why is it so That we could potentially be labelled as close Yet be as far as the millions to the sun? And in the deepest of my thoughts, I would still lay confused in deception. Truly, it may be coincidence, That we both cannot define this which is between us. There is prominent distance and a thin line of assurance Because of what we believe or rather what we think of us to believe And it is these small little processes of our minds that wire up for only the worse And at times I fall into their grasp; The answers become void. Then, I fall deeper since sometimes it's harder to not be of complexity. As I only become free with speech Not thinking before I speak. I become wary Why is it so That we stray from happiness only to look for it at the end where we've lost the time? And I wish to ask, Like this, is it the same for you?
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Oct 24, 2017
Oct 24, 2017 at 2:30 PM UTC
Labelled Proximity
Spaces and proximity light through sleepless night years we count on hopeless time. Here's a thing i love to wait---the rain we could not restraint that pushed by gravity. you are my devotion ready to defend the universe--- no matter how many times it had destruct. You can see this love only once--- Our life overlapped at one orbit line i'll be with you so take my time. Blind nights bright stars i'll be there, waiting for you to tell all too similar things.
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Oct 1, 2017
Oct 1, 2017 at 10:29 PM UTC
All too similar
I do know lip-reading But that smile Demands for tactile
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Aug 17, 2017
Aug 17, 2017 at 7:18 AM UTC
Play Blind
You're just as close as my nose bridge That my eyes can always reach But my lips can never kiss
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Apr 9, 2017
Apr 9, 2017 at 2:45 PM UTC
proximity
PROLOGUE – Silliness becomes a later suffering, if only tinkered by potion – PART I – A contractual moment whilst halos best remain hung on the hat rack since devils taste so much better. Bitter but belated, ritual yet related, so to in avoidance, fleeing anything that’d mimic life, “ideal;” perfect being a, “nine-five,” during which, “monkeyed with,” comes to a peak and a valley’s once more, a lack of control. A tailspin wherein one truth can become just a shy more intangible mere seconds later – We can see it, we can smell it and we can almost touch it – so allows the specter, the hand holding drink, and later, permitted, for our nakedness to play once more. PART II – Four more down and a few gin-fueled gestures later, we stumble upon but one edible truth, an apple and, “sin,” repeated thousand-fold – so succumbs you and a parallel I atop our empty and, “precious,” wants carnal. We masticate and learn to destroy the TV – naked, begrudged and bent over the boxes we worship. We annihilate the machines. We profane the dependencies; placation and participation wrought this artificial coercion, once a friend and now an object – a disdain, a thievery, a prison, vicarious and to be avoided by all costs. PART III – Human interaction and fluidic free choice soon become the new, “in,” the primal addiction amongst the bottles of tequila, ***** and plain-old beer. Our grinning, in the flesh and not in pixel, must and will rise like the places we’ve so very poisoned. Here and now, we care. We have to care, because if we don’t, it’s all for nothing. So we top the night twisted, simply breathing, where the smog isn’t seen, but it’s there. We top the night tethered, where the rain doesn’t burn, it believes. And we top the night innocent, and among stars, both in the sky and entangled the heart beating my right, EPILOGUE – For the time being, just being, where all seemed right, a little twisted, but wiser nonetheless.
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Nov 3, 2015
Nov 3, 2015 at 12:14 AM UTC
The Greater Ghosts
PROLOGUE – Silliness becomes a later suffering, if only tinkered by potion – PART I – A contractual moment whilst halos best remain hung on the hat rack since devils taste so much better. Bitter but belated, ritual yet related, so to in avoidance, fleeing anything that’d mimic life, “ideal;” perfect being a, “nine-five,” during which, “monkeyed with,” comes to a peak and a valley’s once more, a lack of control. A tailspin wherein one truth can become just a shy more intangible mere seconds later – We can see it, we can smell it and we can almost touch it – so allows the specter, the hand holding drink, and later, permitted, for our nakedness to play once more. PART II – Four more down and a few gin-fueled gestures later, we stumble upon but one edible truth, an apple and, “sin,” repeated thousand-fold – so succumbs you and a parallel I atop our empty and, “precious,” wants carnal. We masticate and learn to destroy the TV – naked, begrudged and bent over the boxes we worship. We annihilate the machines. We profane the dependencies; placation and participation wrought this artificial coercion, once a friend and now an object – a disdain, a thievery, a prison, vicarious and to be avoided by all costs. PART III – Human interaction and fluidic free choice soon become the new, “in,” the primal addiction amongst the bottles of tequila, ***** and plain-old beer. Our grinning, in the flesh and not in pixel, must and will rise like the places we’ve so very poisoned. Here and now, we care. We have to care, because if we don’t, it’s all for nothing. So we top the night twisted, simply breathing, where the smog isn’t seen, but it’s there. We top the night tethered, where the rain doesn’t burn, it believes. And we top the night innocent, and among stars, both in the sky and entangled the heart beating my right, EPILOGUE – For the time being, just being, where all seemed right, a little twisted, but wiser nonetheless.
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Tried it for 30 years. Not bad, but not for me. Now I agree with Katherine Hepburn who never married: "I prefer to live nearby and visit often." The simplest solution so often the most elegant.    ~mce
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Apr 15, 2015
Apr 15, 2015 at 6:24 AM UTC
Marriage
Walk, Walk with your bare feet to places I've never heard. Lately, I can't seem to feel anything but words. Stand, stand at the crossroads, wonder where you will go. Distance becoming more than space, as I had come to know. But you talk, talk with conviction about everything but me. And I counted for a year. And I cursed the miles between. Distance was my occupation. I tried to measure it with a pen. And so I did not notice the breach between us- the ever present end. The breach that separated you from me, that no amount of closeness would mend.
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Feb 26, 2015
Feb 26, 2015 at 2:09 PM UTC
The Breach
*Can you leave Until the mind does You may have gone far And mind in inertia Forgets to look ahead Got rid of proximity But travel the distance To and fro, everyday Through the barren path Rushing from one point to another It’s the action in inaction Mind’s in inertia We may have moved And the mind lies there Are we far?*
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Oct 15, 2014
Oct 15, 2014 at 10:06 AM UTC
How far?
how lucky I was that so many best friends happened to be at my primary school how fortunate that his soulmate walked into his now-closed video rental store how curious it is that your maid of honor was randomly assigned as your college roommate how strange it is that so much of our lives is simply dependent on proximity
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May 5, 2014
May 5, 2014 at 3:24 AM UTC
Proximity